In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 5:16pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
This will be mah first time putting some scrappy thought of mine into paper.. .......
Maybe I was inspired to do so So Babe2sure, valued and April07 .. ....
This are just mah idle thoughts in some poetic form. ...
But am sure I will relate mah personal self in due course of this experience |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 5:44pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Just this morningSomeone woke me up this morning Someone woke me up from my beautiful dream Someone shut the door of the dreamland Someone forced me to the real world Someone broke the line of communication btw the real world and idea world Someone woke me up from sleep A sleep that was speaking great things to mah subconscious mind A sleep that's not like anyother sleep A sleep that have experienced it for a long time. ........
Why was I woken up Why did he break the line of communication Why did this person punish my mind Why did this person abort my dream So many why?? But no answers
I can't understand the reasons why it was aborted I don't know.. ..
although If it where to be a sound from the mosque. I would know it's time for the early prayers. If it was from the church. I would known its a wake up call for the days journey. If its from a baby.. .... I would understand that he/she needed some attention If it was a mosquito..... I would have known that I left myself to become their prey If it was from a sound of a blaring horn... .. I would have understand that I have overshot my sleeping time If it was a ray of light..... I would know that it morning time "sleepy head" If it was cockroach and rats.. ... I would know it's time to fumigate the house
But alas It's a generator A generator having the sound of a caterpillar A generator woke me up at 4am A generator truncated mah dream A generator spoiled the fun
This is so because of the mess in our energy subsector This is so because we didn't give priority to those sectors that need it This is so because the leaders failed in their responsibilities They failed the votes and voters that brought them to power #thoughts 8 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by JigsawKillah(m): 6:04pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Hmmmm |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 6:10pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
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Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 7:13pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
dre11:
Just this morning
Someone woke me up this morning Someone woke me up from my beautiful dream Someone shut the door of the dreamland Someone forced me to the real world Someone broke the line of communication btw the real world and idea world Someone woke me up from sleep A sleep that was speaking great things to mah subconscious mind A sleep that's not like anyother sleep A sleep that have experienced it for a long time. ........
Why was I woken up Why did he break the line of communication Why did this person punish my mind Why did this person abort my dream So many why?? But no answers
I can't understand the reasons why it was aborted I don't know.. ..
although If it where to be a sound from the mosque. I would know it's time for the early prayers. If it was from the church. I would known its a wake up call for the days journey. If its from a baby.. .... I would understand that he/she needed some attention If it was a mosquito..... I would have known that I left myself to become their prey If it was from a sound of a blaring horn... .. I would have understand that I have overshot my sleeping time If it was a ray of light..... I would know that it morning time "sleepy head" If it was cockroach and rats.. ... I would know it's time to fumigate the house
But alas It's a generator A generator having the sound of a caterpillar A generator woke me up at 4am A generator truncated mah dream A generator spoiled the fun
This is so because of the mess in our energy subsector This is so because we didn't give priority to those sectors that need it This is so because the leaders failed in their responsibilities They failed the votes and voters that brought them to power
#thoughts This is awesome my dear... Can't wait to see the second one |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Babe2sure(f): 11:02pm On Nov 15, 2014 |
Nice one! Very nice one! The sky is your starting point. |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 7:47am On Nov 16, 2014 |
Valued:
This is awesome my dear... Can't wait to see the second one Babe2sure:
Nice one! Very nice one! The sky is your starting point. Thanks ladies Thanks for letting me think outside the box.. .. |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 8:56am On Nov 16, 2014 |
Something dropped into my spirit Something did prick my mind Something I just can't phantom Something I just don't understand Something I can't explain Something that am still trying to come in terms with Still trying to join all the linked chains The pieced words The opened phrase And the doted lines
But with all I still don't understand Had trouble trying to make meaning of those illusive thoughts Kept fighting with my spirit because I want to understand My brain nearly went blank As I was poundary on this issue
Then I fell into a trance A trance I couldn't explain how I came about it A trance I think I could find answers A trance I thought will be the magic place where answers could be gotten A trance that I thought would speak better A trance I want it to juxtapose all the thoughts, chains, sentence, phrase and dots A trance I did hoped it will lift the burden
This I did stay for a long time But still didn't get the meaning to those inquiries still can't find answers still can't find a ray of hope Still can't .....................
Because all I see are blur images All I hear are murmur words With patience and straining of ears I heard a still voice saying Think outside the box Think outside the realm of a realist Give a deeper thought on those thing that doesn't matter Because the answer u seek for is not here **never discount little things because that may be where ur answer lies 5 Likes 1 Share |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 10:43am On Nov 16, 2014 |
dre11:
Thanks ladies Thanks for letting me think outside the box.. .. You don't have to thank us |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 10:49am On Nov 16, 2014 |
Dre I like the second one more than the first o, shows you're getting better...ride on! |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 4:59pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
Valued: Dre I like the second one more than the first o, shows you're getting better...ride on! Valued:
You don't have to thank us |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 5:03pm On Nov 16, 2014 |
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Re: In My Subconscious Mind by April07: 10:32am On Nov 17, 2014 |
Awwwww.... Lyrical Dre Weldon honey.. This is great |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Babe2sure(f): 2:28pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
The second one practically blow me away! Very impressive! It's a work-in-progress. Okay. Keep it coming! 1 Like |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 4:45pm On Nov 20, 2014 |
I could see the cloud go dark I could feel that it's gonna rain I could see people running to find a place to hide I could just imagine what it would be at home Parents telling their children to go inside.... Just because it wants to rain People trying to move their washed cloth from the line People trying to remove all the perishable foods from the rain People winding up the screen of their cars Households closing the window of their houses
This though came up as I try to imagine the effects of the rain...... Aha Sooner than expected I see the rain drops I heard its droplets falling down on the ground and rooftop I felt it..... although I was not inside the rain I felt its coolness I feel its magic I felt it calmness The droplets where of different degree Different speed of dropping Different circumference
So fast I couldn't watch a drop fall from where I was to the ground level So fast that all I hear is the sound, noise and chatter of the rain So fast that the dry land have to emits its heat quickly So fast that the dry land did absorb the much it could take within some second So fast that that I could see some pool of water So fast that the heat has turn to coolness All this happens with a space of time
So much much heat have evaporated that I could feel comfortable My discomfort have turned to comfort The weather revenjunate mah spirit It's speak comfort to my soul It's makes the pores lightened up The blood vessels receive strength to pump The mind recieve inspiration to write The soul was able to concieve something new
All this happened with a space of time With some few minutes All within the time I was able to take five spoons of what I was eating I was awe at nature I was elated to see what just happened
Seeing nature at its best 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 12:12pm On Nov 21, 2014 |
Dre into poetry finally you're putting your lines into work. nice one |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 1:56pm On Nov 21, 2014 |
Just lay mah hands on some rudiments of poetry by noble4d So I just decided to write some lines of verses from his teaching Although am not a poet..... This just an engineer have some weird thought about some things But I love the art and would like to develop in the art ..... This doesn't stop me from deviating abit to write on impulse on what I feel, see and hear Am gonna do something on Diamante
Why Motive, impulse Mind, knowledge, searching Search for thought, probing the act/action Timing, place, duration Enquiry, perceive When |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 1:59pm On Nov 21, 2014 |
This another Diamante
Death End, loss Sin, life, sense Translation to another world, breath of a new beginning Mind, soul, spirit Begin, refresh Live |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 2:01pm On Nov 21, 2014 |
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Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 7:30pm On Nov 21, 2014 |
dre11:
Thank you ladies You're always welcomed |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Babe2sure(f): 5:14am On Nov 22, 2014 |
Uwc. Later, you will be giving it befitting titles. |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 8:23pm On Nov 23, 2014 |
wow nice work dre but you just invites only ladies to your thread na wa oo
hmmm make me to start day drop my poems |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 9:49am On Nov 29, 2014 |
Just as sleep refused to comeStill trying to catch some sleep Still trying to close my eyes Still trying to relax the nerves Still trying to let down my thoughts
Trying to allow the brain relax Trying to forget the real world Trying to enter into the realm of the idea world Trying to make that journey to the dreamland
To the world of possibilities The land of fantasy The place of escape Where u do wish to stay for a long time because of its content and experience
But I found myself not being able to sleep Not being able to loose myself for nature to have its course Sleep refused to kiss my eyelids Sleep decide to take a holiday from me
I decide to pray for sleep to come Read a book like it was a medicine for sleep Gazed the letters like its the antidote for the situation I found myself Listen to music like a man in love
Alas, sleep deserted me It left at the time I needed it most Got me thinking if I have wronged the terrestrial powers It allowed my mind to wallow in its misery
Suddenly, a track play A message was passed as it playing in its melodious voice The words were just different to what I used to hear The lines of words rocked my soul
My mind became inquisitive Many questions on how does it happen? Why did it happen, when all pointers show it? When it does happen............ What next?
This and many more questions I kept coming up in troubled mind While trying to understand the puzzle Looking for ways to juxtapose the reasons behind the question Trying to understand the mindset of humans
After probing..... And much probe My mind, and sense gives sleep a chance to take me away The journey to dreamland was about to begin But the question were never answered WHERE DO BROKEN HEART GO 5 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 9:51am On Nov 29, 2014 |
samflexxy: wow nice work dre but you just invites only ladies to your thread na wa oo
hmmm make me to start day drop my poems Chairman no mind me...... Every one is welcomed U just give credit to those that did encourage you to drop by |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Purity1(f): 9:21am On Dec 01, 2014 |
dre11:
Chairman no mind me...... Every one is welcomed U just give credit to those that did encourage you to drop by you're good at what you do, i've been trying to put something down for a long time now, it's not easy so keep it up |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Babe2sure(f): 10:38am On Dec 01, 2014 |
Lol @wronged the terrestrial powers. Where do broken heart go? Me sef no know o. Since me and you no know. Who we go ask now? Nice piece! |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Nobody: 5:14am On Dec 02, 2014 |
dre11: Just as sleep refused to come
Still trying to catch some sleep Still trying to close my eyes Still trying to relax the nerves Still trying to let down my thoughts
Trying to allow the brain relax Trying to forget the real world Trying to enter into the realm of the idea world Trying to make that journey to the dreamland
To the world of possibilities The land of fantasy The place of escape Where u do wish to stay for a long time because of its content and experience
But I found myself not being able to sleep Not being able to loose myself for nature to have its course Sleep refused to kiss my eyelids Sleep decide to take a holiday from me
I decide to pray for sleep to come Read a book like it was a medicine for sleep Gazed the letters like its the antidote for the situation I found myself Listen to music like a man in love
Alas, sleep deserted me It left at the time I needed it most Got me thinking if I have wronged the terrestrial powers It allowed my mind to wallow in its misery
Suddenly, a track play A message was passed as it playing in its melodious voice The words were just different to what I used to hear The lines of words rocked my soul
My mind became inquisitive Many questions on how does it happen? Why did it happen, when all pointers show it? When it does happen............ What next?
This and many more questions I kept coming up in troubled mind While trying to understand the puzzle Looking for ways to juxtapose the reasons behind the question Trying to understand the mindset of humans
After probing..... And much probe My mind, and sense gives sleep a chance to take me away The journey to dreamland was about to begin But the question were never answered
WHERE DO BROKEN HEART GO Nice poem...THEY GO TO GOD. |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 5:00pm On Dec 04, 2014 |
tardy apologiesHumans will always be humans, We always have to learn everyday. Bit by bit, time after time.... ....... we understand each other. That's just the beauty of humans.
Em! Have gotten my fair share of critique. Have being attacked, bullied by others. Have being tongue lashed and abandoned by some. But, is it a crime to show that I am also human.
Sometimes, I do ask what is the essence of human without diversity. How robotic humans would have being without this ingredient of diversity. Thinking.. ........... is it wrong to have a divergent opinion. Can't we just exhibit the human nature in us.
So, I say, forgive me when I spoke so soon. Forgive me when I seems not to understand where you where coming from. When I seems not to understand your way of expressing what you did felt; why, what made you did what you just did. This just show you that I am human afterall.
Don't blame me when I look or post in a happy mood when u felt I should have show some restrain. Looking so happy, thinking it will help to take the pain away. Making you see the bright side of the situation. Just know that you are as human as I am.
Forgive me when my posting language don't reflect what is happening to you. Don't be angry when it did look I never share in your grieve, disappointment, anger, pains and let down. Don't take it out on me because I wasn't grieving with you. It was never ment to be like that.
Don't get annoyed when I do go overboard on some issues, when I don't share ur points, actions, ways. Forgive me for turning a blind eyes to ur pains and apology. Don't take it out on me when my words doesn't speak comfort to you. Just this time am asking for your forgiveness.
I do hope u find it in your hearts to forgive. Just know that am not making an excuses for mine actions. I do hope you understand that am not perfect. I hope you do understand that we are all humans in our diversity............... #A message to all 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 5:02pm On Dec 04, 2014 |
Purity1: you're good at what you do, i've been trying to put something down for a long time now, it's not easy so keep it up Thanks.. .... I can see that ure putting some things down too.. .. It would be nice to see more from you Valued:
Nice poem...THEY GO TO GOD. Hum.. .... That's I will put that in mind Babe2sure:
Lol @wronged the terrestrial powers. Where do broken heart go? Me sef no know o. Since me and you no know. Who we go ask now? Nice piece! Are u sure that u don't know where they do go |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Babe2sure(f): 10:41pm On Dec 04, 2014 |
dre11:
Are u sure that u don't know where they do go Ssssssh! * whispers to him* You no say I be olodo now. Why are you asking me the question in public? You want to embarrass me ni? Oya tell me. |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by dre11(m): 12:21am On Dec 05, 2014 |
in need of freedomWho can I look up to. Just that person that can bring me out of my misery. Going na-ked just because of fashion. Unclad just because it's fits and looks good to the eyes. Devalue the culture just because I want to feel among. Allowing a snail shell to be ripped off just to expose its beneath. Oh.. ........ Am held captive by fashion.
How can I come out of this state I do find myself. Put an end to this madness I crave for. Going back to that vomit I once sown never to go back. Tormenting my innocence with words. Words that drops like honey combs from his mouth. Febble heart I do have. Oh.. ...... Am in bondage of his words.
How can I get this out of mah bloodstream. Craving for all what money can buy. The thrist to be noticed. Why does my soul long for vain things. Enslaved to this changing world. Obeying the ordinance to this changing world even when it's doesn't make sense. Oh.. ......... Am enslaved to civilization
The harmattan is gone, the rain is here. The flowers appear all over the vegetation. I could hear the birds singing, the cricket whispers, the ant moving on a straight line. The contour, bellows, ridges coming up in their glory. The dead plants was given a chance to live. This I couldn't describe with the little vocabulary in me. Oh.. ........ Am a subjugated to nature
See this lady in red. A cluster of champhire in the king vineyard. Ruby was the least stone to describe the beauty that ozz out. She.. ....... who my eyes finds no spots. How she did ravish my senses just seeing her glow in glory. I lost my guards at the sight of her appearance. Oh.. ........ Am enchanted to her beauty.
I couldn't deny that I was held captive by fashion. Held in bondage by words. Enslaved to the world of civilization. Subjugated by the aura of nature. Enchanted by the beauty of a woman But, who can save me from this madness. Who is that person coming to rescue me from this prison. #a song of freedom 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: In My Subconscious Mind by Purity1(f): 8:41am On Dec 05, 2014 |
dre11: in need of freedom
Who can I look up to. Just that person that can bring me out of my misery. Going na-ked just because of fashion. Unclad just because it's fits and looks good to the eyes. Devalue the culture just because I want to feel among. Allowing a snail shell to be ripped off just to expose its beneath. Oh.. ........ Am held captive by fashion.
How can I come out of this state I do find myself. Put an end to this madness I crave for. Going back to that vomit I once sown never to go back. Tormenting my innocence with words. Words that drops like honey combs from his mouth. Febble heart I do have. Oh.. ...... Am in bondage of his words.
How can I get this out of mah bloodstream. Craving for all what money can buy. The thrist to be noticed. Why does my soul long for vain things. Enslaved to this changing world. Obeying the ordinance to this changing world even when it's doesn't make sense. Oh.. ......... Am enslaved to civilization
The harmattan is gone, the rain is here. The flowers appear all over the vegetation. I could hear the birds singing, the cricket whispers, the ant moving on a straight line. The contour, bellows, ridges coming up in their glory. The dead plants was given a chance to live. This I couldn't describe with the little vocabulary in me. Oh.. ........ Am a subjugated to nature
See this lady in red. A cluster of champhire in the king vineyard. Ruby was the least stone to describe the beauty that ozz out. She.. ....... who my eyes finds no spots. How she did ravish my senses just seeing her glow in glory. I lost my guards at the sight of her appearance. Oh.. ........ Am enchanted to her beauty.
I couldn't deny that I was held captive by fashion. Held in bondage by words. Enslaved to the world of civilization. Subjugated by the aura of nature. Enchanted by the beauty of a woman But, who can safe me from this madness. Who is that person coming to rescue me
#a song of freedom wow this is nice |