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Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 12:49pm On Oct 04, 2014 |
Well done Calismart |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 2:53pm On Oct 04, 2014 |
Ciela:Thanks dear |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by aprilwise(m): 4:03pm On Oct 04, 2014 |
I know isn't easy to type but regular update will be good nd make d story ve interesting. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:23pm On Oct 04, 2014 |
I would have loved to update this evening but due to some circumstances,i just can't do so. Bear with me guys,i will make up for this tomorrow being sunday. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 4:39pm On Oct 05, 2014 |
EPISODE 14 David came out from his room and headed to the dinning to have breakfast. As he sat down,he glanced at his wristwatch and muttered something,shook his head and stood up. Sonia saw this and edged closer. "Sir,you are leaving.you didnt touch your food"Sonia said gently. "I'm running out of time.I need to be at the meeting this morning in the next fifteen minutes"He explained. "But,sir,missing breakfast is not actually good.It is always advisable to eat breakfast in the morning,no matter what.Please sir,eat your breakfast"Soniasounded like a newly married wife. Just then,Angela emerged and went up to her husband. "Darling.She is right.please come and eat your food.The office and meeting can wait.your health is more important to me"she said as she took him by the hand like a baby and led him back to the dinning table. Sonia watched carefully as he chew and swallowed the food.She smiled and left. David ate in a hurry and left for the meeting. :::::.***::::: "Sonia.i hope you are doing what the baba told you to do?"Sonia's mother asked over the phone. Sonia had called to tell her how the plans has been going. "Yes mum.for these past two days,i made sure i put the liquid into his food and i always ensured he ate them"she replied in a low voice,to prevent even the walls from hearing. "Good.don't make any mistake o.be careful o.remember the baba said it will back-fire if you don't do it well as he said"She clarified. "I know mom.that is why i called.Today is the third day.Remind me the things he said i must do today.I dont want to make any mistake o.It's like i forgot some of the things he said i should do"Sonia explained. "Haa omo mi o.listen very well.make sure you put it in his breakfast and dinner.and then pour a little of it into his bathing water.Then apply it on your palm and rub his head with itThat is all.please be careful o"She instructed. "Alright mom.i will try my best"Sonia finally said and dropped the call. She had succeed only in putting it into his breakfast this morning.She wondered how she can rub his head with her palm. The bathing water case can never be a problem.She prayed to get lucky.But she was scared.The thought of everything back-firing was even scarier but she was determined to play this game to the end.She was beginning to reasons why she should do it.She needed money.If everything goes as planned,money would be hers. And moreover,the thought of the revelation of paul's death was another thing she never wanted another person to hear. :::::.***.:::::: "Honey i'm hoooome"David's voice echoed as he returned that evening from work. Sonia's heartbeat increased as she was set to carry out her final operations. She successfully applied it into his food and bath water. Now,the only thing left was to rub his head with her palms.She applied the liquid on her palm and stayed in a place where she knew David would pass through after bathing. As David approached,she composed herself and started looking at the paper in her hand as if she was reading it. As he came closer,she look at his head and said. "Oh sir,there is a little soap on your head"She came closer and David stopped,lowering his head for her to clean out the soap as she volunteered to. She smiled within herself as she rubbed his head with the liquid.she rubbed it all over slowly,with pleasure. "Its okay now"she said.David left.She felt like jumping up out of excitement but controlled herself.She remembered Angela and how she took her like a junior sister. "Oh lord,i didn't mean to do this.I am so sorry for whatever happens next"Sonia murmured as she ran to her room with tears running down her cheeks. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by aprilwise(m): 5:40am On Oct 06, 2014 |
Nice job. Y tears running down her check? Her evil plans are working out. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 4:07pm On Oct 06, 2014 |
EPISODE 15 "shine bright like a diamond" "shine bright like a diamond....." Angela tossed on her bed.The phone kept ringing.She peered at the screen,It was "Sweet mother" calling. She tossed again from one side of the bed to another.She was still enjoying her sleep.It was the ringing phone that woke her up.She glanced at the clock hanging on the wall.It was 5.25am. She wondered why her mother could be calling so early that morning. "Good morning mum"She finally spoke into the phone. "Angela.Angela are you alright?"Mrs uwa asked from the other end of telephone. "I'm alright mum.I hope there is no problem"Angela asked curiously.Her mother's voice didn't sound normal. "Angela.i had a dream that's why i called you"Mrs uwa said with a shaky voice. "A dream?"Angela asked yawning. "Angela, i had a dream.you were travelling by a bus,sitting very comfortably on your seat and then a lady came out from nowhere and started dragging the seat with you..The seat that you paid ticket for.What baffled me was that everybody in the bus kept quiet as if they didn't see what was happening.Then she finally pulled you out of the fast moving bus and you fell down on the express road.Immediately,i woke up"She narrated with a deep sigh of confusion. Angela heaved and yawned again. "Mama,it's just a dream.It's only a dream.Don't worry okay? I'm fine"Angela said. "No no no. Angela,my dreams are not just dreams.I hardly dream and when i have one,its usually a revelation because it later comes to pass.Angela,youmust pray hard.Pray real hard because i sense danger"Mrs uwa warned. Angela was reluctant to saying anything. Her mother's dreams comes into reality though but only one case gave her doubts.Her little sister was taken by unknown gunmen few months after her birth and they never heard anything about her again.She felt her sister could be dead;if not blood and destiny ought to have brought them together again but her mother kept saying that her lost daughter was still alive,that she dreams of it. Angela openly doubted the possibility of her still being alive. She also remembered how her mother had told them she had a dream where her aunty,her mother's sister had an accident and died.Her mother had told her sister about it and asked her to pray.They too,prayed over it.Few months later,her aunty died in a ghastly motor accident. Angela became scared.She clasped her hand together and muttered something. "Angela.You must come over so we can pray over this.Tell David about it.I'm very sure he would allow you come"Mrs uwa said before finally hanging up. Angela got up immediately and went up to David to tell him about it. David granted her the permission without wasting anytime. The pastor Angela and her mother visited,told Angela that she must fast for seven days (6am-3am) and at the end of the fast,she must come for prayers.Becauseof this,she stayed over at her parents place as instructed by her mother. The pastor didn't actually explain the dream but he only said he sensed danger. "Great disaster" 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Fatalveli(m): 4:16pm On Oct 06, 2014 |
Now this is getting interesting, full of suspense, breathtaking... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:50pm On Oct 06, 2014 |
Please i would love it if u help point out areas where i need to improve.Its really gonna help me |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by pretydiva(f): 9:52pm On Oct 06, 2014 |
Hp Sonia is nt angela's missing sister ooo.hmmmm |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Eliasog: 5:50am On Oct 07, 2014 |
typical nigerian movie line, a person will be fetish and pious at the same time. Who is she deceiving? God! No no, u can serve two masters, it is either you love one and hate the other. You cant serve God with Mammon says Jesus. 2 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Eliasog: 5:50am On Oct 07, 2014 |
typical nigerian movie line, a person will be fetish and pious at the same time. Who is she deceiving? God! No no, u can serve two masters, it is either you love one and hate the other. You cant serve God with Mammon says Jesus. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 7:53am On Oct 07, 2014 |
pretydiva:same thing in my mind |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by myndd(m): 8:07am On Oct 07, 2014 |
pretydiva: dah part got me thinking along d same line |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by ACHIEVABABE: 2:48pm On Oct 07, 2014 |
HMMMM NYC STORY BT PLS UR UPDATE IS 2 SHORT |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:44pm On Oct 07, 2014 |
pretydiva:hmmo.that part got us all thinking the same thing...lolz |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:45pm On Oct 07, 2014 |
Eliasog:Yea.you are right |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:47pm On Oct 07, 2014 |
ACHIEVABABE:Thanks. I will see to the complain |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Aipete2(f): 7:42am On Oct 09, 2014 |
Hmmmm |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:09pm On Oct 09, 2014 |
Guys please pardon me for the way i'm going with the episodes. I'll be making updates regularly from on sunday. Tuale! |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by seunviju(f): 10:11pm On Oct 09, 2014 |
The power of prayers,Sonia u will hear it.Thanks for the update |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by tushwitch(f): 6:39am On Oct 10, 2014 |
calismart, are you.O Godwin on Facebook?, reply asap coz your work's been posted without so much as any credit going to you as the writer, no acknowledgment or "culled from "or anything of that nature |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 8:29am On Oct 10, 2014 |
tushwitch:I'm calistus chidubem ojiako on facebook.Please tell me the name of the copy cats.I dont know what i have done to those people o. Just few weeks ago,i stopped two facebook pages from posting this story. Pls if its a page,tell me the name of the page.If its just someone sharing it on his/her timeline,pls tell me name of the person |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by donkizzydaboss(m): 12:30pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
great story more ororo to ur elbow......plz be more frequent in ur posting |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 12:49pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
7 days away frm her home? Calismart wel done nd nyc wrk |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by donbrowser(m): 1:29pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
Aipete2:Na Ekiti u dey abi? |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by donbrowser(m): 1:33pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
Bevy12:Who's pocket are u enriching? |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 1:43pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
donkizzydaboss:welcome bro.thanks for the ororo.lols I'm working on the updates.i gonna kip dem coming from on sunday.pls bear with me |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 1:50pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
Ciela:Thanks sis |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by tushwitch(f): 2:24pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
Calismart:idk who to believe tho his name's Omokpo Godwin |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 5:41pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
tushwitch:I've checked his profile and i found out dat almost everytin on his timeline is from my facebook page.like i said earlier at the beginning of this thread,i posted the cooked up version of this story on the page.just ten episodes and so,some copy cat admins took it up. But here,i decided to change everything in the story.even the plot,sequence,name and everything changed and improved. Thanks for notifying me dear.I appreciate. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by tushwitch(f): 5:56pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
Calismart:okay then....good job 1 Like |
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