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Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 6:07pm On Feb 02, 2015 |
#prettydiva89 She smiled and he peck her on her cheeck, as he looked at her,they had eye contact and began to stare at each other,their lips was getting closer and now,his lips was on hers. Suddenly, Alfred stopped, he looked her,she also looked at him and he said; "sorry,i never meant to do that okay?" Cynthia nodded and he left, Cynthia eyes was filled with tears, Besty look at her and ask; "What happen to you? Why are you crying?" Cynthia called Besty nearer and replied; "You know what Besty? i think i am beginning to fall in love with..........Alfred tha......[Besty cuts in] "What?" [Cynthia mouth was vibrating as tears rolled down her eyes] She said; "i am scared, very scared that i don't know what to do, i can't control myself whenever i am with him, i feel protected and this why i couldn't avoid his kisses because i am in love Besty and i am always scared any time he touches me because no boy has ever touched me without receiving a mark, it is making me feel more afraid and i don't know how to abstain from it because he has a fiancee which is always haughty,proud and very wicked, don't you think?" Besty replied; "yes,your destiny is Alfred,why don't you grab him and don't let him slip your finger tip if i were you. fight for the strong cord princess,let it germinate in you"... *to be continue* 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Nobody: 10:05pm On Feb 02, 2015 |
hmm thanks for the tag cybershow |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 10:40am On Feb 03, 2015 |
prettydiva89 u wlcm expect mor today 1 Like |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 1:22pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
#Kusibe77,julietAkk She smiled and sigh of relief, just then,Alfred opened the door and came in, he said; "princess,someone wants to see you,will you come see him?" she nods in agreement. When she got there, she was surprised to see Jack, the guy that called her a murderess when she was in Miama, before she said anything he began to beg her and she had no choice than to forgive him,they became friends, they went out to catch fun, Besty went with Jack, Princess went with Alfred, as they were gisting, Alfred said; "I'll be going to office tomorrow and in the next two days, I'll be going on a trip to Australia". Princess smiled and said; "Well, good for you, [spanish language] "muchas swete" [meaning "Good luck"] You know what Alfred, let's go home, i feel somehow out here and i am really scared that Linda or her friends would see us and i don't want problem with that girl, she is a snake!" Alfred laugh and replied; "Why don't we forget about that and say something better off than that?" princess replied; "The only better thing here is to move out of here or i go myself!". "Alright then,let's move on" said Alfred. At home. Linda and Alfred mother was cooking up a plan, Linda laughed hysterically and said; "I have the best option, what do you think about getting a viper snake that would bite her and for sure, Alfred won't be around either will we take her to a hospital and then she will have her death sentence". They shake hands and laugh then, Alfred,Jack,Besty and Princess came in, they just ignore them and went inside. * * * * * * The next day, Alfred was ready to go to the meeting he has that day, after he told princess, he left. Not long after he left, princess went to bath and she didn't lock her room door when someone sneak in and drop a dangerous viper in her room. When Cynthia came out from the bathroom and as she was dressing she saw the snake on her bed, she screamed; "Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" Before she could take a move, the snake bite her on her two leg, Williams ran inside with a gun thinking it was thieves and shot the snake dead and carried it out, Cynthia was breathing faster, she said; "Please Besty, take me to a hospital, [Just then she sighted Linda and Alfred mother at the door] she said; "Linda, I beg you, don't let me die, take me to a hospital, please i beg of you". Linda laugh and said; "Why don't you call Alfred" [mimicking her] oh poor bee, die of the snake venom!". Princess was gasping, she said; "Be-Besty, ca-call, Al-fred f-for m-me". Linda said; "Do you think he will come all because of you, even i his fiancee, he never did that, now talk of you slut". Besty called Alfred and just then, Alfred post pone the meeting till another time, he and Jack entered the nearest flight and to everyone surprise, he was home already, Linda was surprised, she said; "Alfred,do y......... [He cuts in] "Shut up!" He got inside and saw his princess in her state, she was dying, she said while gasping; "Al-fred, h-here y-you are, pl-pleaase sa-save my l-life i don't w-want to d-die now,pl-please i b-beg on w-what y-you l-love m-most, pl-please Al-fred"....*to be continue* 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 4:44pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
Alfred commanded; "Get me a light candle fast". Cynthia ask with fear; "What do you want to do?" Alfred replied; "Make an incision and then we'll bring out the venom so you have to calmdown,we have few minute to risk it if not you are gone so be brave". He put a very small but sharp knife in the fire,everyone was looking at him,he remove it when it was hot,and use it for the place where the snake bite her, she tried to be brave but it was too painful and she scream; "Al-fr-e-e-e-d!!!". He stopped and then put his mouth to suck out the venom, he removed his suit very expensive one and pour the venom on it,he sucked the second one out and then clean his mouth and said; "Now, i'll give you an anti-inflammatory so that you'll feel more relieved and better". She smiled and said; "Thanks for saving my life, i'll be grateful for this all the rest of my life and for this if possible, i'll put you on a altar and think you forever and ever,Alfred,forever"....*to be continue* 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by teamplayey: 5:03pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
First to comment; . . . True Love! |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 5:14pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
Abi o....at teamplayey..nxt story dedicated to u 1 Like |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 6:39pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
#Teamplayey she hug him and they peck each other,he felt like kissing her but didn't want any trouble with, so he just touched her red lips with his fingers and said; "take your siesta, i'll be beside you,Jack please give me the anti inflammatory [he gave it to her and then bandage the leg] Everyone dispersed and then Alfred went to lock the door, he ask; "do you think that this snake came on it's own free will?" Cynthia replied; "of course not, I am sure linda sent it thinking that may be we are lovers or that i love you, i don't just understand for her". alfred ask; "what if i say "I LOVE YOU"?" Cynthia laugh and replied; "that's not funny really,you have a fiancee, she is as well beautiful, your family are rich and i don't even have parent so it is not possible"......*to be continue* 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by teamplayey: 7:23pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
@ Cybershow: thanks a bunch! Nairaland Huggs |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 8:14pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
Teamplayey u wlcm...u always b d first to branch my latest update..tenx i appreciate dat..bt cn u tel me some of my eror dere |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by kingphilip(m): 8:23pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
it's sure gonna b a hard route but I hope they scale through cyber nice one |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by teamplayey: 8:39pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
@ Cybershow: I'm not really into editing because I did'nt major in literature. However, I think you should write words in full (e.g. Welcome not wlcm, thanks not tenx). For me, it is mainly about understanding 1 Like |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Nobody: 9:16pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
lovely story cybershow |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Holarbisi440(f): 10:13pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
Nice story |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by JulietAKK(f): 11:39pm On Feb 03, 2015 |
I'm still with you,cybershow. I'm here. Thank you |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 12:02am On Feb 04, 2015 |
@Kingphilip i pray so o.. @Prettydiva89 thanks 4 d encouragement @Teamplayey alrit i wil take to that..thanks as wel @JulietAkk oh u r back am glad..what du u want dem to serve u.. Holarbisi440:Thanks |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 2:44am On Feb 04, 2015 |
Deeninetyseven,candy,divepen,d9ty7,thronekid...pls u are caled here to pick out my typographic eror here..so as to improve...and some oda boss i dnt kal o..e ma binu am new here dat y. |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 1:03pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
----continuation---- Alfred said; "We both have flesh and blood and beside since the first day i set my eyes on you, i have already fallen deeply in love with you Cynthia and i can swear you love me too". "But- but---i - do-- hate you and i can't also say i love you, you have Linda, is drooling for you [He began to kiss her on her neck] "Stop Alfred, you are making me scared, don't do that i beg of you please Alfred". Alfred said; "I can prove that you are lying". Cynthia heart was beating faster the more he kissed and soon he began to pull her zip, then she came back to her senses, she said; "No we can't do this, we can't". Alfred ask; "But why?" she said; "Be.....Because.....[She went out of his presence, shr ran down stair into the garden,she began to cry] she said to her self; "It's not right i am scared of hurting Alfred, the way he touches me no man ever touched me without getting a scar, now to talk of kissing me, the more he does that, the more i feel kicking him off me and i don't know why i can't do that". Alfred who has been at her back replied; "Because you love me". She said in surprised; "Al---f--r--r--e---d!" He drag her closer to himself and help her on her waist, he said; "Don't you like to hear that i love you, or what princess?". [Linda and the mother of Alfred was watching them from a distance] Cynthia replied; "That's not the case, the way you touch me, i feel scared to wound you or hurt you, Jack kissed me and i cut him, when i was wandering about, a boy tried to rape me and i hurt him with a stick, i am scared of doing so to you too, that just it, the way you touch me scares me-e!". Alfred ask; "But you didn't when i kissed you upstair,............ Would you like to try again? Just calm down". Cynthia was scared and she was breathing heavily, they were kissing deeply, intensely, and passionately when a clap interrupted and just then Linda voiced out by sayin; "What a good moving, loving and passionate scene [They stopped and just to see it was Linda and Alfred mother]..... Hmmmmm tragedy to be continue so stay tune..... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Missmossy(f): 1:17pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
Nice one Cybershow |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 4:23pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
Missmossy:Alrit ma..any mistake in d post |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Kusibe77(m): 7:48pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
I saw your dedication,thanks. For corrections, I will say you should try to put more space between each persons statement. Like Alfred said 'I love you' 'but am scared' Cynthia replied you see the spacing. I just thought it will be more pleasing to the eye. |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 9:26pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
Alrit sir...wil tak to corection boss... Kusibe77:Alrit sir...wil tak to corection boss... |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 1:45pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
#kingphilip,kusibe77,thronekid,prettydiva89,teamplayey ----continuation---- Cynthia went inside the house and then Alfred mother said; "Alfred, do you want to be death of mine,what you are doing is not fair son, your fiancee is crying helplessly everyday for your love but you deny her because of an orphan. Remember your engagement as planned earlier on, is tomorrow, so be ready to be engaged and i careless for who you say is your supposed lover. It is not a mere joke Alfred..." [Turning to Linda, let's go] [Turning to Alfred] "Remember that tommorow, you will have to also have her for the first time" Alfred ask; "Are you through?" He just smiled and left. He got to Cynthia room, he knocked and open, Cynthia turn her back to him, he knelt down beside her and said; "I----am----sorry my princess" She ask; "Are you telling me sorry so that i'll accept and then you'll use me, dump me and get engaged to your precious Linda unh? Do you think i am stupid or illiterate that i don't know what is going on?" Alfred who was still on his kneel like a child begging her mother replied; "I swear on what you love most i won't marry her, not even get engaged to her now talk of having sex with her, is not possible. Believe me, i am just going to dress up and tell her dear family, friends, my parent's friends and the people present, that i am sorry". Cynthia ask; "Even if the president is there?" "Yes" Alfred replied. She turned and also kneel down and said; "I am sorry, very sorry". Alfred laugh and said; "That won't relieve me, stand up" [They both stand up] Alfred said; "Just one thing would relieve me, just say i promise me". Cynthia smiled and said; "Alright if it is what won't bring harm to me, i promise, i agree and i swear on what you love dearly". Alfred smiled and said; "Instead of me sleeping with Lida, why don't you allow it be for you and me, for the first time and i promise to marry you,love you and as you like to say, "i'll place you on the altar and thank you for the rest of my life". [Cynthia was so happy that she could fly out of her skin and she didn't know when she kissed him as tears of joy was rolling down her eyes] she stopped and replied; "Yes Alfred, i am ready to do that anytime you want, as long as it is you Alfred". They hug each other very tight and Cynthia was crying of joy, they started kissing and someone knocked.............hmm *to be continue* 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Nobody: 5:03pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Cybershow:Ow bro, haven't always been online recently, I'l check it out now |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 9:40pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
thronekid:Oh alrit boss..u c av gne far..pls pick out my mistakes. |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Nobody: 10:04pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Cybershow:I'm not a critic but I'l try to point some things out (HIGHLY NECCESARY ONES THOUGH!) GOODLUCK! |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 11:17pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
thronekid:Alrit..waitin 4 ur respond..tenx boss |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Nobody: 3:22am On Feb 06, 2015 |
Cybershow:Boss biti bawo? MY NAME NA THRONE'KID O! |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 5:46am On Feb 06, 2015 |
thronekid:owk u no want boss..owk i go dae kal u king cux u r throne |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Nobody: 6:10am On Feb 06, 2015 |
Cybershow:Guy, You funny die, I'l call you Robot, know why? |
Re: Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) by Cybershow(m): 6:27am On Feb 06, 2015 |
thronekid:Lolz..bt i no know why o..bt can you tel me d reason |
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