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Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 10:14am On Dec 27, 2014 |
Standd & EverestDeBliu Script on the picture below. Be short and precise. Be as creative as possible. Minimum - 5 lines Maximum - 20 lines Judging Criteria Creativity - 2 points Literary Devices - 2 points Grammatical Accuracy - 1 point 2 Likes
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Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 10:17am On Dec 27, 2014 |
There's a burning car. Script! Goodluck Ayamlaykorn 1 Like |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 10:22am On Dec 27, 2014 |
Autumn Flames. Life itself would seep away... as the cold flames of time plays with fate. It was but yesterday, Mama went on a journey- the morning was cold and the night, mnemonic. The absurd complexity of yearning for ways to stay. Yet, the flames raved and raved, as... life leaked into eternity. And mama left. Her car, a minions grave. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by EverestdeBliu(m): 10:40am On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd:Man's struggle's futile. Engulfed in the inferno, Is a dream of many miles, Breath paused, Pulse ceased, Purse razed, Sweats of countless days, Dried up without a trace. From the flame I heard a shrieking yell; "No death is peaceful,to mankind go tell!". |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 10:51am On Dec 27, 2014 |
We're going for three rounds. Romance lol Next Ayamlaykorn 1 Like
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Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 11:14am On Dec 27, 2014 |
On the wings of timeless shroud. Like the southern wind, you gave my soul a soothing song. Those times, I will never forget. The fierce thumping of fiery desires, ...fluttering deeper than the waters of the pond of Azalea. Let me follow, and nurture, build! Glow, burn- and wrap my being, around the lushness of your love. We will live, we will love. We will make the sweetest melodies, in more ways than one. 1 Like |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by EverestdeBliu(m): 11:20am On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd:Let us make merry an' sing, no word,the mouth'd bring; But let our hearts mime as in a duet, And resurgent the time from where we met. All through the night,let's do this jig; Quickly and slowly, let's begin with a kick. Let our eyes be shut, Ears eclipsed with frost, Let no one come in-between, For we want not a spleen. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by JigsawKillah(m): 11:25am On Dec 27, 2014 |
#grabs a seat 1 Like |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 11:26am On Dec 27, 2014 |
Round 3 Nature Ayamlaykorn 1 Like
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Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 11:42am On Dec 27, 2014 |
Green...A wish. Ah! My true colours are not in my ramblings. I could twist and sway to natures urgings. Green is blissful serenity, it is why I am here. It is in the dew-drops of my mornings. And the gentle-wistfulness of my nights. The sad-globy tears for all that I yearn. My songs! The sweet nostalgia- bursting from the flowers in the rain. Nature- paint me black...from my Fathers' loins. ...and blue, let me take each day, and let the sun watch. When the sun shines on my smile, and the moon, darkens the tide. I will flow into the ambience- Silence! Quiet! |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by EverestdeBliu(m): 11:51am On Dec 27, 2014 |
Jigsaw I see u |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by EverestdeBliu(m): 12:04pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
#heaves a deep breathe |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by EverestdeBliu(m): 12:07pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd:Why spin when you can't move? Wilst the wind have you removed? Jittery an' stuck in your own stalk, Listens as the wind whirl an' talk. Let the birds with their beaks kiss, Or let the bees that buzz,tease. I want you to move,not just spin; Anyway you can,just make me grin. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 12:08pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: Lol ![]() It's just a word play. And thanks for honouring the invite. We will do this again someday, but we will have to freestyle. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by EverestdeBliu(m): 12:12pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd:Did I really heave the breathe? (Giggles) hope to be avail when d 'someday' creeps in. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 12:18pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: What's your signature about? |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by EverestdeBliu(m): 12:21pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd:Fishers of poets...just to link intending poets to the NairalandPoetryClub. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by joseph1832(m): 12:31pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
Marvelous! Bloody marvelous!. Impressed is what I am!. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 12:54pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
laykorn:I wanna battle you bro |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 12:58pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: Oh, okay. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 2:22pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd: I am marvelled. So I wonder, I can only wonder. Great work Physicist. ![]() ![]() Valar Dohaeris! |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 2:24pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
Scrypt:Scrypt, where you travel go ![]() Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 2:26pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 3:01pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
Scrypt:Why I go follow you ![]() You be girl ![]() I'd gladly follow standd anywhere ![]() But you, why? Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 3:08pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
laykorn: All the best then. ![]() |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 4:09pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
Scrypt: Serve, we must. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 4:12pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
laykorn: Lol ![]() On behalf of Everestdeblui and myself, we say thank you for putting the word-play together. Erm, maybe you should battle someone yourself, on this thread. I thirst for more poems today ![]() Or match me with another person, maybe Script ![]() |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 4:37pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd:Lol. Tell someone to post a picture. I VS U Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 4:38pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
standd: Now I see why I didn't get this mention. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 4:39pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
Scrypt:Script, be the judge now. I'll modify. You post the pictures and set the rules. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 4:43pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
laykorn: Men, I'd love to. However, I can't manage it in my present state. Long story. |
Re: Standd And Everestdebliu - Word Battle by Nobody: 4:45pm On Dec 27, 2014 |
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