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Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 5:24pm On Jan 28, 2015 |
ACKKNOWLEDGEMENT With warm thanks to my brother(Losprince) for his awesome idea. My parents also for bringing me into this world. To seun for creating this Amazing forum. Mama junior also for selling me the book and pen i used to write this on credit Thanks also to Mtn customer care and Google for enlightening me. And also my dear readers, hope you enjoy this.... THOSE WHO KILL: A MAN TRIES TO FULFILL HIS PROMISE TO HIS DEAD DAUGHTER.... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 5:45pm On Jan 28, 2015 |
PROLOGUE Death could come in countless forms. He carried his daughter on his back as he ran searching for a Taxi, unfortunately he couldn't find any. "I have had enough bad luck today to last me my entire life " he said to himself. He knew he had to do something quick, he saw a Lexus with a driver ,then he rushed into the passengers seat. Just when the driver was about to yell GET OUT OF MY CAR he saw the cutest kid, her skin was dark with long hair, "who said black isn't beautiful " he said to himself, just then he saw blood stain on her dress. He gunned the Engine 3 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Those who kill... by Nobody: 11:49pm On Jan 28, 2015 |
Waiting ooo |
Re: Those who kill... by theorbiters: 2:49am On Jan 29, 2015 |
This could be fun |
Re: Those who kill... by Hurklan(m): 4:10am On Jan 29, 2015 |
next pls, |
Re: Those who kill... by Kusibe77(m): 6:51am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Following |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 7:46am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Chapter 1 Jane watched in horror as a man forced ice cubes down her friend's throat, he had first knocked her out with a blow. 5minuites ago they were walking back home from school when a man lured them to a lonly pathway claiming he needed direction to their school, they had followed him hoping to help. Jane watched as the same man walked towards her slowly, she could hear her heart beat. He held a bag filled with ice cubes in his left hand and a doll on the other hand, she looked at her friend and saw the same doll resting on her chest. She felt tears roll down from her eyes, she knew she would die. She taught of running but there was no way she could out run him, she screamed but the only one who could hear her was the huge man with an ugly scar on his face walking slowly to her. She bite her tongue hoping to wake from the nightmare then she saw him kneeling before her. "Whats your friends name.'' The huge man asked ''Please, dont kill me " jane said with her voice filled with tears "Am sorry, I dont want to kill you but I have to " the huge man said with little emotion "Why?" She asked hoping to bring out a little good from the ugly man. "I dont want her to be alone " he said with tears in his eyes and voice filled with emotion "Who" jane askee Instead of a reply she got a blow on her head amd everything went black... 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 7:47am On Jan 29, 2015 |
theorbiters:It would |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 7:51am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Divepen:Feels good to have you here |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 7:52am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Hurklan:Welcome bro.. Updated |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 7:53am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Your comments would really help |
Re: Those who kill... by Nobody: 8:25am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Chimo... He gave a blow.. Show me the man * Hyperventilating* Where is the man? Wait before you show me? Did you say he is huge? If he is huge, I will need to quickly go and take something @ home... Just wait for me... 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 10:56am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Divepen: You'll need a gun bro |
Re: Those who kill... by Nobody: 11:05am On Jan 29, 2015 |
iceberylin:Chimoo...Na so the guy wicked reach.... |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 11:48am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Divepen:The guy heartless |
Re: Those who kill... by Fatalveli(m): 1:16pm On Jan 29, 2015 |
Actually, the writers will have to suspend their works here on NL temporarily, or maybe permanently because our stories are being plagiarised and these plagiarist are making money from it, via their blogs and facebook pages while we are always trying so hard to satisfy our reader. These plagiarist do not even have to go through any stress at all, the just copy it and paste it on their thread, what rubbish, they will even claim they are the owner. @Op imagine going to a market one day and you saw your story already published in a book and it's sold for 15/20k, you opened it and saw one weird name as the author, I'm very sure you will almost run mad with anger. So I'll urge all writer to suspend their work in here for the time, till this issue is resolved. Thanks |
Re: Those who kill... by stuff46(m): 2:21pm On Jan 29, 2015 |
Dyoungstar: |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 2:59pm On Jan 29, 2015 |
Seun do something na |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 7:03am On Jan 31, 2015 |
CHAPTER2 Through the Smokey haze of cigarette,was the ugliest man in Nigeria. He turned on his Television and switched to (R.S.T.V) (RIVERS STATE TELEVISION ) since the girls refused to say their names he had other means to find out. THERE ARE MANY WAYS TO KILL A RAT as his principal will always say when students tried to play smart. He frowned when he saw the news headline SERIAL KILLER, KILLS A GIRL IN PORT HARCOURT Everything had went well earlier today until a man caught him forcing ice cubes into a a little girls throat, he ran knowing the man dosn't stand a chance against him but he didn't want to draw attention, he climbed over a fence into an uncompleted building hoping the man would jump but the stranger was wiser. "A man whose identity is yet to be uncovered tried to kill two kids on their way back from school. Their names are Jane and Ann, unfortunately for Ann she didn't survive, luckily for jane a man named Arnold showed up im the crime scene and took her to the hospital. She is currently unconscious hopefully she could tell us something about this serial killer.. The ugly man switced off his television without letting the news reporter finish what she had to say. Seems like todays news wasn't amusing him. Many miles away the President sat in his office watching the same news made him unhappy, this wasn't what he expected during his campaign but it brought smile to Senator Adams Damilola's face... 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: Those who kill... by losprince(m): 2:22pm On Jan 31, 2015 |
Omo cool Story but u have to take break 1 Like |
Re: Those who kill... by ruffhandu: 7:55pm On Jan 31, 2015 |
@ losprince, The issue is being fixed. Try copying the story and notice what has been done. |
Re: Those who kill... by losprince(m): 8:35pm On Jan 31, 2015 |
ruffhandu how have they fixed the issue? Why should I copy it? |
Re: Those who kill... by MrsGoodness(f): 9:18am On Feb 01, 2015 |
iceberylin you have started what you wont finish again.. abi |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 9:22am On Feb 01, 2015 |
@MrsGoodness Will try my best |
Re: Those who kill... by MrsGoodness(f): 9:26am On Feb 01, 2015 |
cant find the quote button |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 9:28am On Feb 01, 2015 |
@mrsgoodness Maybe seun sold it |
Re: Those who kill... by MrsGoodness(f): 9:30am On Feb 01, 2015 |
lol...oya update |
Re: Those who kill... by iceberylin(m): 9:34am On Feb 01, 2015 |
Working on it... |
Re: Those who kill... by stuff46(m): 2:16pm On Feb 01, 2015 |
erhmm. Iceberlin . Nice one |
Re: Those who kill... by ruffhandu: 3:02pm On Feb 01, 2015 |
@ losprince, Perhaps I didn't understand what you meant by Omo cool story but you have to take a break |
Re: Those who kill... by snowhyt(f): 6:17pm On Feb 01, 2015 |
hm, lemme park my keke here and watch as d story unfolds.. 9ce story ice |
Re: Those who kill... by MzQueen(f): 7:06pm On Feb 02, 2015 |
*spreads mat* |
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