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Re: A Poem for Change! by Sanchez01: 9:22pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
leadzeal:I beg to disagree. What makes poetry unique from other works of art are the structures, rhythmic tonality or the musicality of the poem and how the poem establishes certain degree of artistic values while still passing its message. 2 Likes |
Re: A Poem for Change! by absoluteSuccess: 9:25pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
So good to clamour for change So good to dream of a new dawn So good to hope and have it manifest So good to believe and dream comes true. 2 Likes |
Re: A Poem for Change! by endymetrix(m): 9:25pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Misogynist2014:Trash Indeed! |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Nobody: 9:26pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Misogynist2014:if u call this beautiful work a trash...den your life must be a trash 3 Likes |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Nobody: 9:28pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
leadzeal:your poem is disjointed.... learn from the op or check my threads 1 Like |
Re: A Poem for Change! by bilalfarid(m): 9:31pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
O my GOD THIS is awesome!!!! madam, if ur husband GEJ see these poem u would be devoured by TANOIDS. Or they will bath with acid. No say I no warn you O. 1 Like |
Re: A Poem for Change! by legendsilver(m): 9:36pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
homesteady:Nice one God bless the General 1 Like |
Re: A Poem for Change! by MrIncrediible(m): 9:40pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
How can I read this and not vote for GMB?? ![]() 1 Like |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Geewynn(m): 9:40pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
i rather tink u shuld change ur brain ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: A Poem for Change! by jerrymej(m): 9:40pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
You tried, work on your "Rhyme Patterns". It's so touch though. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by ojuoluwah(m): 9:41pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Change! change! change! is all we clamouring for. SAI buhari |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Nobody: 9:44pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Grade A bullshit 1 Like |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Nobody: 9:48pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
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Re: A Poem for Change! by homesteady(m): 10:10pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
leadzeal:Ermm... I never said I was good! This is my 1st poem ever! |
Re: A Poem for Change! by homesteady(m): 10:15pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Geewynn: gutun sharrap! ![]() ![]() You and your brother should accept change! |
Re: A Poem for Change! by homesteady(m): 10:16pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
scribespad: thanks for the support Sir, I'll surely check out the site! |
Re: A Poem for Change! by lanrock(m): 10:19pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Nice one GMB till GEJ knows that stealing and corruption are the same. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Misogynist2014(m): 10:21pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
POETIST:You lack home training. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by aimuan(m): 10:23pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Misogynist2014:can you compose your and give reasons why we should continue without CHANGE? 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Nobody: 10:27pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Misogynist2014:....lwkmd....thank you sir |
Re: A Poem for Change! by zingywingy: 10:34pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Nice write up. But u sud av include two more lines that says: Stealing is not a sin under their watch... Until it becomes corruption which is impossible to their belief. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Nobody: 10:36pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
homesteady: You are.. I did not mention you are not.. High breed poems from likes like Geoffrey Chaucer, William Shakespeare, William Woodsworth tend to be connotative most times if not all.. At the beginning of my comment I stated 'The poem' ,so for one, it is a poem. I went further to qualify it with the adjective 'not poetic and connotative' just to say make it more deep and for it to instill more reasoning afterall poems are not for 'quacks' to read but for deep thinkers with wild imagination. Let me read the poem and imagine how you felt exactly when those words were constructed and even go further to feel the place and surroundings in which you were in when you wrote it. Poems can be constructed for the sole purpose of discrediting.. To correct my initial flawed point. But I believe essays do well to pass discrediting wordings (my opinion).. I like your 7th Verse.. Hey! We are learning here. Nothing more beautiful than expressing one's thoughts through poems.. Hope we learn better. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by OMA4U(m): 10:36pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Looking beyond the alacrity in this as a political tract, I will proudly say that this is one of the best poems I have read in recent time. Painting Nigeria as though it's a woman is a great work of art and as a starter, you are indeed good. With little or much editing, that poem can be more artistic. Write more, please. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by uncjay(m): 10:42pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Clear message tho...commentators sha....with d poet oo n the commentators na one side una sleep face... The poem is subject to criticism not to express ur undying love for one vague political propaganda. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by done63: 10:52pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Nice work jawe... ![]() |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Senjuchiha: 10:57pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
President Jonathan is the Best Thing that has Ever Happened to Nigeria. 1] Goodluck Jonathan signed FOI bill that Obasanjo refused to sign and you join then in saying that Goodluck is bad. 2] Goodluck approved N18,000 Minimum wage from N7,500 Which Obasanjo refused to sign and you say that Goodluck is bad and NYSC allowance from N7,500 to nearly approved N39,500. 3] Goodluck dualized federal roads (about 25,000km) which Obasanjo and past Govts abandoned. 4] The rail system is working now, with little budget But Obasanjo Sunk billions of dollars without result, other pasts leader ignored. 5] Goodluck has been conducting free and fair elections whereas the ones conducted under Obasanjo are Shameful and national disgrace. 6] Goodluck established 12 new universities, 9 in the North to improve learning and knowledge and increase the Jambites admission rate. 7] Goodluck established the Almajiri system for Northern abandoned street children and those deprived of education by their own people. 8] Goodluck has been building dams and improving the country's power from 2500mW to 6,000MW - And successfully privatized the sector which many analyst believed is the best way to go. 9] Agriculture have been revamped and for the first time in Nigerian history, Food prices came down during Christmas, instead of skyrocketing. 10] 2013 and 2014 was the Christmas in Nigeria, where Nigerian did not sleep in filling stations for 3 to 4 days to get Petrol or 100s of people being roasted alive in attempts to get fuel in petrol stations, wickedly, you joined them to say that our God given President is not performing. 11] Airports are wearing world class looks and every zone have International airport. 12] This administration has employed more people in their 5years in office than any other in the history of Nigeria [Via Agric, Energy sector,16 New Car Companies, 12 New Universities, 3,826 primary Health care Centers, Teaching Hospitals] SURE-P, YOUWIN. Now do you think that General Muhammadu Buhari will perform Magic, which he could not do when he was in his 40s, if you vote him? It is left for You to Answer this Simple.Without APC ,the media would have been sane Without APC ,chibok girls would still be with their parents Without APC ,the north would have been peaceful and their economy would have increased Without APC ,Buhari would have retired from politics. Since APC brainwashed Buhari,we have witnessed incessant killings of innocent people,just to discredit Gej and now they have come up with another propaganda. What is wrong with the fg training our military personnel ? APC is demonic,don't vote for the blood thirsty janjaweedians on horse back. Vote wisely!Face issues. 1.)Mention one school buhari built, and I will vote for him. 2.)mention any report of Buhari assisting Jonathan to fight boko haram and i will vote for him 3.)mention one thing buhari has done for katsina state let alone northern Nigeria and i will vote for him. 4.)buhari is poor, has one bungalow and could not afford party ticket YET HIS DAUGHTER SCHOOLS ABROAD. IF AM LYING COUNTER ME AND I WILL VOTE FOR HIM. 5.) buhari the people's general so patriotic and incorruptible that - a.) Amaechi is the D.G of his campaign b.) Atiku, tinubu, oyegun, Rochas Okorocha, El-Rufai are in the same party with him If they are not, i will vote for Buhari. 6.) Buhari loves the people so much that twice he has agreed to debate. Abi? 7.) buhari is so clean, he produces a certificate with a signature and no name. He is so faithful when asked to bring certificate he brings statement of result. Be true to your self. The only people who will vote BUHARI are- A.) those who are ethnically blind B.) those who are open to religious politics C.) those who shy away from the truth. D.) those who are paid to deceive themselves and others to believe in Change! The only change in Apc is the former PDP members holding brooms! #unapologetic jonathanianWe Need more Cluelessness *He is Clueless yet his Government was the first in the World to conquer the dreaded Ebola Virus. * He is Clueless yet under his leadership,Nigeria has become the 3rd fastest growing economy in the world. *He is Clueless yet his Minister for Agriculture has been begged to come show the world how he eliminated corruption and transformed the Agriculture sector. *He is Clueless yet his Petroleum minister was elected to be the First female President of OPEC. *He is Clueless yet under his leadership,the Nigerian Economy is Number one in Africa. *He is Clueless yet he was able to Privatize the Power sector which none could do before him. * He is Clueless yet he has built more roads than any other government before him. *He is Clueless yet for the first time in our history,we now have over 10 Automobile manufacturers in Nigeria. *He is Clueless yet he's built over 12 tertiary institutions within 4 years. If all these were achieved by a clueless man,we need the Cluelessness to continue till 2019. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by JEITO: 11:28pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
What type of change do you want. Please specify ![]() |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Profkomolafe(m): 11:45pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
u mk sense wella. Sai change. |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Chitumu: 1:11am On Feb 15, 2015 |
Misogynist2014:saTAN tis aint no trash! get a lyf. 1 Like |
Re: A Poem for Change! by sexyjennik(f): 1:17am On Feb 15, 2015 |
This poem is just too good for a starter like you claimed. Nice poem and it's passing the right message. Keep up the good work ![]() |
Re: A Poem for Change! by Louisicon(m): 1:41am On Feb 15, 2015 |
Bro. The poem is good and the massage is an open secrete . But can i ask u when u have a carry over didnt u reseat for it......so bro Gej till 2020 Haha |
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