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ELYMAXiimus:
you guys should go vote on that brawl... Voting's open to all

Link?

Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

Link?

Ayamlaykorn

i posted it before... Scroll back up

ELYMAXiimus:

i posted it before... Scroll back up

My phone can't scroll.

Ayamlaykorn

Yo whassup people!

Meehn I've been in a swimming pool party in Asaba! It was fun today like for real!!!
I did a Rap freestyle on stage today, pure ffucking hot freestyle mixed with Igbo!!!

One of The MCs at the show asked for a freestyle rapper to come up stage and come bust the mic after some wack dude rapped and had a loud boo off stage. . . He was like "Ok, una boo this guy wey dey try rap? Oya if you know say you sabi rap pass am come freestyle for us"


Lol, and I was inside the pool having a cool swim, but when I heard it ehn, I quickly came up stage and he gave me the mic, asked me which beat I would like to rap on, and I told him anyone the DJ's got. Gbam!

Them play me one d0pe beat like that! I was so inspired by the crowd, I was wet oo, putting on only tight swimming pants lol

But I carried the mic and started busting bars with pidgin, Igbo and some prewritten English lines. Lol

I rapped and rapped sotey one of the MC's con come outside sing the hook con also use style diss me! I con vex!!!

Carry Igbo diss the MC. . . This was what I said:

MC, Iyiri skinny jeans dika onye homo/
Dewe iru ka nwa mummy, phone gi na-ering, mma gi na kpogi na phone!/

This was just a simple punch, but the way I said it and demonstrated it to the audience copped me a thunderous clap!!
I continued dissing the dude till he ran backstage laughing!!

Buhahahahaha!! I'm so happy today mehn, cos after the show everybody was hailing me Starboy, Nigga Nigga, rapper, Phyno junior, MI, Lol!!!

Chai! Freestyle dey sweet well well o! The attention I got today was too much and sweet!

Girls were looking at me like say I be Celebrity!

Lol, I'm just so happy meehn!

laykorn:


My phone can't scroll.

Ayamlaykorn

here

www.nairaland.com/2142078/complete-slaughter-ii-elymaxiimus-vs

GIYAZZ:
Yo whassup people!

Meehn I've been in a swimming pool party in Asaba! It was fun today like for real!!!
I did a Rap freestyle on stage today, pure ffucking hot freestyle mixed with Igbo!!!

One of The MCs at the show asked for a freestyle rapper to come up stage and come bust the mic after some wack dude rapped and had a loud boo off stage. . . He was like "Ok, una boo this guy wey dey try rap? Oya if you know say you sabi rap pass am come freestyle for us"


Lol, and I was inside the pool having a cool swim, but when I heard it ehn, I quickly came up stage and he gave me the mic, asked me which beat I would like to rap on, and I told him anyone the DJ's got. Gbam!

Them play me one d0pe beat like that! I was so inspired by the crowd, I was wet oo, putting on only tight swimming pants lol

But I carried the mic and started busting bars with pidgin, Igbo and some prewritten English lines. Lol

I rapped and rapped sotey one of the MC's con come outside sing the hook con also use style diss me! I con vex!!!

Carry Igbo diss the MC. . . This was what I said:

MC, Iyiri skinny jeans dika onye homo/
Dewe iru ka nwa mummy, phone gi na-ering, mma gi na kpogi na phone!/

This was just a simple punch, but the way I said it and demonstrated it to the audience copped me a thunderous clap!!
I continued dissing the dude till he ran backstage laughing!!

Buhahahahaha!! I'm so happy today mehn, cos after the show everybody was hailing me Starboy, Nigga Nigga, rapper, Phyno junior, MI, Lol!!!

Chai! Freestyle dey sweet well well o! The attention I got today was too much and sweet!

Girls were looking at me like say I be Celebrity!

Lol, I'm just so happy meehn!

hehe.... Good for you. Before you know am, one producer go dey find your number

ELYMAXiimus:

hehe.... Good for you. Before you know am, one producer go dey find your number

Lol, I pray o

Bays(base)

Iceskidd:
whatever makes you happy

oya whoop me...9 bars,deal??

GIYAZZ:
Yo whassup people!

Meehn I've been in a swimming pool party in Asaba! It was fun today like for real!!!
I did a Rap freestyle on stage today, pure ffucking hot freestyle mixed with Igbo!!!

One of The MCs at the show asked for a freestyle rapper to come up stage and come bust the mic after some wack dude rapped and had a loud boo off stage. . . He was like "Ok, una boo this guy wey dey try rap? Oya if you know say you sabi rap pass am come freestyle for us"


Lol, and I was inside the pool having a cool swim, but when I heard it ehn, I quickly came up stage and he gave me the mic, asked me which beat I would like to rap on, and I told him anyone the DJ's got. Gbam!

Them play me one d0pe beat like that! I was so inspired by the crowd, I was wet oo, putting on only tight swimming pants lol

But I carried the mic and started busting bars with pidgin, Igbo and some prewritten English lines. Lol

I rapped and rapped sotey one of the MC's con come outside sing the hook con also use style diss me! I con vex!!!

Carry Igbo diss the MC. . . This was what I said:

MC, Iyiri skinny jeans dika onye homo/
Dewe iru ka nwa mummy, phone gi na-ering, mma gi na kpogi na phone!/

This was just a simple punch, but the way I said it and demonstrated it to the audience copped me a thunderous clap!!
I continued dissing the dude till he ran backstage laughing!!

Buhahahahaha!! I'm so happy today mehn, cos after the show everybody was hailing me Starboy, Nigga Nigga, rapper, Phyno junior, MI, Lol!!!

Chai! Freestyle dey sweet well well o! The attention I got today was too much and sweet!

Girls were looking at me like say I be Celebrity!

Lol, I'm just so happy meehn!

person record am?..make i watch

Supermiy:
person record am?..make i watch

Supported!

Supermiy:
person record am?..make i watch

Lol, I no know o!

But I think some people will, but I was too busy focused on busting rhymes. . . #NoTime

GIYAZZ:
Lol, I no know o!

But I think some people will, but I was too busy focused on busting rhymes. . . #NoTime

Back in the day... This kind tin happen to me for glo rock and roll enugu.... As i climb stage i melt.... I bleeped up.

But ehh, if that kind opportunity come again, I'm gonna nail it!

GIYAZZ:
Lol, I no know o!

But I think some people will, but I was too busy focused on busting rhymes. . . #NoTime

hehehe..asaba's phyno..where your own 99inch hair now??

jreyez:


Back in the day... This kind tin happen to me for glo rock and roll enugu.... As i climb stage i melt.... I bleeped up.

But ehh, if that kind opportunity come again, I'm gonna nail it!

Lol bro.

Freestyle is kinda easy, you just gotta loose yourself to the music, rap about funny stuffs, you can even crack a popular joke rhyming on the beat and it will sound d0pe. I did it

All you need do is rhyme, even though na one syllable, just rhyme words and after you can practice more. . . You will just develop naturally.

I'm still developing though

Supermiy:
hehehe..asaba's phyno..where your own 99inch hair now??

Lol guy, what's your first moniker on here?

GIYAZZ:
Lol guy, what's your first moniker on here?

i gat none bro....need help can't freestyle no matter how hard i try most times without beat tho..infact i don tire,i nor dy practice again self

GIYAZZ:
Lol bro.

Freestyle is kinda easy, you just gotta loose yourself to the music, rap about funny stuffs, you can even crack a popular joke rhyming on the beat and it will sound d0pe. I did it

All you need do is rhyme, even though na one syllable, just rhyme words and after you can practice more. . . You will just develop naturally.

I'm still developing though

Freestyle? I'm good at freestyle... I freestyle at work, even live battles sometimes...
No be the freestyle be the wahala, na the crowd....

GIYAZZ:
Lol, I pray o

na for my state you go dey form starboy abi!

ibime: Base, so na wetin them teach you for Facebook be
thís? Rather than landing knockouts, you're confusing
readers with all thís Teacher Teacher nonsense.

Its a matter of preference ... Plus I'd love to see a more detailed break down so I understand your views better

Lool...

04kaa:


giyazz , upload it in the 04ka transforms mikuz thread, i listen and assess all audio in there. go hard giyazz

this guy's character is strange

Emaprince, you mean you didnt like the format of my verse?.. I'm guessing it's same thing ibime didnt like... Wow.

Thanks for letting me know...

Anything else weird about that style?

Lime'Rick Rap Attack (accapella)

http://www.datafilehost.com/d/f10dda67
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Yo Yo Yo I advance with quick steps as I eagerly come/ I wrestle not against a beat...my delivery raw/ so when I bring in the swords?/ yo quickly withdraw/ cos I ain compared with ur likes....its no simile talk/
and yo I gun down thugs with a bow.....as I come out fuckin' the holes/ of abundant sluts in a row/ I shut that door...
these dawgs cnt touch me the hopes...o' doing that be shattered/ so I bust out in laughter/
like they ain do nothin cos their punchlines watery, they knw/
haan Its deadly...yo call twist and burst rhymer...but I flip the art faster/
am like 'you hear wah am sayin' they like 'nah!' ....and they pissed the black mamba/
so I be smashing these fuccks and they gladly give up....
Its Karate hip hop...like Chris in fine china!/
and when its story time, they asking......No, I mean they start asking/ like like like...bro, nicca!!! when u start rapping?/
then am like ----- er well its nat magic.... it dated back to the days, of abel fighting with cane/ they interrupted, like actually/ it was the other way round, whatever men......but cane threatened, abel be doubting like thomas...bragging and pompous/
and when he ki....and when he killed? He rebelled out in the grave/
he a black bastard/ was only a matter o' 6 days...it all died down and there was na problem!/
welllll...at this point, I think its time to switch pattern/ they say u knw that nigga called modo? he spits harder/
i flare up like wtf...that niggas about the 9s, am about the macs....so if he mode 9..I 'mode m'...another nigga shouted from the back 'swift faster'/
Pause
that nigga's about the 9s, am about the macs....so if he mode 9..I modem...another nigga shouted from the back 'swift faster'/
then theres this nigga called boogey...

He be like

"arghh! Greetin sunshine, how could I steal his punchlines....when mine was a sublime...

So I step into the game....heavily deranged...it was slow and the time wasnt constant

shut down, shut down, for the boss now com-pro-mise to the foe on a lock down

falls down falls down to a ghost, worn out on a toast.....and emerging a hunter

now am pissed...was it something I did? that was haunting my sins, for the fun?...so ah quickly went on ma knees...and am asking for mercy...am back"

yo yo, I said I'm back......as I simply bullied/....and inflicted boogey/ he copies eminem...it evident....he dont desist from the act? He gets cremated till he falls flat like his sister's booty/
he spits better than that? Nope....he-never-att­racts....he sixth on the list? I give melody with the four fours, when they pop pop.....the white nigga got skeleton in his cupboard....and I dnt believe when they say hes better-than-blaqbone­z!!/
I straighten the fact..../ my guns neva go 'boom'....they go 'Kung lao!!'......so the moment they pop, they be aiming the heart/
now lets table it out...I ain dissing inferiors/ so, if I take side shot....its a 3D Picture!!/
I'm killing these pricks..for deceiving lil breeds..../or they hide in hole...
I'll be glad if they know...
That before they hittin it big.....it really needs vigor/

so fucck yo fuckerss, i mean ffuck yall fuckers....and flops from the gutters....yo bitches cross my path, yo get bleeped in Golgotha...and am out.

ELYMAXiimus:

this guy's character is strange

If u must use that pattern, do it like this:


bbbbbbbbbbbbb...bbbbbbbbbbbb
bbbbbbbbbbbb....bbbbbbbbbb

bbbbbbbbbb....bbbbbbbbbb
bbbbbbbbbbbbb...bbbbbbbbbb

Otherwise, you'd give ur readers a hard time making out the bars

Limerick:
Lime'Rick Rap Attack (accapella)

http://www.datafilehost.com/d/f10dda67
.
.
.
.
.
Yo Yo Yo I advance with quick steps as I eagerly come/ I wrestle not against a beat...my delivery raw/ so when I bring in the swords?/ yo quickly withdraw/ cos I ain compared with ur likes....its no simile talk/
and yo I gun down thugs with a bow.....as I come out fuckin' the holes/ of abundant sluts in a row/ I shut that door...
these dawgs cnt touch me the hopes...o' doing that be shattered/ so I bust out in laughter/
like they ain do nothin cos their punchlines watery, they knw/
haan Its deadly...yo call twist and burst rhymer...but I flip the art faster/
am like 'you hear wah am sayin' they like 'nah!' ....and they pissed the black mamba/
so I be smashing these fuccks and they gladly give up....
Its Karate hip hop...like Chris in fine china!/
and when its story time, they asking......No, I mean they start asking/ like like like...bro, nicca!!! when u start rapping?/
then am like ----- er well its nat magic.... it dated back to the days, of abel fighting with cane/ they interrupted, like actually/ it was the other way round, whatever men......but cane threatened, abel be doubting like thomas...bragging and pompous/
and when he ki....and when he killed? He rebelled out in the grave/
he a black bastard/ was only a matter o' 6 days...it all died down and there was na problem!/
welllll...at this point, I think its time to switch pattern/ they say u knw that nigga called modo? he spits harder/
i flare up like wtf...that niggas about the 9s, am about the macs....so if he mode 9..I 'mode m'...another nigga shouted from the back 'swift faster'/
Pause
that nigga's about the 9s, am about the macs....so if he mode 9..I modem...another nigga shouted from the back 'swift faster'/
then theres this nigga called boogey...

He be like

"arghh! Greetin sunshine, how could I steal his punchlines....when mine was a sublime...

So I step into the game....heavily deranged...it was slow and the time wasnt constant

shut down, shut down, for the boss now com-pro-mise to the foe on a lock down

falls down falls down to a ghost, worn out on a toast.....and emerging a hunter

now am pissed...was it something I did? that was haunting my sins, for the fun?...so ah quickly went on ma knees...and am asking for mercy...am back"

yo yo, I said I'm back......as I simply bullied/....and inflicted boogey/ he copies eminem...it evident....he dont desist from the act? He gets cremated till he falls flat like his sister's booty/
he spits better than that? Nope....he-never-att­racts....he sixth on the list? I give melody with the four fours, when they pop pop.....the white nigga got skeleton in his cupboard....and I dnt believe when they say hes better-than-blaqbone­z!!/
I straighten the fact..../ my guns neva go 'boom'....they go 'Kung lao!!'......so the moment they pop, they be aiming the heart/
now lets table it out...I ain dissing inferiors/ so, if I take side shot....its a 3D Picture!!/
I'm killing these pricks..for deceiving lil breeds..../or they hide in hole...
I'll be glad if they know...
That before they hittin it big.....it really needs vigor/

so fucck yo fuckerss, i mean ffuck yall fuckers....and flops from the gutters....yo bitches cross my path, yo get bleeped in Golgotha...and am out.

I love you bro.... No homo.
Na this kind rap i dey like.

ELYMAXiimus:
Emaprince, you mean you didnt like the format of my verse?.. I'm guessing it's same thing ibime didnt like... Wow.

Thanks for letting me know...

Anything else weird about that style?

that format disrupts the flow completely! This is rap and the flow must be there bro.
Any other thing?..well,you have lots of ideas to execute but you've got to add more sting to them.choose the most suitable words and a nice build up also adds weight to it.you are doing good already but you can still do better.cheers!

kr0ne:

If u must use that pattern, do it like this:


bbbbbbbbbbbbb...bbbbbbbbbbbb
bbbbbbbbbbbb....bbbbbbbbbb

bbbbbbbbbb....bbbbbbbbbb
bbbbbbbbbbbbb...bbbbbbbbbb

Otherwise, you'd give ur readers a hard time making out the bars

okay noted... I'll get perfect with it next time...

okay thanks alot... I actually contemplated using this format. I knew some of you guys wouldnt like it. But i decided to gamble it....

Btw, i impressed myself. I'm supprised some are tagging it as "weak".... Those punches look so sick to me, mhen...

Maybe it's the format ..





Nd, anybody who aint science inclined won't get some of my punches.. E.g my opener


this is why leaving keys is good at times...

After voting's concluded though, i'll decipher all...

Emaprince:
that format disrupts the flow completely! This is rap and the flow must be there bro.
Any other thing?..well,you have lots of ideas to execute but you've got to add more sting to them.choose the most suitable words and a nice build up also adds weight to it.you are doing good already but you can still do better.cheers!

aiit thanks...

I call out Ema Prince.