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Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by GIYAZZ(m): 8:11am On Jan 25, 2015 |
The truth of my afflictions penned exquisitely. Yet the journey tough as nails Sitted in lonesome, inside the inner capacious rooms of the Shambhala/ Merriments in my heart, as I reminisce the warming words of my father/ . . .Which gave me victory/ triumph over falsifiers. . . for how they became still remains a mystery/ Been to sorrows kitchen and licked the pot clean/ defeated and almost broken. . . had this thought. . . ringing in my head. . .like "You the most boring!"/ After your endless tantrums you ended up a blanked fool/ You wack! "go write poems nigga, you ain't made for rap battles"/ The feeling of not belonging/ got me resolving/ Lucid issues with self-discrimination/ hit up my hommie and was like "I'm cutting G off " cos i hardly be magged to this Rap battle nation/ Then his Words of advice calmed my nerves/ that feeling you have when you find your other half/ Started up my engine to continue the movement/ as the chance to prove my beast divulged itself to these mooped fangs/ The Pioneer pioneered my glory/ accompanied with a sparse of folly/ Stuff like Can G rap? I need HER lines/ my hommies repped. . . "if you ever seen G empty it must be African time!"/ Grabbed that chance, it's time to give in my all/ spillin lines raw/ pen spiked. . . Focused on killing that dawg!!/ Troubles waved/ my personality be-littled and swayed/ Still i stay firm my way/ let the ink from my pen decide my fate/ Before time the beginning was end/ what my determination ripped required a muffle around the din i extend/ Not really what i expect/ blinded with shades of respect/ Till the hulky chiefs poured me praise/ even Rebel's negativity never got me fazed/ My sobs erased/ cos i copped niche'/ (atlast!) Euphoria evil glee sembler to mocking Hyenas/ dumbed moment i spilled 'em shinny bars/ Who laughs last laughs best. . . . words sunk in my conscious, the colonnade to my shinning star!!!! CC Laykorn Missmossy Texanomaly Joywendy Nneka123 Mynd_44 Mayapop Ilrushen AbuMikey 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 8:20am On Jan 25, 2015 |
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Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by AbuMikey(m): 8:51am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Bro, this is just so cool.! The Imagery is so on Point. The Metaphors/Similies, excellent. The use of Mild Punches, Superb! Great work Giyazz. ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by AbuMikey(m): 8:54am On Jan 25, 2015 |
One more thing, NEVER let the Negative things People say to You get to You, only let the Positive things do. Life, becomes more easier and 'Sweeter' ![]() 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 10:31am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Hehhe. The point you mentioned Rebel thooo. I remember how much the guy tried not to let me go in for Ksslib. Somehow, his bad words made me try harder than I ever thought I would to win the battle. I think there is a way you can convert Rebel's hating into a source of inspiration. It worked for me. I hope you and sosiqdude too see his ways as a source of inspiration ![]() GIYAZZ, this is nice. And, how many bars is this? Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by GIYAZZ(m): 5:44pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
laykorn:Lol. That's true. . . Thankyou though. It's 8 bars enjambed. |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:38am On Feb 01, 2015 |
lame!!!! ![]() ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:45am On Feb 01, 2015 |
Nneka123, write your own make we see. ![]() Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:48am On Feb 01, 2015 |
laykorn, what's your deal? ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by GIYAZZ(m): 10:41pm On Feb 11, 2015 |
Lol, Nneka123 you don dey look for my trouble now, you how I do ![]() ![]() If ah start ehn! |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 10:45pm On Feb 11, 2015 |
GIYAZZ:tah! meechi onu ![]() ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by GIYAZZ(m): 11:31am On Feb 12, 2015 |
Nneka123:Lol, yeah. I've been busy. . . Still busy now though. . . But later we go yarn, lemme clear my roles. |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 2:28pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Nneka123:Nneka123 the faker! ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 2:29pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 2:32pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
GIYAZZ:okay! ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 3:09pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Nneka123:[size=20pt]oh Nneka123 the faker so u are ashamed to quote me ,after they opened ur nyansh, chai! That girl that exposed u didn't try at all, dnt worry my own will be worst than hers i swear, na you go run comot for dis forum i assure u, i will only stp quoting u if u stop being fake n stupíd and also if u think u won't reply me, u re just wasting ur fvcking time. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 3:38pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:Get your facts right! i was not the one exposed! ![]() ![]() ![]() 2 Likes |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 3:53pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Nneka123:u are a big fool n a fake church rat, you think i dnt hv ur info and personal details abt u, i knw ur former moniker before the e-tsunami so u can't tell me shít on here because i will expose ur fake smelly azz with a new thread, who do u think u her? A nonentity i guess, look at hw malnourish she is with bony legs on her PP ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 4:26pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:She ignored your PM? ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 4:44pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Logicalmind: ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 4:46pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:Probably ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 4:48pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Logicalmind:i dnt send PMs 2 nairaland girls. ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 4:51pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:Ok...Let's not derail someone's thread. |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 4:53pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Logicalmind: ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by GIYAZZ(m): 5:14pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Logicalmind:Lol, thankyou. How una see the Rap poem tho? You and Rextayne ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 5:18pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
GIYAZZ:very d.o.p.e, sorry 4 derailing ur thread, Nneka123 can be bitchy sometimes. ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:19pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:see this dead Christmas goat ![]() ![]() Ranting all these rubbish Just to feel good, when in the literal sense, you're making an idiocy of yourself, malnourished? Hehe! At least I look healthy ![]() ![]() ![]() Now for your own good stop quoting me to avoid getting heart attack from me! Cause I will use you as a scape goat ![]() Take your smelly pathetic self out of my mention! Go and create reasonable educative topics here! And stop following me around like a lost puppy! Shameless sheep ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:24pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Liar! Lemme expose you ![]() Now who's the fool now? You! ![]() Who's laughing now? Me! ![]() 2 Likes
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Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by GIYAZZ(m): 7:33pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:Lol, thanks. But I gasto to correct you, Nneka can be stubborn and rude, but hey! Not "Bitchy" . . . That word shouldn't be used on a lady. Hope younnamean? |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:40pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Nneka123:u reek of gargatuan stupidity i swear, luk at this dilapidated homeless transgendered comparing herself 2 me, ![]() ![]() |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:46pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:but dude! You're still ugly! ![]() So stop wasting your time spewing trash! Everything you typed is so senseless like you! Brainless pig ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: Who Laughs Last Laughs Best (rap Poetry) by Nobody: 7:47pm On Feb 12, 2015 |
Rextayne:All these thesis he dropped, he can't even afford to write a good essay ![]() |
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