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Re: The burning cold by Goldieluks: 9:49pm On Sep 28, 2012 |
Kgdavid: i hope you got your answer from Mynd's reply above?? |
Re: The burning cold by ayobase(m): 10:02pm On Sep 29, 2012 |
Where is that Nigger, abi na Nigga....e no go finish Im tori ni? |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 10:08pm On Sep 29, 2012 |
ayobase: Where is that Nigger, abi na Nigga....e no go finish Im tori ni?finishing will take time but updating is tonight |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 10:15pm On Sep 29, 2012 |
When the lights came back, I was staring into the blank and expressionless face of some woman in white. My mind did a recap of the previous night and I thought his might be the continuation of it when I heard the woman say “How are you feeling?” I could not say a word and my eyes opened a little bit more and I could make out the parts of the room I was in. she was standing above me and was now smiling, she was saying something I could not make out and all I could feel a distant headache in some part of my head I did not know existed before My eyes adjusted to the light and I could see that she was not an angel or a demon but a nurse and I was in a hospital. I tried remembering the last thing I knew and beads of sweat suddenly ran down my neck. I was trembling as the memories of the last things I saw came back at me as though it was a television show. I remember my mum’s smile the creatures I saw and I went off again. I came to sometime later and this time no one was looking down at me instead, the room seems to be empty. I tried to sit up and I realized that I was weak. I pulled myself up and sat down and looked around the room I have always hated hospitals. The smell of disinfectant everywhere, the sadness and gloom on the faces of most of the people and the general mortality of them just gets me scared. But this time, I was glad to be here, glad I am not seeing whatever it was I saw and glad my mum was not here. I did not understand what happened and I did not want to. Some things were just better left unknown. Someone walked in who I recognized. Our doctor and he smiled at me and just put his hand on my face “in no time you will be out of here” “What happened doctor” I asked as if I did not know “I don’t know, all I know was that your mum brought you in yesterday saying you had fainted while watching an horror movie” I could not even dispute that, horror movie? Yeah sure if they were acting them in our house and my mum was the star of the show, it is possible. I was about to say something else when she entered. My mum. The last person I wanted to see right now and she was beaming with smiles. She exchanged pleasantries with the doctor and asked how I was “he is doing well, I don’t understand what he was doing watching horror movies but he will be alright” “I hope so” was her reply “he just went into shock, probably saw something explicit” now the doctor was walking towards the door “I will leave you two to talk but he has to have some rest and so do you” were his last words as he left “I will leave you two to talk but he has to have some rest and so do you” were his last words as he left |
Re: The burning cold by Kgdavid(m): 6:20pm On Oct 01, 2012 |
Goldieluks: lol pretty much...but dega dega some criticism aint necessary amyg: front page aint about morals my friend its about driving traffic to the site. lol for some reason the bolded part of your post is just hurtful!! |
Re: The burning cold by amyg(f): 8:51pm On Oct 02, 2012 |
Kgdavid:Oh dear,didn't mean 2 hurt u.pls bring on d attention k. |
Re: The burning cold by BecaciaBarbie(f): 4:21pm On Oct 12, 2012 |
Mynd_44: I almost did the same thing until I saw ourChaiiii....u r good! Azzzzzinnn...i don dey fall alrdy! Love ur description its so real nd visible nd i think i shud stp lookn down on Naija writers! Dis is really impressive...almst tot i ws reading one of James Hadley chase Novels or John Grisham! U good mehn!!! |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 2:03pm On Oct 15, 2012 |
“I will leave you two to talk but he has to have some rest and so do you” were his last words as he left She walked over to my side and held my hand, I half expected it to be cold but it was not, it was warm and normal, her face was back to normal too color and all as if what I saw or thought I saw was actually a dream or I saw it while I fainted but the look in her eyes narrowed and then the lights in the room dimed again the bulb was still on but as if the room was filled with black midst and the cold returned. “you should not be here” she said as she took her eyes off me “I said I will tell him and bring him and I will” The same voice I heard that night came again “the master grows impatient” “he wants him inducted fast” And then the presence was gone. I wished I could faint again as fear took me. I did not understand what I had to be told neither did I want to know what it was. What I was seeing was not real, can’t be real My mum took my hand again and she said “we will have to talk when we get home” I look at her and thought it was over. I did not want to go home with her not after what I have seen and heard but a part of me wanted to hear what she had to say just out of curiosity but the fear was in me. There was a burning sensation within my head and it felt like I was going to faint again. My hands reached for the seat belt and the strength in me waned. As I could not grip the belt. All the strength within me was leaving and replaced with a feeling that paralyzed every part of me including my brain. FEAR. It was fear like I have never felt it before, like I have never heard of it before, it was fear like I will never be scared again. A vision of last night flashed across my mind and I saw the creature above my mum’s head again but this time, she was not the one, it was me, the creature was above me. Its face was in my face as I looked into it all I saw was darkness and cold. |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 2:05pm On Oct 15, 2012 |
Cold I could not understand and darkness I could not phantom. I opened my eyes and noticed that the car had stopped as the traffic was building, I looked into the eyes and I thought I had another flash black but this time, it was real, I saw objects with a corner of my eyes and when I tried to focus on them, the just fizzle out. As if they were not there. I was tensed and the seat belt was still holding me in place to the seat while my mum tried to navigate the car out of the traffic. Spittle gathered in my mouth and I tried to swallow and found it hard as though my throat was blocked by some invisible force and it was keeping the saliva in my mouth. I swallowed with force and a sound came out of my mouth. It was not so loud but the car had been so quiet and calm that it sounded like someone dropped a stainless cup in a quiet cave. She looked to her side reached out to hold my arm and said “Soon son” “I can’t imagine what and how you are feeling” I gulped “But you must hold on” The traffic light went green somewhere and I caught it along with another object I can’t describe in the corner of my eye and I looked away from my mum She floored the accelerator (had always not been the most careful of drivers) And on through the next exit and into our street we went. The feeling in me grew and I grew sicker. The conditioned air in the air did not help at all I was already feeling pressure within me and what I needed was fresh air and to get away from where I was maybe with Chidima or someone else just get me out of here. We got to the house and she pulled up into the garage and she looked at me, gave me the same smile and said “we are home Pete” “time to get off” Was she kidding? I could not move my lips and you are telling me to get off? This is getting crazier She opened the door on her side and I felt a gust of warm wind come in to the car and with it, some strength, I finally saw that I could use my mouth again. “Erm………” “I think I should still be at the hospital” 1 Like |
Re: The burning cold by ijebabe: 3:02pm On Oct 15, 2012 |
You've glued my eyes to this thread,mynd. |
Re: The burning cold by Goldieluks: 3:06pm On Oct 15, 2012 |
Re: The burning cold by BecaciaBarbie(f): 3:46pm On Oct 15, 2012 |
*Grabs pop corn nd Maltina* |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 4:50pm On Oct 15, 2012 |
Becacia_Barbie: *Grabs pop corn nd Maltina*I go chop popCorn oo |
Re: The burning cold by BecaciaBarbie(f): 1:43pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Mynd_44:Lool..ahahn! U sef wan chop popcorn? no b u dey entertain us? Err...oya finish d story first! |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 1:45pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Becacia_Barbie:So because I am the director, I should eat abi? You are kidding. Abeg carry that pop-corn come here jorh |
Re: The burning cold by BecaciaBarbie(f): 5:45pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Mynd_44:Lmaoo...u stil dey command me on top ma pop corn Is it bcuz u r entertaining us for free nii?? Take time o! |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:05pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Becacia_Barbie:oYa abeg |
Re: The burning cold by BecaciaBarbie(f): 6:39pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Mynd_44:ermm...Ama think abt it! |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:51pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Becacia_Barbie:And I no go show film until you decide |
Re: The burning cold by BecaciaBarbie(f): 11:22pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Mynd_44:Lmaoo! U dey use ur power abi? Well too bad, ve finished eating all! Oya go nd get anoda one for us! |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 11:37pm On Oct 16, 2012 |
Becacia_Barbie:In that case, no film today. Go your house I wan close cinema hall. |
Re: The burning cold by BecaciaBarbie(f): 11:02am On Oct 17, 2012 |
Mynd_44:Lmao! Well i aint goin anywhr nd dr is nothn u can do abt dat! I dont mind staring at d blank screen! |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 11:05am On Oct 17, 2012 |
Becacia_Barbie:**yawn** you still dey here? I went home and I still meet you here this morning, babe are you a witch? No offence |
Re: The burning cold by ijebabe: 11:28am On Oct 17, 2012 |
I came back thinking there was an update, mscheeew. |
Re: The burning cold by Ikamenze(m): 11:42am On Oct 17, 2012 |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 11:49am On Oct 17, 2012 |
ijebabe: I came back thinking there was an update, mscheeew.Sorry ma'am |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 11:49am On Oct 17, 2012 |
Ikamenze: https://www.nairaland.com/1076549/adam-n-evelyn-film-script#12582820You dey find cheap advert abi? |
Re: The burning cold by Ikamenze(m): 2:57pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
Mynd_44: It's working isn't it? |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 3:07pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
Ikamenze:Next time, be polite enough to ask for permission. I wish you luck though |
Re: The burning cold by Ikamenze(m): 3:12pm On Oct 17, 2012 |
Mynd_44: Okay...nor vex,dis is actually my first topic so I'm still a rookie so forgive me.....That said,did u check it out? U like? |
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