IDivine1:



I'm not voting but honestly fam I've seen you script better... That soccer scheme was nice but something about the punchelines just weren't hard enough.. That's why this is debatable

lol..you too? well...i wanted to start adding little humour..and work on wordies. So what really was wrong with the punches?

goshikid:
Respect yourself and stop disturbing my peace. . .

owkay? . . .and secondly who the hell are you cat? i the vex twice oh. . .
toh.

Look, there was no insult to you whatsoever in my statement. Giyazz got the flow crit hands down,not me...he didn't do much personals..the ones I brought were cool..but you gave him. It's not a crime to question verds, especially when its clearly questionable

GIYAZZ:
Lol Liricyst, everybody is saying it's a tie. Should we give them a re-match?

not everyone have voted yet. Ibime n Kr0ne n mikux are left

coogar:
this battle is a huge disappointment....

liricyst fell badly in form from his last battle. how can you be brilliant in the previous brawl & then serve this kinda nonsense. he had good ideas but his set-ups were horrible - there were plenty of reaches too. the only bar i like is the PSG/chelsea one.

giyaaz had a consistent flow but there's no heft in his punches. the only standout bar in giyaaz's script is the MC brain bar. this is what happens when nuccas take too many battles - they start talking nonsense and forcing punches to land. there's no winner in this battle.


MVGT: TIE

well you are entitled to your opinion as a dv..but it was a little harsh. I deviated from the style in the previous bout cos it was scripted then for a final. so I was all like..I'll divide your brain...blah blah blah. To be quite frank...I prefer this verse to what I scripted for the finals. But thanks anyways. .your view has been noted. Whenevr I battle on NL I will use that murk-ya-dumb-dad then fůck-ya-mum-bad schemes that y'all seem to favour

VerseOmatic:


Only elymaximus,thaBlaqbonez is the only textcee that has beaten me twice

okay.... but base why did you stop battling here. I wanna read your verses jo. Been long you did one anywhere sef

GIYAZZ:
Please we need professional verdicts from y'all. . . Mikuz, Coogar, Ibime, Krone, Emaprince, Ksslib and co

You've been venting that this place is getting all dried up, now I and Lyricist gave you a battle and you're sleeping on it. Whassup with that?

C'mon y'all. We need professional votes, cos I don't know why anyone will want to give me the PERSONAL criteria in that bout, and someone just did!

Abeg joor, make una go vote!

www.nairaland.com/2191838/battle-steeled-warlords-ii-liricyst#31600548

as in eh...goshikid disappointed me...he gave me the flow crit! Do these cats know what many of these crits mean? and I'm very sure most of our lines flew over heads sef.

Giyazz.... Until Ibime, kr0ne, coogar & Mikuz have had their say...we won't close that battle. There are some stuff in my verse I didn't want to explain. ..and I want someone to spot em

Darkrebel666:
bully beating ...

lyricist.. this is really wicked

lol....yea. I actually added those two bars to ease the whole gangster thing I did at d beginning and the end. haven't read his verse yet though. I always read my opponent's verse after verds start rowing in.

..

Giyazz...i'm giving you special treatment
Bloody scene Leggo....

I prevail at hobbies/like doing a chain of wordies/ to discard d little dawgs in your crew like the sale of puppies/ but hell no, I’m making not money off those frail poor dummies/ I’ll rather give hyenas a free meal…to track down your pals…after I’ve left them a trail of “buddies”/

We not on parity chap/ Your fam on a “curse” to be broke, I could destroy that solidarity, Bïatch/ I could help you with my salary…but you couldn't carry the cash/ How him go "raise money" for those suffering at home..when he said it himself…he’s not a "charity match"!!/

When “you see L”, you know your girl will kneel for the belting/ She’ll “crash in her home” with me,u know d deal boy, she sweating!/ Loving how I “pierce,gee”, but you she don’t feel for, she tells me/.... Of guys who can’t strike…u be “Them baba”!.....so there's no way in hell you can still be with Chelsea!!

You were her boo but never did her draws drop/ All i do is sex n its like the girl respects my customs/She knows we're switching styles if da boss stops/ Never "cum muter"..but she go dey scream "PLS CHANGE! PLS CHANGE"!...like say we go soon meet her bus stop!!!/

see its my goal to make you cry & lament Bïtch/ Punches could 'rip off' your whole dentition but would i amend shït?/you pix showed ya incisors,i saw your dents split/ so why would i "milk" you? Just live on with that permanent teeth!/

Yea i saw ya pix,i swear u n gorillas go gel/ Bìtch u too ugly to get fùcked,fïngered or felt/Tried to "send you to your creator"..his response left me snickering well/ He was like: NO! NO!..this can't be one of mine.."send that nìgga to hell"!/

I oblige Lord, I’ll bag him …that’s a battle’s function!/ & i “zip” it by….”1:02! 1:02!” That’s d the time you should tell satan to punch on!/ I’m ma use the time now to gather fruits, a last meal for the fåg to lunch on/ cos I’ll “First stack” his throat with it…then proceed to slit it…at the “apple Junction”!/

Darkrebel666 here’s ur reply, I’m Loco for grown shït/ get the camera, let’s see if d 'photo' omits/'the red eye' of the whole gåy community…cos it’ll be like they all got Apollo so quick/ When My pen slay this møtherfůcking male půssy….like it’s  “Ho, mofo bic”!!!/


Keys:

GIYAZZ:
Guy, it's 10 bars. Remove one bar from yours! And for the record: my GF's name is not Charity, it's Chelsea.

*L foe me...Gee for him of course
*Google 102 102 Zip code
* Go figure out the rest you lazy bums...lol

GIYAZZ:
You ready?

yea

post...I'll follow suit

goshikid:
Weak!

lol...everyone has had that weak verse.... This is the weakest I would pen....but I've actually seen you pen weaker.

goshikid here:
my opener was in response to a question he asked..who is maverick on God's green earth...d group wall to spite me

Who am I on God's green earth?? Smh...
Leggo....

I'm a son to one...Mr val Ezeiru, born to stun by a humble mum.
But to base's dad, his mum was just some scum he conned...then later he shunned his spawn..
fictional? qui? I'll prove it with a bible &
dictionary. ..
That base means bastard & Joshua is just the son of "Nun".

he an All round shitty writer, in his sound city cypher;I uncovered his odd thoughts...
Blessed with skill? dressed to kill? Brother we laud not..
But y'all will feel pressed for an ovation,
When I "dress" him up for d occasion. ..as my "text style" leaves him covered in "blood
clots"!!!!!!

He was hiding his personals &minding his dirty mouth..cos d winner is what he's hoping to be..
I'll reveal live, a concealed knife, and have him open up to me!!!!!
and leave him spilling his guts in this vicinity
Cos I "got one over this zero"....and let his life tend to infinity! !!!

Y'all be asking what's liricyst true state..
as I 'flow' 'solid' with "extreme mists" & expose Josh to a cruel "fate"...
It'll be like I broke him&life up..then set him up with death...cos this is his due date! Damn!!!!
Let's make this the "third pun" in this bar to put him 'in check'....& prove that I'm not this "fool's mate"!!!!!!

goshikid:
post the lines you drop against joshuabase. . . . .. .i cant find it.

it was a very weak battle..i attempted something new...too many in-rhymes so it killed my flow and overstretched my verse. Joshuabase on the other hand was in a quest to discover a new style, just check all his new brawls...i don't count that as a win,even though i progressed. When he is settled with a style, we will battle again..let me go get my verse though

gottoboy:

Ɣǝ̥§! Saw your latest rebuttal against that dude! Both of you ά̲̣̥я̥є kool, am happy to say you'll win that Pen Ιѕ line ιѕ ᴰᵒᵖᵉ though

lol...yea...after i used it i regretted it. I would have used it in the real battle.Anyways..i'm sure i will come up with more before then. What's your FB name?

Bloody scene

goshikid:
. . .sorry to say this. . .
but . . .this is nonsense. . . .!!!

Actually it isn't such a bad line. It's very good for a line not intended to be used in a battle.

GIYAZZ:
Ok let's kick it tomorrow by 9pm. 8 bars

Why not tomorrow friday night...same time?

GIYAZZ:
I'm sorry, but I can't kick it with you to avoid a No Show game. When you're free tell me.

I have never done a no show before. ..no qualms though. obesemf is free and willing to kick it with you

Darkrebel666:
liricyst

also tell me which one what you prefer and enjoy more?

grown man shii.....just because people put more thought into it.
but I love humorous lines....only thing wrong with it is that most cats leave out technicalities when trying to be funny.

imagine a respected vet on FB saying your nostrils too big, agege bread go pass through am! mtcheww! in a nigerian live battle..the crowd will laugh but for textceeing...its a no no.

Summary of it all I that I'm a sucker for technical verses whether hardcore or funny shii..but I'm leaning more towards the grown ass stuff for now

obesemf:


liricyst abeg, leave this one gimme, GIYAZZ i accept

why i go leave am
i want make him receive harm
i nor go fit deceive am
i wana branch out and leave him checking his root like who wan retrieve yam

GIYAZZ:
Thought you said you was hooked up on many battles?

yes i am,i can make out time...but since i have battled heywhizzy before... i didn't want to battle him so soon.
so if you are game,tell me the when and the how many

chai..these guys just dey talk about me like say i nor dey here.

Pundad i don't taunt opponents, its just a tactic to remedy starting weak n finishing strong or starting strong and finishing weak. I script to the criteria

GIYAZZ:
Open call out. . .

*picks the call* Hello, giyazz

Heywhizzy:
Liricyst..let's have a rematch

I have many battles lined up...maybe after all of them

nothing much....
just a freestyle pre-diss against a cat on nairaland (ceejay zeus offspring corneliuz)..in reply to his own pre-diss

leggo


Let me kick-start with facts/your blood will flow today, Bish pad yo pant/
& wear a vest, Dïck guard the heart/You’ll think its online bullet shopping when this netcee holds a gun and Clicks Add to Cat!!/

this bar is just a warning...If i see your Flame in action/...
I'll go all explosive and leave your body frame in fractions/
Cos Any single action by you in the real brawl...will be met by an opposite chain reaction!!/

calling me a newbie..in text, i should give you hints and tips/
i owned you here,our brawl will see you repeat 'the feat'/
stand up to me,you won't take a single crit,whőre sit/before d pain,this pre-diss was made to pleasure u bitch...without licking the clït or tits/

Its like This brat treat savours/& I excel with dishing out rhymes with sweet flavours/so he'll purge so violently then I become the kid's' saviour/
by stopping his shit flow...have his kidneys emulate him.....yea you know...a complete failure!!!/

His Monika’s a well suspected guise/so I’ll win n make his head a self-selected prize/joints torn off, no reconnected splice/
Yup,i’ll kill the self-acclaimed god…..just to make him "leave his raps behind"…like the resurrected Christ!!! /

I’m ready for whatever shit this monkey scripts/y’all will see him justly bleeped/ Zeus offspring? You’ll incur the wrath of the gods for inferring one of em slept with an ugly bïtch!!!/

You be outmanned rightly/when I make my dïck expand mighty/Take your girl in yo ‘pad’,& my ‘pen is’ making her move anyhow like your jagajaga handwriting!!!/

playing 'known so' with 'nonso'...fool...it's should be played with 'None so',
this is just a wasted bar to give you some material..have fun bro!

Smh...he'll use that..we know how shallow he gets/
my grim ripping skills keeps “mounting”, he should value and shadow this vet/
he can emulate..but will get trapped in the valley of the shadow of death!!/

ThaBlaqBonez:
Lmaoo look at them so pained, i'v beaten joshua base twice, y'all isnt fit to lace my boots, am great like that

you will find many have beaten joshuabase that much times on this ground..it means nothing.

mikuz:


Are you the same nigga who beat JoshuaBase at RG?

LOL...i whooped that nigga and my hands marks are still engraved on his buttocks

yea mikuz..i got knocked out by Hector

anyways I know base underestimated me cos I don't have battle records....so I didn't see it as much

IDivine1:



RG as in Rap Genesis?

yea...let's take this chat elsewhere...make them nor ban us

ggrin:

the posta are too long, if you have any wooers already...tag them let me challenge em

gottoboy:

Му instincts were right!

lol, how could you possibly know that? you compared my style?

IDivine1:



Lol, Cool... What do you go by on Facebook? And what groups are you active?

just RG

Chukwunonso Maverick Ezeiru

ggrin:

hope you don't mind...na you i go woo o