Topic: My NL Obsession

Instruction: Let your bars speak on the topic. Tell us why you're addicted to Nairaland

Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Imagery- - 2 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points

Emotion

Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 8bars/16Lines...

- Deadline is Friday, 12th Dec, 2014. 9pm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

- Good luck!

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Czech

••••There's something within this joint..../... I daresay, it's a freewilled world/
••••and it gives me joy.../.. so my stay on NL, believe or not../.. is all for the merriment, intrigues and fun!
••••reading bars which are scripted by gods../...really makes this site interest me more../...
••••vets bringing different cool puns.../...to make the weakest breed fall.../...
••••with crazy personal like princess in love.../...with a notorious gee wicked with bomb..../ ..
••••seriously here is gifted with fun.../....especially when sport or business involves.../...
••••their lyrism is good & I can testify to that cause I witness the stuff.../..
••••It's my best place to mingle with boys.../ ...being the only child/ ...of a family, it's almost a lonely life/ ...
••••plus I'm wholly shy.../ ...but here I'm very bold to write.../... coz the phone is mine.../...
••••so f..k ur silver watch...this is my golden time!
••••should i talk about the chit chat../... something about the way iam brags.../...
••••till 3 vets get him bagged.../... or coogar blowing grammar like boko haram in English class../....
••••or mikuz chasing ladies with d¹ck in between their laps./.or how a the KOW spit ish that makes we laugh../..
••••nL is an autoist cause anytime I'm here it drives away boredom.../...
••••well that's just a lil confession.../... ain't even up to my NL obsession.../...
••••cause if I spit it all it will end up being a comprehension..


peace out one Love

My NL obsession?

It's all about;

The likes & shares the quotes & mentions
the vehement passion in the romance section
the jokes, flows the foes the hoes with useless posts & the pretentious blokes is no exception

it's all about

the argument the phucking debate causing the flaws & the rage
the clause & the phrase
the vets & the noobs biting bars like a dog in the cage!!

It's all about the;

going through the past battles
the braggarts too saying ''i rap pass you''
the dope verses & the noisemakers with wack bars too

it's all about the

comedy section with jovial folks
the joy in reading the comical posts
all these give me intense feeling like a bytch rubbing her ho


these got me addicted to NL
my obsession with this site is the story i'm telling

Open for votes

Emaprince
Mikuz
Guykhena
Krone
Elymaxiimus
Loonat11k

Creativity-- 2 points-tie

Flow- - 1 point-bruce

Imagery- - 2 points-tie

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points-bruce

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points-teddy

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-tie

Vocabulary-- 2 points-bruce

If I never used criteria,I'll easily vote teddy cos her story was better but bruce got this due to rhymes and vocab..

MVGT-007bruce

ElymaxCray & kr0ne oya come down here

teddybiyasi:
ElymaxCray & kr0ne oya come down here

+ mikuz

Teddy got METS. Bruce got flow n vocab. Aoc tie!
Very nice from both!

Based on the crits,
MVGT : bruce

tho i dont like that VOCAB CRIt...
Music is a universal language.
So far as one is able to get the message across to one's audience, it's okay by me.
I don't believe in using uncommon words before producing a good written. Tho i'm speaking from the HIpHOP ANGLE...
If this was just a topical tourney, i wouldnt even bother about the vocab crit.
But since it's kyna hip n poetry combined(though what i've seen so far is mostly poetry), i guess the crit stands.
Cos i don't think one should speak anyhow when it comes to poetry. But then too much grammar takes away that hip flave! Aaarrgghh!
Thank God for the rhymes crit tho.

But for this match, you guys were able to balance the two(poetry n rap).
Bruce was very sick with the flow, damn!
I loved teddy's 'silver watch n golden time' line.
Tho you guys didnt write up to the specified bars expected, this is my best match in this tourney so far!

007 could have won this easily if he had continued with the flow. But he stopped at the 4th bar. Teddy tried her best, her bars are complete and on point too. But she slid in some bars after posting, reason I wanted to close the thread. So my judgement stands

Mvgt - - Tie

Thread closed! 007Bruce wins this