prince next update no time wasting

Ekene13: lol na truth u talk oo

.bt atleast dem dy come nw

Well things are gettint a 'bit' complicated now...Miss Grace is fading out of da story somehow!! Some lines makes da story looks fictitious tho. But u are good,I love reading 'real-life' stories!!
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Ride on man!!!

therose: hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... what can i say? i dont really come up here but this title caught my attention and it has become difficult to stay away. keep it up boy. the only issue i have with you is the grammatical error, i will pardon you because i know you are ready to improve and you did improved. read other people's write ups, use your dictionary at all times or use auto correct on your phone and write more and more. i want to see you win the noble prize in literature.

. I pray so my oga.

But winning A prize is that an easy taxed

Prince abeg stop kipin us on suspence ♌ɑ̣̣̝̇̇.. Nice story

Real_Alfranco: Well things are gettint a 'bit' complicated now...Miss Grace is fading out of da story somehow!! Some lines makes da story looks fictitious tho. But u are good,I love reading 'real-life' stories!!
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Ride on man!!!

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My guy good evening for reading my story. I appreciate your unrelented behaving reading this story.

Your question don mak me chop donnot tonight..
OGA, MISS GRACE IS NOT FADING AWAY OH, i just couldn't visit her as usual when examination started.

Dont worry she is the story herself

pretty644: Prince abeg stop kipin us on suspence ♌ɑ̣̣̝̇̇.. Nice story

what's your previous moniker??

pretty644: Prince abeg stop kipin us on suspence ♌ɑ̣̣̝̇̇.. Nice story

. Oga pls i no de put ppl too much on suspense oh....

But i go try refuse the suspense my guy.

Les: what's your previous moniker??

. laugh wan kill me die..

prince dis ur last update use style short ooo... U ar stil u sha

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Ogbeni prince boiz D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣̥ wait F̶̲̥̅̊o̶̲̥̅̊я̲̣̣̥ U̶̲̥̅̊ here Õooº°˚oº°˚º°˚

waslead300, am going there to space it.
How about that?

coache: Nice story prince but just summarise everything in a detailed way cos its becoming too long and you knw Airtel don vex so no more excess mb for continuous update again.
thanks.

. Hahahaha

oga no complain, just go buy credit and aboundant mb will be rewarded to you.
No matter how long it is, pls just follow.

Thanks too

prince I dy wait o

Harkanbi: Ogbeni prince boiz D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣̥ wait F̶̲̥̅̊o̶̲̥̅̊я̲̣̣̥ U̶̲̥̅̊ here Õooº°˚oº°˚º°˚

. Menn i feel like login 2go now now.

Kingademos: prince I dy wait o

. You de chop up dates lik food?

Na wa for economic demand on story

guy I feed on updates o

@Mr prince (s*x postponer) u r always making sense. Am njoyin evry bit of ur updatex. I wl remain ur man as lng as u remain loyal 2 us on dis thread. U R WELL IJN.

Guy wich one be dis short updates now?.............. D̶̲̥̅̊ next time u do d̶̲̥̅̊@t? A̶̲̥̅̊М̤̣̲̣̥̈̇ gona jam U̶̲̥̅̊я̩̥̊ phone up U̶̲̥̅̊я̩̥̊ ass.

360prince: . Fine ke!?.
Everybody has their own handsomeness and you are one.

Am sure girls de follow you everywhere. Abi ?

lol

Nature has its way of maintaning equilibrium imagine if all fine boys wernt assholes Ѧп̥̥̲̣̣̣̥∂ had the ballz that oda fair luking/ugly guys have, you fit N̤̥̈̊ø̲̣̣ get giRlfriend or wife sef

I rebuke dat sickness in JESUS NAME

Prince! Prince!! Prince!!! How many times did I call you?
Your errors are increasing nowadays o.. And I must say I don't like it, I feel disappointed... Well, it could be because of your health issues so, I will let it pass.. But please, from now on proof-read your works and check for the grammatical errors and misspellings...
You are good.. Keep it up.. And also, get well soon. #peace

360prince: .
I have no problems with him now.

I guess he should be my friend now

what do you think ?

Yeah.. He should be.. Just take out the positives...

360prince: . I knew him to be a teasing guy when i checked on his statue.

Thanks for commenting on this one my big bro...

uwc... You count on me any time..

360prince: ***CONTINUATION***


" nObody.. huGGED.. Me!! ", i'd shouted at her louder.



To be con...

There are something's I will like to point out from this post.. It would be good if you could go back and modify asap..

--you don't need to say were as glassy as tears, just say "uduak eyes were filled with tears" "when she walked past me"
--'adjured' do you know the meaning? You can use words people understands and words we use in our everyday conversation...
Adjured means:To issue a formal command, especially in a legal context. Or. To earnestly appeal or advise. As you can see it doesn't go with what you actually meant to say... You could have written "I confidently apologise for my bad behaviour towards her" .. (You don't need to use confidently) just saying..
--"When I got to the hall, Uduak was singing in a low tone, more like she was murmuring she to herself"..

--She looked at me for sometime and with no further words to say, she prayed for our success in the exams and that excellent result should be ours..

--Thereafter, Uduak said I am forgiven, I was extremely glad because, having a feeling of enmity towards another person isn't good...

--"On the field"
--"flimsy" not flamsesy
-- "i'm leaving 00oo!. I wan go look for emeka. We get important gist " i said, the moment i tried pulling the door handle to myself.
--i didn't want anyone to spoil my arrangement. She brought out "a 500 naira note".. "She asked me to buy a tin of tomato and a packet of spaghetti .

-- do you blush when u are being sent on an errand? And if you do, it should be ". " errand boy, abi ?" i said, blushing without ceasing untill i ran out of the room."

-- "As i was approaching the gate exit, i saw..."
Check out your punctuations.. It makes it easy to read and understand...
-- "entered", "cooking" "paid" "walked out" "met emeka" "I asked as we greeted each other" "I banged" "intruded" "intention" "spoke"

-- I don't understand this part, kindly clarify.. ""she told about her acceptance""

Remember:: You are telling us a story that occurred in the past, hence some of your words should be in past tense such as walked, intruded, walked and so on.. Be mindful of that..

Your character's names first letter should Start with a Capital letter with other names you are going to write also.. Reason being that, they are nouns... And a bound should start with a capital letter...

I just felt like helping out.. #NoOffenceMeant..
Keep up the good work...

hmmmmm mr prince i must confess, u re awesome in writing i hv been following u right from wen dis thread made first page but dis ur suspence is becomin unbearable.... Well i dey feel u sha.... Keep it up

No update yet, backin of. See me letter.

PRINCE!! PRINCE!! PRINCE.... How mani tyms did I cal ♈̷̴̩oυ? Com update us nah.. Or else......... Make I reserve •̸ϞƔ comment sha

Prince I'm beginning to loose interest in ur story. Tot by nw u wud hve told us hw u bleeped all dos girls?