Gladyys:
I'm testing dis cretins/to knw who can best me in texting/
I c 'non',dis 'sisters' claimin men are full of lies,dirty n smelling!!!
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D slugs sent out/dis slots went 'south'/some clips 2 d 'east',wich hit thugs,men,touts/survivors gon 'north',I head 2 d streets n sort dem out/nw m obj,a ruler 4rm d 'west'...n my rule is 2 harsh 4 d heathens bearing!!!
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I love slayin pr!cks at times/buh 2day m just playin wit ma rhymes/be saying sh!t dat rhymes/does dis rhyme?disgracin d icks like lime!!!
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Ah aint throwin jabs/nor showin yab/doin my thing without cloning bars/somethin dey call biting,ah aint doing that!
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A sucker is born every moment/a fuker it becomes when it knw men/a gay or bytch it'd turn d very moment/reason ah aint punchin dis new borns,dey'l catch my fist n suck my thumb d very moment....



Just rhymes!!!wack me tho i can mock dykes!!!
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Where is krone?

When did you learn to compose multis?

I'm the real king

Back then,I was told my flow boring/ I could've deactivated my account but I feared being a nobody/ I took time to pen bars for days nd go hungry/ but now my bars are so lovely/
I'm dat cool brother/ the best rap could offer/ everybody bringing forth things to d table,mine is much accepted..my food hotter/ nd better..I'm "killing this academy" but "still show love..I'm a "school mother"/
That's just two bar..yet it's obvious Iam king/ I'm Tarzan,judge of the jungle nd lion king/ I rule you animals..u ain't happy with that..no wonder you prefer to lye on me/ but the truth lies in my heart so I won't quit..I'll keep punching with my iron fist/
Some niggaz are planning a coup..they're peeping my throne/ I'm talking of mikuz nd pro/ I'm the real king..they just kidding like goat/ for kingship,I'm the nigga winning the gold..both,can battle for silver nd bronze/
but if they insist nd boast..imma visit each bro/ nd tickle his soul..put pimples on bones/ finish dem both/ get cane nd a "Dr dre"..so it'll be confirmed the "beating in vogue"/
It ain't something new/ I mean beating these funny fools/ make sure their bones,flesh and liver get spoilt..ain't talking rotten foods/ if they still feel lively..imma attack with boring tools/
My mission is to oppress their ways/ leaving them bothered each day/ till they can't compete..claiming everybody na king for im own lane/ like they're olamide/
I can relegate them to truck pushing/ but if they wish me something similar..that's me shopping in a posh boutique/ rap knows,I'm the boss you need/ to drive this ish to something real/ without me in it,it's a trash can,there is nothing clean/
Yo,you're viewing nd reading/ don't stop at telling me this is the best I've ever written/ cos this is actually the best bars in twenty fifteen/ even down to text rap beginning /

Ibime:


When did you learn to compose multis?

Been reading battles lately,n I just understood d concept of composing multis,hope I'm doing good?

Gladyys:

Been reading battles lately,n I just understood d concept of composing multis,hope I'm doing good?

You doing great!

Ibime:


You doing great!

Wow! Thanks

Gladyys:
I'm testing dis cretins/to knw who can best me in texting/
I c 'non',dis 'sisters' claimin men are full of lies,dirty n smelling!!!
.
.
.
D slugs sent out/dis slots went 'south'/some clips 2 d 'east',wich hit thugs,men,touts/survivors gon 'north',I head 2 d streets n sort dem out/nw m obj,a ruler 4rm d 'west'...n my rule is 2 harsh 4 d heathens bearing!!!
.
.
.
I love slayin pr!cks at times/buh 2day m just playin wit ma rhymes/be saying sh!t dat rhymes/does dis rhyme?disgracin d icks like lime!!!
.
.
.
Ah aint throwin jabs/nor showin yab/doin my thing without cloning bars/somethin dey call biting,ah aint doing that!
.
.
.
A sucker is born every moment/a fuker it becomes when it knw men/a gay or bytch it'd turn d very moment/reason ah aint punchin dis new borns,dey'l catch my fist n suck my thumb d very moment....



Just rhymes!!!wack me tho i can mock dykes!!!
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Where is krone?

I want to be like you when I grow up.
Ayamlaykorn

Heywhizzy:
I'm the real king

Back then,I was told my flow boring/ I could've deactivated my account but I feared being a nobody/ I took time to pen bars for days nd go hungry/ but now my bars are so lovely/
I'm dat cool brother/ the best rap could offer/ everybody bringing forth things to d table,mine is much accepted..my food hotter/ nd better..I'm "killing this academy" but "still show love..I'm a "school mother"/
That's just two bar..yet it's obvious Iam king/ I'm Tarzan,judge of the jungle nd lion king/ I rule you animals..u ain't happy with that..no wonder you prefer to lye on me/ but the truth lies in my heart so I won't quit..I'll keep punching with my iron fist/
Some niggaz are planning a coup..they're peeping my throne/ I'm talking of mikuz nd pro/ I'm the real king..they just kidding like goat/ for kingship,I'm the nigga winning the gold..both,can battle for silver nd bronze/
but if they insist nd boast..imma visit each bro/ nd tickle his soul..put pimples on bones/ finish dem both/ get cane nd a "Dr dre"..so it'll be confirmed the "beating in vogue"/
It ain't something new/ I mean beating these funny fools/ make sure their bones,flesh and liver get spoilt..ain't talking rotten foods/ if they still feel lively..imma attack with boring tools/
My mission is to oppress their ways/ leaving them bothered each day/ till they can't compete..claiming everybody na king for im own lane/ like they're olamide/
I can relegate them to truck pushing/ but if they wish me something similar..that's me shopping in a posh boutique/ rap knows,I'm the boss you need/ to drive this ish to something real/ without me in it,it's a trash can,there is nothing clean/
Yo,you're viewing nd reading/ don't stop at telling me this is the best I've ever written/ cos this is actually the best bars in twenty fifteen/ even down to text rap beginning /

Ewwo!
You can lie wo! My bars beat this one na.
Ayamlaykorn

Gladyys:

Wow! Thanks

Nice one.

laykorn:

Lol. The emergency response line is 999, so while he fell he was shouting for help telling people to punch 999. ie. Make an emergency call to save him. But, remember I had cum-covered and glued his mouth, so instead of saying punch 999, he was saying punch line line line. He couldn't pronounce the 'n' there.
Ayamlaykorn

Buhahahahaha! This is wackingly funny. Forgive me, I gats laugh.

I understand what you were tryna do there bro, but that kinda prounounce N as L concept doesn't work here. . . It only works when you tryna yab battle, like: Your guy name na tini tanana tiko tiko whatever. Lol you know what I mean?

That concept ain't tight, you were tryna use humor right there but you failed bringing up that lame sshit. Lol!

Chill my nigga, just stay and learn, you will be taught about humor raps and I'm sure you'd be a pro in no time. Halla Ksslib, this dude can help you with that.

That sshit was lame, I ain't tryna make you look wack, but that's the truth. I know you understand well, and I'm sure you know where I'm coming from. You're my hommie and I so much need you to improve, I see that Talib Kweli, Immortal Techinque-Vinnie Paz in you.

Just keep it up!

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laykorn:

Ewwo!
You can lie wo! My bars beat this one na.
Ayamlaykorn

in your wildest dreams..lemme die dat day

I'm king..let it be known

laykorn:
Lol. Kr0ne I done come again wo. Please help check if the rhyme problem has been addressed and please help review.

Start

Why do ya'll think I'm a vet?

I'm a vet cos I inject/ animals with my flow before I dissect/ My flows don't kill, they infect/ so I leave you to beg on the gates of hell/ for your death/ before you repent

Arise O Compatriots - Nigeria/ I obeyed this call so I could kill ya/ they said you said niccurz in Magodo feel ya/ but I got my fan-base deep in the V.I/ I gave you a chance to lick my asss/ but you be preaching against sodomy- too much Sunday mass./

A king in India/ pauper in Saudi Arabia/ but I been dey rule every area/From Nigeria to Scandavia/ cos my perimeter is with the dibia/

And when you tried Saudi Arabia/ you were deported 12 in the midnight/ after a 100 lashes from Sharia/ cos your flows sounded like your rapist-SERIAL

You can't see punchlines/ cos ionn really punch your likes, fireflies/ I stick your mouth shut with cum, gum_like/ pick you up and throw ya'll in a landslide/

And when you be going down, your muffled voice be like/ "Emergency! punch 999, punch 9"/ but it really sound like/ "Emi-densy! punch line line line, punch-line

Cc:
Kr0ne
JigsawKillah
GIYYAZZ
sosiqdude
gottoboy

Ayamlaykorn

Nice one

laykorn:

I want to be like you when I grow up.
Ayamlaykorn

Lol,nt like d present me...
Like me when I grow up...

mikuz:



Nice one.

Thanks... ^_^

GIYAZZ:
Buhahahahaha! This is wackingly funny. Forgive me, I gats laugh.

I understand what you were tryna do there bro, but that kinda prounounce N as L concept doesn't work here. . . It only works when you tryna yab battle, like: Your guy name na tini tanana tiko tiko whatever. Lol you know what I mean?

That concept ain't tight, you were tryna use humor right there but you failed bringing up that lame sshit. Lol!

Chill my nigga, just stay and learn, you will be taught about humor raps and I'm sure you'd be a pro in no time. Halla Ksslib, this dude can help you with that.

That sshit was lame, I ain't tryna make you look wack, but that's the truth. I know you understand well, and I'm sure you know where I'm coming from. You're my hommie and I so much need you to improve, I see that Talib Kweli, Immortal Techinque-Vinnie Paz in you.

Just keep it up!

Chai! See as you kill morale for my body. . Lol.
I'll get in touch with him for some tips. Lol
Thanks anyway.
Ayamlaykorn

Heywhizzy bet me, if we set you and Laykorn up for a battle after a month of him being active on here. . . He'd murk ya ignorant @ss flawlessly.

Heywhizzy:
I'm the real king

Back then,I was told my flow boring/ I could've deactivated my account but I feared being a nobody/ I took time to pen bars for days nd go hungry/ but now my bars are so lovely/
I'm dat cool brother/ the best rap could offer/ everybody bringing forth things to d table,mine is much accepted..my food hotter/ nd better..I'm "killing this academy" but "still show love..I'm a "school mother"/
That's just two bar..yet it's obvious Iam king/ I'm Tarzan,judge of the jungle nd lion king/ I rule you animals..u ain't happy with that..no wonder you prefer to lye on me/ but the truth lies in my heart so I won't quit..I'll keep punching with my iron fist/
Some niggaz are planning a coup..they're peeping my throne/ I'm talking of mikuz nd pro/ I'm the real king..they just kidding like goat/ for kingship,I'm the nigga winning the gold..both,can battle for silver nd bronze/
but if they insist nd boast..imma visit each bro/ nd tickle his soul..put pimples on bones/ finish dem both/ get cane nd a "Dr dre"..so it'll be confirmed the "beating in vogue"/
It ain't something new/ I mean beating these funny fools/ make sure their bones,flesh and liver get spoilt..ain't talking rotten foods/ if they still feel lively..imma attack with boring tools/
My mission is to oppress their ways/ leaving them bothered each day/ till they can't compete..claiming everybody na king for im own lane/ like they're olamide/
I can relegate them to truck pushing/ but if they wish me something similar..that's me shopping in a posh boutique/ rap knows,I'm the boss you need/ to drive this ish to something real/ without me in it,it's a trash can,there is nothing clean/
Yo,you're viewing nd reading/ don't stop at telling me this is the best I've ever written/ cos this is actually the best bars in twenty fifteen/ even down to text rap beginning /

Wack...

De-activate ur account..your flow are still boring

GIYAZZ:
Heywhizzy bet me, if we set you and Laykorn up for a battle after a month of him being active on here. . . He'd murk ya ignorant @ss flawlessly.

lmfao..who do you call ignorant?...chai,life don spoil

sosiqdude:


Wack...

De-activate ur account..your flow are still boring

guy..u're d one who needs to deactivate your account..fact is you're just under giyazz shadow..I haven't seen any reasonable thing you've done...you're extremely wack

Heywhizzy:
guy..u're d one who needs to deactivate your account..fact is you're just under giyazz shadow..I haven't seen any reasonable thing you've done...you're extremely wack

You wonna see what am gonna do ok.

Let battle...

sosiqdude:



You wonna see what am gonna do ok.

Let battle...

we post during the weekend..tell your blind friend..the one always falling to dark to create thread..lemme bury you

Heywhizzy:
we post during the weekend..tell your blind friend..the one always falling to dark to create thread..lemme bury you

Chill...I will be going to studio 2morro...

By thursday I will pen my bars which am gonna use to bodybag you. Then we may post on Sunday or monday.

Heywhizzy:
guy..u're d one who needs to deactivate your account..fact is you're just under giyazz shadow..I haven't seen any reasonable thing you've done...you're extremely wack

smh!! from argument to insults. .from insults to fight. . can you script about 20lines then call him out ?? tomuch argument wnt help to solve your whack and d.ope issue.

sosiqdude:


Wack...

De-activate ur account..your flow are still boring

smh. .you're whaCK . .you're D.ope. .you're WHack. .you're d.OPE..
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makes here looks so boring.....like say una still be children...

sosiqdude:



Chill...I will be going to studio 2morro...

By thursday I will pen my bars which am gonna use to bodybag you. Then we may post on Sunday or monday.

I don't even have time to pen bars based on lectures..but I'll find some little time to kill you..note that,I'm doing you a favour

laykorn:
Lol. Kr0ne I done come again wo. Please help check if the rhyme problem has been addressed and please help review.

Start

Why do ya'll think I'm a vet?

I'm a vet cos I inject/ animals with my flow before I dissect/ My flows don't kill, they infect/ so I leave you to beg on the gates of hell/ for your death/ before you repent

Arise O Compatriots - Nigeria/ I obeyed this call so I could kill ya/ they said you said niccurz in Magodo feel ya/ but I got my fan-base deep in the V.I/ I gave you a chance to lick my asss/ but you be preaching against sodomy- too much Sunday mass./

A king in India/ pauper in Saudi Arabia/ but I been dey rule every area/From Nigeria to Scandavia/ cos my perimeter is with the dibia/

And when you tried Saudi Arabia/ you were deported 12 in the midnight/ after a 100 lashes from Sharia/ cos your flows sounded like your rapist-SERIAL

You can't see punchlines/ cos ionn really punch your likes, fireflies/ I stick your mouth shut with cum, gum_like/ pick you up and throw ya'll in a landslide/

And when you be going down, your muffled voice be like/ "Emergency! punch 999, punch 9"/ but it really sound like/ "Emi-densy! punch line line line, punch-line

Cc:
Kr0ne
JigsawKillah
GIYYAZZ
sosiqdude
gottoboy

Ayamlaykorn

We'll talk later on bbm......good piece by way
You're improving

goshikid:
smh!! from argument to insults. .from insults to fight. . can you script about 20lines then call him out ?? tomuch argument wnt help to solve your whack and d.ope issue. smh. .you're whaCK . .you're D.ope. .you're WHack. .you're d.OPE..
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makes here looks so boring.....like say una still be children...

Lolz...na whizzy oo..

I will kill the boy soon

Heywhizzy:
I don't even have time to pen bars based on lectures..but I'll find some little time to kill you..note that,I'm doing you a favour

I hear

goshikid:
smh!! from argument to insults. .from insults to fight. . can you script about 20lines then call him out ?? tomuch argument wnt help to solve your whack and d.ope issue. smh. .you're whaCK . .you're D.ope. .you're WHack. .you're d.OPE..
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makes here looks so boring.....like say una still be children...

you're an iddiot o..supposing,I've seen any of your bars before I won't make such statement..sawdust and pepper full your eyes,u wan dey remove d single dust wey dey another man eye

wait! your Mumu self fit carry you drop ten bars this night..if so then post am kiakia

take no offense in this comment,I just spat facts

rereading your post..didn't he call me out before you comment abi you blind nd where did you see fight

boring words

Need to know what I'm doing wrong...been battling on fb and don't think I'm improving much.

I think one of my best ever was when I started out..something like this:

lyrically I do my duty, dirty hands duly, add rappers to my spill sheet....
"your pun chores pile, late" to wanna kill shit....
have mercy bestowed on me lord
cos I only feel his flow....washing my hands in a bowl of his blood!! (you're pontious pilate)

here are my verses for my last two battles

Keys
*last bar...akmi (acme means pinnacle)
Y'all will dig d rest
12lines diss @akmi
Leggo...
They know I'll make him scream &quaver,so on
him they wouldn't dream wager;/
Cos if I 'monitor his brain' & 'project his
thoughts on a screen'....all I would get is a blank
screen saver!!!/
He gets his spleen tasered,to cover everywhere
in weird odd smells...his energy's down as the
nerd muds well.../
Then I drag the bloody mess under the
sunlight...to recharge his red blood cells! !!/
I just ensured his vital organs are messed...I
could've had his soul scarred first.../
and leave his life perplexed,
But I just helped put his heart in his
bars....cardiac arrest!!!!/
Now I go for his mum's head, but not to slay
the mother.../
Cos the whøre can, have heads covered like a
well placed turban.../
Damn,it's music to my ears when she 'blows my
dick'....like the bìtch 'plays the organ'!!!!!/
Then I revive the dead fool..& see if the angels
will attempt to/....
attend to this damned tool
And if any battle ever tempts you../
'Akmi gets a cross stabbed thru his head'....like
am d devil taking Jesus to the pinnacle of the
temple!!!/

Oh...akmi won that battle

Keys:
*phone is bricked
*jewish people all love the religion
* junior says I can improve by battling him
*said he gets real fine dames in a battle with
castor
*didn't post on sunday cos he was cooking
(must be rice)
*remember the change your style nursery
song!!!
*only wireless network uses access points
24lines diss @ badoo Ju ni or
my "bars" are trains that make the Rails-
Shake,going 'stone hard' & real on
this Frail-Fake/
watch em collide with the 'blockhead' like i've
got Failed-Breaks/
& leave proof this 'phoney's bricked'...like a
poorly executed "Jail-Break"!!!!/
Unlike his 'sex drive',my keys crank..to 'turn
on' a big tank/
&make him sleep like I released tranqs/
it's No-Big-gie..when his skin peels as i apply d
heat to this wánk...like he's m.asturbating with
abo-ni-ki!!!!/
he fantasizes 'servicing' 'congregated'
'masses'...and he smears his Spawn/
while he copulates asses & his dick tears their
regions/
He sighs cos now "JU wish people" all love the
"rear legion"/
gay...don't be fooled, ah-spit & drop-sick-classics/
u d one being schooled..& ya-still-dropping-
classes!!/
this Wack's-Best-Joints..are poor like a piggy
bank but Packs-Less-Coins/
I'll make him shake &vibrate like his kinky
ass'-sex-toys/
so he gets 'wired with cables'..for thinking
through me he could 'Ac-cess-Points'!!!!/
Let me Kill-Thine-Claims when I Criuse-To-
Vet-Murk..
You need Re-fined-Names, its no Cru-cial-
Guess-Work/...
That 'badoo with Real-fine-dames'.......must be
the 'So-cial-Net-work/
My flow could damage-Tur-bines...and no doubt
rearRange-Your Spine/....
Then I can fuc.k you with ease in so many
ways...just to help you Change-your-Style/
Why?
His sister's in d garden, playing ball, fulfilling
his wishes/
Mum wears d trousers, watching news..bringing
in the digits/
Dad's doing the dishes...
Looks up at Ju cooking rice & says "damn
son,we the kitchen b.itches!!!"/
and now...
Let's all come up with a way to kill this Weak-
Bros...cut his Dick-Off/
Watch as his Blood Licks-off....Then 'we can'
nail his Bleak-Corpse/
... to a Thick-Cross..To have a 'jew' praying &
believing in Je-sus/

what am I doing wrong asides setups

laykorn:

Yo, look I was Sweaty at Dawn/
And never again I Ain't Stressing that much/
Cos I got real dirt Dirt in my lungs/
And I be using it to Threaten your mum/

I Bleep 'em all Virgins and Sluts/
Cos I got my flows right, Got it in Bulk/
I'm Friends with the hulk/
Yo, I Met him at Dusk/
I been dey hear Kim was gone/
Too bad to remember, She cherished my thrusts/
And gave me hot sex in return/
I left her crying in plaesure Fetish and Numb/
While I be betting real dollars with Tom/
And faggits be Flirting with John/
And Ryyan be saying Fencing is Fun ../



Dark, does this make any sense?
You're turning me into a devil.
Ayamlaykorn

Bravo Bravo !!!!!!

great!!! you did great you can see how Multisyllabic rhymes help .... you tried in the connection plus your flow was Great..

Tomorrow I will give you 15 different phrases like I did now...and you must connect them like you did..and even add your own rhymes in it..

agreed?