On Sunday service Praying, i paused coz God sent me a VISSION/
That its time to accomplish my Marital Mission/ ... that the beautiful girl α​t my 3:00 clock he personally Made my Wife/
i kept searching n watching till my heart fell off my body like crumbs of bread..// α​t first i Thought α​h was Dead//... On the altar bout to take the bread from the priest when I saw her, my heart came to life again, so I screamed Jesus! You the bread of life..//
.
.
(After service)
I quickly walked up to her, i was like Girl spare me a Minute, i need us to briefly Converse/
Firstly ur 'Beauty' is not of this 'Planet' ‎​am guessing you from Marz/
Marz? Ɣǝ̥§
coz the First time i saw you. I knew have found my Missing Ribs/
Am Tempted to 'Touch n Hug' you, i wanna Kiss Ya Lips/
They say life is sweet, but I doubted untill I met you sweetheart/
under the sun, u make me shiver, under the rain u make me sweat when I'm putting on my red hat//
I've loved and I've cried, I'll call you my onion/
just like I've made up my mind I'll listen to no other opinion/
Girl your Beauty is 'Driving me Crazy' right now am Just going Nuts/ (Jos/North) Like a Super Model, damn baby you too Hot/
.
.
See, Its obvious people don't see youlike i Do/
Ill trek for you from Lekki, through 3rd Mainland down to Mile 2/
on the 'Battlefield of Love' i'b there to Fight for You/
Those boiz? Thier 'Total Dissaster' when it comes to matters of the Heart/
they wud say they LOVE You, buh its ur Heart they want to Tear Apart/
Am no Reminisce buh my LOVE for you, its Too Much/
I wunt 'Hurt ur Feelings' i wouldn't even Do Such/
.
.
Girl i have a Confession!, are you Gonna Marry me?/
Be my Wife, Bear me Kids, together like Couples we shud 'Build' a Family/
(Her Response)
bro take it 'Slow' you moving Too Fast/. . Men are not to be 'Trusted' this days its had to see the Good Lads/
Like Emmygee I know ♈όϋ gat Rands N Naira' buh Love is not only bout Cool Cash/
Be patient lemme get home, rethink the matter, i'll Call or text you, i promise i Wunt Flash/ ...
.
.
(Α​t Home)
Then i got a Call From Babel/
That during their 'Youth Meeting' the Reverend Father said he Had a Vission/ Which says, 'Heaven' Lost an Angel/ Funny this sounds ℓιkε Mission/
Then i asked him, how does she look like? He said she's Six Feet Tall/
She so Qute, elegant, Her skin 'Firm' like a District Wall/
like a Deer her Feets are so Tender/
She neither fat nor Slender/
She dressed like a Queen/
To 'Cut' the story 'Short' ♈όϋ can't compare her Beauty to any mortal Beauty Queen/
.
.
then it dawned on me she's,
THE GIRL I MET IN THE CHURCH

Hehehehehe,oga mi you just taught me new pickup lines. Oya ka lo am woo looooooor!

ℓ̊ quickly walked up to her, ℓ̊ was ℓιkε Girl spare me
a Minute, ℓ̊ need us to briefly Converse/ ... Firstly ur
'Beauty' is not of this 'Planet' am guessing ♈όϋ from
Marz??/... Ɣǝ̥§ coz the First time ℓ̊ saw ♈όϋ. I knew
have found my Missing Ribs/ ... Am Tempted to
'Touch n Hug' ♈όϋ, i wanna Kiss Ya Lips/ ... They say
life is sweet, but I doubted untill I met you
sweetheart/ ... under the sun, u make me shiver,
under the rain u make me sweat when I'm putting
on my red hat// I've loved and I've cried, I'll call you
my onion/ ... just like I've made up my mind I'll listen
to no other opinion/ .... Girl your Beauty is 'Driving
me Crazy' i Just dey go Nuts/ (Jos/North) ... Like a
Super Model, damn baby ♈όϋ too Hot/

Your rhymes lol. And the way your lines end. Let me borrow GIYAZZ's words. This is "rap poetry". This is awesome Bruv keep it up!
Ayamlaykorn
.

laykorn:
Hehehehehe,oga mi you just taught me new pickup lines. Oya ka lo am woo looooooor!




Your rhymes lol. And the way your lines end. Let me borrow GIYAZZ's words. This is "rap poetry". This is awesome Bruv keep it up!
Ayamlaykorn
.

Bless Baba Mi!

I like this

elvisosho:
I like this

Tnx plz help broadcast

Cool
Try and remove those special characters ..
Simple and plain is way to go

PerfumeRepublik:
Cool
Try and remove those special characters ..
Simple and plain is way to go

Done!!

gottoboy:
On Sunday service Praying, i paused coz God sent me a VISSION/
That its time to accomplish my Marital Mission/ ... that the beautiful girl α t my 3:00 clock he personally Made my Wife/
i kept searching n watching till my heart fell off my body like crumbs of bread..// α t first i Thought α h was Dead//... On the altar bout to take the bread from the priest when I saw her, my heart came to life again, so I screamed Jesus! You the bread of life..//
.
.
(After service)
I quickly walked up to her, i was like Girl spare me a Minute, i need us to briefly Converse/
Firstly ur 'Beauty' is not of this 'Planet' ‎ am guessing you from Marz/
Marz? Ɣǝ̥§
coz the First time i saw you. I knew have found my Missing Ribs/
Am Tempted to 'Touch n Hug' you, i wanna Kiss Ya Lips/
They say life is sweet, but I doubted untill I met you sweetheart/
under the sun, u make me shiver, under the rain u make me sweat when I'm putting on my red hat//
I've loved and I've cried, I'll call you my onion/
just like I've made up my mind I'll listen to no other opinion/
Girl your Beauty is 'Driving me Crazy' right now am Just going Nuts/ (Jos/North) Like a Super Model, damn baby you too Hot/
.
.
See, Its obvious people don't see youlike i Do/
Ill trek for you from Lekki, through 3rd Mainland down to Mile 2/
on the 'Battlefield of Love' i'b there to Fight for You/
Those boiz? Thier 'Total Dissaster' when it comes to matters of the Heart/
they wud say they LOVE You, buh its ur Heart they want to Tear Apart/
Am no Reminisce buh my LOVE for you, its Too Much/
I wunt 'Hurt ur Feelings' i wouldn't even Do Such/
.
.
Girl i have a Confession!, are you Gonna Marry me?/
Be my Wife, Bear me Kids, together like Couples we shud 'Build' a Family/
(Her Response)
bro take it 'Slow' you moving Too Fast/. . Men are not to be 'Trusted' this days its had to see the Good Lads/
Like Emmygee I know ♈όϋ gat Rands N Naira' buh Love is not only bout Cool Cash/
Be patient lemme get home, rethink the matter, i'll Call or text you, i promise i Wunt Flash/ ...
.
.
(Α t Home)
Then i got a Call From Babel/
That during their 'Youth Meeting' the Reverend Father said he Had a Vission/ Which says, 'Heaven' Lost an Angel/ Funny this sounds ℓιkε Mission/
Then i asked him, how does she look like? He said she's Six Feet Tall/
She so Qute, elegant, Her skin 'Firm' like a District Wall/
like a Deer her Feets are so Tender/
She neither fat nor Slender/
She dressed like a Queen/
To 'Cut' the story 'Short' ♈όϋ can't compare her Beauty to any mortal Beauty Queen/
.
.
then it dawned on me she's,
THE GIRL I MET IN THE CHURCH

Hey bro to be frank with you, you're gonna be a good poet only if you could observe some few things. You can tell the story better only if you follow the pattern in which poems are arranged.

I can bet it with you that you've got the stuff in you but provided you can learn more from others. Don't know if you've heard about allpoetry.com before but you can Check here and see some of my poems: allpoetry.com/poem/by/Niftyrules
lest I forget you're also a good story teller.
Do have a nice day
Regards
Niftyrules.

Niftyrules:


Hey bro to be frank with you, you're gonna be a good poet only if you could observe some few things. You can tell the story better only if you follow the pattern in which poems are arranged.

I can bet it with you that you've got the stuff in you but provided you can learn more from others. Don't know if you've heard about allpoetry.com before but you can Check here and see some of my poems: allpoetry.com/poem/by/Niftyrules
lest I forget you're also a good story teller.
Do have a nice day
Regards
Niftyrules.

Tnx brov, ill do just that

gottoboy, hope by the time u start going international you will still be using this moniker so that I will know its u

mehn! boy you are too good, imma start putting my eyes on u
I guess this is one of the raps you were talking about, this is more more than a poem o

you and rapzino will make a good collabo

gottoboy:

Tnx brov, ill do just that

Dude.. you'll give Yung6ix a run for his money...Your rap is cool and entertaining

Aww!this is so cute

herald9:


Dude.. you'll give Yung6ix a run for his money...Your rap is cool and entertaining

Tnx bro, ii appreciate

Reyginus

Good one. But it is more like a rap. It is lacking in that poetic essence every poet identifies by heart.

Don't follow any pattern if you want to be average. Create your pattern. Diss the iambs and create your style. You must not write in aabb pattern.

Reyginus:
Good one. But it is more like a rap. It is lacking in that poetic essence every poet identifies by heart.

Don't follow any pattern if you want to be average. Create your pattern. Diss the iambs and create your style. You must not write in aabb pattern.

Aabb pattern?

misshoree:
Aww!this is so cute

Tnx maam

gottoboy:

Aabb pattern?

Yeah...
I quickly walked up to her, i was like Girl spare
me a Minute, i need us to briefly Converse/a


Firstly ur 'Beauty' is not of this 'Planet' am
guessing you from Marz/a

Marz? Ɣǝ̥§
coz the First time i saw you. I knew have found
my Missing Ribs/b

Am Tempted to 'Touch n Hug' you, i wanna Kiss
Ya Lips/b

The first and second words rhyme similarly and that makes them 'a' lines while the third and fourth rhymes similarly and different from the first and second so we have a 'b'. You don't really need this normal style of rhyming in poetry if you want to be different and too good. You can do without even rhyming or you reinvent the rhyme scheme.

Reyginus:
Yeah...
I quickly walked up to her, i was like Girl spare
me a Minute, i need us to briefly Converse/a


Firstly ur 'Beauty' is not of this 'Planet' am
guessing you from Marz/a

Marz? Ɣǝ̥§
coz the First time i saw you. I knew have found
my Missing Ribs/b

Am Tempted to 'Touch n Hug' you, i wanna Kiss
Ya Lips/b

Ơ̴̴̴͡ º°˚˚°ºoo now ii get the gist! It depends onn thee source of Ūя̲̅ inspiration/mood, and time limit, as a poetic rapper, my rhyme scheme came exactly from a rapping angle (Flow). . . Still working O̶̲̥̅Ϟ a permanent style though

gottoboy:

Ơ̴̴̴͡ º°˚˚°ºoo now ii get the gist! It depends onn thee source of Ūя̲̅ inspiration/mood, and time limit, as a poetic rapper, my rhyme scheme came exactly from a rapping angle (Flow). . . Still working O̶̲̥̅Ϟ a permanent style though

Okay.

Wow!!!
That's impressive.
With a little polishing here and there,
You'll make an Author someday.

All the best bud.

Buqqui:
Wow!!!
That's impressive.
With a little polishing here and there,
You'll make an Author someday.

All the best bud.

Tnx мα'am

gottoboy:

Tnx мα'am

Tony, where you see Ma'm
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

Tony, where you see Ma'm
Ayamlaykorn

Hang Over

AfricanApple:
gottoboy, hope by the time u start going international you will still be using this moniker so that I will know its u

Ɣǝ̥§! Buh ill have an Alter Ego
♡⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡»̶̥A̶̲̥̅̊nthonƔ⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡»̶̥♡ iis my other ᶰ̲ᵃ̲ᵐ̲ᵉ̲ a.k.a TonniBlaze

AfricanApple:

mehn! boy you are too good, imma start putting my eyes on u

Αм already putting myy eyes O̶̲̥̅Ϟ you, infact αм writing you 2love verses for starters

AfricanApple:

I guess this is one of the raps you were talking about, this is more more than a poem o

Its not Ơ̴̴̴͡ º°˚˚°ºoo, its just a free verse, this is rap poetry a little bit beyond Poem

AfricanApple:

you and rapzino will make a good collabo

Rapzino His he O̶̲̥̅Ϟ NL? Den ii need to get intouch with him

gottoboy:

Ɣǝ̥§! Buh ill have an Alter Ego
♡⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡»̶̥A̶̲̥̅̊nthonƔ⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡»̶̥♡ iis my other ᶰ̲ᵃ̲ᵐ̲ᵉ̲ a.k.a TonniBlaze


Αм already putting myy eyes O̶̲̥̅Ϟ you, infact αм writing you 2love verses for starters


Its not Ơ̴̴̴͡ º°˚˚°ºoo, its just a free verse, this is rap poetry a little bit beyond Poem


Rapzino His he O̶̲̥̅Ϟ NL? Den ii need to get intouch with him

tonniblaze. no pp

oh really? I can't wait to hear them

hmm

yep, he is
happy happy new year

AfricanApple:
tonniblaze. no pp

oh really? I can't wait to hear them

hmm

yep, he is
happy happy new year

Same to You

gottoboy:

Ɣǝ̥§! Buh ill have an Alter Ego
♡⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡»̶̥A̶̲̥̅̊nthonƔ⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡»̶̥♡ iis my other ᶰ̲ᵃ̲ᵐ̲ᵉ̲ a.k.a TonniBlaze


Αм already putting myy eyes O̶̲̥̅Ϟ you, infact αм writing you 2love verses for starters


Its not Ơ̴̴̴͡ º°˚˚°ºoo, its just a free verse, this is rap poetry a little bit beyond Poem


Rapzino His he O̶̲̥̅Ϟ NL? Den ii need to get intouch with him

sup man?

Rapzino:
sup man?

Dude wasup?

gottoboy:

Dude wasup?

i'm good and ya?

Rapzino:
i'm good and ya?

Gooder, do you rap?