https://extraordinary-fairy-02c1db.netlify.app/index.html



Constructive criticism would be highly appreciated.

Nice

T0BY:
Nice

Thanks Man.

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Lots of bugs detected on your sliders when clicking the arrows and not swiping


Many things are not positioned well or u didn't use paddings and margins right in many places


I wonder why instead of <> u don't use normal icons



If you're a beginner with less than 6 months


Then it's ok project


If you've been coding more than that then it's simply a low budget stuffZ and really really mediocre no offense...

it's just constructive criticism

GREATIGBOMAN:
Lots of bugs detected on your sliders when clicking the arrows and not swiping


Many things are not positioned well or u didn't use paddings and margins right in many places


I wonder why instead of <> u don't use normal icons



If you're a beginner with less than 6 months


Then it's ok project


If you've been coding more than that then it's simply a low budget stuffZ and really really mediocre no offense...

it's just constructive criticism

None taken,It's my 6th month learning.

GREATIGBOMAN:
Lots of bugs detected on your sliders when clicking the arrows and not swiping

Which of them aren't swiping??

majesticguy:

Which of them aren't swiping??

When u click on the arrows instead of swiping that's what I mean... it's kind of buggy

T0BY:
You must have really gone far to be able to come up with this.. kudos

Not that far, just 6 months of learning so far.

GREATIGBOMAN:


Many things are not positioned well or u didn't use paddings and margins right in many places

The positioning is kinda deliberate. I didn't want a blocked kinda site. I wanted some sections to vary in width, hence the disparity in the appearance.

Alright

majesticguy:


Not that far, just 6 months of learning so far.

it might not be totally perfect, you are almost there.

optimistcandyboy:
it might not be totally perfect, you are almost there.

Thanks boss. Please any area you think could be improved upon?

More stuffs to work on...


Your contact area is just off

Like it's not just the best design.... u might have learnt CSS Yes!

But it seems u don't have good UI skills


I'd advise u Goto behance to get inspiration and try recreating designs there


Learning CSS and knowing UI/UX are sha 2 different things


Like this one.... your message box is totally hidden and lost in the white background someone won't even know it's there

Since you're using white fonts, there should be and overlay on the images that's black and slightly transparent so that your text can be viewed properly and your images too can be seen even when one of your sliders contains totally white images... if

If the text are just white and there's an image that contains majorly white pixels there... your text will be lost and can't be seen

Someo things are too close together... like this social icons.... there's something allied margins u know

I believe it would have been better to spread out this logo images and let it overflow incase there many of them

Instead of hiding them and making them viewable only when those arrows are clicked.


In most sites... they're usually in rows and swippable

Go check your mail.

majesticguy:


Thanks boss. Please any area you think could be improved upon?

GREATIGBOMAN:
More stuffs to work on...


Your contact area is just off

Like it's not just the best design.... u might have learnt CSS Yes!

But it seems u don't have good UI skills


I'd advise u Goto behance to get inspiration and try recreating designs there


Learning CSS and knowing UI/UX are sha 2 different things


Like this one.... your message box is totally hidden and lost in the white background someone won't even know it's there

A million thanks boss. Yes my UI skills is quite appalling, really looking forward to improving on it.

Although the message box is showing on my device, don't know why it's not showing in yours. And the social icons, I don't know why it's clustered on your device, it looks quite ok on mine.

I probably have to have a break point at 360px where I'd make some adjustments

optimistcandyboy:
Go check your mail.

Alright.

majesticguy:


A million thanks boss. Yes my UI skills is quite appalling, really looking forward to improving on it.

Although the message box is showing on my device, don't know why it's not showing in yours. And the social icons, I don't know why it's clustered on your device, it looks quite ok on mine.

I probably have to have a break point at 360px where I'd make some adjustments

Yes.... download mobile Emulator chrome extension... it will help you a lot and assist you to build proper responsive websites