mikuz:


Have you downloaded the jam?

mikuz:
The easiest way to cop a ban is to derail this thread, this is not a threat.

richommie:

. . .

whu's up for a diss

richommie:

. . .

whu's up for a diss

Mathematical:
you wn roll?

Deepfreezer:
you a femcee ?

Bars:



no prob aw many DWP ?

Deepfreezer:
no room for riders/
its pedestrian night.
IMA bring yo drama like em thespian fighters
I'm on death row like suge Knight/ hit and run
LAPD death toll on high hit em up/
deep freeze lyrical sniper/ been on this (diss) shii.
way back y'all still rockin y'all diapers...

Bars:



no prob aw many DWP ?

mikuz:
@ Mathematical

The fans never feel what this sisi display/ they ll give her 'waka' when I'm beating the bae/
. . . but it won't be 'Odegbami' . . when they give 'Mathematical Sege'!/

Beat me? She can't do that/ cos she's far too wack/ I'm weilding a sword to path her back . . .
. . So don't call me an English Professor . . when I handle Math!/

Every gee has banged this brat/ shes a shameless muggin/
. . I can swear to Allah that every Friday niggas
lie on math . . like praying muslims!/

The girl's insane/ see, but lets be plain/ my punches ll give her 'kro kro' . .
. . Cos with every one I throw, you ll see 'mat itch' . . without watching Chelsea's games!/

This femcee's a joke/ but everything I've sent is bespoke/ She can't stand me lyrically . .
. .the only time she goes back and forth . . is when shes sexing a bloke!/

Mathematical:





am gnna drink yu up like a good liquor*turn ya silly lames lines to perfect stupor *if yu think yu could handle me, believe me you've bn led astray *go bk to crip Cox yu need to meditate and pray, am here to stay and put ya away *get that into ya head and move outta my way*am not here to turn the rules or table * am here to light up the game and burn the fable *yu'all niccurs and bitches stand firm or yu'all gnna be unstable.cox mathematical iz hale and stable.....*

Mathematical:





am gnna drink yu up like a good liquor*turn ya silly lames lines to perfect stupor *if yu think yu could handle me, believe me you've bn led astray *go bk to crip Cox yu need to meditate and pray, am here to stay and put ya away *get that into ya head and move outta my way*am not here to turn the rules or table * am here to light up the game and burn the fable *yu'all niccurs and bitches stand firm or yu'all gnna be unstable.cox mathematical iz hale and stable.....*

mikuz:


Yeah, right.

Dotwillis1:
Short Frees'
*grabs mic*

frm Rap dept in hiphop educatn/nd m dah best i dnt nid to write examinatn/flow xo hot, words undergoin evaporatn/
i obey al laws xcpt d law of gravitatn/cuz i aim d top nd putin more acceleratn/

blaaat!

Y'al no iceprince?/ m dah iceking/m nt an heir to d throne d game alrdy crown me/
bn xo busy dt i misd doin 'notin'/ion joke wit time, ion find it funy/
m da real king/nd al diz niggs r jst joker cards/if any1 b claimin a royal highnes,/prolly he gt drunk in a palace/like hungry israelites, dey gt no manners/pull off ya hats nd hail dah ill'est rapper/

i aint a mettalic conductor,/nw datz a limitatn 2 d law of ohms/cuz currently, i spit electrons,/nd thr aint no resistance 2 ma flow/
im too hot 2 handle,too cold to hold/i see u'al haterz evn in ur ghost mode/

oshaa mon, just lik vector,/if thr iz a college of rap,ah swear i'l b dah Rector/

wack! *Covers face*

Mathematical:
you tired?

mikuz:


Nah, didn't they tell you I'm the king? How can I?

Just that your bars need line breaking/ spacing. It ll make it readable. You see how I do mine?

Word word word rhyme rhyme/
Word word word rhyme rhyme




Honey you can start with that. I like your zeal and potential tho'.

Mathematical:





am gnna drink yu up like a good liquor/
turn ya silly lames lines to perfect stupor/
if yu think yu could handle me, believe me you've bn led astray/
go bk to crip Cox yu need to meditate and pray/
am here to stay and put ya away/
get that into ya head and move outta my way/
am not here to turn the rules or table/
am here to light up the game and burn the fable/
yu'all niccurs and bitches stand firm or yu'all gnna be unstable/
cox mathematical iz hale and stable/

Emaprince:



Try posting your rhymes like the above..make use of "/" to break your lines,then step down to continue the second line.it is also used to indicate where the rhymes are.this will make your verses look clean and readable.

Mathematical:


Oh ho ion need ya lecture let's face the music *

Like i said m jst new on it like a beggn beatrice *
...just bring it on

mikuz:


But your bars are just meeeeh, I force myself to read them. Its not inspiring one bit. You need to get off your high horse.

richommie:
3 bars is awk!

Dotwillis1:
Short Frees'
*grabs mic*

frm Rap dept in hiphop educatn/nd m dah best i dnt nid to write examinatn/flow xo hot, words undergoin evaporatn/
i obey al laws xcpt d law of gravitatn/cuz i aim d top nd putin more acceleratn/

blaaat!

Y'al no iceprince?/ m dah iceking/m nt an heir to d throne d game alrdy crown me/
bn xo busy dt i misd doin 'notin'/ion joke wit time, ion find it funy/
m da real king/nd al diz niggs r jst joker cards/if any1 b claimin a royal highnes,/prolly he gt drunk in a palace/like hungry israelites, dey gt no manners/pull off ya hats nd hail dah ill'est rapper/

i aint a mettalic conductor,/nw datz a limitatn 2 d law of ohms/cuz currently, i spit electrons,/nd thr aint no resistance 2 ma flow/
im too hot 2 handle,too cold to hold/i see u'al haterz evn in ur ghost mode/

oshaa mon, just lik vector,/if thr iz a college of rap,ah swear i'l b dah Rector/

wack! *Covers face*

Mathematical:
just bring it on

Mathematical:
nah really.. jst an upcoming

Mathematical:



Arrgh, stop spillin gibberish pls do make
sense with ya flows*yu jst spittn on ya friends instead of ya foes*ma real lady nt yu niccur wu tak ovadose*be spitting different lyrics,lik rakes and rows* u just cant run on me,acting brag and bold*tho am new here not lame and old*

Bars:




Hmm mm