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Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 10:26pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Onemansquad:*scrathes head.. datz for u n ur squad members nah...... |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Onemansquad(m): 10:27pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
chuks87:ah say 1 bottle |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 10:49pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Onemansquad:sori.... my bad..... |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 11:07pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
chuks87: |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by stuff46(m): 11:14pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by stuff46(m): 11:16pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
[quote author=chuks87 post=28657010][/quote] Mods God dey, What would we do, we will just keep on hoping God would always help us from the hands of d mods |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by marquiseT(f): 11:39pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
Haave not finished reading,I just to book space so I can read later but I don't no if any one has mentioned that the setting for the story is not typical nigerian nor the storyline what u experience here Brillant and constitent writeup by the way....I won't mind a bottle of zobo too ![]() |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by repogirl(f): 11:50pm On Dec 06, 2014 |
chuks87:she will be unbanned soon, I just contacted a mod, so she should take note. |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by juddy263(f): 12:09am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Wow dis really interesting can't wait 4 update I 2 have a lover nxt door 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 12:11am On Dec 07, 2014 |
wow love this story 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by lexaydfg(m): 2:07am On Dec 07, 2014 |
wow! ds is interesting, it as if am seeing a movie nyc writeup queen, kudos 2 u 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by HumbledbYGrace(f): 3:00am On Dec 07, 2014 |
repogirl:Yes o Ok, as Repogirl said, you've got potential to run for the first lady of romance in this section BUT..... 1. Hannah sounds like she doesn't belong anywhere in the world, only in your head. You surely didn't have a plot did you? See when writing something like this, you pen down your ideas down first. Do your first draft, web them all together, etc. You ought to start with Hannah, who's she, where does she come from? What does she want to archive? Her goals at the moment? Put everything in detail. Use five senses to keep us glued to the story. When I listen to KingzPen's strories, nobody has to tell me anything, there are emotions involved already in his voice. When I read Larry's prose, I can feel, I can smell, I can taste, I can see, and hear what the characters are doing, going through. Its easy for me to step into a characters shoes, or just shout @ that character for being stupid when I am reading Repo's romance. Just to mention few people here, try to familiarize yourself with your characters. If your doing an international based thing, research, google, is your best friend. Harry Potter never existed but boy, J.K Rowlings wrote it so detailed and beautiful like I was there. Because when I read a fantasy, especially romance, I always take my passport with, ready to travel with the characters all the way. you've got your fan base, which will work in favor for you in future, take note of this, your going places. 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:33am On Dec 07, 2014 |
thanks very much repogirl firstly the very day I joined Nairaland I saw stories and I had this already in me so I just started writing, as I said earlier on am a newbie but ready to learn. my problem though is how to start. I will do better. will wrap this one up soon then start another. thanks for helping out with the mods. am really motivated to do more. watch out for the best next time. 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:38am On Dec 07, 2014 |
marquiseT: my dear do u watch mexican movies or korean? I do...love their settings and everything. RUBY is a movie .....try it, you might love it. |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:40am On Dec 07, 2014 |
stuff46: thanks dear. was surprised myself. |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:41am On Dec 07, 2014 |
KingEbukasBlog: thanks |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:42am On Dec 07, 2014 |
juddy263: lol kudos to u and ur lover. thanks |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:43am On Dec 07, 2014 |
prettydiva89: thanks 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:44am On Dec 07, 2014 |
lexaydfg: thanks. . |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 4:51am On Dec 07, 2014 |
HumbledbYGrace wow.....that was educative as you said I really didn't have a detailed plot. I saw stories I started writing mine. have taken note of all the dos and donts. my best all the way and be ready to help me when I ask for help please. ok? wrapping this one up soon to start another. thanks very much. |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nmeri17: 5:26am On Dec 07, 2014 |
chuks87: distributing drinks with used water bottles without labels?? nafdac dg must hear this ![]()
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Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Quatermaine: 5:39am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Incredible Story. I feel like I'm watching an american - hollywood - movie. Nice one ma'am, really nice.. The Promotion to FP was worth it. But I must bring certain things to your knowledge and I just hope that I'm speaking the minds of a good number of the members of the "readers club" ![]() - Please try as much as possible to have at least one or two posts per page and if it's the former it should be lengthy, very lengthy. - Having observed the Title and the Story line thus far, I've found no form of correlation and with the way the story is going I might find none. Please see to this or maybe I'm wrong and then perhaps you have to enlighten me. Again, it's a really great story you've got up there, please keep it up and just so you know, i'm your number one fan and be rest assured that i'll be following you till the very end.. P.S : CANCER?!!! ![]() |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 5:40am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Nmeri17:LWKMH!!! |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by chuks87(m): 5:49am On Dec 07, 2014 |
repogirl:tnx repogirl... cudnt ve noticed earlier... Good Morning |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 5:58am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Quatermaine thanks I started the story portraying Hannah as someone who doesnt believe in love then she met Joe and started having feelings. now the case study is the meaning of what she feels. its it lust or love. if lust we know it has no future. if love responsibility, concern, trust will surface. that's why Joe's family should always come first in all her decision. if you love u are bound to make sacrificial decisions not just to satisfy ur sexual desires. ... what do you think? |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nmeri17: 6:20am On Dec 07, 2014 |
op nice dp, nice moniker, nice storyline, nice vocab, nice choice of words ![]() ![]() But the love story is not it. I doubt if u can do anything about it at this point doe . it's just too straightforward. No pros, No cons. just met, kissed, asked her out. what tribe falls in love like that Biko ![]() 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nobody: 6:28am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Nmeri17 lol.....my imagination oooooo. but i clarified that as lust ..the love there is the decision she made or will make |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Nmeri17: 6:42am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Queennelly: either way, it's never been known to man to be that easy. except maybe if the girl is ugly/mgbeke Or if the guy is the only male in that environment 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Quatermaine: 7:18am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Queennelly: had a rethink and found some form of correlation.. Nice one ma'am and lest I forget, A very HAPPY SUNDAY to you and the "reader's club". 1 Like |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Eve4eva(f): 7:29am On Dec 07, 2014 |
Nyc story |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by Adelekedove(m): 8:18am On Dec 07, 2014 |
[b][/b]Excellent... keep it up ! Ur promoted to the next level.........Excellent work... keep it up ! Ur promoted to the next level.........Excellent... keep it up ! Ur promoted to the next level......... |
Re: HANNAH 'S STORY ----***falling In Love Or Lust With My Neighbour ***---- by lanreg95(m): 9:07am On Dec 07, 2014 |
kudos,followed dis frm d begining up till dis moment....kip d gud work going |
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