I swear my BEATING/
go give dis dawg BLEEDIN/
but incase u don't know, ama typa nigg dat adult likes n loves 2 LIVE WITH/
but we hear
say adult go stay 4 'j.s premises'? na lie, cos no adult will love REPEATING.!!/
so now guess, d weak bros lost 2 many vets, asin dea stepped on him lyk wat i do 2 INSECTS/
cos it was cleared 2al dat You cudn't withstand 't pains' even if he wasn't an american CELEBS/
he's not to be blamed,
cos he believes dat the downfall of a man
is not d end of his life..YES/ 
crit? He wont 'tie one'
even if he goes to dat asian COUNTRY/
cos me vs dis NL niggas ? na clear
SLAUGHTERING/
even dope gimmicks will thank me 4 ending dem
RUBBISH/
asin na ur type go carry goons enta studio just to KILL BEAT/
but ma goon? Dey'll just go upstairs n giv u a senseless BEATING/
so we wont c u drop freeze nor DISSING/
he'll deny being a low dog but u? I'll
BULLY SON/
ma bars so dope, ready to murk all even
INCLUDING URS/
now he'll say his not d cheap type dat dawg bleeps, uses and dumps, but if dats true
why is it dat d last tym i checked,
ma 5yrs old bro has started
USING JOHN..!!!/

Lol »john means a toilet« tho. Sori oo if ya name na JoHN

ZachHugo:
Zach...

It Goes,

To Every Nigga I see/ You Don't Go around and ChaLenge A Nigga Like Me/ Am Sweetened Like Some Sugar Ice Tea/But If I Get Bitter, I'd Cut an Arm Off Like The Francis Butcher ....Mikey!!/

I'm The Hiphop's Maintenance/Rhymes Finisher, But I ReFuse To Display My Cadence/ A Nigga Does the Impossible. . . Like Rhyme 1 Syllable. . . And Says He's showing Greatness/ I'd Beat Him TiLL He Shows Remorse For His Wrong Doings Like CathoLic Boys, I Mean Penance!!!/

Join Minds With Minds, And Thoughts BareLy merged/ I Scare The Bleep Outta Them Like A DeadLy Scourge/ Your Bit.ch Too Fine, I'm Getting That Sex.uaL Urge/ Her Pu.ssy Too Dope And Bushy, Like The Northern Weed. . .Hairy Spurge/

I've Come With Macks/ Thirty-eights and Cannons, To Leave Niggas With Marks/But I Won't use These Weapons on These Wacks/My "Bitches" Do The Smack/Cos Like a Farmer. . I'd Use My "Hoes" To Attack/

Speak the Truth. Like Drake and Chainz No Lies/Every Nigga Wants a Piece Of Me!! But ItS No Slice/aLways Getting the Digits When ah Throw Dice/ Choke A Nigga To Death With a Bowtie/ Then Cut Their "Veins", And Stop Their Heart"Beat", Thats How Their Flow Dies/

Let Me Flow a Sixth/ A Magician With My "Hatricks" and No Assists/ am Good At This/ Am always on PatroL. . .Like PoLice/ Looking For Criminals To Be-head, Like Travis/

Your lyricism is tight. Just work on ur rhymes

kr0ne:
Lime na one wack ugly prick/ wey dey yarn rubbish things/ but I still pass am for written/
I no need scripture. . .to beat this pastor silly!/ he no fit carry votes apart from swindling/
I don travel go Europe, gather fans for Sweden/ and bad gangs for Italy/
even for Africa, no be brag or gimmick/ last time, I visit Conackry, come land for Guinea/ to feel the sand on beaches/
and lay hands on biitches/ [b7]
but, lad forgive me/ I dey jump pass ugly scenes/ like ur fams for Benin/ coz I hear say na land of witches!/
otherwise, I for don nyash ur sissyp[/b]
I don cruise rides, still get cars for bidding/ so this fagg wan mimic/
come lie say e get Lamborghini/ one Ibo man hear am hala "isi Lambo gini!!!"/
To be continued...

hahahahahahahahahahahaha abeg where coogar pidgin verse?

kr0ne:

Your lyricism is tight. Just work on ur rhymes

.


Owk. . Noted!!

ZachHugo:
Zach...

It Goes,

To Every Nigga I see/ You Don't Go around and ChaLenge A Nigga Like Me/ Am Sweetened Like Some Sugar Ice Tea/But If I Get Bitter, I'd Cut an Arm Off Like The Francis Butcher ....Mikey!!/

I'm The Hiphop's Maintenance/Rhymes Finisher, But I ReFuse To Display My Cadence/ A Nigga Does the Impossible. . . Like Rhyme 1 Syllable. . . And Says He's showing Greatness/ I'd Beat Him TiLL He Shows Remorse For His Wrong Doings Like CathoLic Boys, I Mean Penance!!!/

Join Minds With Minds, And Thoughts BareLy merged/ I Scare The Bleep Outta Them Like A DeadLy Scourge/ Your Bit.ch Too Fine, I'm Getting That Sex.uaL Urge/ Her Pu.ssy Too Dope And Bushy, Like The Northern Weed. . .Hairy Spurge/

I've Come With Macks/ Thirty-eights and Cannons, To Leave Niggas With Marks/But I Won't use These Weapons on These Wacks/My "Bitches" Do The Smack/Cos Like a Farmer. . I'd Use My "Hoes" To Attack/

Speak the Truth. Like Drake and Chainz No Lies/Every Nigga Wants a Piece Of Me!! But ItS No Slice/aLways Getting the Digits When ah Throw Dice/ Choke A Nigga To Death With a Bowtie/ Then Cut Their "Veins", And Stop Their Heart"Beat", Thats How Their Flow Dies/

Let Me Flow a Sixth/ A Magician With My "Hatricks" and No Assists/ am Good At This/ Am always on PatroL. . .Like PoLice/ Looking For Criminals To Be-head, Like Travis/

doooope!... Staaart practicing multis.

ElymaxCray:

doooope!... Staaart practicing multis.

ALright. Noted. . . . .Thanks

ZachHugo:
Zach...

It Goes,

To Every Nigga I see/ You Don't Go around and ChaLenge A Nigga Like Me/ Am Sweetened Like Some Sugar Ice Tea/But If I Get Bitter, I'd Cut an Arm Off Like The Francis Butcher ....Mikey!!/

I'm The Hiphop's Maintenance/Rhymes Finisher, But I ReFuse To Display My Cadence/ A Nigga Does the Impossible. . . Like Rhyme 1 Syllable. . . And Says He's showing Greatness/ I'd Beat Him TiLL He Shows Remorse For His Wrong Doings Like CathoLic Boys, I Mean Penance!!!/

Join Minds With Minds, And Thoughts BareLy merged/ I Scare The Bleep Outta Them Like A DeadLy Scourge/ Your Bit.ch Too Fine, I'm Getting That Sex.uaL Urge/ Her Pu.ssy Too Dope And Bushy, Like The Northern Weed. . .Hairy Spurge/

I've Come With Macks/ Thirty-eights and Cannons, To Leave Niggas With Marks/But I Won't use These Weapons on These Wacks/My "Bitches" Do The Smack/Cos Like a Farmer. . I'd Use My "Hoes" To Attack/

Speak the Truth. Like Drake and Chainz No Lies/Every Nigga Wants a Piece Of Me!! But ItS No Slice/aLways Getting the Digits When ah Throw Dice/ Choke A Nigga To Death With a Bowtie/ Then Cut Their "Veins", And Stop Their Heart"Beat", Thats How Their Flow Dies/

Let Me Flow a Sixth/ A Magician With My "Hatricks" and No Assists/ am Good At This/ Am always on PatroL. . .Like PoLice/ Looking For Criminals To Be-head, Like Travis/

Nice sturv. 2/5

Bars:
I swear my BEATING/
go give dis dawg BLEEDIN/
but incase u don't know, ama typa nigg dat adult likes n loves 2 LIVE WITH/
but we hear
say adult go stay 4 'j.s premises'? na lie, cos no adult will love REPEATING.!!/
so now guess, d weak bros lost 2 many vets, asin dea stepped on him lyk wat i do 2 INSECTS/
cos it was cleared 2al dat You cudn't withstand 't pains' even if he wasn't an american CELEBS/
he's not to be blamed,
cos he believes dat the downfall of a man
is not d end of his life..YES/
crit? He wont 'tie one'
even if he goes to dat asian COUNTRY/
cos me vs dis NL niggas ? na clear
SLAUGHTERING/
even dope gimmicks will thank me 4 ending dem
RUBBISH/
asin na ur type go carry goons enta studio just to KILL BEAT/
but ma goon? Dey'll just go upstairs n giv u a senseless BEATING/
so we wont c u drop freeze nor DISSING/
he'll deny being a low dog but u? I'll
BULLY SON/
ma bars so dope, ready to murk all even
INCLUDING URS/
now he'll say his not d cheap type dat dawg bleeps, uses and dumps, but if dats true
why is it dat d last tym i checked,
ma 5yrs old bro has started
USING JOHN..!!!/

Lol »john means a toilet« tho. Sori oo if ya name na JoHN

Is this a sub? Who were you throwing shots at? Or is this another bitten verse?

kr0ne:

Your lyricism is tight. Just work on ur rhymes

On the contrary, I believe His rhymes are top notch for a newcomer bro. Maybe I don't get you

ZachHugo:



ALright. Noted. . . . .Thanks

my guy you try jor. . .nice one. .we go battle later!! mikuz keep rating your diss the come for road!! bra!

mikuz:


On the contrary, I believe His rhymes are top notch for a newcomer bro. Maybe I don't get you

Not the rhymes. He's barely rhyming. . .at most, 2 syllables. Check. But his lyrics is strong

mikuz:


Nice sturv. 2/5

Alright. .

goshikid:
my guy you try jor. . .nice one. .we go battle later!! mikuz keep rating your diss the come for road!! bra!

Owk! Your Good Two

kr0ne:

Not the rhymes. He's barely rhyming. . .at most, 2 syllables. Check. But his lyrics is strong

I rate perfectness over number of syllables bro. He was doing two syllables doesn't mean hes barely rhyming. In recent times, I'm yet to see a noob who rhymes better than him. For me its best to do 2 syllables with perdect rhymes than to do 4 syllables with slant rhymes. Using perfect rhymes shows how creative and witty you are.

Take for example, given this two lines.

a.
I spit sick when I'm rhyming with words/
Lyrically smoking, this nigga is on fire like pots/

b.
While I'm blazing, you guys flop/
Cos I'm lyrically smoking, this nigga is on fire like pots/

If you are to judge who was a better rhymer who will you go for? Rapper a or b?

I'm back again,I forgot something to say/ y'all ain't tight,like a mad man's naughty shoe lace/ always sweeping the ground like the lawma official I met working today/ I don too bless ffr,mikuz I for get something to take/
Y'all are "sleeping on me" like a nigga "ones said"/ it ain't a prospect...but a certainty I'll be d number one head/ out of all vets/ forced wordies is all I c in u..ur lyricism is nonsense/ d cypher won't make sense since I'm not there/ Y'all are b1tches.without me rap battle board will be a "convent"/ Y'all are group of nobody..I call ye "nones"/ "serving" wackiness..like free stuffs/ I ain't afraid if y'all come together in legion(lil Jon)/ like a rapper from east region/ imma separate them into cardinal point/ and "head them"..like a Ghana boy/ to the middle..ain't talking a m.i's song/ then set the place ablaze..the fire burns/ hotter than Satan spot/ then send a letter bomb/ jes to give them double death/ like abiku..now back to the present..those comes if u double dare/ nd call this a vacuum threat/ I'll add the step that took niggaz to aluu bed/ now call that a triple threat/ cos this time around I'll do it in da open where passersby will watch you there/ as I put fuel,tyre nd fire into ur troubled head/ so you can burn to death/

Heywhizzy:
I'm back again,I forgot something to say/ y'all ain't tight,like a mad man's naughty shoe lace/ always sweeping the ground like the lastma official I met working today/ I don too bless ffr,mikuz I for get something to take/
Y'all are "sleeping on me" like a nigga "ones said"/ it ain't a prospect...but a certainty I'll be d number one head/ out of all vets/ forced wordies is all I c in u..ur lyricism is nonsense/ d cypher won't make sense since I'm not there/ Y'all are b1tches.without me rap battle board will be a "convent"/ Y'all are group of nobody..I call ye "nones"/ "serving" wackiness..like free stuffs/ I ain't afraid if y'all come together in legion(lil Jon)/ like a rapper from east region/ imma separate them into cardinal point/ and "head them"..like a Ghana boy/ to the middle..ain't talking a m.i's song/ then set the place ablaze..the fire burns/ hotter than Satan spot/ then send a letter bomb/ jes to give them double death/ like abiku..now back to the present..those comes if u double dare/ nd call this a vacuum threat/ I'll add the step that took niggaz to aluu bed/ now call that a triple threat/ cos this time around I'll do it in da open where passersby will watch you there/ as I put fuel,tyre nd fire into ur troubled head/ so you can burn to death/

1/5 . . .

Diss at HEYWHIZZY
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Lemme start..with hey whizzy..you never can be d0pe even if you smoke high medicine/ my flow shock you dead in the street...motherffucker! SosiQQ just make a (sin)scene/
You can ffuck who you want...but don't mess with me/
Or imma tear out ya lungs like a middle page of my book/
Kill ya gently and judge you with high drugs you took/
He is a b1tch..I bully with simple well constructed bars/ a b1tch that can never fight for him self in times of wars/ a b1tch that can be whooped by a female goat like teddy.
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This nigga is a definition of disgrace..cos all he brings here is bags of shame in this place/ let mikuz ban this f@g out of this space/ or I will scare him Out of the earth with my poisonous flow/ hospitalize the boy when I throw him dangerous blow!!/
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When sosiQQ stands..this ugly dwarf can't hold my ground/ physically, if I should talk to you..you will have no option to sell ya pride/ this is a warning..cos you don't no when I'ma strike/
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The f00l said I'm scared of him..but I was just looking at your dying life/ cos if I should throw you diss, then..you gon cry your self to the kitchen and hug ya fat stomach with a shiny knife/ but I will defend my name..cos I'm sosiQ-dude even your mum's doctor gon testify this dude so ill/ so better not reply or you gon die before ur humble dad share the will/

mikuz:


Is this a sub? Who were you throwing shots at? Or is this another bitten verse?

Smh...

Warning shots at Mik

I don't care about ya ranking/ if not I would I've switched a long time ago to Jamaican/ bitches can't understand my format even if they ave PhD in accounting/ cos I leave u looking for d formula like members of mavin dynasty/ I'm example of alive nd "die na mik"/ I switch style at ease/ ur only achievement is balancing cup on your a$$/ so I can balance my cops on your a$$/ let them shoot d sh1t out of ya/ you need to be out of this world fast/ don't think you're special,you are an odd brat/ you are wack..call it data,cos that's d raw fact/ omo, u don suffer/ u've been fukked all your life even b4 you dey born/ lol,dat means u're flowerlesss like a moss/ na me dey run tinz from Warri,Benin to Lagos/ I no send u message,u no fit dey my mail box/ u wan be mod forever..u can never be fruitful/ except u born pikin wey abnormal..surely him brain go dudu/ no be say na mouth nd no be juju/ I gat talent pass Kim,niggaz be truthful/... errbody don see you finish sorta like your leaked se.x. tape/ so it's easy for anyone to disrespect,gay/ all your flows dey watery..you dey menstrute?/ it's clear for real men to see like an estate/ it's jes a freestyle/ get off me..imma leave your face with blisters/ u can't rate me high cos I don't do the b1tch style/ imma head to d future,punch u during your honeymoon, so all u see would be star/

I kip attackn dis riff raff wit mah killer pun/
Lyk u'al knew I freeze cul shot ?...wit mah bloody pen tha gun/
Imma deadly fada jess...wu brought. Freshly whips nd quckly-death on tha rudely son/
Anyway Bleep dah clown....cuz am addictd in killn 4 fun/
Nd battlin me ? Wil only mak ya family memember 2 morun/


I dn't nid 2 bring ya mum 'stinky panties' 2 let u knw am gud 'UN-DIS/
Nd wen ratin 'drugs rappers high' ? U were alwys addly ...2be found on 'LIST/
Bro. Beta u read a dope battles....dan puttin ur life on 'RISK/
B4 I start punchn off ya teeth/
Till u aint longer av a mouth 2 GIST/


See I aint tawkin abt dat 9ja fuji artist 'AKANDE' bt am 'BARS'/(ambass akande)
So since dis 'kitty-cat' tryna foughtn me ? Watch as I end up is life in a cunky TRAP/
Cuz dis dwarf is natin buh a wcky BAT/
Nd guess wat ?? Dats a FUCKN FACT/
So seen me as a 'joker on dis thread will only av u beatin on a killin strik lyk a 'Blind man playin LUCKY DRAFT/

mikuz:


I rate perfectness over number of syllables bro. He was doing two syllables doesn't mean hes barely rhyming. In recent times, I'm yet to see a noob who rhymes better than him. For me its best to do 2 syllables with perdect rhymes than to do 4 syllables with slant rhymes. Using perfect rhymes shows how creative and witty you are.

Take for example, given this two lines.

a.
I spit sick when I'm rhyming with words/
Lyrically smoking, this nigga is on fire like pots/

b.
While I'm blazing, you guys flop/
Cos I'm lyrically smoking, this nigga is on fire like pots/

If you are to judge who was a better rhymer who will you go for? Rapper a or b?

'A' had more syllables with slanted rhymes. "B" with just two syllables but precise. I get ur point, but most of the rhymes we use here on FFR are slanted

smh!!! heyWIZY 0/5
Pfft!

goshikid:
smh!!! heyWIZY 0/5
Pfft!

Lolzz

Heywhizzy:
Warning shots at Mik

I don't care about ya ranking/ if not I would I've switched a long time ago to Jamaican/ bitches can't understand my format even if they ave PhD in accounting/ cos I leave u looking for d formula like members of mavin dynasty/ I'm example of alive nd "die na mik"/ I switch style at ease/ ur only achievement is balancing cup on your a$$/ so I can balance my cops on your a$$/ let them shoot d sh1t out of ya/ you need to be out of this world fast/ don't think you're special,you are an odd brat/ you are wack..call it data,cos that's d raw fact/ omo, u don suffer/ u've been fukked all your life even b4 you dey born/ lol,dat means u're flowerlesss like a moss/ na me dey run tinz from Warri,Benin to Lagos/ I no send u message,u no fit dey my mail box/ u wan be mod forever..u can never be fruitful/ except u born pikin wey abnormal..surely him brain go dudu/ no be say na mouth nd no be juju/ I gat talent pass Kim,niggaz be truthful/... errbody don see you finish sorta like your leaked se.x. tape/ so it's easy for anyone to disrespect,gay/ all your flows dey watery..you dey menstrute?/ it's clear for real men to see like an estate/ it's jes a freestyle/ get off me..imma leave your face with blisters/ u can't rate me high cos I don't do the b1tch style/ imma head to d future,punch u during your honeymoon, so all u see would be star/

quit wordplay for now, biko. Weytin be 'die na mik'?....
You have the ideas but you don't know how to execute them yet.
I suggest you read battle archives of d0pies who like toy use wordplays alot.

If i were you i'd play it like this...

"like . . . (compare it to something dynamic) I will make this diner meek when i place my mac in his mouth"

kr0ne:

'A' had more syllables with slanted rhymes. "B" with just two syllables but precise. I get ur point, but what most of the rhymes we use here on FFR are slanted

True talk sha - that's why I said rhyming perfectly demands more creativity and sharpness.

mikuz:


True talk sha - that's why I said rhyming perfectly demands more creativity and sharpness.

I'd say its more of ur accent. For me,I love getting the pronunciation of words ryt. So u cn be a better rhymer if u knw hw 2 transcribe nd pronounce ur sounds.

Creativity cmes in ur selection of words.

mikuz:


True talk sha - that's why I said rhyming perfectly demands more creativity and sharpness.

I'd say its more of ur accent. For me,I love getting the pronunciation of words ryt. So u cn be a better rhymer if u knw hw 2 transcribe nd pronounce ur sounds.

Creativity cmes in in ur selection of words.

advanced emcees use Slant rhymes mainly..not just perfect rhyming

Darkrebel:
advanced emcees use Slant rhymes mainly..not just perfect rhyming

In otherwords you prefer slant rhyming than perfertness?

In Text, There's nothing like perfect rhyming

LooNat11kk:
In Text, There's nothing like perfect rhyming

WTF . . . Is this a joke?

So if I do :

I'm back/
. . to kill this black/

back and black are not perfect rhymes?

Are you having the wrong conception about perfect rhymes?

Here Comes The Pain!!!