Hi i'm Jackwriter and I'm gonna become a game designer.I draw characters and comics as well.Can you tell me how this character is for now?

Anyone likes this one?

U mean me? .

Thanx a lot man.Do you find my art childish?

@Jydekris I didn't get your point.
@Kemjisuper the way you said I was 5 it hurted me .But the way you said I had interesting art style,It touched me .

For your information Kemjisuper i'm 17! .I suggest you give the chick some hair.

Hi.I drew this  myself.Hope you like it.

@utali
Hey I made a logo for you and its an animation kinda one.The magnifying glass will move from "Sig" till "nature" bringing together signature.So how about it?

It looks kinda dark.Don't put that soilder pattern on the shoes cuz it looks like he ain't got any legs. .Now can anyone tell me how my paper art is?

Kemji what do you mean by that? Are you saying my paper art sucks or does it suck because I didn't put any colour?

Kemji what do you mean by that? Are you saying it sucks even worse?

gee I didn't realize that you detailed my character badly. and to think that guy thinks he can draw my characters with ease using ms paint. But Good coloring though.Anyone else?

Nice fearsome creature u got there a lot dark though .The only thing i can see is his pants and legs and of course a bit of his face.nice one. .now will you gimme a comment plz? And plz don't be lenient.

Okay i redrew that pencil art.hope its better .

Okay Kemji this time for real i'm sorry.Okay? I made these boxes myself.you might like them.

That's great! because i want my art to be simple for everyone to draw.I can easily encourage anyone to become an artist than being discouraged. So thanx a lot.And where did I go wrong by the way?

@grafikdon
Maybe you're right to some extent.And the way you've drawn your character proves that you should work with marvel .Fine maybe criticism can sort things out but not always!I don't care what you just said even if it does mean shredding my art to bits.And I just said we have different ways of drawing so why did you have to butt in and make things more complicated and further all did I ask them to be lenient? And why can't you be a comic writer instead of posting an upcoming film of yours?You're characters can only suit well for adults and will only attract kids for a limit.And if anyone is gonna poke fun of my art,have it your way and this is what you do to a new member here.Maybe I regret living and I should have DIED when i had the chance to.And to think that I had a dream of becoming a game designer*sigh* look will we just get along and forget this whole thing HUH?!?Why can't i just post my stuff and get comments and if you want me to give you a comment finish the whole detail of your model.OKAY?

@Kemjisuper
@Sedunnaija
Look Kemjisuper,i'm sorry okay but the fact is everyone needs a team even you.cause without a team no one can do
anything right okay.Now let's just forget this whole thing and get back to posting our art.Okay?And ignore my posts if you hate me okay?
And Sedunnaija plz improve your grammer.

Hi i'm Jack writer and I made this topic for anyone who want to put their creative concepts,stories like me.This is my first concept.I hope it's good.
Brione
Story:Once upoun a time in a peaceful world of Casteriz,everyone votes for the new mayor SalleWhitebrush.But one day Bady a gangster along with Socky kidnaps Salle.Who will save her now?It’s all up to the police man Brione to stop Bady once and for all.
Gameplay:The game is a 2d platformer.The player’s goal is to rescue Salle and defeat Bady.Brione can run jump punch and swim similar to mario games.But instead of a goal line at the end of the level,the player has to capture crooks as much as possible or atleast
Catch the crook with a key to get access to the next level.There is a timelimit for every level.If the clock keeps decreasing,more crooks will disappear.When all crooks disappear the game ends with a gameover sign.If the player collects the “Awsome Mooo”Brione’s hands can change into mechanical tools like a hammer,shovel,driller etc,allowing him to solve puzzles or catch harder crooks.If the player collects money from crooks,Brione can go to mints and unlock secret levels.At the end of each stage the player must fight a boss.Once done the player can access to the next stage.
Okay the story may be boring but at least the gameplay is interesting.So how is it?

@c3dube-I don't need a mentor to get me to the right direction.I just need a team that's all.It doesn't matter how good you draw.It only matters how good the characteristics of the drawing is.Your fruits and vegetables are good though .And stop giving me advices about my personality. !

@Kemjisuper
Okay FINE!Sheesh! I just did it so that I can get confidence!These pictures of mine are gonna be my future creations in my game career and since i'm lonely with no friends here(Not in this web).So you want to tell me how your art is eh?
Well fine.First I suggest you modify some of your sexy chicks white because I only keep seeing you modify black ones like that Geno girl for example,they would be great if you make them white.Now I'm NOT some RACISIM but just try making white Babes.And as for the others modifying the head with unnecessary wrinkles,finish the whole body first and then post it.No fool posts an unfinished project.And even If they did it won't turn out nice like mine!I finish the whole thing and then post it.Now I don't care what you're gonna say to me but this is my way of giving you guys a comment.And did you notice that I create the stories for each of these pictures I've post?If you read their stories,you will like want more. forget that part.But right now think of those babes.HAPPY!

Um, What do you mean by that? can someone also critisize my pencil art?

Er, 17. .Can someone please give me my pencil art comment?

I suggest you learn a little bit of 3d max tutorial.You didn't modify the butt right as well as the chest.
P.S I need more comments for my pencil art.

Hey can you tell me how this art is?I drew it with pencil.If it's the right one attitude,it's because he's the funniest and the main trio in my game\story project.

Hi can you tell me how this one is?

Hey could you tell me how this one is?

Thanks for your advice but they are just cartoon characters.

Thanks a lot!Now I have some confidence for these mutts!

Why do you find it primitive?

Hi I'm Jack writer.I hope my art is good enough because I use Adobe illustrator cs2.Please gimme a comment.It will help me a lot.Thanks.here is my first art.