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Business / On Bank PHB Basketball Ad by Aloofaa(m): 12:46pm On Feb 16, 2007
Now Insight Communication gets it all wrong. Perhaps, it’s her clients- Bank PHB.
I consider it rather hilarious that an agency with such a high-class status as Insight Communications can be charged for the most inexcusable offence as fouling a simple rule of the English language in an ad whose copy is meant to be a formal one.

The focus here is the currently running print ad depicting a basketball player who leaps as high as the topmost end of a skyscraper to dunk a ball in a basket placed at that very peak. Hummmh, brilliant one.

The head copy reads,
“PHB (noun): a person; one unrestricted by any form of challenge.”

The subhead reads,
“We help you PHB your dreams by ensuring that you not only achieve them, but surpass them. And that’s only possible because we think ahead of today’s challenges. Whether you are just starting out or you need support to grow your business, come in and take advantage of our futuristic thinking. Discover the PHB factor and accept no limitations.

Shall it be asked of the agency how the PHB, used as noun in the head copy, suddenly assumed a verb status in the subhead? Is consistency of style/word not part of the conditions for copywriting?

Besides, will it not be better if the basketball player’s kits bore PHB instead of the Air Jordan logo? If it had, it could have hinted that the player is a PHB, “a person unrestricted by any form of challenge.” But, it is preferable if it had no other brand other than the advertised brand except if the other brand is deliberately sponsored.

However, the graphical illustration, I’m moved to say, is a brilliant one especially considering the city landscape against which the ad is backdropped.

GOOD, almost BETTER… BANK PHB (ad)

Aloofaa ©
Poems For Review / What If: by Aloofaa(m): 12:11pm On Feb 13, 2007
What if everything is but a dream
cast nude on this jagged plane, unreal?

What if the silhouette is but the real thing
and the substance is its shadow?

What if sight is but blindness
and voice is but dumbness?

What if that animal perceives you as animal
itself- human, created in His image?

What if the womb is our grave
and the grave is but the cocoon pregnant with life?

What if white is but a precious gloom
and rose is but the emblem of death?

What if it’s not sleep after all
but the Big Guest tickly calling?

What if it’s foolery finely cloaked
masking as LOVE?

What if seated in Heaven is the Devil
and fanning Hell’s furnace is The Lord?

What if righteousness is but a sin
and Sodomy, the Hallowed?

What if we are just characters
existing only in the dreams of some gods?

What if…?

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