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Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 12:44pm On Oct 25, 2014 |
hayah dis girl don suffer o |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by yettielicious(f): 9:34am On Oct 26, 2014 |
Thanks for d update, I really like ur write up |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Onemansquad(m): 11:27am On Oct 26, 2014 |
i dnt blame sonia @all eya ah fil 4 her o |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 4:26pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
yettielicious:thank u |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 4:36pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
EPISODE 26 Angela took some steps backwards with her eyes focused on the red liquid dripping from Sonia. She knew what it signified.She needed no one to tell her that what it meant.With a quick reflex,she turned and saw David standing some distance away.She stared at her,hatred and anger filled her eyes with questions flashing through her mind.How dare him? How dare him do this to her? How could he impregnate their maid? Could it be because she has not been able to conceive and give him a child? Tears gathered in those eyes of hers,red with anger but she fought hard to send the tears back to where they came from. "Are you people going to leave her here? Do you people want her to die?"Sonia's mother spoke out.Ebere was right.Sonia was pregnant. Angela was sure she didn't quite hear her right but she heard her say something.Her head was spinning.She was beginning to feel dizzy.It was then it dawned on her that she actually brought another wife for her husband in the name of a maid.She felt everything turning around and before she knew it,she slumped to the ground. David rushed over to her at once while Sonia's mother was supporting her daughter to her feet.They must get to the nearest hospital as soon as possible. David never knew she was pregnant.She never told him about it. A car pulled into the compound.Mr.and mrs.Uwa;Angela's parents got down impatiently,seeing their daughter on the ground and a woman they never wished they would see again;Sonia's mother;Ngozi's half sister who was always at logger heads with her(Angela's mother) "How can father give you most of all he has and left me with with little? Am i not his daughter too? You poisoned his mind against me.We shall see"Those were the words Mrs.Ngozi uwa got from her when their father's will was read out,and ever since then,different kinds of problems unleashed themselves on herself and her husband until they seemed to have ceased.Armed robbers visited them regularly,confiscating almost everything they had.Mrs Ngozi uwa was nearly forced to concluded that her half sister,Adaora,whose husband died in a motor accident with their two kids,was behind the disappearance of her child. Could she be the mother of Sonia? How come? Confusion and curiousity manifested themselves on her,but who was she going to ask those questions. Her half sister had gave a wicked,prolonged hiss on seeing her.It was her husband who signaled to her not to make any move or say anything to her. "What is happening here"Mr uwa asked,rushing to feel her daughter. "David what happened?"Mrs uwa asked with her heart beating fast.She feared something bad might have happened to her daughter. "She fainted!"David reported. "Isnt that Sonia your maid? What happened to her?"She asked againg pointing at them,moving out of the compound.Adaora was seriously making sure they left quicky. "What is wrong with you young man? Cant you talk again? We can take them both to the hospital"Mr uwa rushed and reversed his car.David played down his question.They got Angela into the car and in no time,they were out of the compound.Adaora and Sonia were nowhere to be found. **3.15PM THAT SAME DAY* Angela woke up to see her mother by her side.She glanced around.She was at home. The doctor said she only fainted and nothing more. Mr.uwa had tried hearing from David what actually happened but he never answered his questions the way he wanted him to,so he waited on Angela. Angela's mother too,was not left out it thoughts.What could have happened to her precious daughter? "Are you feeling better now?"She asked,watching her daughter closely.She looked weak. Angela nodded and said she wanted to ease herself "Where is she?"David who came in few minutes later asked. "She went to ease herself"Mrs uwa replied,eyeing him suspiciously.David left. "I cant find her,"David reported,emerging from the door that led to the backyard,"I have searched every nook and cranny of this house" "Is she up already?"Mr.uwa asked,as he entered the room.Seeing the troubled look on the two faces there,the look on his face changed too. "Angela is missing"David announced,reached for his car keys and hurried out,leaving his inlaws there like undecided ghosts |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 7:29pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
Abeg my dear people,i go like am if una help me point out errors and tell me where i need to improve. Happy sunday to you all.Ivanovic and Van persie spoilt my day 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by FunkySilver(f): 8:15pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
Calismart: |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by FunkySilver(f): 8:15pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
Calismart:up chelsea!!! |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:28pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
FunkySilver:blues for life but i'm nt happy with the draw |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by FunkySilver(f): 2:19pm On Oct 27, 2014 |
Calismart:Same here ooo |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Onemansquad(m): 9:43pm On Oct 27, 2014 |
FunkySilver:ahah ma'am so u ar nt hapi dt u guys drew d match #dy should av flogd chelsea mayb its beta *lolz* |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Fatalveli(m): 9:32am On Oct 28, 2014 |
Calismart:look @ u, na v.persie fumble na, man utd suppose beat una wella |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 11:29am On Oct 29, 2014 |
Present sir. I like dis update More grace 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Iffffffy(f): 4:15pm On Oct 29, 2014 |
Nice one you got there, update o 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:46pm On Oct 29, 2014 |
There are bound to be mistakes at this stage,your corrections would go a long way in helping me |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:47pm On Oct 29, 2014 |
Fatalveli:wel cha,man utd get luck say Costa no play that game |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:51pm On Oct 29, 2014 |
EPISODE 27 David zoomed out of the compound with many thoughts racing through his mind.Where could she have gone to? Ebere's place was where he first drove to but she wasn't there.He called Ebere on the phone and asked her if she has seen her friend.Ebere told him she never saw her that day. The thought of her running away to kill herself scared him.He knew the whole incident got her shattered,downcasted and heart broken.The only thing on his mind at that time was to find her safe,then whatever happens between them would be another bridge to be crossed.She had left her phone at home. Somewhere along the road,David saw a crowd of people.Some were peeping,others were stretching their neck while others only shook their head. He wound down the glass of his car to inquire from one of the on-lookers what was going on. "Na one useless driver o wey jam one woman leave am there run"The bald headed skinny man answered,revealing his brown teeth. Without waiting for him to conclude,David hastily alighted from his car to see the victim.Could it be Angela? His beartbeat increased. He pushed through the crowd and behold,there she was.A young lady in a purple dress with her long hair scattered on the ground.He could see traces of blood.His heartbeat dropped as he sighed,wiping the sweat off his face.Angela was wearing a red top with a skirt made of jean material but he felt sorry for the lady lying on the ground there.Who knew if she was still breathing? That's the problem with people,David thought,instead of people to take her to the hospital on time,they left her there,staring at her as if she was something from another planet.He ran back to his car and saw four missed calls from his father-in-inlaw who also went his way in search of her daughter. He dialled back,shook his head,aborted the call and read the message he sent:"HAVE YOU SEEN HER? WHERE ARE YOU?" He drove away,his mind focused on finding his wife. Ebere had paid some boys who raided Angela's shop but didn't get her.However,David's call informing her of Angela's disappearance got her worried because she was bent on sending the boys to her home,to kidnap her.She went over to see things for herself only to Angela's mother pacing all around the house pensively. The baba said she must be brought to his shrine that very day. She hung around with her boys near Angela's locality,searching everywhere with her eyes for her prey. It was when she finally gave up hope of ever finding her that she caught the sight of something.They were from Angela's area. Ebere focused her attention on the person she saw.She was trying to hang herself with a large rope.It was no other person than the Angela everybody has been looking for. Angela opened her eyes when the blindfold was removed from them.She felt some pain and closed them again. 'What do this people want from me?',She kept asking herself,they should have let me alone to have peace.To rest from all these pains' She remebered how she had gone over to Sonia's place with the gun in her hand.If only she had met her there or even her mother but alas,the door was locked with a heavy padlock. She rubbed her hand over her eyes burning with pains. She glanced around the place.The angry looking faces of the gods,combined with the furious men that kidnapped her made her nervous. "What do you people want from me!?"She asked with shaky lips. "Your time here on earth is up,woman"the old 'dibia' who was just emerging answered her. "You lie.you are not my creator and so,you cant decide when my time is up"Angela,who convinced herself that her time was up when she wanted to take her life heard herself say.Her words earned her a heavy slap from one of those men,leaving traces of his fingers on her face. Ebere showed up,looking at Angela straight in the eyes. "Times comes in this life when we pay for the crimes and sins we commited.Angela,this is the time to pay yours"Ebere said with a mean face. "What are you talking about Ebere?"The confused Angela asked,not believing what was happening. "You thought i wasnt aware all this while? So you are happy that i have remained unmarried while you are enjoying life to the fullest with your husband,right? You drove away Mike,the only man that wanted to marry me by telling him how i do go about sleeping with men.Isn't it?"Ebere stressed out. "Ebere,What do you take me for? Goodness me.So you believed i did that to you? Why should i? Everyone knows the type of life you are living.Its never a secret"Angela felt betrayed. "I'm sorry.Sonia is already pregnant for your husband.I masterminded everything.She will take over your home because you are not getting away alive"Ebere said and turned her back on her,leaving. "Ebere,Ebere,Ebe...why,i am innocent.why are you doing this to me? Save me oh God,my hands are clean"Angela cried,her heart almost crashing to pieces. "Take her to the execution ground"The old dibia commanded. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 10:45pm On Oct 29, 2014 |
Chai! Calismart,if you know how much i've been waiting for ur update eh. I wish i can slap out the juju in David's head. U doing a nice work. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 8:59am On Oct 30, 2014 |
Jennimma:Sometimes wish comes true... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Is david still under d spell? Oga Calismart Angella needs a miracle to survive there. Thank God her mother is a prayer warrior Welldone for d updates sir 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:06pm On Oct 30, 2014 |
Jennimma:thank you.I'll update tomorrow morning 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:10pm On Oct 30, 2014 |
zyzxx:Oga mi,David is not totally free from the spell yet,the next episode will explain better. Na my oga u be.power! 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 10:13pm On Oct 30, 2014 |
I apologise for not updating tonight. Make una forgive me o Abeg I'll update tomorrow morning #Tomorrow's_Breakfast 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 10:56pm On Oct 30, 2014 |
Calismart:no problem bro. Na u get am! BTW, Vote #TeamJennimma o 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 7:53am On Oct 31, 2014 |
Calismart:u be Oga sir... We are patiently waiting for updates |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 8:26am On Oct 31, 2014 |
EPISODE 28 "David,you have been reserved and taciturn.You have refused answering my questions and i cant condone it any longer.What happened to my daughter.What led to her fainting"Mr.Uwa asked,the pain and anger of his daughter still missing,showing all over him.It was already getting dark.They just returned from the police station after making a report. "Did she fight with the maid? Were they fighting?"His wife added. David shifted on the chair where he sat and stole glances at them.He felt bad within himself.He didn't know how to tell his inlaws what happened because all these while he had felt like someone under someone else's control. He concluded it would be better if Angela told them by herself. "She just fainted.Nothing more.What else do you want me to say"David replied calmly,pacing up and down. "Who's that woman we saw earlier? Is she the mother of the maid? And why were they leaving with the bag which i believe is hers?"Mrs uwa asked. "She is her mother.oh,what do i do now? Where else do i go in search of Angela"David lamented,carefully avoiding more questions. "Pray nothing happens to my daughter because if anything happens to her,you will regret it"Mr uwa assured him while signaling to his wife to follow him as they have stayed too long. "Wherever my daughter is,the living God that i serve will protect her.David,You must show me where they live"Mrs uwa who stood on her feet,said,referring to David. "Is it necessary? i went there severally,she wasnt there.Nobody was at home"David replied her. ***Mr.Uwa's house*** "I have been thinking"Angela's mother whispered to her husband,reaching for her bible. "What about?"Her husband asked. "Do you remember that Adaora's two children died with her husband in that ghastly motor accident that made headlines on several news forum?"She asked. "I do remember that" "I was suprised when they said she's the mother of that girl Angela brought in"She said vaguely. "She might have adopted her" "My mind doesnt seem to think that way.We have to get going,the pastor and prayer warriors would soon be arriving at the church for the vigil.Trust God,Angela will return safe and sound.Our God answers prayers"She assured him and glanced at the wall clock. 9:15PM "Everything is happening so fast but i believe my daughter is safe.God will protect her"He agreed. The air was filled with the voices of prayer;a miraculous medium of miracles.Prayer,which changes things beyond human comprehension. The prophetic voice of the pastor was heard saying that Angela is in great danger but needs divine grace.At a point,he called out her husband's name,telling everyone to pray upon him for liberation from any power acting upon him. **** David woke up the next morning feeling so fresh,despite being up in thoughts all night till sleep stole him at the early hours of the morning.He rubbed his hands against his eyes,surely,something he couldnt explain died in him last night. Tears trickled down from his eyes when he remembered what he has been doing.He had been busy going against the promise he made to Angela on the alter.He had been commiting adultery with their housemaid. "What happened to you David? What went wrong",he wept,"Forgive me Angela,i have wronged you,please come back to me.If you leave me forever,i will never forgive myself.Oh God please bring Angela back to me..." **** Angela's eyes were swollen.She cried all night,while gigantic mosquitoes feasted on her delicate skin.She was kept in an uncompleted building with two young men watching over her.She was too weak to cry again, they didnt give her anything to eat.She wished someone she knew comes to her aid just as it happened in the dream.She blamed herself for not telling her mom about it;perhaps,they might have prayed it away. She just laid there,tied hands and legs pretending to be asleep. She soon felt a touch and opened her eyes,it was Ebere. "How do you feel,dear friend?"she asked with a wicked smile. "My God is alife and He will surely vindicate me because i am innocent of your accusations.I have finally come to believe that the devil you know is better than the angel you dont.Ebere you are a betrayer"Angela weakly said and spat on her with enough strength. "Have your fun,you may never be able to do that again for life",Ebere said using her handkerchief on her face,"i advice you start saying your last prayers because before dawn tomorrow,you would be no more.i'm sorry.And corncerning sonia,dont worry,she is not taking over your home.she is going to jail for murder" Sonia and her mother were at her aunt's place whom they pleaded to let them stay with her for a little time watching the mid day news when Sonia saw it.Her photo was shown on the television with the caption,"wanted" According to the new,she ran away from home with her mother when she discovered that someone saw her kill somebody. Hot tears rolled down from her eyes as she fell into her mother's arm,sobbing sorrowfully in fear. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by pricelesslove(f): 8:32am On Oct 31, 2014 |
Ehya I pity Sonia. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 11:02am On Oct 31, 2014 |
Hmmm Calismart I bet u will be a great pastor oo Welldone sir... But ebere as achieve her aim why did she just take delight in destroy Sonai's life, she felt betrayed and understand Hw Sonai feel also because she as once been in her shoe, why destroying her life to dat extent. Ebere is wicked and her doom is near. More wisdom sir |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 11:06am On Oct 31, 2014 |
pricelesslove:actually I don't pity her, just because she as not do d needful, she needs to go back and ask for forgiveness, set things right If not she may end up in jail and her conscience will not justify her because she is still a betrayer #my opinion ooo |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:15am On Nov 01, 2014 |
zyzxx:Thanks bro.Great pastor ![]() 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:17am On Nov 01, 2014 |
Jennimma:Ok 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:57am On Nov 01, 2014 |
Silence isn’t ignoring. sometimes it shouts and atimes it whispers. If you listen, you’ll hear the voice of my silence saying how are you? &api new month! Open your Mind to Possibilities. You’ll be amazed by what you are capable of achieving. We are powerful beyond measure. May the Almighty God balance the equation for us this new Month. AMEN 2 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Missmossy(f): 8:43pm On Nov 01, 2014 |
Nice story Calismart,well done. 1 Like 1 Share |
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