Mma is entering double trouble!

oga dan thanking u for de update but me i am still feeling hungry o!

lenmafon:
oga dan thanking u for de update but me i am still feeling hungry o!

... Me too #oliver-twisting

Wia is our danwriting ooo, shey u no go coming to updating for us nii.... Hungrying is catching us ooo

At last!!
I caught up wit u guyzz
im loving dis toryyyy ooo

where is danwrites ooo..abeg na pple dey open mouth down for here...

*sniffs the atmosphere * Huh, i de perceiving something unpleasant for here!! *runs out of thread *


I'm Kingso ™√√

I'll update today, guys.

I going but now I coming bk n I seeing vanessa n I wondering wat she planning. Nnaa eh,this story is too sweeting

I've been a silent reader from the very begining but right now i think i just have to come out of my shell to say a big WELLDONE to the writer...the story is just effortlessly amazing and at the same time simple and easy to comprehend..nice storyline, wonderful characters, believeable setting, amazing story!!!Kudos

McJANNY:
I've been a silent reader from the very begining but right now i think i just have to come out of my shell to say a big WELLDONE to the writer...the story is just effortlessly amazing and at the same time simple and easy to comprehend..nice storyline, wonderful characters, believeable setting, amazing story!!!Kudos

Thanks, McJanny.

I apologize for the delay in updating.

EPISODE 22

'Let's go back, Richard,' Vanessa said. 'The girl has obviously gone.'

'Let's check at the Akasson's too as the guy said.'

'She probably would have used any of the bigger names.'

'Oh well, we wouldn't know for sure, would we?' Richard's eyes didn't leave the road.

They passed a small crowd of noisy people and Richard slowed the car.

'Now what?'

'What's going on there?'

Vanessa rolled her eyes. 'How would I know?'

Richard stopped the car and pulled the shifter to R. The car started to reverse.

'Now what?'

'Let me check out what's happening there.'

Vanessa let out a small groan of impatience.

Richard parked and stepped down.

Vanessa reluctantly joined him.

A large fair lady held a younger lady in a long flowing dress by the neck.
Most of the people gathered round were asking what the matter was, some pleading to the woman to leave the girl or at least tell them what the problem was.

Finally the woman released the young girl. Her forehead was reddened in fury, beads of sweat steadily condensing on the surface.
'That's how you people come here to eat free food everyday because una don hear say Father Christmas dey sell food for bus park.'

'Madam, I having money before, I swearing with my life. I not knowing what--'

'You are mad. So you no check your bag before you begin order like person wey dey work for Central Bank. You think say I no know you?'

'Hey, Madam, I not knowing you o. I never coming here before, in fact--'

The woman made to slap her and she dodged. 'Thief, today na ur last. Just don't pay me my money and you'll see what I --'

'Madam, how much is the money?'

Mma screamed and threw her arms around Richard.

Richard hugged her back.

Vanessa stood at the back glaring.

'Madam, how much does she owe?'

'Two-hundred naira,' the woman threw out.

Richard brought out his wallet and gave her two clean N1000 naira notes.

The woman's features straightened out suddenly as she collected the notes. Her smile of glee hadn't fully formed when Mma reached and jerked the notes from her hand.

She gave her one of the notes. 'Giving me change fast fast.'

The woman stared at Mma, all her cavities open.

Richard was smiling.

Vanessa entered the car and slammed the car door shut.

Giving nma her change fast fast

Niwdog:
Giving nma her change fast fast

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Good!
#Team nma

Praise the Lord. I thank God Richard cameing on tym nd Mma now gettin mouth to collectin change. I kind of lyk dis Richard guy he is rare as in calm wit Mma. Sum men wud av 4gotten abt her and denied or terminated d pregnancy.
Anyway welling done Danwrites. More mb to u

Nice update. I loving that part where Mma dey demand for her change sharp sharp. Mma don dey learning Lagos life be that.

Oboy c our mma o sharp sharp tinz.i pray say mk richard puttin mma 4 skul o danwrites thumbz up more english 2 mma

Danwrites, Nice story, jx came across ur work n I felt lik goin through. Pls be fast wt ur update. Anxious 2 see wot becomes of Stella, Cynthia n Vanessa!!!

Nice work. Nice storyline. Weldone bro. U sure know ur onion. Following. Bumper to bumper.

Am so happy Richard came to her rescue?Abeg wia is princeadepoju o because it has been a while I saw him here?keep up the good work Dan

EllaGold35:
Good!
#Team nma

Ciela:
Praise the Lord. I thank God Richard cameing on tym nd Mma now gettin mouth to collectin change. I kind of lyk dis Richard guy he is rare as in calm wit Mma. Sum men wud av 4gotten abt her and denied or terminated d pregnancy.
Anyway welling done Danwrites. More mb to u

Thanking you well, Ciela.

doctorgold:
Nice update. I loving that part where Mma dey demand for her change sharp sharp. Mma don dey learning Lagos life be that.

Hahahha...her best is yet to come.

Bluestarry:
Oboy c our mma o sharp sharp tinz.i pray say mk richard puttin mma 4 skul o danwrites thumbz up more english 2 mma

You'll see

Enasco1:
Danwrites, Nice story, jx came across ur work n I felt lik goin through. Pls be fast wt ur update. Anxious 2 see wot becomes of Stella, Cynthia n Vanessa!!!

I will. Thanks for joining.

onose01:
Nice work. Nice storyline. Weldone bro. U sure know ur onion. Following. Bumper to bumper.

Thanks, Onose01. Promise to try not to disappoint.

seunviju:
Am so happy Richard came to her rescue?Abeg wia is princeadepoju o because it has been a while I saw him here?keep up the good work Dan

Thanks, Seunviju. Me too haff been searching for princeadepoju o. Maybe he thought Mma has gone back to the village and had gone to see her. Maybe.

EPISODE 23

'No. I not going back to the house.'

Richard glanced up at the rear-view mirror. 'Why?'

'Madam asking me to leave. She seeing me again and I not knowing what she will doing to me.'

Richard parted his lips to say something but didn't, couldn't.

'Richy,' Vanessa called. 'If I may suggest, I don't think it's a good idea taking her back to the house.'

'How?'

'I mean it's not such a good thing to do.'

'What is the better thing?'

'Let her sleep in a hotel near the park tonight so that she'd be on her way early the next morning.'

'What?'

'Yes. Or you can drive to the airport straightaway and get her a ticket.'

'Please, I not entering alo-plane o.' Mma folded her arms below her breasts.

Vanessa looked at her and took her eyes back with vivid unconcern. 'Any of the two options is the better way out.'

'She is not going anywhere.'

'Richard?'

'Yes.'

'You have a fiance.'

'A wife almost.'

'And she just left your house.'

'And she will be back sooner than you think.'

Vanessa's bafflement drove her to silence.

'What you people talking about?' Mma asked.

'Nothing of particular relevance, Mma.' Richard turned into the road that'd take them up the bridge.

He glanced at Vanessa. 'Tell me where to drop you.'

Vanessa's lips became tightly pursed. 'Drop me at the estate gate,' she murmured.

'Ok.'

Vanessa got down at the estate gate but two days after she was back, with a different plan.

Dis vanessa is a bad gal o
so she is doing evrytin in favour of herself

chai 'Mma cooling down verying sooning.... MmeMme e' bido...



Venessa jide owenn gi ooo.. Maka adim dangerous

Onemansquad:
Dis vanessa is a bad gal o
so she is doing evrytin in favour of herself

ThaRuthlxx7:
chai 'Mma cooling down verying sooning.... MmeMme e' bido...
Venessa jide owenn gi ooo.. Maka adim dangerous

Hhahhaha

I hating Vanessa velly much. well done. more ink to ur pen

Nicing stoly well wroting. I'm so glading dat I finding dis thread ysterday. Well done Danwrites, I thinking u've forgotten us on NL since u ending the moon maiden. Anticipating more. I following to the end.

everyone wan lay with Richard i don't trust dis vanessa with her short legs o... [BR][BR] MODIFIED [BR][BR] DAN, nice write up. ayam gbadun-ing ur tori