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SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:19pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
![]() ![]() Still learning from Ayamlaykorn Cc: Laykorn Texanomaly Thanks for stopping by ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 11:08pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
MISSING YOU You have been gone for a year now Why don't you remember the vow We shared Together You don't even bother That night,you vowed to come back Now I have to pack I cannot wait again I cannot bear the pain I know am losing You But my heart is hurt,cos I'm missing You Cc:Laykorn Texanomaly Am just a beginner,please ![]() 3 Likes |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 12:19am On Dec 17, 2014 |
You ended your poem with a couplet. This is great. Short, simple and direct. I miss my boo ![]() Did you intentionally decided not to punctuate it ![]() Ayamlaykorn |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by texanomaly(f): 2:24am On Dec 17, 2014 |
Ghostlady: Very nice. laykorn is right. It needs punctuation. If you are unsure about it, and you need help let me know. Good job. ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 9:16am On Dec 17, 2014 |
laykorn:wow I just decided to write a little something...thanks.. ![]() About the punctuation,didn't really knw how to go about it... Texanomaly please you can help me..thank you |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by texanomaly(f): 12:27pm On Dec 17, 2014 |
Ghostlady: |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 1:47pm On Dec 17, 2014 |
[quote author=texanomaly post=28959349][/quote]thanks so much ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Funjosh(m): 3:37pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 4:47pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Funjosh:Class at 9. Remember. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 5:38pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Funjosh:OMG...am so sorry Funsho...I feel bad now ![]() I wasn't really online yesterday dear... I know am already late but lemme just say a poem for you,and I hope u like it: " Its your birthday yet again. Celebration in the air. Forgetting all your pain. There's a party funfair. I pray for you today. May you achieve greatness. I hope we meet someday. To rejoice in oneness." Cc:laykorn Texanomaly Happy birthday in arrears funjosh...hope u like it? Its from my brain just now.... |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 5:40pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Ghostlady:My birthday is on June 3. Promise me one too. ![]() Ayamlaykorn |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 5:47pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
laykorn:lol I would surely write one for you... ![]() ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:43pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
BEAUTY Baby,how I feel for You. Engages my heart always. Another day,Another time. Under your spell,I am. Tomorrow cometh yet again. Yesterday dreams are gone again. Cc:laykorn Texanomaly Leki10 |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:46pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Ghostlady:Wow! This a great acrostic poem. You forgot to punctuate some lines ![]() Ayamlaykorn |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 10:49pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
laykorn: ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by herald9: 11:36pm On Dec 18, 2014 |
Ghostlady: this is good. ![]() 1 Like |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 12:11am On Dec 19, 2014 |
I love to read poems. .. I love to write poems... Nice Ghosty! 1 Like |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Funjosh(m): 5:54am On Dec 19, 2014 |
I hear you ma, Thank you so much. Ghostlady: |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:12am On Dec 19, 2014 |
herald9:thanks sweedy,hope you ve done ur assignment |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:14am On Dec 19, 2014 |
emusmith:thanks sweedy ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:15am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Funjosh:you welcome sir ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Funjosh(m): 6:21am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Do I actualy love peoms ![]() I went to one kin pako school in EGAN/IGANDO Its take God, perseverance and Determination to graduate from Sec. ![]() I Go try to dey read some of your peom sha cos i love the one u wrote for my bday. ![]() Ghostlady: |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:25am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Funjosh: ![]() My poems are quite short and easy to understand |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by doskie(m): 6:53am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Ghostlady:I have good poems you may like can we chat on bbm sometimes |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 6:59am On Dec 19, 2014 |
doskie:sweety,you can create a new poem thread here....and I will check them out ![]() ![]() |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 7:21am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Funjosh:Funjosh. Egan/igando ![]() Moshalashi road or isuti road or agric or modina ![]() Where did you school? Ayamlaykorn |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Funjosh(m): 7:48am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Agric Road. The only Government Sec In Egan ![]() laykorn: |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 7:50am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Funjosh:Was at Wolcrest for some time. You still around home ![]() Abi you don pack. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by herald9: 8:40am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 8:47am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 8:52am On Dec 19, 2014 |
Re: SOUND OF WORDS by Nobody: 8:53am On Dec 19, 2014 |
herald9:lol I ll sure help you Where r u having isshs? And how was ur nite ![]() |
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