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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:54pm On Nov 15, 2014
--continuation--
Rachel walked out of the hospital building into the parking lot with Doctor Rapheal holding her hand.
"When next am I seeing you?" Rapheal asked.
"Next month." she replied.
"You must have been due for delivery then?" he asked.
"Yes, so you'll see me everyday then." She replied.
He frowned his face and stopped her just beside her car.
"I'll be on leave by then. Doctor Andrew would have returned by then. He'll handle your delivery." He explained.
"Then you won't see then." She said conclusively.
He thought for a few seconds before he spoke.
"I have a plan." He announced.
"Tell me about it."
"You said you are currently staying with your father-in-law right?"
Rachel nodded affirmatively.
"Persuade your husband, so you both can return to your house. While he is at work, I'll visit you at home during my two hours break." He said.
Rachel wanted to say no, but the smile on his face reminded her of how she craved for those smiles.
"Thats a very good idea. I'll talk to him and give you his reply in the evening."
He opened his arms for a hug but Rachel turned to unlock her car doors.
"Won't you give me a hug?" He asked.
"I am married." She replied.
"You were single when we were kissing in there right?" He asked mischievously.
Rachel's face turned red with embarrassment. She hissed angrily and hopped behing the wheel.
"Give me a call once your husband consents to your return back home." He said smiling as she angrily backed out the car and in one swift turn of the steering wheel, the car was facing the main gate. Not even in her wildest dream, she never thought she could drive like this. As a matter of fact, she believed the type of stunt she pulled was only possible in movies.
"Mad driver." He thought as he walked back into the hospital.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
By the time Victoria drove out of Dolphin estate, she realised the day has been far spent and she still need to see Don before heading home. She removed her phone and dialled his number.
"Are you home?" She asked.
"Ok, I'll be there in fifteen minutes." She replied and hung up.
He eyes roamed about the street and something caught her attention. A group of soldiers guarding the front of a house. Only God knows who owns the house, he must be a household name. She thought as she waited at the estate axis for the traffic light to turn green, so she could move.
Ten minutes later, she pulled up in front of Don's residence. She alighted from the car and walked to the gate. She knocked three times and the gate was opened.
"Avicky vicky baby." A mean looking guy, Deoye's friend said.
Victoria maintained a straight face as she ignored him and walked towards the main house.
"No begin think sey you better pass me o. All I know is that you can't pull out of the group now." The guy said to her retreating figure.
"Your headache." She said without looking back.
"Wide Kitty-Cat." He smirked.
She ignored him and walked in, a light complexioned dude opened the door for her.
"Where is Don?" She asked rudely, thinking he was one of the newest members. The son of a richman who needed protection.
"Take a sit." Deoye said politely.
She scritinized him for a second before she settled down on a couch.
"Don ask me to keep your company. He is busy in there." Deoye replied.
"Who are you?" she asked.
"I am Deoye." He replied.
"I didn't ask for your name."
"I am Don's cousin." He replied darting into the kitchen to get her a drink.
He returned a few seconds later with a bottle of soda and a cup of ice.
"How do you know my favourite? Or is that all you've got in your fridge?" She asked.
"It was written all over you. I love soda. Pretty ladies are predictable." Deoye replied.
She didn't smile neither did she frown. She maintained that same old look.
Five minutes later, Don walked into the silent living room looking refreshed after a very hardwork in his room. Even though Deoye tried to engage Vicky in a conversation, she just showed him how uninterested she was by replying in monosyllables like 'no' 'yes,' he gave up when he realised that he was getting nothing out of her. Maybe he was boring. He concluded.
"Lets go." Don said to Vicky who stood up at once and walked out of the living room.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Shynaboy1: 4:14pm On Nov 15, 2014
Keep it coming bro. D9ty7 all d way
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 4:48pm On Nov 15, 2014
D9ty7........you have my full permission to kill Rachel immediately she gives birth................chaii.....and to think dat I love dat girl......mtcheeeeeeeeew adulterous married woman
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:57pm On Nov 15, 2014
To everyone blaming Rachel and want me to kill her:

From my own perspective as a reader, I don't blame Rachel. Like I used to tell my friends, "never let your emotions becloud your thinking/brain."
Its quite clear that, Rachel allowed her emotion to make decisions for her. Which was her only fault.
You want me to kill her right? I will but how do I do it?
Maybe she'll just sleep and not wake up.
Once again I don't blame Rachel, but my wife dares not try that with me.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 5:02pm On Nov 15, 2014
"Ur wife dears not try it" and u still don't blame rachel abi Sweetie me,its like u are high on kunu abi
D9ty7:
To everyone blaming Rachel and want me to kill her:

From my own perspective as a reader, I don't blame Rachel. Like I used to tell my friends, "never let your emotions becloud your thinking/brain."
Its quite clear that, Rachel allowed her emotion to make decisions for her. Which was her only fault.
You want me to kill her right? I will but how do I do it?
Maybe she'll just sleep and not wake up.
Once again I don't blame Rachel, but my wife dares not try that with me.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:11pm On Nov 15, 2014
Am high on dry ewedu leaf.
adewealth027:
"Ur wife dears not try it" and u still don't blame rachel abi Sweetie me,its like u are high on kunu abi
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 5:17pm On Nov 15, 2014
If u say so.................but sincerely wat Rachel is doing is bad,I won't blame her for one single reason.........her husband doesn't have her time,women need attention more than anything else and since she isn't getting it,she had to look elsewhere.............but still doesn't give her reasons to do dat rubbish.............
D9ty7:
Am high on dry ewedu leaf.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:28pm On Nov 15, 2014
Now you are talking.
adewealth027:
If u say so.................but sincerely wat Rachel is doing is bad,I won't blame her for one single reason.........her husband doesn't have her time,women need attention more than anything else and since she isn't getting it,she had to look elsewhere.............but still doesn't give her reasons to do dat rubbish.............

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:41pm On Nov 15, 2014
Racheal... I hv fall out of love 4 u..... Haaha.... Y are u falling my hand nau Dr Raphael, I will blow u ooo. Clement?? U sef, y cnt u giv ur wife love nd attention? U no see say she get belle ni? D9ty7, thanks 4 d update.... More vaseline 2 ur elbow.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 5:56pm On Nov 15, 2014
Na wah ooh, oga sir this your story just they start now, thinqz still dey when we never hear... Hmm am just watchinq and followinq until the end.
Bluestarry how you na?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bdabuwa(m): 6:26pm On Nov 15, 2014
I don't blame rachael either !!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:06pm On Nov 15, 2014
stuff46:
Na wah ooh, oga sir this your story just they start now, thinqz still dey when we never hear... Hmm am just watchinq and followinq until the end.
Bluestarry how you na?
ma main guy i d o aw body and was ur day?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 7:07pm On Nov 15, 2014
D9ty7, Your updates are short oh.. Nice story sha.. Lemme comment before you send me to hell.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:08pm On Nov 15, 2014
Thank you jare my brother.
bdabuwa:
I don't blame rachael either !!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:17pm On Nov 15, 2014
D9ty7:
To everyone blaming Rachel and want me to kill her:

From my own perspective as a reader, I don't blame Rachel. Like I used to tell my friends, "never let your emotions becloud your thinking/brain."
Its quite clear that, Rachel allowed her emotion to make decisions for her. Which was her only fault.
You want me to kill her right? I will but how do I do it?
Maybe she'll just sleep and not wake up.
Once again I don't blame Rachel, but my wife dares not try that with me.
plz dnt kill her atleast let her live and face the consequences of her mistakes. I would really love to see her suffer. Dnt kill her plz
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by RhAngel: 7:20pm On Nov 15, 2014
LogoDWhiz:


Chai!
Na so u like me reach.

RhAngel, can u help me out?
wit wt my bro?
If its summary jst ask me abt any character u dnt undstnd.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by onosj(f): 7:25pm On Nov 15, 2014
Rachel fall hand big time, like Sey she marry soldier man na only God no wetin she 4 dey do then!!!... D9ty7 thank 4 d wonderful work.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 7:27pm On Nov 15, 2014
RhAngel:

wit wt my bro?
If its summary jst ask me abt any character u dnt undstnd.

with the summary sis.

The summary of the story.
What has being done since.

Kingphillip, if you have being following this story, can u help?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:32pm On Nov 15, 2014
I can help, but first let me drop tonight's update. How abt dat?
LogoDWhiz:


with the summary sis.

The summary of the story.
What has being done since.

Kingphillip, if you have being following this story, can u help?

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 7:58pm On Nov 15, 2014
D9ty7:
I can help, but first let me drop tonight's update. How abt dat?

Thanks a lot bro.
I really appreciate this.

Btw, which course are u studying?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 8:00pm On Nov 15, 2014
I can see walewunmi viewing the thread. Nice to have u hear bro.

What about wunmiwale?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 8:24pm On Nov 15, 2014
MhizEnkay:
D9ty7, Your updates are short oh.. Nice story sha.. Lemme comment before you send me to hell.
u noticed it too?

Rachel behavior isn't welcomed by me at all.. so Raphael will b paying ha a visit everyday at ur home? I'm pretty sure they'll b caught

d9ty7 ride on boss u de do beta thing here
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 8:29pm On Nov 15, 2014
MhizEnkay:
D9ty7, Your updates are short oh.. Nice story sha.. Lemme comment before you send me to hell.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 8:47pm On Nov 15, 2014
Rachel fumbled high time, well it just teaches me that women are not to be trusted. How on earth would you love someone else than your husband and even allow him to kiss you. I will not hesitate to divorce that kind of wife I swear
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:12pm On Nov 15, 2014
D9ty7 abeg pass me my gun i wnt jst shoot rachael 4 leg
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ogunholla(m): 9:15pm On Nov 15, 2014
Fatalveli:
Rachel fumbled high time, well it just teaches me that women are not to be trusted. How on earth would you love someone else than your husband and even allow him to kiss you. I will not hesitate to divorce that kind of wife I swear
even kill her or make her see hell
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:22pm On Nov 15, 2014
--continuation--
Clement was deep in thought in his office, he meeting with the state commissioner of police didn't go well. He never envisaged something like this in his career. This was exactly what he would describe as a displacement. A knock sounded on his door.
"Come on in." He said.
The door was pushed open and Sergeant Mike walked in.
"Mike, how do you do?" He asked smiling.
Mike stood still and saluted his boss. With a wave of hand, Clement eased him. "Take a sit." He said.
Mike drew a chair from under the desk and sat down facing his boss.
"How are you feeling now?" He asked.
"Am much better, at least, I can use my hand and I reported to work this morning." Clement replied.
"I should have come to see you in the hospital but the assignment on my table is too enormous that I spend most of my nights here and on campus."
"That's nothing to worry about. I was with Dolapo and her friends today, they claimed a group of policemen were assigned to them."
"Yes sir, since the job has been divided. Its impossible for me to keep tabs on Deoye and his gang and at the same time, provide security for the girls. So I had to call on Robert." Mike explained.
"That's brilliant. Who is this Robert?" Clement asked.
"He was at the Area F-command before he was transferred to the Apapa police station. He is friend, so he volunteered to help. And with the right paper work, he was released."
Clement smiled at his brilliance and the way he does his thing. Mike is fast becoming a better policeman.
"What have you found concerning Deoye and his gang?" Clement asked.
"We narrowly missed him yesterday. He was lodged into a hotel....." Mike explained how they striked a deal with the receptionist and how they lost him, including the ordeal the poor receptionist went through.
"You were wrong from the start, you shoud have taken all protocols into observation. You spoke with the receptionist which was the first thing to do, did you see the manager? What about the security men who could get him for you?"
"Am sorry sir, since everyone wanted it that way I had no choice." Mike replied.
"Who are the everyone?"
"Sergeant Habeeb."
"Who is in charge of the case?" Clement asked angrily.
"He is."
"Who is the superior?"
Mike couldn't answer the last question.
"If you tell him to do something, he will comply because you are the superior officer."
Mike nodded his head.
"I know how to get Deoye, am ready to step into the case." Clement announced.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Activities inside the Khal corp has been brought to a halt in the last five minutes, no one was moving. All security men guarding the entrances and the exits have all gone into a closed door meeting with the CEO of the corporation, Abdul Maleek.
One hour later, the meeting ended and everyone, numbering up to a hundred and fifty trooped out of the great hall.
"Kelv, we need to talk." Maleek who was busy introducing a new man to the top officials.
Meleek took Kelvin out of the hall into his chamber in the underground.
"You didn't show up after your attack on the vice president. Why? Don't tell me you are planning to chicken out at this stage." The Sudanese terrorist asked.
"I recieved a letter from the corp." Kelvin replied.
Maleek frowned from under his mask.
"A letter? We don't send letter to top members, why would you recieve a letter?"
"I was asked to find my replacement." Kelvin replied.
Maleek dropped his right hand on his shoulder.
"You know what? I'll get whoever is behind this. Let your mind be at rest, you are an important asset to the corporation. Even if you die, we'll prefer to have your dead body with us. It inspire us and keeps us going." Maleek expplained and walked out of the chamber.
Kelvin followed him after a few seconds with the question "who would want me out of the corporation? Something is wrong somewhere."
He knew he had to go home, but he wanted to know who the new man was, he seemed to be very rich or used to be rich, he had muscles at the right places. He was flanked at the back, right and left by mean looking bodyguards.
Maybe he owns the corporation afterall and invited Maleek to run it facelessly.
As he walked towards the exit door he heard something that throbed his mind.
"They are two policemen, Sylvester who invaded my residence and Clement his boss. We need to shut them up, but not by killing them" The new man said.
Every top officials(members who don't execute attacks) on seat all gave the new man a explain yourself look.
"We'll attack someone whose death will demoralize them" The new man said.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:23pm On Nov 15, 2014
That is if you ever get to find out.
Fatalveli:
Rachel fumbled high time, well it just teaches me that women are not to be trusted. How on earth would you love someone else than your husband and even allow him to kiss you. I will not hesitate to divorce that kind of wife I swear
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:33pm On Nov 15, 2014
Mmmmn....D9ty7... Who u wan kill nw? Hope sey no be Rachael... I dnt even think dey knw Clement is Kelvin brother abi? As I dey look dis story so... E be lyk say Gobe go shele btw Kelvin nd his boss o.

Techno4life... Ur rival has been missing 4 sum days nw.... Hope it's nt wat I'm thinking?? Go nd luk 4 him b4 I send D9ty7 come ur house ooo...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:46pm On Nov 15, 2014
Make una kip ur comments coming na.
Btw, I never see Tecno4life today
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 10:01pm On Nov 15, 2014
I will always :-x
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:01pm On Nov 15, 2014
Bluestarry:
ma main guy i d o aw body and was ur day?
oboi we just dey manage am, as body dey sweet our oga dey drop updatez for us

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