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Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:14am On Dec 17, 2014 |
Something came across my mind when I heard the word. My thoughts, a day when the world realise that we have to love and share. Least understand these and many can't interpret it. Search for you, hold your hands and say, I love you Doesn't mean I want you to be part of my private life but just want to care and love you cos we both deserve to be loved. Two colours are involved The Danger Peace colours. One represent, Stolen pride and dignity, Destiny bolished, an instabilized future, Red holds the stock. Happiness in the heart purity of the mind love and more blessings White holds the stock. Now it depends on us to choose one colour My choice is the true meaning of VLENTINE 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:27pm On Dec 17, 2014 |
THE CONNECTORS What a beautiful sight above!! Who could have ever thought To make such a creation, For human hearts that are far apart, To be near as magnet. Shines beautifully in the Middle of dark cloud. Captivator of the living soul, Made out of love. Specially created to brighten, The soul of the sorrowful ones. No creation made by God Will want to miss the, Everlasting sight of this wonderful creation. Wishes are made, and are fulfilled If you believe in the creator of this creation. |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by dre11(m): 9:05am On Dec 18, 2014 |
Just asking. ......... Are you one of the students here and why didn't you copy the teachers to come and see ur poem. IF not...... I can come and edict this and allow your thoughts to flow as u put ur pen at work Cc: laykorn Texanomaly |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:34pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
dre11: yeap, a student but having issues with tagging |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 10:37pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
youngcrysta:Young, just seeing your message. All you have to do to tag is to mention the teachers' names. Something like this. Cc: Laykorn Texanomal.y And they'll see it in their mentions. ![]() Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:41pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
laykorn: |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:42pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
laykorn: alrightie, thanks |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 11:02pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
HARSH How can I keep enduring these pains?! Always, the word patience lies on human lips, Ready to dish out advices. Seriously, words are mere and cannot soothe. Helpless is the word. CC: laykorn, leki10, taxanomly |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by leki10(m): 11:05pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
youngcrysta:kudos dear..... since the first line is a question, you should punctuate wit a question mark. Line 4 was not punctuated at the end.....keep it up The sky is ur starting point 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 11:07pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
youngcrysta:Wow! Great acrostic! You forgot your period in line 4 ![]() Ayamlaykorn 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by texanomaly(f): 11:09pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
The gangs all here. Lemme read. |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 2:28am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:42am On Dec 19, 2014 |
laykorn: thanks, will correct that |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 5:47pm On Dec 19, 2014 |
Moi Free Verse assignment MORE TO WHAT WE SEE Told to watch and learn But kept repeating the mistake, Cos I didnt observe the errors. To fly high was in my imagination, In reality I am soaring high. The shoes I wear, Determines my steps to greatness. Have got to keep it shining. Just like the sharp pain in the heart, So also, Like a Stain that needs to be erased. A smile can make you furious, Anger can led to death. Everything has a second phase, Even the Universe and Life has. To possess is our property, Also to lend is your possession. The Sun is great, But still have to humble itself every night. The moon shines brightly, But still have to give way to the rain. Stars are breath taking, But will have to be mute, When the cloud pass by. Even High Mountain get scared, they can suddenly become plain. No matter the number of years I have, A day old Angel is to be respected. CC: Texanomaly, Laykorn, Leki10, Everestdebliu |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by texanomaly(f): 12:17pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
leki10: laykorn: This collection is exquisite. I enjoyed reading every one. I agree with the above. You need to work on punctuation. Great job! |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by texanomaly(f): 12:21pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
One thing though...when Laykorn mentioned my "Random Ramblings" thread, he meant that as an example for a tittle, not that you should use mine. Try to come up with your own tittle that reflects your personality. ![]() Random RamblingsĀ© 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:32pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
Thanks for your comment, will work on the Punctuation aspect |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 7:23pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
youngcrysta:What about the title change ![]() Will you work on it too ![]() Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:28pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
laykorn: yeap, I'm doing that presently |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Obinnau(m): 9:42pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
Hi, about editing your title, modify your first post of this thread, the title will show then you can modify it too. Or you tell me the name you want to use, I'll modify it for you Thanks |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:50pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
Obinnau: Done! thanks |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by leki10(m): 12:32am On Dec 21, 2014 |
youngcrysta:Nice one dear...love d way u expressed dose objects. Work on ur punctuation... ..the sky is ur starting point 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 8:10pm On Dec 21, 2014 |
leki10: thanks, will work on it |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:07pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
WATERFALL A beauty of nature, A picture to keep in mind forever. From top of the cliff Water gush out with so much strength Hitting, Crashing Upon hard rock Racing down into an open river. An atmospheric music filled with happy flowers. CC: Texanomaly, Laykorn, leki10, donifez |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by donifez(m): 10:35pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
youngcrysta: was just imagining a waterfall ...love the poem, can't you make it longer (create more pictures). |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 10:40pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
So am here now; Nice collection you ve got dear.. ![]() Me likey ![]() Waiting for your assignment ![]() 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:43pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
donifez: thankz... will try to make it longer |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 10:44pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
Ghostlady: you're sighted dearie |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by texanomaly(f): 10:54pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
youngcrysta: Here are some words to help. flowing, ebbing, running, lapping, dripping, soothing, relaxing, blissful, whooshing, pounding, peaceful, dancing, pitter-patter, splashing, and my favorite... There a song called "Geronimo" it talks about walking through the "curtains of a waterfall". Awesome lyric! ![]() |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 11:28pm On Dec 28, 2014 |
texanomaly: hmmm work... thankz will use those words and check out the song |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 12:10am On Dec 29, 2014 |
Muder story (continuation) Now the light is on, Silence ruling In a lucid moment, Eve remembered Her loved ones kissing the earth, A fair masked man with metalic weapons With a wicked grin. Eve bowed her head while her heart kept saying a silent prayer. "I am known to perform three action", The thunderous sound made her heart skip Silence bow down for it. "To kill, steal and Destroy" Everyone immediately became a silent prayer warrior Wishful thinking. Alas! it was granted They stole A soul, was taken by the recuse team. CC: texanomaly, laykorn, cisse7575, krystalxxx, everestdebliu, Donifez, leki10 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by texanomaly(f): 2:11am On Dec 29, 2014 |
youngcrysta: Not sure I understand this one. 1 Like |
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