Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / NewStats: 3,197,102 members, 7,963,609 topics. Date: Tuesday, 01 October 2024 at 02:44 PM |
Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / The burning cold (47780 Views)
Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) / Jos, December And Cold. / UNYIME-IVY KING – “burning Hurt” Akwa Ibom’s Bestfemale Literary Fiction Writer (2) (3) (4)
(1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) ... (22) (Reply) (Go Down)
Re: The burning cold by DExplorer1: 7:06pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mynd, oya dey paste am dey go. I'm enjoying the lines |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 7:38pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
D-Explorer: yes o, carry on brova |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 7:44pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Make una wait for the copy paste na |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 8:07pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
You go come finish the story or not? |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 8:11pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
hornipipe: You go come finish the story or not?The person I am copying the story from has not added any new updates |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 8:14pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mynd_44:na wa ooo... |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 8:17pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
hornipipe: na wa ooo...Na wa. The guy is being selfish |
Re: The burning cold by tpia5: 8:20pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mynd_44: Yes o, it is front page- that's where i saw it. I dont usually click on front page topics but since this one had "literature section" attached to it, i wanted to look see. Now, does this mean if anyone types any collection of the alphabet together and throws in the word "death" at intervals, it will automatically jump to front page? |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 8:21pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
At Freecocoa, I did not write/copy paste this for you or anyone for that matter. Those who I wrote it for have the evidence that its mine(it came from my notes on FB) and I really dont care what you think about it. If you know me half as much, you should know people's opinions dont really get to me and if you think we should derail this, you know I am the best guy for the job. @cuddle, I see you jorh 5 Likes |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 8:24pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mynd_44:hmmm |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 8:25pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
And for the love of God, stop searching for it with Google. It is pointless. LWKMD |
Re: The burning cold by Cuddlemii: 8:30pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
tpia@: On the contrary, it means diversity & versality. There are 3 threads from the literature section presently on the frontpage. It is very easy, rather than take offence to a poster's write-up, take a tour and visit other threads that might interest you. Even if it were another thread, some members will still complain about the quality/style of the thread. That shows that we all have different mindsets & ideologies. It's not possible to please everyone, there are lots of frontpage threads to learn from/visit. Thanks! 1 Like |
Re: The burning cold by 2goodbobo(m): 8:49pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Copy and paste! Is very glaring that this is another person's work you are feeding us with. Anyways thumbs up to the original writer! |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 8:51pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mr mynd kindly come finish your Tory, as u enter ur mama room wetin u see |
Re: The burning cold by Caseless: 9:02pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mynd a.k.a peter, u'v declared war on d statusquo(bigotry,religious war etc). I tink dis is unique nd i like it. Ur attackers ar perhaps product of 'copy n paste' or 'giraffing' in their respktiv skools. Peter whr ar u? Complete d story pls. |
Re: The burning cold by PBeni(m): 9:08pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
hornipipe: Mr mynd kindly come finish your Tory, as u enter ur mama room wetin u seeExactly my thought. The story is captivating and I cant wait for more updates on it... |
Re: The burning cold by freecocoa(f): 9:16pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mynd_44: At Freecocoa, I did not write/copy paste this for you or anyone for that matter. Those who I wrote it for have the evidence that its mine(it came from my notes on FB) and I really dont care what you think about it.You dey craze ni? No just give me that tone o, see this one . Let's derail it na, no be your thread? We go know who e go pain 1 Like |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 9:22pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Orders for a drum of pop corn.... |
Re: The burning cold by ITbomb(m): 9:39pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
[size=16pt]TOOOOOOO LOOOOONGGGG[/size] |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 9:44pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Mynd, your story is engrossing. |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 9:46pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Nonsense! all of it!! |
Re: The burning cold by chucky234(m): 9:53pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Which kain E-book be dis na,where I wan from start to dey read this fiction abi na story I go call am. Abeg make somebody help me summarize dis super story make I fit understand am ooo,I been wan copy the story sell give Wale Adenuga make him use for super story but the man go run comot for office if him see dis kain textbook wey you dey write so. |
Re: The burning cold by ImperialMcHael(m): 9:57pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
MegaMynd... Please continue the story. |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 9:59pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
freecocoa: You dey craze ni? No just give me that tone o, see this one .As If I give an eff. Na you dey craze. |
Re: The burning cold by chucky234(m): 10:01pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
D-Explorer:Guy how you dey take read dis plenty copy and paste na,abi you get magnetic eyes |
Re: The burning cold by pearlhapi(f): 10:01pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Is this my mind or another mind?awwww amamazed |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 10:04pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
On the bed was my mother as though she was asleep and above her was a creature hanging there. Its face was into her face and her face was going white. The understanding of this was lost on me and I just stood there unable to move or breathe. The moonlight was still coming in and there was an unusual cold as I felt chilled to my spine and then I heard my mother's voice "he is not ready yet" The creature retracted its strange head and a voice rang "He is the right age and must fulfill what he was born to be" She stirred and her voice came again as though she was subjected to intense pain "age does not really matter right now" "he must know right now and he must be told his duties" Suddenly my eyes thought they saw something else move in the room, a phantom creature drifting around the room and when I try to look at it, it just diminishes. "he knows already" I looked back at the my mum and the creature above her And I saw my mum rise from her bed as if she was also floating her hair was loosed and her face was different, not different as she was not wearing make-up of something but it was frightening. Her nightgown had turned into this dark robe made of blackness and If looked more of a patch of darkness that clothing. Her lips were normal but her nostrils were flaring and her jaw bone stuck out like she was not human anymore. She was completely off the bed and she looked at the creature and said in a commanding tone "leave us" "the will of the master must be done" "his will shall be done but I will be the one doing it as it has been bestowed on me to do so" was her reply "and I will do it so leave us" I saw the creature begin to drift towards the right of the room and straight into her closet. The same closet she has always locked and told me never to even dream of opening it. "and take that thing in my living room with you" She continued, "we might work for death but I don't want his mercenaries loitering around my house" The creature went into the closet through the doors. The door did not open, it just went inside the door and vanished and the reflection of the bulb in the sitting room suddenly went off. The light in the room started to return to normal and I saw the robe she was wearing transform into her night gown. It was there and then I realized one thing. My mum was not the Christian she portrayed herself to be, she was a fiend and she walked to my front, gave me a reassuring smile and as though the power company cut off the power supply, the lights in my head went off. |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 10:04pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Peter has allowed me to copy again ooooo |
Re: The burning cold by slimyem: 10:06pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
i read the first three of the posts about the story and Mynd,it'll be my sin if i don't give you this....muaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Beautifully written...the intrigue..the suspense..the word play..everything Will read the rest later.. Muaaaaaaah!! |
Re: The burning cold by slimyem: 10:18pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
bad-belle pipo na hin full this thread sha.... E nor go work o... People are not always who dey appear to be on here.. That Mynd can be unserious and sadistic on Nairaland doesn't mean that's what he really is outside here... He says the writing is his..appreciate that or fvck-off!! 4 Likes |
Re: The burning cold by pearlhapi(f): 10:23pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Yelsooooo•sings in soprano *Go mynd,Go mynd!#dodges a slap# 1 Like |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 10:34pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
slimyem: bad-belle pipo na hin full this thread sha....Shaddap yer maut dere. . .na who you dey tell make e fvck-off (to talk true, even us bad-belle people sef dey gbaladun Peter) |
(1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) ... (22) (Reply)
RE-INCARNATION [gods in MEN] / Mercy Said No! - A Christian Romance Story / Heartstrings
(Go Up)
Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 35 |