teddybiyasi:


painment

Pain? Say wetin happen? Say you rap pass me or wetin?

Emaprince & Kr0ne, when una dey battle sef? Una just dey avoid each other since. What would it take to get you in the ring?

Kr0ne, after the KOP loss, I tried to get my hands to pen something down, but time hasn't allowed me. But, here's a short piece I just did now. My first bars after my loss. I'm not sure it makes any sense.


I am a poet......a vet/ Try that shit again /imma make you regret / My lines be making rebels repent / and cos these haters are faggits/ my voice be sounding like Carey's to em/ making their dicks erect.

I came from PFR section / cos things there and here ain't the same/ found this game so strange/ but, here today/ I'll be giving ya'll some mentions/ to do your pot bellied rhymes caesarian section./ do ya'll some surgery/cos my surge so real.

Rkrkrkkrkrrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkr/

Ya you heard it, gunshots/ Next reformation, catholic rebels come church/ yo-rebel? / coward, you wearing bumshots/ Your dark too and your legs ridden with polka dots/ and the fact that you're 666/ confirms my suspicions/that you ride on Satan's ccock/

Hey look.

My lines be wack cos I'm a newbie/ your trap say poets are sissies/ but this still got you thinking suicide Pussssy/ I see you hanging on the ceiling.

My bars ain't got wordplay/ cos I do gun-play/ you can't find my punchlines/ cos ionn punch with my lines/ I kill with 'em die/ cos your brain so small, you can't see my kill-lines/ until you magnify.

Respect to kr0ne/ nigga got me a microphone/ told me to spit bars, 8 for a go/ But T.fuze whooped me/ and I'm sure he lost hope/ I'm back now nigg get me a MEGAPHONE./


Ayamlaykorn

Cc:
Kr0ne
Sosiqdude
JigsawKillah
GIYAZZ
gottoboy

hey im new here. What do i have to do to get known.

Was that @ mikuz recording done in english or swahili I couldn't hear any other word than panadol and procold

Ibime, I've gone so rusty now I don't think I can spar with even Captainflash. When the inspiration come back we go battle


Laykorn, that's nice! U even did a couple of punches, thumbs up! But try using one particular rhyme scheme for each bar, eg '

Bla bla bla eject/ bla bla bla select/ bla bla bla reject/ bla bla bla repent. . .that's a bar

Every line must rhyme before u proceed to another bar. That's how Ksslib started, now he's a pro. Thumbs up!

kr0ne:
Ibime, I've gone so rusty now I don't think I can spar with even Captainflash. When the inspiration come back we go battle


Laykorn, that's nice! U even did a couple of punches, thumbs up! But try using one particular rhyme scheme for each bar, eg '

Bla bla bla eject/ bla bla bla select/ bla bla bla reject/ bla bla bla repent. . .that's a bar

Every line must rhyme before u proceed to another bar. That's how Ksslib started, now he's a pro. Thumbs up!

Thanks brother.
I'm doing morrrrrrrrrrrrre!
Ayamlaykorn

Akin1212:
Was that @ mikuz recording done in english or swahili I couldn't hear any other word than panadol and procold

Lol I go reduce my pace for next recording.

Mikuz audio la cool Ūя̲̅ fallouts n̶̲̥̅̊åå small, next time you'll do better

Some of my old tracks
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cdn10.hulkshare.com/dev10/0/008/321/0008321532.fid/clique.mp3?key=f09ea583ef0033dbdc1ac0c78ce64ebf&dl=1
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cdn12.hulkshare.com/dev12/0/008/321/0008321536.fid/pound_cake.mp3?key=31e273237b36edef915b476bfe9a2ade&dl=1
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cdn10.hulkshare.com/dev10/0/008/321/0008321535.fid/the_city.mp3?key=3e8cde4fbc93138d94fd9f6f08c92ba7&dl=1
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www.360nobs.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/Joshua-Base-Vibes.mp3

gottoboy:
Mikuz audio la cool Ūя̲̅ fallouts n̶̲̥̅̊åå small, next time you'll do better

Thanks.

Darkrebel666:


I could barely hear what you were rapping.. you weren't pronouncing the words correctly.. your pace was too fast and your accent was wack ....

He needs lessons on how to deliver bars with emphasis on the last words.
That igbo accent is something else, its too conk. Mikuz, come and attend 04kaa school of rap so u can learn the right way. if u continue that way u will turn out wack. like other naija emcees..

who has 04kaa undertaker audio diss to razor blee g here, Ibime MIkuz if u have it please upload it
come and hear 04ka rap on a beat so u can hear how to deliver bars on a beat properly.

kr0ne:
There's nothing wrong with Mikuz's audio except breath control.

breath control thats another major Mikuz problem, thank God its Mikuz friend KrOne that said it.....so he wont say we are biased again.

coogar:




na igbotic accent.
most of them can't swag words. no retreat no surrender becomes no letleat no sullenda

some igbo emcees dey deliver bars o,....only a few of them understand hiphop tho. and the art of lyrical delivery.

ToyinDipo:


From the link he pasted. On the page, click this link: Mik dissing.mp3

on which page? Nd i can see any link.

coogar:


stop laughing - it is your fault.
how can you look at a grown man like mikuz and say his accent is igbotic and his cadence is 1/1000?

it's so unfair.

But Darkrebel said the truth,...mikuz was way below average ... i mean by now mikuz u shuld have graduated from the average class to something better.. if u hear ibime rap, u will appreciate true skills ibime to mikuz is like Biggie to Vic-O

.who here wants to hear 04ka rap in Yoruba,..lemme show u how to rap in your local language and still sound janded and dopee. !
If i get 3 yes, am gonna upload something in vernacular for yall..so mikuz can learn how to rap with a local accent properly

Darkrebel666:


No Flow...no rhythm.. its was like witches in his village was pursuing him....

I said it that Mikuz is not a rapper
.he's only a textcee ..Ibime, didn't you teach your son how to flow and pronounce words properly?

hahahahahahahahahha. Pls give me the link.

Darkrebel666:


Am very childish for telling you that your accent is wack?
you must be mad
have you forgotten that you said only newbies see criticisms as hate?
Sensitive PPunani ..
you look like Okonjo Iweala's Pusssy lips...

On a more serious note MIKUZ,......Darkrebel is not hating on you at all, he is telling you the real truth, u sound really horrible and terrible...
I think i understand what ur problem is, remember i am a hiphop lecturer...shey u will enrol in 04ka school of rap.,? seriously i will teach you how to rap free of charge. should i open the thread? am not playing o, i will teach u free of charge...... Mikuz You are in the early stage of rap development, u need to be tutored correctly so u wont miss the right road. like other wack naija emcees.


The problem you have is the problem secondary school rappers have when they have just started rapping ...Breath control, basic flow, proper delivery, when to say what and when to drop what line....... ibime wiill testify to this.

have u noticed that some naija rappers never ever blow up? that because they werent taught hiphop the right way, just like the stage you are in now.

Oh My f*cking goodness! Hahahahahahahahahahaha...
What was mikuz saying? Is that how you sound? Hahahahahah. Nna ehn, mikuz, hw markeyti?

he was sounding like one of those ALABA marketers. ... Rotflmao

04kaa:


breath control thats another major Mikuz problem, thank God its Mikuz friend KrOne that said it.....so he wont say we are biased again.

Mehn you know my lyrics are superior/
Other niggas should be feeling too inferior/
I'm a giant . . i'm the hardest negro/
So everything you say don't move me like transfer windows/
Ya a maga dude . . against Giyazz niggas laughed at you/
My grenade ll split ya fecal matter, cos when I make the 'pin pop' its not 'Baba blue'/
He's just a sucker/ one shot and Ill blast his guts asunder/
. . Its not a 'swear word' . . but Ill really kill him when 'Murd a 4kaa'!/
This cat's lacking/ I smack and crack him/
. . but if he tries to follow the crowd, Ill chop his legs . . so he won't jump on the bandwagon!/


So Ogbeni dey go . .
i no do your parol.

Darkrebel666:


No Flow...no rhythm.. its was like witches in his village was pursuing him....

I said it that Mikuz is not a rapper
.he's only a textcee ..Ibime, didn't you teach your son how to flow and pronounce words properly?

hahahahahaha.... I know what he was trying to do... He wanted to flip lmfao

mikuz:


hehehe . .

Yo I blind ya eye so you can't 'See I' like 'Ike' initials'/
Have my punches rip your dentals/ . . cos you're faker than Buhari's credentials/
I'm carring metals/ to harm this fella/
So when I leave 'Pro cold' its not 'panadol extra'/
Darkrebel is a massive loser/ acting a bi^tch like Kat D' Luna/
Ima let my Kala kill him, cos I'm known to 'Cap teens' like 'Army troopers'/
yo Mik is drugs like M.I's mixtapes/
Rappers their rhymes are bitchmade/
I ball like Boco Juniors/ so fu^ck you minions/
I'm damn iller/
I slam niggas with more freestyles than smart swimmers/
And you rappers are bitches like Catrina/
Battle me? ima grab a metal/ to part ya navel/
. . and go Wrongturn on you if you act a rebel/

Mikuz, The bars itself were not actually bad ..the major problem is that u do not understand breath control, and the art of flowing and basic delivery.....you shouldnt rap this lyrics in a fast way. it should be on a slow rhythm 4bar rhythm , 4metronome bar rhythm ...... if i have time , i can spit it on a beat for u, so u will understand what i am saying..... This is constructive criticism , so dont think darkrebel or none of them cats is hating on u.

04kaa:


Mikuz, The bars itself were not actually bad ..the major problem is that u do not understand breath control, and the art of flowing and basic delivery.....you shouldnt rap this lyrics in a fast way. it should be on a slow rhythm 4bar rhythm , 4metronome bar rhythm ...... if i have time , i can spit it on a beat for u, so u will understand what i am saying..... This is constructive criticism , so dont think darkrebel or none of them cats is hating on u.

This is the real constructive critisim. What others are doing is pure hatred. Anyway thanks. I appreciate this alot.

I don't seem to be able post links . What's going on?

mikuz:


Mehn you know my lyrics are superior/
Other niggas should be feeling too inferior/

. . Its not a 'swear word' . . but Ill really kill him when 'Murd a 4kaa'!/
So Ogbeni dey go . .
i no do your parol.

This is the problem with little kids of nowadays, when u give them constructive criticism , they feel u hating on em..and get on the defensive. Darkrebel lets leave him alone , he doesnt want to learn or develop, maybe Mikuz is just too ashamed that we are telling him in public.

Mikuz, word of advice, i was worse than u lyrically when i started rapping,...ibime can testify to that.. The likes of sauron and the niggaas back then were telling me to up my game. i was doing strong head just like u are doing now, but trust me , i took their constructive criticism to heart....and worked on it...if u hear me now in 2015.. u will not belief the level of shiit i be spitting on beats. so Mikuz take these constructive criticisms like a man, no one wants to see u turn out wack.. we all wanna see a Mikuz who is a nairaland alumni spit that real shiit. like DOuble K , lyrical and the PH cats do. This is constructive criticism dont see it as hate comment or nothing of that nature.

04kaa:


But Darkrebel said the truth,...mikuz was way below average ... i mean by now mikuz u shuld have graduated from the average class to something better.. if u hear ibime rap, u will appreciate true skills ibime to mikuz is like Biggie to Vic-O

.who here wants to hear 04ka rap in Yoruba,..lemme show u how to rap in your local language and still sound janded and dopee. !
If i get 3 yes, am gonna upload something in vernacular for yall..so mikuz can learn how to rap with a local accent properly

I just didn't pay attention to audio. I just concentrated on text full time bro.

So mikuz is 22 .... I don laugh tire for here. I'm sheding tears right now.

04kaa:


This is the problem with little kids of nowadays, when u give them constructive criticism , they feel u hating on em..and get on the defensive. Darkrebel lets leave him alone , he doesnt want to learn or develop, maybe Mikuz is just too ashamed that we are telling him in public.

Mikuz, word of advice, i was worse than u lyrically when i started rapping,...ibime can testify to that.. The likes of sauron and the niggaas back then were telling me to up my game. i was doing strong head just like u are doing now, but trust me , i took their constructive criticism to heart....and worked on it...if u hear me now in 2015.. u will not belief the level of shit i be spitting on beats. so Mikuz take these constructive criticisms like a man, no one wants to see u turn out wack.. we all wanna see a Mikuz who is a nairaland alumni spit that real shit. like DOuble K , lyrical and the PH cats do. This is constructive criticism dont see it as hate comment or nothing of that nature.

My bad, no problem. We cool.

mikuz:


I just didn't pay attention to audio. I just concentrated on text full time bro.

thats good to hear, u should pay attention to audio..its realer than text... U are very good text wise.. at least from what i have seen u spit, u understand lyricism and the art of punchlining and u even deliver well in ur Text battles... U just need to pay more attention to spitting on beats... for real... shey u will learn it on ur own? i mean there are lot of dope cats to listen to.. online. that spit crackk on a beat..
I like ur positive attiude mikuz... if we conversate this way., we no go dey fight unnecessarily.

ELYMAXiimus:
So mikuz is 22 .... I don laugh tire for here. I'm sheding tears right now.

Elymaxiimus, age is not a factor in hiphop, i mean i have seen niggaas below 18 spit that real shit and deliver on beats properly. I listen to everything hiphop....and trust me i have seen young niggaas spit real shiit..especially americans. even young niggaas like lil jojo, P rico and co , they spit real shit..even tho they do drill music in chiraq..which is considerered more trap like than real hiphop....

04kaa:


thats good to hear, u should pay attention to audio..its realer than text... U are very good text wise.. at least from what i have seen u spit, u understand lyricism and the art of punchlining and u even deliver well in ur Text battles... U just need to pay more attention to spitting on beats... for real... shey u will learn it on ur own? i mean there are lot of dope cats to listen to.. online. that spit crackk on a beat..
I like ur positive attiude mikuz... if we conversate this way., we no go dey fight unnecessarily.

Yeah for real bro.

04kaa:


Elymaxiimus, age is not a factor in hiphop, i mean i have seen niggaas below 18 spit that real shit and deliver on beats properly. I listen to everything hiphop....and trust me i have seen young niggaas spit real shiit..especially americans. even young niggaas like lil jojo, P rico and co , they spit real shit..even tho they do drill music in chiraq..which is considerered more trap like than real hiphop....

Leave that nigga make yarn better stuff. Have you asked him abour his audio? You don see where person wey never born dey laugh person wey get pikin?