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Re: The Village Girl by onosj(f): 5:46pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
Mma is entering double trouble! |
Re: The Village Girl by lenmafon: 5:47pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
oga dan thanking u for de update but me i am still feeling hungry o! |
Re: The Village Girl by teamplayey: 10:10pm On Oct 10, 2014 |
![]() lenmafon:... Me too #oliver-twisting |
Re: The Village Girl by Fatalveli(m): 10:10am On Oct 11, 2014 |
Wia is our danwriting ooo, shey u no go coming to updating for us nii.... Hungrying is catching us ooo |
Re: The Village Girl by EllaGold35(f): 4:29pm On Oct 11, 2014 |
At last!! I caught up wit u guyzz im loving dis toryyyy ooo |
Re: The Village Girl by labaski(f): 6:04pm On Oct 11, 2014 |
where is danwrites ooo..abeg na pple dey open mouth down for here... |
Re: The Village Girl by Kingso23: 7:18am On Oct 12, 2014 |
*sniffs the atmosphere * Huh, i de perceiving something unpleasant for here!! *runs out of thread * I'm Kingso ™√√ |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 7:20am On Oct 12, 2014 |
I'll update today, guys. |
Re: The Village Girl by Essyydiamond(f): 8:31am On Oct 12, 2014 |
I going but now I coming bk n I seeing vanessa n I wondering wat she planning. Nnaa eh,this story is too sweeting |
Re: The Village Girl by McJANNY(f): 11:20am On Oct 12, 2014 |
I've been a silent reader from the very begining but right now i think i just have to come out of my shell to say a big WELLDONE to the writer...the story is just effortlessly amazing and at the same time simple and easy to comprehend..nice storyline, wonderful characters, believeable setting, amazing story!!!Kudos 1 Like |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 1:40pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
McJANNY:Thanks, McJanny. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 2:35pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
I apologize for the delay in updating. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 2:47pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
EPISODE 22 'Let's go back, Richard,' Vanessa said. 'The girl has obviously gone.' 'Let's check at the Akasson's too as the guy said.' 'She probably would have used any of the bigger names.' 'Oh well, we wouldn't know for sure, would we?' Richard's eyes didn't leave the road. They passed a small crowd of noisy people and Richard slowed the car. 'Now what?' 'What's going on there?' Vanessa rolled her eyes. 'How would I know?' Richard stopped the car and pulled the shifter to R. The car started to reverse. 'Now what?' 'Let me check out what's happening there.' Vanessa let out a small groan of impatience. Richard parked and stepped down. Vanessa reluctantly joined him. A large fair lady held a younger lady in a long flowing dress by the neck. Most of the people gathered round were asking what the matter was, some pleading to the woman to leave the girl or at least tell them what the problem was. Finally the woman released the young girl. Her forehead was reddened in fury, beads of sweat steadily condensing on the surface. 'That's how you people come here to eat free food everyday because una don hear say Father Christmas dey sell food for bus park.' 'Madam, I having money before, I swearing with my life. I not knowing what--' 'You are mad. So you no check your bag before you begin order like person wey dey work for Central Bank. You think say I no know you?' 'Hey, Madam, I not knowing you o. I never coming here before, in fact--' The woman made to slap her and she dodged. 'Thief, today na ur last. Just don't pay me my money and you'll see what I --' 'Madam, how much is the money?' Mma screamed and threw her arms around Richard. Richard hugged her back. Vanessa stood at the back glaring. 'Madam, how much does she owe?' 'Two-hundred naira,' the woman threw out. Richard brought out his wallet and gave her two clean N1000 naira notes. The woman's features straightened out suddenly as she collected the notes. Her smile of glee hadn't fully formed when Mma reached and jerked the notes from her hand. She gave her one of the notes. 'Giving me change fast fast.' The woman stared at Mma, all her cavities open. Richard was smiling. Vanessa entered the car and slammed the car door shut. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Village Girl by Niwdog(m): 3:08pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Giving nma her change fast fast |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 3:23pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 3:25pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Re: The Village Girl by EllaGold35(f): 3:46pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Good! #Team nma |
Re: The Village Girl by Nobody: 4:03pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Praise the Lord. I thank God Richard cameing on tym nd Mma now gettin mouth to collectin change. I kind of lyk dis Richard guy he is rare as in calm wit Mma. Sum men wud av 4gotten abt her and denied or terminated d pregnancy. Anyway welling done Danwrites. More mb to u |
Re: The Village Girl by doctorgold(m): 6:12pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Nice update. I loving that part where Mma dey demand for her change sharp sharp. Mma don dey learning Lagos life be that. |
Re: The Village Girl by Nobody: 6:38pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Oboy c our mma o sharp sharp tinz.i pray say mk richard puttin mma 4 skul o danwrites thumbz up more english 2 mma |
Re: The Village Girl by Enasco1(m): 7:30pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Danwrites, Nice story, jx came across ur work n I felt lik goin through. Pls be fast wt ur update. Anxious 2 see wot becomes of Stella, Cynthia n Vanessa!!! |
Re: The Village Girl by onose01(f): 8:05pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Nice work. Nice storyline. Weldone bro. U sure know ur onion. Following. Bumper to bumper. |
Re: The Village Girl by seunviju(f): 8:36pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Am so happy Richard came to her rescue?Abeg wia is princeadepoju o because it has been a while I saw him here?keep up the good work Dan |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 11:12pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
EllaGold35: ![]() ![]() Ciela:Thanking you well, Ciela. doctorgold:Hahahha...her best is yet to come. Bluestarry:You'll see Enasco1:I will. Thanks for joining. onose01:Thanks, Onose01. Promise to try not to disappoint. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 11:18pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
seunviju:Thanks, Seunviju. Me too haff been searching for princeadepoju o. Maybe he thought Mma has gone back to the village and had gone to see her. Maybe. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 11:43pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
EPISODE 23 'No. I not going back to the house.' Richard glanced up at the rear-view mirror. 'Why?' 'Madam asking me to leave. She seeing me again and I not knowing what she will doing to me.' Richard parted his lips to say something but didn't, couldn't. 'Richy,' Vanessa called. 'If I may suggest, I don't think it's a good idea taking her back to the house.' 'How?' 'I mean it's not such a good thing to do.' 'What is the better thing?' 'Let her sleep in a hotel near the park tonight so that she'd be on her way early the next morning.' 'What?' 'Yes. Or you can drive to the airport straightaway and get her a ticket.' 'Please, I not entering alo-plane o.' Mma folded her arms below her breasts. Vanessa looked at her and took her eyes back with vivid unconcern. 'Any of the two options is the better way out.' 'She is not going anywhere.' 'Richard?' 'Yes.' 'You have a fiance.' 'A wife almost.' 'And she just left your house.' 'And she will be back sooner than you think.' Vanessa's bafflement drove her to silence. 'What you people talking about?' Mma asked. 'Nothing of particular relevance, Mma.' Richard turned into the road that'd take them up the bridge. He glanced at Vanessa. 'Tell me where to drop you.' Vanessa's lips became tightly pursed. 'Drop me at the estate gate,' she murmured. 'Ok.' Vanessa got down at the estate gate but two days after she was back, with a different plan. 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: The Village Girl by Onemansquad(m): 3:00am On Oct 13, 2014 |
Dis vanessa is a bad gal o so she is doing evrytin in favour of herself |
Re: The Village Girl by ThaRuthlxx7: 3:12am On Oct 13, 2014 |
chai 'Mma cooling down verying sooning.... MmeMme e' bido... Venessa jide owenn gi ooo.. Maka adim dangerous |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 8:03am On Oct 13, 2014 |
Onemansquad: ![]() ![]() ThaRuthlxx7:Hhahhaha |
Re: The Village Girl by pricelesslove(f): 10:24am On Oct 13, 2014 |
I hating Vanessa velly much. well done. more ink to ur pen |
Re: The Village Girl by SexySapphire(f): 11:35am On Oct 13, 2014 |
Nicing stoly well wroting. I'm so glading dat I finding dis thread ysterday. Well done Danwrites, I thinking u've forgotten us on NL since u ending the moon maiden. Anticipating more. I following to the end. |
Re: The Village Girl by edogho(m): 12:16pm On Oct 13, 2014 |
everyone wan lay with Richard ![]() ![]() |
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