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••••• by Laveda(f): 1:26am On Aug 10, 2016
Where do I go?
When I'm feeling so lost and I don't want to be found.
Where do I go when I'm trying to laugh but all I can do is cry?
Where do I go when it seems like I've lost happiness?
I'm trying to keep on living because I'm not ready to die.
I'm trying not to give up because I have to strive to be better.
I'm trying to wear a smile even when things aint right.
Where do I go when I feel like I've lost it all?
How do I keep going, how do I fight this fight?
I'm tired of feeling down, but I'm trying with all my might!
Where do I go when I'm giving up on the world's cheapest thing?

Where do I go?
Does it take very long?
For me to find that peace,love and a place where I belong.
I need you to help me,help me see things in a new light.
Help me stand I'm losing it.




This is just my thoughts I'm pouring here.
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Re: ••••• by timpaker(m): 9:54am On Aug 10, 2016
coolJust
Re: ••••• by timpaker(m): 9:57am On Aug 10, 2016
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Re: ••••• by Laveda(f): 10:27am On Aug 10, 2016
timpaker:
coolJust
smiley
Re: ••••• by timpaker(m): 10:49am On Aug 10, 2016
Here.
I've found you like the shy star on hazy eyes.
The electrifying sparkles greeting my face
With swollen cheek of laughter
And an explosion of happiness.
My breathe renewed its acquaintance with life
And my heartbeat deafening the sound of sadness.

I bought myself a smile with my own coin,
It is gold when I part my lips, my friends share my luxury;
No, they are my coins that enriches my smile.
Here, I've found those who drill the dimples I have,
They brighten me up and swam my sea of joy,
Together, our teeth glow with pride
Making the jealous sun go to sleep.

Here,
I'm likely blessed overly.
Goose-pimple peace, frooze me still, love at ease,
I ain't going no where, love has found me;
It is in my heartbeat.
just like the clock, love makes my heart tick and tock.


Questions answered.

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Re: ••••• by Laveda(f): 11:12am On Aug 10, 2016
timpaker:
Here.
I've found you like the shy star on hazy eyes.
The electrifying sparkles greeting my face
With swollen cheek of laughter
And an explosion of happiness.
My breathe renewed its acquaintance with life
And my heartbeat deafening the sound of sadness.

I bought myself a smile with my own coin,
It is gold when I part my lips, my friends share my luxury;
No, they are my coins that enriches my smile.
Here, I've found those who drill the dimples I have,
They brighten me up and swam my sea of joy,
Together, our teeth glow with pride
Making the jealous sun go to sleep.

Here,
I'm likely blessed overly.
Goose-pimple peace, frooze me still, love at ease,
I ain't going no where, love has found me;
It is in my heartbeat.
just like the clock, love makes my heart tick and tock.


Questions answered.

This is nice smiley

Thank you.smiley

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Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 7:57pm On Aug 10, 2016
Laveda:
Where do I go?
When I'm feeling so lost and I don't want to be found.
Where do I go when I'm trying to laugh but all I can do is cry?
Where do I go when it seems like I've lost happiness?
I'm trying to keep on living because I'm not ready to die.
I'm trying not to give up because I have to strive to be better.
I'm trying to wear a smile even when things aint right.
Where do I go when I feel like I've lost it all?
How do I keep going, how do I fight this fight?
I'm tired of feeling down, but I'm trying with all my might!
Where do I go when I'm giving up on the world's cheapest thing?

Where do I go?
Does it take very long?
For me to find that peace,love and a place where I belong.
I need you to help me,help me see things in a new light.
Help me stand I'm losing it.




This is just my thoughts I'm pouring here.
.

If only a little sincerity could be taught, I would give all to be your student. The sincerity in your poems amazes me.

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Re: ••••• by timpaker(m): 8:04pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


If only a little sincerity could be taught, I would give all to be your student. The sincerity in your poems amazes me.



Mr. Lake,
Where have you been hiding?

How are you doing?
Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 8:13pm On Aug 10, 2016
timpaker:




Mr. Lake,
Where have you been hiding?

How are you doing?

Mr Tim. It's you who have done the hiding. From your number to all of your messaging accounts, nothing worked. You scared me into thinking all of the unthikables of this world.

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Re: ••••• by Laveda(f): 8:27pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


If only a little sincerity could be taught, I would give all to be your student. The sincerity in your poems amazes me.
it comes naturally most times.

I actually look up to you.smiley
Thanks,I feel honoured.
Re: ••••• by joseph1832(m): 8:52pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


If only a little sincerity could be taught, I would give all to be your student. The sincerity in your poems amazes me.
angry angry angry
Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 9:00pm On Aug 10, 2016
Re: ••••• by Nobody: 9:03pm On Aug 10, 2016
Wow! This is beautiful dearie

More ink to your golden pen kiss

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Re: ••••• by joseph1832(m): 9:06pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


angry angry angry
Are you high Lekan?
Re: ••••• by joseph1832(m): 9:07pm On Aug 10, 2016
skarlett:
Wow! This is beautiful dearie

More ink to your golden pen kiss
grin Still mad at me? grin smiley
Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 9:09pm On Aug 10, 2016
joseph1832:
Are you high Lekan?
I definitely am not today. smiley
Re: ••••• by joseph1832(m): 9:10pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


I definitely am not today. smiley
Good. Now tell me where tha fuck_ you've been? Noticed how dry this place have been without you? angry
Re: ••••• by timpaker(m): 9:29pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


Mr Tim. It's you who have done the hiding. From your number to all of your messaging accounts, nothing worked. You scared me into thinking all of the unthikables of this world.

Heheheheheheheh.

Truth is I misplaced your number when some knuckle heads made away with my phone at the airport in Lagos. embarassed I lost access to my mail and social network for sometime.

Got new ones, will beep you with it soon (I haven't forgotten my Sallah special that you owe me angry)
Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 9:33pm On Aug 10, 2016
joseph1832:
Good. Now tell me where tha fuck_ you've been? Noticed how dry this place have been without you? angry

Dry? Did you stop to write? Is somewhere you are ever dry?
Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 9:36pm On Aug 10, 2016
timpaker:


Heheheheheheheh.

Truth is I misplaced your number when some knuckle heads made away with my phone at the airport in Lagos. embarassed I lost access to my mail and social network for sometime.

Got new ones, will beep you with it soon (I haven't forgotten my Sallah special that you owe me angry)

When I said you should never come to Lagos with an Abuja mindset, you didn't understand.

I haven't forgotten the birthday special too. Have you? grin
Re: ••••• by timpaker(m): 9:45pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


When I said you should never come to Lagos with an Abuja mindset, you didn't understand.

I haven't forgotten the birthday special too. Have you? grin

Heheheheeheh. @Abuja Mindset.

I thought my Mushin blood would help me. embarassed


Since we both owe ourselves then we should just apply one of the accounting principle known as 'Bad debt' and write them off. undecided
Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 9:57pm On Aug 10, 2016
timpaker:


Heheheheeheh. @Abuja Mindset.

I thought my Mushin blood would help me. embarassed


Since we both owe ourselves then we should just apply one of the accounting principle known as 'Bad debt' and write them off. undecided

No. Let's apply some other principle. You'll find a name for it. We subtract the sum of the values of the debts. What remains will be paid by the party with the bigger one.

Now, meat now sells for 50 naira in the biggest restaurant in Lagos. Let's say you were going to get 3 pieces. I think you can now subtract 150 naira. Thank you.

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Re: ••••• by joseph1832(m): 10:33pm On Aug 10, 2016
llaykorn:


Dry? Did you stop to write? Is somewhere you are ever dry?
Nope. The day I stop writing is the day I stop... grin
Re: ••••• by llaykorn: 7:50am On Aug 11, 2016
joseph1832:
Nope. The day I stop writing is the day I stop... grin

Yes, it's the day you stop 'panashuku' and the day you stop 'panashuku' is the day you die. I know that cycle too. grin
Re: ••••• by joseph1832(m): 8:25am On Aug 11, 2016
llaykorn:


Yes, it's the day you stop 'panashuku' and the day you stop 'panashuku' is the day you die. I know that cycle too. grin
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Re: ••••• by Laveda(f): 9:05am On Aug 11, 2016
skarlett:
Wow! This is beautiful dearie

More ink to your golden pen kiss

Thanks kiss

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Re: ••••• by ikp120(m): 10:32am On Dec 06, 2016
Lavedaa I've sent it wink

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