Laykorn, kindly point out mistakes in every poem I post. You can do that on this thread sha, maybe after the whole thing.
I will appreciate that a lot.
I just write straight from the heart, I really don't know all the rules to follow.

standd:



Thread is up. Check your mentions.

I've posted.
(Calling out) Laykorn Next pls!

Laykorn, we are done with the first. Next one pls.
EverestDeBliu, can you pls tell me your thoughts about death?

standd:
Laykorn, we are done with the first. Next one pls.
EverestDeBliu, can you pls tell me your thoughts about death?

Death; man's limit.
I hate to think I'll oneday go below.
I hate d sight of blood.
I can't even watch when one is being injected.
Maybe I'm faint hearted.

standd:
Laykorn, we are done with the first. Next one pls.
EverestDeBliu, can you pls tell me your thoughts about death?

I've posted for the next round.
Its Romance. Lol
Ayamlaykorn

EverestdeBliu:

Death; man's limit.
I hate to think I'll oneday go below.
I hate d sight of blood.
I can't even watch when one is being injected.
Maybe I'm faint hearted.

Death is an equaliser. Inevitable and swift.

Everestdebliu... you rock.
I love your last update.

Now, tell me..what do you think of love?

standd:


Death is an equaliser. Inevitable and swift.

But know this,"No man really dies,once one is born, he/she lives forever; transcending to d endless days when the eyes gets shut on earth".

standd:
Everestdebliu... you rock.
I love your last update.

Now, tell me..what do you think of love?

Round 3 check
Ayamlaykorn

standd:
Everestdebliu... you rock.
I love your last update.

Now, tell me..what do you think of love?

Lol
Love?,u can't luv two persons @ a time. Never!,...one4one.

I done post 3rd round
Una dey here dey loff ish oda
Smh
Ayamlaykorn

EverestdeBliu:

Lol
Love?,u can't luv two persons @ a time. Never!,...one4one.

Lol
You can love two people at a time Jor. But it has to be pure/Agape love.
As per the kind of love being touted on the streets in the name of relationships, I don't buy it.

standd:



Lol .

Babe u're indeed killing it,so much words in few minutes?.
(Whispers...check d rules again. Max20lines).

standd:



Lol
You can love two people at a time Jor. But it has to be pure/Agape love.
As per the kind of love being touted on the streets in the name of relationships, I don't buy it.

Guys, do you wanna be scored ?
Na my own amateur head I go use o.
Cc: EverestDeBliu
Ayamlaykorn

EverestdeBliu:

Babe u're indeed killing it,so much words in few minutes?.
(Whispers...check d rules again. Max20lines).

Thanks dear. I just edited. Pls do the same cos you quoted the other one.

laykorn:

Guys, do you wanna be scored ?
Na my own amateur head I go use o.
Cc: EverestDeBliu
Ayamlaykorn

I really don't care about the scores, just do as you wish since you are the boss here.
Thanks for putting this together.
Everestdebliu...thanks too.

Neither do I. Twas fun...kinda
Standd , I like ur pen or was it pencil u used?
Me nah slate o!

Where do I submit my poem?...

Love

You're ever present in ma heart..
I can't seem to put a limit to the thoughts of you..
If love is blind then I can as well be a bat..
I see it clearly with no doubts, even thru d thickest dew..

I think love is a feeling that cannot be defined..
One of my billion explanations for it is holding your hand..
It's an expression that can never be confined..
Mere seeing you smile could pin me where I stand..

Love has had many sweet stories told..
But ours has more than a sweet story, it's magical
I would just hold you tight and watch it unfold..
We're forming a strong bond, yeah, we're radicals..

Bloods upon bloods.
Wailing and emotional tragedies
Sadism cloaked in Religious mumbo jumbo
Amplification of corruption
Not only by the unrighteous
But also by the gods of men
Disguise in Man of God
Sheer and blunt injustice
Counted and still counting
The numbers of the Victims
Those who pay their tax
But with cold blood death they are served
The blood of the innocents
Spilled on daily basis
Without remorse,without sympathy
Impoverisation of the rich land
There they find joy
Corruption of the highest order
That answers their yearning
Justice strangulation,their hobbies
Economic degradation, their want
On saturdays evenings they are seeing
THIEFs!,dancing their loots
They forget schools need books
Hospitals crying for drugs
And pedestrians sleep on bridges
I will make your roads motor able
I will empower the youths
I will send poverty away from your land
I will eradicate corruption
Lies from prolific liars!

I keep asking amid TEARS,
Why am I here?
Here where justice suffers
Why am I here?
Here where stealing aint corruption.
Why am I here?
Here where Minority sack the Majority
Why am I here?
Here where terrorists walk and patriots die
Why am I here?
Here where men in collars deal in arms
Why am I here?
Here where CERTIFIED THIEFS rule
Why am I here?
Here where crispy aroma can't be resisted
Why am I here?
Here where unclothedness and immorality reign among youths
Why am I here?
Here where Religion affirms a man good or bad
Why am I here?
Like a cock crows in the morning
These I keep asking.

Hello NPC....... Happy New year to you all..... I haven't been around lately for a good reason I hope u understood when I wrote u this....

Sleep evades me
(Odukoya A. Adeola)

Oh! My world crumbles
The pain tingles
This depair i need to elude
But sleep evades me

My crucial bone aches
My brain sheds like dusty cakes
All will be taken by slumber i thought
But sleep evades me

Joy pervades my mind
To darkness i became blind
Oh! Lots of fruit to pluck at dawn
But sleep evades me

Thoughts of battles fought visible
Sound of victory from afar audible
The night a veil between my medal and i
But sleep evades me

Sleep evades me; for joy overwhelms
Living me stuck in these fency realms
Sleep evades me; for sorrow lingers on
Only in drifting off does peace hides

oh! I need to escape this torture
Oh! Behind the night is my future
Night! I need to get out of this fog
But sleep evades me.

Even if I've not been able to contribute, the poetry club dwels within my mind....
Without but within
Not at hither range
But pervade like fart

Don't mind my analogy just miss u guys

AD30LA:
Hello NPC....... Happy New year to you all..... I haven't been around lately for a good reason I hope u understood when I wrote u this....

Sleep evades me
(Odukoya A. Adeola)

Oh! My world crumbles
The pain tingles
This depair i need to elude
But sleep evades me

My crucial bone aches
My brain sheds like dusty cakes
All will be taken by slumber i thought
But sleep evades me

Joy pervades my mind
To darkness i became blind
Oh! Lots of fruit to pluck at dawn
But sleep evades me

Thoughts of battles fought visible
Sound of victory from afar audible
The night a veil between my medal and i
But sleep evades me

Sleep evades me; for joy overwhelms
Living me stuck in these fency realms
Sleep evades me; for sorrow lingers on
Only in drifting off does peace hides

oh! I need to escape this torture
Oh! Behind the night is my future
Night! I need to get out of this fog
But sleep evades me.

Even if I've not been able to contribute, the poetry club dwels within my mind....
Without but within
Not at hither range
But pervade like fart

Don't mind my analogy just miss u guys

Thanks so much for this AD3OLA. After the NCPC, I think this is the first time I'm seeing your moniker.
Ayamlaykorn

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laykorn:
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Okay, so what's up?

standd:



Okay, so what's up?

Yeah. Yeah, I had in mind to organise something like what you and Everest did the other time. The picture will be there for a week and the post with the highest number of likes gets a 200 recharge. The second gets a 100.
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

Yeah. Yeah, I had in mind to organise something like what you and Everest did the other time. The picture will be there for a week and the post with the highest number of likes gets a 200 recharge. The second gets a 100.
Ayamlaykorn

Lol.. Pls do, it will be fun reading.

standd:


Lol.. Pls do, it will be fun reading.

Yeah, there goes the problem. People like you, who'll make the best entries won't want to be a part of it, because you don't really need the prize. You gerrit?
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

Yeah, there goes the problem. People like you, who'll make the best entries won't want to be a part of it, because you don't really need the prize. You gerrit?
Ayamlaykorn

And which Oracle told you I don't need the price When last did I recharge my phone kwanu. What we will do is donate more to make the card up to 1k.
And I'll surely be part of it if I can. It's not about winning na, but reading beautiful poetry.

Laykorn.. there's something else oh.
You know how I write poems You even call me rebel.
Will you be kind enough to do a write up about the rules of writing poetry ( If there are rules sha) or what is required of a poet. Like language, rhyme, stanzas, punctuations, whatever, whatever

If you can do it, just put it up as a thread or even mail it to me. I really need it. Please.

*Or is there a thread for this already? Link(s)?

standd:
Laykorn.. there's something else oh.
You know how I write poems You even call me rebel.
Will you be kind enough to do a write up about the rules of writing poetry ( If there are rules sha) or what is required of a poet. Like language, rhyme, stanzas, punctuations, whatever, whatever

If you can do it, just put it up as a thread or even mail it to me. I really need it. Please.

*Or is there a thread for this already? Link(s)?

Google should be your friend not laykorn. And lay.korn what on Earth is going on about NPC assignment thread? That thread looks so dry with our poems hanging there like loose ends...