Oga dan writing welling done o. I cumin baq frm North and happying that fud is plentying welling. Infact i bring plentying 'irishing Potatoes' so we chipsing tins as we waiting more updating.

I relaxing because my Mma cannot dying and patapata worsing that happening Lichard putting anoda pikin in Mma belleying.

I hailing every1 daeing for house o. Please who go be-ing my Mma na? I needing my own Mma

i'm thinking, vanessa's plan is to kill mma through cynthia so she can have fine boy to herself. nice, devilish plan. Dan, come and updating o.

Iamzuna:
Oga dan writing welling done o. I cumin baq frm North and happying that fud is plentying welling. Infact i bring plentying 'irishing Potatoes' so we chipsing tins as we waiting more updating.

I relaxing because my Mma cannot dying and patapata worsing that happening Lichard putting anoda pikin in Mma belleying.

I hailing every1 daeing for house o. Please who go be-ing my Mma na? I needing my own Mma

Welcome, Iamzuna. We can now call our search party back.

edogho:
i'm thinking, vanessa's plan is to kill mma through cynthia so she can have fine boy to herself. nice, devilish plan. Dan, come and updating o.

I doing it soon.

Kingso23:
*sharpening cutlass *If anything happening to Mma!!!, person head go rolling walahi!!!

Hahhahhaha

Plaitex:
nothing must happen to mma o

Plaitex, praying o. Praying for Mma o

Please, I apologizing to everybody.

Sometimes the updates not coming as you wanting it to but is because I taking my time to follow the outline of the story to avoiding inconsistency.

OK. Pls we are waiting

WELDONE DAN.....

YOU pass Prof. Wole Soyinka...


On behalf of the entire fan-crew of "The Village Girl" Prose-Dramatic Literature series, Mr. DAN aka DanWrites, We hereby CERTIFY YOU as the FIRST PROFESSOR in Literature on Nairaland. Please accept my hearty CONGRATULATION.



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daveben007:
WELDONE DAN.....

YOU pass Prof. Wole Soyinka...


On behalf of the entire fan-crew of "The Village Girl" Prose-Dramatic Literature series, Mr. DAN aka DanWrites, We hereby CERTIFY YOU as the FIRST PROFESSOR in Literature on Nairaland. Please accept my hearty CONGRATULATION.



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Hahahahha. Award accepted. Thanks, Dave.

Hey Dan, just spottef u online! I guess dats d definition of a noon update...

Fatalveli:
Hey Dan, just spotted u online! I guess dats d definition of a noon update...

You caught me...

EPISODE 29

Mma did not get to the kitchen before the feelings started.

First it was prickly pain at the walls of her stomach, like the feel of tiny glass particles on soft skin.

She beat her belly lightly and thought probably she'd need to visit the toilet again.

But the itch-like feeling metamorphosed into something else.

All of a sudden, her lower abdomen began to burn. Red hot pain like burning coals on feet.

She let out a scream that frightened even the perpetrator of the wicked act herself.

Cynthia shuddered and ran up from the couch.

The bowl of dirty water fell from Mma's grip and water splashed all over the floor. She clutched the sides of the door to maintain balance but she was on the wet floor the same minute.

She felt a sudden wetness underneath her pant and soon her garment was soaked through with speedy gush of blood. She moaned and groaned, writhing this way and that in the pool of her own blood.

Cynthia threw her palm to her mouth. She was shivering.

She ran back to the sitting room and picked her phone. She was too hysterical and kept pressing the wrong keys.

Finally, Vanessa's voice came on.

'Oh my god, Vanessa what did you give to me?'

'You said she was just gonne bleed slightly like a minor flow or something.'

'What are you saying? She is on the floor in the kitchen turning in a large pool of blood.'

'What? What do you mean by that? Are you not supposed--'

Vanessa hung up.

Cynthia was dumbfounded.

She tried dialing her again but her number returned busy.

She dropped the phone and ran back to the kitchen.

Mma was now still on the floor, a great pool of blood around her like a halo.

Plsss ooo. DAN Nothing must happen to Mma oooooooooo.

Some women are great devils
luk @ wat cynthia did to a lady dat is also pregnant like her
mehn dis mma has sufered abg danwrites ntn shuld hapn 2 her o

Well i think MMA should die.

And i heard also that village spirits are very wicked too.

Vanessa and Cynthia are in for it.

DAN... I VOTE FOR A LITTLE TRAGEDY!!!!


GREAT WORK

Keeping up with the good working Dan

Chai! Seeing it again,if I calling it suspension Danwrites will shouting my name. Oya Danwrites telling me wat 2 calling ds one now.

monimine:
Plsss ooo. DAN Nothing must happen to Mma oooooooooo.

I praying o.

Onemansquad:
Some women are great devils
luk @ wat cynthia did to a lady dat is also pregnant like her
mehn dis mma has sufered abg danwrites ntn shuld hapn 2 her o

Things like this happen.

daveben007:
Well i think MMA should die.
And i heard also that village spirits are very wicked too.
Vanessa and Cynthia are in for it.
DAN... I VOTE FOR A LITTLE TRAGEDY!!!!
GREAT WORK

Alive or dead, Mma will continue to thrill.

seunviju:
Keeping up with the good working Dan

Thankd, Seunviju.

Essyydiamond:
Chai! Seeing it again,if I calling it suspension Danwrites will shouting my name. Oya Danwrites telling me wat 2 calling ds one now.

Heart attack

Cynthia sef no get mind fr evil tins lyk dat

oga dan thanking u so so so muchin for yura story. but pls try not to keeping us in this suspence for long o! biko. mma it is welling with u o even if u loose de belle oga rich may ending up to come and marrying u. *cynthia there is God o! that innocent blood u re sharing from mma' s belle, will answer. dearis God o! *

dan if anything happens to mma nnd herv baby, we go fight ooo .... finally back after all dis while

Nma my ruv must not die oo.

Cynthia is too dumb for my liking. Mma must survive dis with her womb intact cos I know Dan may decide to fry her womb. I want mooorrreeee (screaming in my Oliver Twist voice).

Kingphilip I see u.

SexySapphire:
Cynthia is too dumb for my liking. Mma must survive dis with her womb intact cos I know Dan may decide to fry her womb. I want mooorrreeee (screaming in my Oliver Twist voice).

Kingphilip I see u.

Hmmmmm sexysapphire u de reaching this side too?

come sit-down closing to me

kingphilip:

Hmmmmm sexysapphire u de reaching this side too?

come sit-down closing to me

I am reaching here vewly vewly well and I've been having funed to the fullesting. Oy shifting well, dis small space can't contain me.

PROF. DAN. No more update tonite?

Dan, this is a very well written and hilarious write up. Thanx for sharing and weldone.
In other news, this place is very wronging place to stop ooo. I begging u bros, continuing.

U wan make i get hrt attack bah

Bros Danwriting,well done o.Mma should not loosing her baby o. Vanessa is a showing too much wicked and Cynthia is a mumu. pls updating sharp sharp.