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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Olanireti(m): 3:16pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
D9ty7:Got you perfectly. Then let the action begin. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by smarh(f): 8:16pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
ahn ahn.. no update this night.. i'm already tired of waiting |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Skimpledawg(m): 8:44pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
[quote author=sammyomotola post=31539839]wow!!! This is awesome, have missed alot. U make my remember ''james handly chase'', the action writer, believe he is no better of u. D9ty7, u re just too cool. I love u, ur stories and ........ Nice 1 bro[/quote] bros calm dwn! |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kizzykeziah: 10:20pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
I can't believe I missed this much just for a couple of days. BTW, the story is really getting more interesting and Mark ehn..... As for that Daniel guy, I wish he never gets the kid he wants. So much for being unperturbed all this while and now he wants his son because he found out his wife is barren . Jimmy digging his pit serves him very right. And I've got one expression for him when he gets to know his 'friend' messed his wife up so to speak Ride on, sir. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 10:29pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
kizzykeziah:Una dey here? Let's enjoy the tory dey go now |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 10:52pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
bigwig97:You may be right sir But you know, if he's proud and clean about what he has done with his friend's wife, I think he need not to hide under the quest of looking or wanting to, find a kid, so as to keep adeola shut or something And, what did you think the abortion is for then? He should just come out straight, and tell daniel that, he's the one that was responsible for turning his wife into a barren, and believe you me, I will gladly agree with you that, he did not force her |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kizzykeziah: 11:34pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
harjibolar10: Yes o. I think you are in front row maybe I could manage a seat beside you. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 11:37pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
kizzykeziah:Be my guest But na zobo me get for here oo, I hope you go manage am |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kizzykeziah: 11:45pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
harjibolar10: I'm allergic to zobo o. Would prefer something more classy and expensive, lol. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 11:56pm On Mar 12, 2015 |
kizzykeziah:Like kunu, shey? Or better still, name it |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Skimpledawg(m): 6:30am On Mar 13, 2015 |
kizzykeziah:stuff46, get dz Bros a pot of crocodile pepper soup n Kai-kai |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Olanireti(m): 7:15am On Mar 13, 2015 |
Hi everyone, how your night? D, how far naa, won't there be morning dossage? |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ThaRuthlxx7: 7:52am On Mar 13, 2015 |
NOT A THING YET |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 8:50am On Mar 13, 2015 |
--continuation-- All that occupied her mind throughout the night was how to pacify her son and truely, she couldn't come up with a way to apologise, neither could she drag herself into the boy's room, even though she knew he won't allow her into his room. And for the first time, she had a two minute devotion in her room, after which she entered the bathroom to take her bath. She does less cooking in the morning, because her son loves eating ready made foods in the morning. The only day she cooked in the morning was always on Saturdays, when Chris woul be home all through. She re-emerged a few minutes later, got dressed after which she grabbed her key, handbag and walked out of the room. She heaved a sigh of relief when she saw Chris seated on the three seater couch in the living room, a plate of corn flakes in hand. Even though he was not yet dressed completetly in , he still had his trouser on, as well as his shoes. "Good morning mum." He greeted. "Good morning my prince." She replied as she walked into the dinning and saw a plate of dried cornflakes, a plate of powdered milk and a flask on the table. "Is this for me?" She asked with a smile. "Yes." He replied as he picked the remote pressed a random button and the channel changed. "That's very sweet of you, but you know I don't like cornflakes." She replied. "I know you don't, but you like my own." He replied as he changed the channel. "Chris, I think you need to reduce the rate at which you watch sports channels and musical channels. Try business reports and news channels." She advised. "Remember, you want to be a business man and you need to know how it is done." And reluctantly, he switched to one of the channel's his mother mentioned. "Am sorry about yesterday." She said when he was done eating. He ignored his mother, adjusted his trouser, wore his shirt, buttoned up, put his tie on his neck and within a minute, he was done looking handsome. No wonder his picture has been adorning the school's sign posts everywhere. "Chris, I am talking to you." She said holding his hands. "Mum please, I am running late already. We have a seven o'clock class." He replied. "Even if you have a five o'clock class, am I not the one to drive you to school?" She asked. "When you cared less about how I survive. The other day I left home angrily, did you ask he how I got to school? No. And yesterday, you slapped me so hard. A wicked woman can not slap her step son or adopted son like that." He replied angrily. She wished she didn't talk to him that morning. Because talking to him only opened his wounds. "Chris, do you realise that I am your mother?" She asked. "Now tell me, how did you get to school that day?" "I had to go to my classmate's house on the next street, his dad drove us to school." He replied. "Are you making friends with bad boys?" "Mum, I said my classmate and not any random person in this neighbourhood. Moreso, even if my making friends with bad boys guarantees that I would get driven to school, why shouldn't I make friends with them? Afterall, you don't care." He said angrily. Picked his school bag, hung it on his back and made to walk out of the house, but she held her. "I love you so much my happiness. You know I am ready to do anything to make you happy." She said. "And moreso, I was also mad at you that day because you walked out on me." And while speaking to the summit, the Managing Director of Godson group, Mr Daniel Martins stressed the need for business owners and managers to take less risks while trying to divert their business direction. He also stressed the need for every business to have a strong financial backing with the insurance company... The business reporter said and at the same time, Christopher turned to look at the television where a man in his early thirties was speaking at a function. He himself could recognise about three business men in the hall. "Mum, is that the Daniel Martice I saw you write about in your diary?" He asked. Tina angrily picked the remote, switched off the tv and grabbed Christopher's hand. "You are running late." She said and dragged him out of the house. --to be continued-- 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Darus05(m): 10:05am On Mar 13, 2015 |
I think Tina should told Chris who his father is. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 11:41am On Mar 13, 2015 |
:-/ Daniel just a selfish dude, i pray his pranks turn out to be against him. Oga dee, nice updates so far. I really missed much this few days that i was not available. Idris: first to be killed by dee, Rip. I am seeing the death of a main character in future updates but dont know who plus the person that killed idris dead. Skimpledawg take time o, i be like waiter for your eye? |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 11:43am On Mar 13, 2015 |
Chris be careful with the people you want to hang around with this days, your mum knows whats best for you. Dee abeg spare that guy the truma, he is too young to experience such. Jimmy and adeola game is almost up. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Olanireti(m): 1:13pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
I strongly believe it high time Christina told the boy the whole truth. I believe his old enough to understand everything |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 1:24pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
--continuation-- Tina was deep in thought as she drove from home to Island where chris' school was situated and the young boy wasted no time in asking questions about Daniel Martin whom he had seen earlier on screen plus he had at a time came accross the name in his mother's diary. "Good morning." The security man greeted as he admitted her into the N.A.T.U ICT hall. She did bother replying the greeting and immediatle she took the last bend into the hall, all eyes fell on her like they had been expecting her. She stopped in her tracks as about thirty pair of eyes settled on her. She managed to look around the to see any familiar face around, but saw none. "Hey Tina, something just came up." Mark came around, grab her hand and led her towards her office upstairs. She could still feel the eyes behind herself. "What's going on?" She asked. "Nothing." He replied as the marched on the steps. "Mark! Why are they staring at me? What's the matter?" She asked with an almost raised voice. "Nothing that I know of." He replied calmly as he pushed the door open and they walked in. He stood a few steps away from her as she said her prayers and less than a minute later, he had a feeling she was about to round up and two seconds before she opened her eyes, he said. "Amen." She opened her eyes and smiled, before sitting down on her chair. The first time in six days that Mark would be in her office and she would sit on her chair. He came around her immediately, switched on her computer and navigated his way around the homepage. "Mark, its my computer in my office." She said. "I know what I am doing. Or do you also save p*rn on your computer?" He asked as he produced a chip from only God knows where, attached it a a flashdrive-like device and pushed it into a port on the computer's CPU and waited for the computer to admit it. "Is there someone who saves p*rn on his/her computer here?"She asked curiously. "Yeah. A whole lot of people. Those with offices though. That explains why I asked if you also have them on your computer since you also have your office." He replied. "Can you give me their names and how did you know?" she asked smiling for the first time since she left home. "I am not allowed to tell you their names. And how I got to know. I can enter any office around here, open anybody's computer, so that explains that too." He replied and his face lit up in excitement as a media page displayed on her screen. "You know, other computers didn't accept this chip, only your computer accepted it." He explained as he clicked the play symbol. "I spoke to the boys already sir. They'll be joining the train at Ocean view hotel where I am lodged with the other boys, then we move in to our final destination." A masculine voice said and immediately the media stopped playing. "Is that all?" Tina asked. "Yeah." He replied. "So, what's it about?" she asked. "I felt tempted to scold you because you just acted like an amateur agent, but I'll spare you.." He replied and she scoffed. "You remember the boy who died yesterday? The one who was killed along the corridor?" He asked. "Yes, Idris." She replied. "You won't believe he has a private investigation team." Tina exclaimed in shock. "One of his men came in ten minutes and dropped the recording so we could work on it." He replied. "Wow! That means that, as he worked for the government here, he has a team whom he worked for privately?" Tina said. "But, how did they get this recording?" "According to him, they have girls in their midst who worked as night workers. All they need to do is hang around a suspect, hook them up for the night and they record everything said." Mark explained. "That means we have to head to the said hotel to know what is going on?" Tina asked. She had decided to allow Mark take charge for today. "Yeah. You know that with the demise of Idris, his team can no longer continue. They work with his ID card. But they will assist us this last time by watching the particular room where this call was made. Look out for entry and exit. While we form backup." Mark explained. "That's perfect." Tina replied as she closed her computer, grabbed her car key and followed Mark out of the office. As usual, all eyes turned on her as soon as she came out. "Lock your d*mned eyes in their socket or face the reason why you are here. Your compute screen needs you attention." He said at top voice for them to hear and they hissed at him. "Thanks." Tina said as they entered the weaponry where other agents were getting ready to move. "You look good today Christi." One of the men complimented and Tina smiled. "She is your boss, watch your words." Mark replied him --to be continued-- 1 Like |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 1:43pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
I had always know from the very first stage where, mark Jr was introduced that, he will be a 'jolly good fellow', and now, he's behaving like one now, and I'm starting to see mark ashimolowo sr., in him... Tina, irrespective of what your history is, you have to let Chris in on it ooo, before its too late and, he go hear another version of the story somewhere else Keep em coming boss |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 1:55pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
--continuation-- Mark Anthony walked out of the four storey building into the parking lot where a loaded truck was parked as well as two SUVs. "Is everything loaded yet?" He asked as he inspected the truck where several cartons were arranged up to the roof. "Yes sir, everything is loaded." The captain replied. "Are still sticking to the plan?" He asked. "Of course. Once we enter Lagos, the truck will be driven to final destination where the bomb would be detonated. While one of the two SUVs goes to Ocean view hotel where we'll meet with the captain and discuss how we intend to carry out the plan." The captain explained, shook hands with Mark Anthony. The next minute, the truck which was labelled "JS Milk" a trademark name of a company known as 'Johnstones' Nigeria limited which deals mainly with the production of milk. The first SUV led the convoy and another SUV took the rear with the truck in between. Fifteen minutes into their journey, the SUV was stopped by the police on patrol and the next minute, the SUV was allowed to go, the truck was delayed while the second SUV left to avoid suspicion. "What's inside the truck?" One of the policemen asked. "Are you so blind that you couldn't see the 'Johnstones' label around it?" A man sitting beside the truck driver asked. "I need to inspect it." The policeman pretended like he didn't hear the insult. "Fine, go ahead." The drive said as he alighted, as well as his partner. They yanked the door open and hundreds of cartons of 'JS milk' greeted them. The police officer carried a carton, tore it open and saw the sachets of the 'Js milk' laying on top of another. He nodded his head in satisfaction. "But 'Johnstones' doesn't use this type of truck." Another police officer chipped in. "You have a point, but you know that today is the grand finale of the inter state school debates organised by JS milk. We ran out of trucks, then we decided to use one of the old trucks." The driver replied confidently. "We can even show you our Identity cards and everything to show that we work with 'Jonhstones Nigeria limited." The second man took the greatest risk, but the policemen bought it. "We are convinced already." One of the policemen replied. "So, can we leave?" The driver asked. "Not so soon. You must do us good." The police officer who stopped them said. The driver gave them wads of naira notes, as well as two cartons of milk. "Na you be baba. Oya dey go dey go." The policemen quickly stopped the other cars from moving as the ensured that the truck returned safely back on the road. "I hope we are safe now." The man beside the driver said. "I think so too. I don't think we'll be stopped by any police officer by the time we enter Lagos." The driver replied. ----------- "Oga, you dey see wetin I dey see?" One of the police officers asked as soon the truck left. "Wetin you dey see?" His boss asked. "That truck that claimed to be from 'JS' seemed to be coming from Ibadan or somewhere close to Ibadan. Johnstones milk is not being produced in Ibadan, but Ota, Lagos state." The junior officer replied. "So?" His boss asked. "Oga no mind him jare, the bottom line is that, we searched the truck, found milk inside and they even gave us some. What's our business with where the truck is coming from?" Another officer chipped in. "I know, but my point is, an empty Johnstones truck should be coming from Ibadan not a fully loaded one." The officer defended. "Return to the road. In case you see another vehicle with edibles, make sure you stop them." His oga dismissed him angrily. "Silly boy." ------------ "Captain on the line. Drive straight to the stadium, someone is waiting to lead you to where other vehicles are parked. We'll join you people soon. Currently on the way to ocean view hotel." "Copy that." The driver replied. "Make sure the truck is positioned very well. Our main target is the minister for education, but unfortunately, thousands of school children will die with him." The captain said and hung up. --to be continued-- 1 Like |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Olanireti(m): 2:18pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
Chai, so many lives will soon be wasted. All this terrorists, then get mind o |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Skimpledawg(m): 3:07pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
stuff46: |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 3:33pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
I appreciate the comments dropped so far today. From Christopher's advocates(who want his mother to tell him who is father is) to the anti Daniel & Jimmy crew, to those who have started attacking Adeola even though we don't know about her plan, to those who have one or two words of encouragement for D9ty7 to the Pro-Tina and Pro-Mark. I love you all. Olanireti, skimpledawg, stuff46, harjibolar10, Darus05, ThaRuthlxx7I appreciate y'all. Even though the comments are not much like I expected, that won't discourage me cos I have a feeling, the comments are still gonna come. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by princesssusan(f): 3:39pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
Yeee,poor lives wil soon b wasted o |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Skimpledawg(m): 3:57pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
I appreciate y'all. Even though the comments are not much like I expected, that won't discourage me cos I have a feeling, the comments are still gonna come.[/quote] We dey ya back Broda mi..... Ride on Monday updates dee |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 3:59pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 5:07pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
Haba!you guys are wicked,you didn't bother to ask after me. Kudos to D9ty7 I stopped at page 2 |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 5:57pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
The return of Al-yakob Mark Ashimolowo!! !!! Buy why mark sr. This is bad now, life of those kids, I hope this Christ won't be among those student oooo, cos me cant afford to lose that kind of inteligent d detsrmined dude o It's too much from my own mouth, to commend such a great writer like you ni oo, that's why I've not been saying anything concerning that Sir You surely are doing a great work here now, you need nobody to tell you that Anyways, like psalmwise always write and I will quote Let me hail una in literaturelander default D9TY7 YOU ARE THE BOMB 1 Like |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 6:02pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
harjibolar10:Sorry o, but Al Yakob is not part of Mark snr's names. Maybe you meant Al Biyal? Al Biyal is the Egyptian president who is partnering with Mark Anthony snr. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by smarh(f): 6:07pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
this story is really gonna b a block buster... mary ashimolowo.. an anti terrorism agent.. mary anthony, his father a terrorist... but come 2 think of it.. people r meant 2 c life as vanity... anthony is doing all these just because of sum coup and his wife... the country has 2 suffer unrest 4 his personal issues.... ride on dee... really anxious 2 c this story's completion |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Darus05(m): 6:10pm On Mar 13, 2015 |
[color=#000000][/color]Seriouly some naija police ar stup*d...D7ty9 nice work u ar doing. |
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