A short drama by giftforlife, just to know if am good to write story of my life, enjoy

After school hour, Ese and John were seen discussing at one corner of the school:
john: ese how far na, i cant hold myself any longer i want us to meet again today
ese: what do you mean u cant hold yourself,
john: am telling you the truth i need to feel your beautiful body again.
ese: please i dont want to do it
john: why na, or you dont love me anymore.
ese: not that am just scared
john: what are you scared of, is it pregnancy
ese: yes of course and beside you know the final exam is around the corner, i dont want any distraction for now

Is dis a story

Ephhay: Is dis a story

eerrrm maybe yes, i want to improve my english and prepare for the big one i want to write, so i want to do it by writting a short story to see if i can write story of my life

As they were discussing, ese friend maria walk by and interupt
maria: ese you dont want to go home yet or i should leave you behind
ese: no please do wait for me i will join you in a moment
(maria walk off as they continue their discussion)
john: we are grownup, is kids that are afraid of pregnancy
ese: dont say so
john: ok if you are scared, we will use condom
ese: even condom do burst sometime, please john lets just wait after our exam
john: come on thats too far na, lets just do it once
ese oh john but.....
john: no but, just once and i will leave you alone
ese: ok but just once oh
john: yeah thats my girl
(draws closer to kiss her)
ese: (push him back) becareful we are still in school
john: and so but theres nobody around na
ese: you cant tell, i will visit you later in the evening
john: no problem dear, let me fly home to go prepare for you.
(they parted)
(light off)

Maria and ese discussing on their way home after school

ese: thanks for waiting for me
maria: no problem, what are friends for, erm ese theres something i really want to discuss with you,
ese: what is it
maria: i have been seeing you with john very often now, is there anything going on between you two
ese: no oh, why would you ask that kind of question
maria: no oh am just concern, you know people are talking in school, and me as your friend i have to confirm if something is really happening
ese: see me and john we are just friend, thats all nothing else
maria: i hope so oh, you know our exam is around the corner i will be bad if you distract yourself from reading
ese: mama maria, i know you dont have to remind me,
maria: am just saying, you know those boys will do anything they can just to get into our pant, and after that, thats all
ese: you talking, what is frank always doing around you
maria: ha that one, what do you expect, he toast me and i refuse, you know i dont have time for any nonsense now.
ese: hmmm action woman
maria: is not about action woman, my parents have labour day and night just to make sure i succeed, i wont do any good now if i throw all that away,
ese: so you are saying you dont need man
maria: not that i dont need man, i need but not now,
ese: ok oh, am almost at home now, we will see later na
maria: alright take care and greet mama for me, i will come call you for choir practice later.
ese: ok no problem bye.
maria: bye

Some weeks later, ese is seen vomiting at the back of her house,
her mother watching.
mama ese: ese you've been vomiting for some time now, and you refuse to go to hospital, whats really wrong with you
ese: mama i told you am alright is just a little fever, i will get over it
mama ese: are you sure you've not get yourself pregnant
ese: haba mama, why would you thing like that na, or you trust me again.
mama ese: not that i dont trust you, you know after your father died, is only you i have left, i dont want anything to jeopardize the plans i have for you
ese: mama dont worry nothing will jeopardize your plan, am very ok, and mama just believe in me please
mama ese: i always believe in you my girl
(somebody is looking for mama ese outside, its her friend for church, mama nkechi, ese mother went to attend to her)

mama nkechi: mama ese how are you na
mama ese: mama nkechi am fine oh, and how are you and your family
mama nkechi: they are alright oh
mama ese: these one you visit today i hope everything is alright oh
mama nkechi: aah everything is very fine, you know its been long we chat na, so i thought it will be best if i see you today
mama ese: thats very nice of you
mama nkechi: ehen have you heard the news
mama ese: which news
mama nkechi: the news about vera na,that deaconess daughter.
mama ese: yes i know her what happen to her.
(ese eavesdropping)
mama nkechi: she is dead na
mama ese: Jesus christ, you are joking right
mama nkechi: hmmm which joke, she died yersterday night
mama ese: this is really bad, that beautiful girl? What kill her na
mama nkechi: she got pregnant and she went to take drugs, which took her life
mama ese: ehen, children of nowadays, is this what this life have turn to, i swear if my daughter do this kind thing to me i will kill her with my bare hands.
mama nkechi: ehen were is that daughter of yours self?
mama ese: she is inside oh,
(ese walk by to fetch water)
ese: mama nkechi, good evening ma,
mama nkechi: good evening my daughter, how are you.
ese: fine ma, how is nkechi
mama nkechi: she is doing fine
ese: ok when you get home greet her for me oh.
mama ese: ok no problem(turns to mama ese) your daughter is getting bigger oh, i think she is really enjoying.
mama ese: is the work of God oh,
mama nkechi: i think i should be going now, its getting dark, let me go cook.
mama ese: ok let me see you off(sees her off)

giftforlife9:

eerrrm maybe yes, i want to improve my english, so i want to do it by writting a story

Kul dn #following

Ephhay:
Kul dn #following

tnx, den i wil update cool evening, any where i make mistake please correct me

giftforlife9:


tnx, den i wil update cool evening, any where i make mistake please correct me

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welcome ma,

Ese thinking loudly on her way coming back from church,
ese: whats is wrong with me, i have been vomiting for sometime now, or am i pregnant? No God forbid, that would be the last thing i would think of, imagine what people would say if am pregnant, i think i have to talk to john about this.

After school hour, ese is seen on her desk reading, while john approach her
john: hey babe girl wassap, why the sad face
ese: hmmmm john i think we need to talk, am not fine oh
john: whats wrong with my beautiful angel
(ese silent)
come on talk to me
ese: i think there is a big problem
john: whats the problem na
ese: i think am pregnant
john: come on if you want to play this is not the right time
ese: john am serious, i think am pregnant
john: why would you say that, last time i ask you said you were okay, then how can you suddenly say you pregnant now
ese: i didnt know then, its now i found out
john: how do you know
ese: i've been vomiting, and i have been having fever for some time now, am the fact is i miss my period
john: see ese, i dont know what you are talking about, and you better go look for who is responsible, for me am out(leaving)
ese: how can you talk like, is only you i know, i dont have any other man(crying)
john: whatever, am off and dont disturb me please
ese:(thinking loudly) oh God, why me now, i dont know what to do, if i tell my mother, she will kill me as she said
(light out)

At john's house, he is discusing with his friend mark
john: oh boy i don enter trouble oh
mark: guy wetin happen na
john: you know ese na, she say she don carry belle na
mark: na that one be problem, that one no be problem na, and by the way what are you going to do
john: do, i already drove her away na, what do you expect me to do na
mark: guy you be idiot oh, why would you drive her away, what do you expect her to do now, any way you look the matter its still your fault na. But you should not have drove her
john: but what do you expect me to do na
mark: first go and apologise to her, then you talk about abortion to her
john: abortion? Is that not dangerous, that might kill her oh
mark: guy forget, is not about tearing her stomach, i know a specialist that will just will prescribe drug for her, and she will just take it, and thats all
john: waoh, you don be master for that one oh, how you come manage know all this thing na
mark: guy sit down there, you better open your eyes oh, na naija we dey oh
john: guy thanks alot, i will do as you say
mark: no problem, what are friends for, let me start going oh, so that i go prepare for adama
john: oh its today she is coming, no wahala na take care
mark: alright see you
(light off)

In school, ese and john were seen in their usual place were they use to discuss
john: ese, how are you doing
(ese keeping quiet)
come on please answer me am sorry for what i said yersterday
ese: you should know you will be sorry before opening your mouth to say something like that
God, do you really think i have anyone else apart from you
john: i know you dont, i was shock, you know nobody have ever told me something like that before, so i was surprise and am sorry
ese: ok no problem
john: so what are you doing about it
ese: me doing about it?
john: sorry i mean we doing about it.
ese: i dont know, what to do, am just confuse
john: see you know exam is next month.
ese: yes of course i know
john: and you know, your mum is a deaconess, it will be shameful if her church member hear anything like this
ese: were are you getting to?
john: am saying we should abort it
ese: what, no no no just no, thats suicide
john: how can you say its suicide or do you have another option,
ese: even if theres no option i cant take life, and beside am also risking my own life, how can i rip open my stomach at this age, it can also cause barreness
john: see you can stay there and be counting the effect, but know this if you wont abort it, then count me out of your life
(storms out)
ese: oh God, help me
(light out)

Try n read ur work ova again b4 submittin...nyc 1 tho!

Ephhay:
Try n read ur work ova again b4 submittin...nyc 1 tho!

yeah tnks

You are improving with each post, i can see why you said you want to mend your english but dont worry, you are good to write story of your life

giftforlife9:

eerrrm maybe yes, i want to improve my english and prepare for the big one i want to write, so i want to do it by writting a short story to see if i can write story of my life

In that case, I suggest you PRACTICE good writing. I mean capitalisation in every place it should be, punctuations, no textglish, etc. In fact, you can't be aspiring to be a writer and be writing textnglish.

For example, here's how I would have written your first post:

After school hour, Ese and John are discussing in an empty class:
John: Ese, how far na? I can't hold myself any longer; I want us to meet again today.
Ese: What do you mean you can't hold yourself?
John: I am telling you the truth. I need to feel your beautiful body again.
Ese: Please I don't want to do it.
John: Why na? Or you don't love me anymore?
Ese: It's not that. I'm just scared.
John: What are you scared of - is it pregnancy?
Ese: Yes, of course. And, besides, you know our final exams are around the corner. I don't want any distraction for now.

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Writeditor:

In that case, I suggest you PRACTICE good writing. I mean capitalisation in every place it should be, punctuations, no textglish, etc. In fact, you can't aspiring to be writer and be writing textnglish.

For example, here's how I would have written your first post:

After school hour, Ese and John are discussing in an empty class:
John: Ese, how far na? I can't hold myself any longer; I want us to meet again today.
Ese: What do you mean you can't hold yourself?
John: I am telling you the truth. I need to feel your beautiful body again.
Ese: Please I don't want to do it.
John: Why na? Or you don't love me anymore?
Ese: It's not that. I'm just scared.
John: What are you scared of - is it pregnancy?
Ese: Yes, of course. And, besides, you know our final exams are around the corner. I don't want any distraction for now.

tnx alot

Ese at home alone, talking to herself.
ese: what should i do now? I dont have anybody to turn to, i can tell my mum for she will skill me alive, and i cant bring shame to this family, imagine what my friends will think of me, i will be the gossip of the town, what of maria she will be so dissappointed in me, hmmm i cant take this, this is too much for me to handle, i need to see john right away.

At john's house, he and his friend mark are playing card.
mark: guy how far na, wetin come happen between you and ese na?
john: omo that girl tire me oh, she said she wont do it that its too risky.
mark: did you tell her what will happen if she refuse?
john: yes na; i told her everything, i even told her how she will bring disgrace to her family, and her mother been a deaconess, she will be hiding her face in church.
mark: and she still refuse?
john: yes oh, she dont want to kill innocent baby.
mark: then she should be ready to become a mother na.
john: i told her to count me out of it oh, i dont want any trouble for now, i want to concentrate on my study and read to make sure i come out in flying colour.
mark: thats what we all pray for oh my brother, she should leave you out since she refuse to abort it, she should carry the wahala all by herself.
john: that is it oh and........
(ese comes in)
oh baby how are you, and why the sad face?
ese: i cant do this john i want to abort it.

john: thats my baby, now you are talking.
ese: but am still very much afraid.
jmark: theres nothing to be afraid of my dear, i know the man very well and he is very good at what he do.
ese: which man are you talking about?
john: the man that will give you the drug, he knows him very well.
mark: i even have a friend that did it last month, she is very much healthy now and the baby aborted.
ese: really?
mark: yeah of course.
john: you see, there is nothing to be afraid of.
ese: i just hope its safe oh, so when are we going there?
john: anytime you are ready dear.
ese: i think am ready now.
john: ok then, mark please lead the way.
mark: alright
(light out)

At the chemist shop.

mark: good afternoon sir.
chemist man: aaaah my friend mark, how are you today?
mark: am fine sir, these are my friends, john and ese.
chemist man: how are you guys?
john and ese: fine sir.
chemist man: thats good, so mark what brings you to my shop today?
mark: sir i need that my special package.
chemist man: oh that, the money have increase to 1500 oh,
mark: no wahala just give us.
chemist man: ok,(brings the drug) here it is, you know how to use it na abi?
mark: yes no need explaining, John give him the money lets go.
john: ok ( gives the man the money and thank him as they say their goodbye)

This is forming brain.lets go there.

eunisam:
This is forming brain.lets go there.

tnx alot for coming i wil update in the morning, though the story will end in next page but i will start new one, i hope you guys will follow me to the new story

eunisam:
my dear,good market no dey do advert, just start and u will see follow come followers,as in: genetic followwaka

yeah tnx

giftforlife9:


tnx alot for coming i wil update in the morning, though the story will end in page 1 but i will start new one, i hope you guys will follow me to the new story

my dear,good market no dey do advert, just start and u will see follow come followers,as in: genetic followwaka

On their way home

mark: ese you will take the drug before you sleep.
ese: after eating right?
mark: yes you will have to eat because the drug is very strong, if you take it without food; it will turn you eye.
ese: i just hope its safe.
john: my dear stop worrying about that as we told you already its very safe, so dont be scared ok.
ese: ok.
mark: alright john i will leave you guys here.
john: tnx alot for everything.
mark: no problem Bye.
john: bye.
(mark leaves)
john: am really sorry for all this pain i have cause you.
ese: this is not the time to apologise.
john: i know but i still have to say it,
ese: no matter what happen john, i will always love and cherish you, so dont put the blame on you, we make the choices together and we will take the blame together, so dont apologise because you did nothing wrong, me coming to your house was my choice, me taking this drug is also my choice, all i pray for is for me to survive it and then we will move on with our life because i believe this will never happen again.
john: my dear you will survive it and this will never repeat itself my love.
We are almost at your home now, let me stop here you wont like it if your mother sees me.
ese: so i guess its goobye.
john: yeah bye and take care of yourself
ese: i will.
john: dont forget to take it after eating ok, bye i love you.
( they parted)

At home, ese all alone in the dark with a pool of blood.
ese: mother mother mother
( ese mum rushes in, sees her daughter in a pool of blood)
mama ese: Jesus christ; ese whats all this?
ese: mother am very sorry, i dont want to bring shame into this family so i took it.
mama ese: ( crying ) you took what ese, what are talking about?
( sees that shes loosing her daughter she start shouting crying for help)
ese: oh father is here, he is here to take me, he is looking at me, he wears a white shirt.
mama ese: oh my little baby, just stay put ok help is coming.
( neighbours rushes in )
please help me, am loosing my daughter.
neighbour 1: this is serious lets take her to hospital.
ese: (loosing her breath little by little) there will be no need for that father is here already to take me, mother am really sorry i dont want to bring disgrace to you thats y i too the abortion pill, am really sorry mother.
mama ese: oh my dear, why ? Why? Why? I would have cherish you and your baby, to have baby is not a disgrace my dear.
ese: mother am really sor....
(dies)
mama ese:( starts shouting, crying, rubbing her body on the ground as her neighbours console her) oh God bring her back, i lost my husband now my daughter, what have i done wrong to deserve this kind of purnishment? why not take me instead of my daughter, i cant be alone, i cant be alone( crying heavily as light fades away).

I will finish the story in the evening and start another story

As for those reading without commenting, at least if you dont like the story tell me, if theres errror tell me at least it will make me improve for the next one, not by reading and dissappearing