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Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 5:22pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Uchexxy: ok dear. will do that tonight. |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 7:41pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Shoutout to seanixking, jbonitol, chuks87, omavik, twisty20, stuff46, feyikemi12, maryclaire1, nellytivities, adeh39, onemansquard, Ivyluvie2, haydot95, ogbarmey, mariamferanmi, sunxylove, susrite, komzzy1, shaboti, uchexxy, Longshadow, Bestlily, LEvuls, toykathy, costlybabe, aprilwise, unlimitedbosco Have a fun filled weekend ....Let love always be filled in your hearts Love you all....... 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Seanixking: 7:45pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Queennelly:Thankz and have a fun filled weekend too Queenelly... Dnt let de weekend weaken u.... 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 8:17pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Seanixking: welcome |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Costlybabe: 9:25pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
And you too queen baby |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Onemansquad(m): 9:27pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Queennelly:God bless u ..luv u 2 dear 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 9:48pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Costlybabe: thanks sweet |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 11:36pm On Dec 05, 2014 |
Queennelly:alryt dear,,hv a great weekend... 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 7:22am On Dec 06, 2014 |
Queennelly: i love you so much.....kisses..... 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Feyikemi12(f): 7:24am On Dec 06, 2014 |
Queennelly:thank you very much ,have a lovely weekend too 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by nellytivities(f): 7:40am On Dec 06, 2014 |
Feyikemi12: Queennelly: Thanks babe. You too. 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by unlimitedbosco: 9:25am On Dec 06, 2014 |
Queennelly:happy weekend to u too hope u will make us more happy with more update 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nadamwa(f): 6:44pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Queennelly: Joe no get I'm own work? Abi na jobless man? |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 6:45pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Thanks queennelly,and happy weekend to ya |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by repogirl(f): 7:06pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Congrats on hitting FP, I guess that solidifies your stance as a super writer on NL. Peju your writing has promise, if you can only develop your characters better and not rely so heavily on conversation. Also, it seems the story is moving at an unrealistic pace and that's making it quite unbelievable, take time out to map out a nice believable plot and work a bit more on the setting. I see your characters aren't African, well that's okay,but its better to write about what you're familiar with. If you're gonna make your characters from another race, do not describe just the eyes, lets have a full description so we can envision them in our minds eye. Also, take out the brackets, not nice. Finally, find your voice, make the story your own, make it original. Alright you asked for candid comments and you got mine. Good job so far, an interesting story, I'm a sucker for romance stories anyway so keep up the good work and also work on making improvements. 2 Likes |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by stuff46(m): 7:33pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
wow wow wow, i never saw this coming so soon. Congrats nelly |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Onemansquad(m): 7:39pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Nadamwa:babe dnt quote d whole update agn if u dnt wnt me 2 flog u wit my koboko dat have 5branches |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 7:45pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
.........and she hits the frontpage of African's no 1 most discussion forum...... signs of divine favour coming ur way... Never Ever give up... Congrats Honey. 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Onemansquad(m): 7:53pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
chuks87:yong man dnt honey her oo if u dnt want me 2 blast u |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by KingEbukasBlog(m): 7:53pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
good story |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 7:58pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Onemansquad: lolzzzz.... sori sir |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 8:05pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Onemansquad: |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Onemansquad(m): 8:37pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
chuks87:gud so abg i fit gt a bottle of bacardi |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by LEvuls(m): 8:57pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Queennelly:U re blessed, happy weekend ! |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 8:58pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Onemansquad:*handles him a cartoon of bacardi* |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by seunwen2(m): 9:18pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Shey na sex story be this? 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Onemansquad(m): 9:24pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
chuks87:tears him hot knock on his head i say 1 bottle u gv me carton u wnt kil me shey *remuvs a bottle and hands over d carton to him* |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by pee777(m): 10:22pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
chuks87: kolo |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 10:22pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
This is to Notify y'all that Queennelly have been banned and wouldnt b able to post an update. her ban expires runs till 6:51pm dec 7th. thank you |
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