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Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 2:48am On Apr 26, 2015 |
Okay, here is something I have been working on in the last 6 years, I started writing this since 2009 and after so many deleting, re-editing, incorporating of new ideas and all the likes, I can finally boldly say that its now close to perfection (though still not perfect) so don't hesitate to pass your correction any time... Note: I have always been so fascinated with the English life, the way they speak and all the likes, that is why I wrote this basically in foreign tone... I know that I also stand to gain from it if this work gains recognition in UK... Enough of all this talks, here is the prologue. 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Brymo: 6:50am On Apr 26, 2015 |
we pray it's a blockbuster. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Queening(f): 1:31pm On Apr 26, 2015 |
Ride on op |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 3:07pm On Apr 26, 2015 |
Waiting |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Missmossy(f): 5:10pm On Apr 26, 2015 |
Following |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by stonecoldcafe: 5:27pm On Apr 26, 2015 |
Deleting, re-editing? Why not look at your title again. Anticipating this one though... 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by D9ty7(m): 8:29pm On Apr 26, 2015 |
In the last six years you have been editing, deleting and re-editing the body of your story, but hey! You failed to look at the head. The title should be; Loss of Virginity; an early mistake and not Lost of Virginity; and early mistake. Take no offence with my manner of approach. 21 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:03am On Apr 28, 2015 |
CHAPTER 1 I walked out of the bathroom and began to slowly make my way down the narrow hallway. My hands were tucked deep into the pockets of my little pink pajama pants in an attempt to keep my fingers warm. The night air was chilly and as I silently made my way back to my bedroom I couldn't sway my mind away from the thought of sliding back under the warmth of my plush blanket. I was only sporting a tiny little black tank top and already I was starting to feel the goose bumps rising up on my arms. The house was silent. The only noises were the sounds of the wind howling fiercely outside the window and my older brother's epic snoring echoing down the hallway. My parents were away for the weekend, gone on some major golf tournament, which left the house to me and my brother. Not that it was much of a surprise, being left unsupervised was the norm as my parents were hardly ever home. If they weren't away for golf then it was business or another vacation, either way they were really only home a few days a month. Before they departed, they had left implicit instructions that we were not allowed to have any friends over. Naturally, my brother decided to rebel against my parent's authority and invite his utterly hot friend over for the night. I honestly didn't mind the eye candy and my parents would be none the wiser. Also, it didn't hurt that the guy was unbelievably sexy and one of the most popular guys at our school, Crowns High. I couldn't help but stare at him with quiet reverence and awe every time I saw him, even though he barely even acknowledged my existence. As I reached my bedroom door I turned the knob and walked into my warm and cozy bedroom. My heart skipped a beat and my breath was caught in my chest as I realized there was someone sitting on my bed. It took me a moment to realize who it was as relief washed over me. It was only Adams, my brother's friend. He was wearing a pair of black and red plaid pajama pants with a tight white muscle shirt. I could see every perfectly chiseled muscle through the thin fabric of his shirt, which instantly caused me to breathe in sharply. His tousled brown hair was about an inch long and stood up on all ends, indicating he had probably been tossing and turning in bed for hours. Then suddenly the relief transformed itself into mild confusion. I mean, sure, I was relieved that it was Adams in my bedroom and not some creepy stranger danger crawling in through the window, but I thought to myself, 'what was Adams Brown doing in my bedroom?' "A-Adams?" I stuttered as I took a few more brave steps into my bedroom. "W- what are you doing in here?" And there it was, my very first words ever spoken to this demi-god, Adams Brown. Although Adams had been my brother's friend for years I had never exchanged any sort of verbal dialogue with him before. Hell, I'd never really spoken to any of the student body at Crowns High. "I couldn't sleep," he finally replied. I frowned, my eyebrows raised in confusion. "So you decided you come into my bedroom?" "Well, I wanted to come see you," he answered quietly as he stood up and began to walk toward me. Instantly, I felt my heart begin to beat more rapidly and my palms begin to get clammy. "M-me?" I asked, still completely dazed and somewhat confused. I mean why would he want to see me? Adams was two years older than me and completely out of my league. "But why me?" He took one last step that brought him only inches away from me. "I can't get you out of my mind, Jane," he whispered near my ear. His hand reached toward me as his fingers traced along the outline of my face. The second his rough skin brushed against my cheek a shiverof of desire ran down my spine. I stood there completely stunned speechless as I continued to just stare into his deep brown eyes. My heart continued to thump until it was racing at an abnormal and unhealthy rate. I wondered if it was possible to have a heart attack at my age. TO BE CONTINUED 5 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:05am On Apr 28, 2015 |
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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:26am On Apr 28, 2015 |
CONTINUATION "Jane" he began to speak in this whispery deep voice. He placed both his hands onto my hips before pulling me closer to him. "I can't explain the way you make me feel." "I-I...uh, b-but you...I'm not, uh." I stuttered, not being able to even remotely turn any of my words into a coherent sentence. "Shhhh," he whispered. "Don't say anything..." He pulled me even closer to him as he lowered his head and lifted my chin. Before I even had a chance to comprehend what was happening, he pressed his lips gently against mine. At first my eyes grew completely wide. This was nothing compared to what I had imagined my first kiss would be like. Somehow it seemed far better now that it was actually happening! Merely a second later the shock of him kissing me had subsided and my lips instantly began to move in unison with his. He gently glided his hands under my bottom and picked me up as my legs wrapped around his pelvis. He pulled me into a tighter embrace, our lips stuck together like magnets to metal. Adams began to walk us toward my bed as I felt his tongue slowly invade its way into my mouth. He began to draw circles on my tongue with his. He tasted sweet and tangy. Instantaneously, my whole body began to melt as the hunger to continue overpowered any sensible thoughts I might have had of stopping. I eagerly wrapped my arms around his neck and pulled him in closer as I deepened the kiss. I felt him grinning against my mouth and he emitted a small giggle as he gently laid me down on my bed. Slowly, he began to move on top of me while pressing his body harder against mine. He rested one hand on the bed to hold himself up as his other hand went under my tank top and slowly began to massage my breasts. His cold hand touching my warm breasts brought a delighted shiver down my spine as I arched my back and moaned loudly against his mouth. Adams then broke the kiss and brushed his lips against my chin before going down my neck and toward my collar bone, leaving a line of tingles in its place. We both began to breath heavier as our cravings for each other grew stronger. He brought both of his hands down to the bottom of my shirt. Panicked, I quickly forced my arms down toward his wrist and was about to stop him. But his lips then found my neck, which caused my arms to grow slack. I sucked in my breath enjoying the sensations of his lips against my skin and before I knew it, he had slid my shirt right off of me. I watched him as he sat up and pulled his own shirt off. My hands seemed to have a mind of their own as they reached up and rubbed his bare chest..... TO BE CONTINUED 3 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by pretydiva(f): 5:32pm On Apr 28, 2015 |
Following..buh don't u fink it's rather 2 sudden 4 all dis. I mean dey ve never really had d tym 2 talk one on one 3 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Brymo: 9:31pm On Apr 28, 2015 |
pretydiva:things worse than this happens evryday. The world is runnig out of IDeas. 2 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Brymo: 9:33pm On Apr 28, 2015 |
pretydiva:things worse than this happens evryday. The world is runnig out of IDeas. A gal would go down for anytin. Fantasies all wind up in her brain. I'm sure u do read all these diaries in NL. 2 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 8:54pm On Apr 29, 2015 |
CONTINUATION....
Slowly, my hands began to work their way down
to his eight-
pack. He came back down toward me, his
mouth
finding its way back to my breasts before
slowly
making his way down my stomach
stopping at my
navel and moving lower still. Every time
his soft lips
touched my skin a feeling of erotic
pleasure would
soar through my body.
I could feel him begin to pull down my
pajama
bottoms, but paid no attention to it. I
was so lost in
the feelings and sensations of his lips
against my
skin. Suddenly, I could feel the cold
breeze against my
bare legs as I glanced down and noticed
both of us
were lying on my bed completely naked.
For the
second time since we started this
alternate reality, a
jolt of fear pierced through my body. I
felt like a
wanton woman losing control and not
wanting it to
stop. I only had thoughts of Adams and
his warm, wet
mouth and soft lips on my body and this
primal aching
need.
He must have noticed my sudden change
of
mood because he came closer to me and
brushed my
hair out of my face.
"Are you okay?" He whispered. His
breathing
was loud and uneven. His eyes shone
with sexual
energy as he looked deep into mine.
"I-I've never done this before," I replied
with a
whisper. I looked back at him and my
pupils began to
dilate from desire.
My heart continued to thump even more
rapidly
inside my chest. One question continued
to circulate
through my mind, what was I doing? It
felt as if
someone had possessed my body and I
no longer held
any control over my limbs. The
unimaginable feelings
Adams was awakening inside me had
completely taken
control, leaving me vulnerable to each
touch.
Adams continued to look at me while his
breathing grew even more ragged. He
pressed his lips
gently against mine instantly causing my
body to grow
weaker. His mouth then found its way to
my neck as
instant tingles shot through my body.
"You have nothing to be afraid of."
Adams then moved on top of me, placing
his
body between my legs. My heart was
racing a million
miles an hour out of excitement, fear,
and pleasure. I
had never had sex before. Well,
truthfully I've never
even come close, probably because I was
only sixteen
and never had an actual boyfriend. I
wanted to tell him
to stop, that I wasn't ready and that this
wasn't the
way I wanted my first time to be.
Every time I would open my mouth
trying to
protest, trying to tell him no, I couldn't.
The only
sound that left my lips was a loud
muffled moan of
sheer and utter pleasure. I knew there
was no stopping
him, no matter how much I wanted him
to stop-I
couldn't manage to get myself to say
anything. My
body was in complete disagreement with
my mind. The
pleasure principle overruled the logic of
my mind.
I opened my eyes, finally realizing that
Adams
was watching me with concern masking
his face.
"Do you want me to stop?" He asked.
My mind was screaming YES ! but when I
looked up at Adams this sudden need for
acceptance
pierced through me.
Adams was very well known at my high
school
while I was nobody. I was just some
loner-girl who
didn't have even one friend. And as I laid
there on my
bed with Adams Brown lying on top of
me, actually
wanting me, actually acknowledging my
existence I
couldn't seem to say no to him.
It should have been so easy. After all it
was
just one small word, three letters, and
one syllable. All
I had to say was 'Yes, yes I want you to
stop!' . But I
couldn't do it. My sudden need for his
acceptance, for
his approval overpowered my own
morals and
integrity.
I finally closed my eyes and softly shook
my
head. "No," I said softly. "Don't stop." 5 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 8:58pm On Apr 29, 2015 |
pretydiva:Thanks for ur comment, the thing is, the whole story is all about what happened here in chapter one...so its not really too early. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Brymo: 11:22am On Apr 30, 2015 |
mo grease brother |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 5:05pm On May 01, 2015 |
Chapter 2 to come next when I get a comment of approval for me to continue |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 9:56pm On May 01, 2015 |
Kelvin3028 Have you tried Wikinut yet? Write about whatever you like and get paid royalties - http://www.wikinut.com/in/ujjgfg/ |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Galaxdiva(f): 11:59am On May 07, 2015 |
Mehn... I jst tried to picture d scenerio... Lol... Dat awkward moment wen NO is d right word to say and it seems all ur energy has failed u... I knw d feeling... It takes God's grace to overcome... Mehn,love ur style of writing tho.... Continue!.... I guess av seen D9ty7 here,although,he only gave corrections... Kelv,oya update! 2 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Galaxdiva(f): 12:04pm On May 07, 2015 |
Since d story centres on what happened in chapter1,gues d story name shud be "Mistakes of my first time........ Anyway,apart frm nt correcting d mistake in d title,i tink d story is not bad.... 2 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Calmdove(f): 9:19pm On May 09, 2015 |
Kelvin3028:approved! Continue... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Galaxdiva(f): 4:27pm On May 30, 2015 |
Kelvin3028,we don approve d story naa,come n update |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 6:32pm On Jun 02, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 2: AND IN THE MORNING The next morning, I had woken up to the cool morning breeze hitting my naked body. I began to force my eyes open as I soon came to realize I was lying on my bed completely naked. The sun was shining! brightly through my bedroom window, which forced me to squint. Instantly an image of Adams flashed through my mind. I hurriedly glanced at the other side of my bed, only to find that the spot he had fallen asleep in was now cold and empty. His clothes that were once strewn on the floor were now gone, erasing all physical evidence that he was in my bedroom last night. For a second I thought that maybe last night had just been a figment of my overactive imagination. I stood up to my feet and pain shot through my body. A tenderness which began at my...down stairs area, confirming that I did indeed lose my virginity last night. I reached down and picked up my pyjama bottoms off the floor and quickly pulled them on. I then reached for my black tank top that was lying on my bed and pulled it on over my head. I knew that my memory of last night couldn’t have been a dream. But the mystery regarding Adams' disappearance forced me to abandon the comfort of my bed. My first thought was that he would be downstairs in the kitchen, possibly getting some breakfast or grabbing a cup of coffee. Following the only explain able possibility there was, I left my bedroom and headed toward the stairs. Once I reached the bottom stair, I continued to walk through the foyer and into the kitchen. Relief washed over me when I noticed the refrigerator was open and that there was a tall figure standing on the other side of the door. All I could see was their brown hair. Relief and excitement had taken full reign over my body. Though, it disappeared just as quickly as the door closed revealing my brother, Trent. In his hands was a jug of orange juice, a plate with pancakes, a bowl of cereal and a bacon and egg sandwich. My brother was one of those lucky people with a metabolism that would allow him to constantly eat and not gain a pound. I hated him for it! "Where's Adams?" I asked, walking over to him and grabbing the orange juice. He tried to grab it back, almost dropping all of his food in the process. Finally, he decided it was probably best to put his arm full of food down first. "He went home," Richard said casually as he placed all his food down on the kitchen table. "Why?" He questioned me. I could feel panic begin to set in as I took the lid off the orange juice and began to chug it right out of the jug. It took a couple of seconds before I could find my voice. "I don't know, just didn't see him this morning," I lied. My stomach began to twist and turn causing a sharp pain to emerge deep inside my gut. I had to concentrate hard on not allowing the tears in my eyes to fall. All I could think about was how he used me. How he came to my bedroom, had sex with me and left me alone. How he took my virginity from me like it was nothing important. He didn't even have the decency to wait until I woke up before he left. No, he didn’t do any of these things, instead he crept away in the middle of the night or whenever he left, like I was some one night stand. Like I was some slut he picked up at a party! "Yah, he seemed to be in some kind of rush this morning," Trent said, interrupting my thoughts. I looked up at him just as he started inhaling his food. "Orange juice," he mumbled between mouthfuls while pointing to the jug. I passed it over to him while watching in disgust as he then took a couple of swigs out of the jug. I couldn’t help but think about the amount of food that was probably being spat back into the juice jug. "Yah, he looked like he saw a ghost or something. He looked pretty freaked out this morning." Trent finally managed to say once he swallowed his food. "Oh," I barely whispered out. I felt like someone had just ripped my heart out and was now stomping on it, jumping up and down. But honestly, what did I expect? Adams was one of the most popular guys at my school. Every girl wants him, has had him, has been used by him or will never have him. I'm only in grade ten, a sophomore. He’s a senior and not just any senior, but a very popular one. Obviously, he realized the mistake he had made and had no choice but to run away. I was definitely not the prettiest girl in school or even the prettiest in my grade. I was nothing, a no body. I was Richard's annoying little sister and that was all I'd ever be. It was stupid and naive of me to think anything was going to happen between me and Adams. But, even so, the fact that I had given up my virginity so easily forced me to run to my bedroom, fall on my bed and bawl my eyes out in embarrassment, disappointment and shame. TO BE CONTINUED 4 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 6:48pm On Jun 02, 2015 |
NOTE: am so sorry I have been off for so long, I thought no one was reading but when I saw the 'wait', am motivated to continue... Pls beware that This book is on copyright. LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 3: SCHOOL OR FRUSTRATION PARLOR The rest of my weekend had been extremely boring and mainly full of reading and re-reading books that I had taken out from the library. When I wasn't reading, I was generally stalking my brother around the house. I would eaves drop on his conversations over the phone and spy on him hanging out with his friends outside. On more than one occasion I had asked him where Adams was and what he was up to. Apparently, Richard hadn't heard from him since he fled our house on Saturday morning. It was now the beginning of a new week, Monday, meaning I had to go to school today and also that I had to see Adams. My heart was racing as I got ready for school, pulling on a pair of black skinny jeans and a big pink sweater with snoopy on it. I reached for my Batman backpack and headed down stairs. "Hurry up, Jane!" My brother called from the front door, "Or I'm leaving without you and you'll have to walk!" I ran down the stairs and followed Richard through the door and toward his bright red '72 Chevy pick-up. Sure his truck was old, a classic, but it was completely rebuilt from its engine to its body. It probably looked better today than it did in 1972. I jumped into the passenger seat as Richard jumped into the driver's seat before starting up the engine. He drove down the road and headed toward Kevin's house. He pulled over to the side of the street and parked. I scooted over into the middle of the truck as Kevin jumped in beside me. "Hey Dude!" He called over to Richard, "You missed a pretty sweet party this weekend. Rebecca went swimming topless!" "Hey Kev," Richard laughed, "Yah, Michael was telling me about it, heard there was quite a bit of sluts there." "Oh dude, you don't even know!" Kevin said while slapping his knee in excitement. I just sat there staring out the window as my brother began to drive. This was my life, always surrounded by people talking about their oh-so exciting weekends, whilst mine is always the exact opposite. Kevin continued, "Jessica and Tiffany were all over Adams again, I mean stripping for him, making-out with each other and lap dancing!" At the mention of Adams' name my head snapped up and I looked toward Kevin, my heart racing like crazy. Adams came to my house Friday night, took my virginity and then went out partying?! I had this feeling that he, most likely, did stuff with all those swanky girls and completely forgot about me! I could feel a knot begin to form inside my stomach. "Did...Adams do anything with them?" I asked with a shaky voice. Kevin turned to look at me as his eyes grew wide with shock. "Holy crap, she talks?!" The blond-haired boy teased. He reached over and rubbed the top of my head like I was a fluffy little lap dog, "Hey Richard's little sister, barely even noticed you there!" It was so annoying how they never paid any attention to my existence. I mean Kevin knew my name, he had known me for ten years and still he referred to me as 'Richard's Little Sister' 'I mean, just because you are good looking, play sports and have the girls falling all over you does not give you permission to be such a stuck up prick!' I thought angrily to myself while wishing I was actually brave enough to say that to him. Unfortunately though, that was just how all my brother's friends were. They were the popular kids-a part of the in-crowd and I was a ghost. I had no label; not a jock or a cheerleader, not a geek or an emo, not a punk or a bad-ass. I was nothing, a label-less loner who walked around with no group to fit into. "No actually," he finally answered my question before turning his attention back to Richard, "Which is weird. Tiffany and Jessica were pretty much begging for him to notice them and yet, he denied them. He's been acting pretty weird lately." "You've noticed that too?" Richard asked, "He stayed at my place Friday night and then ran off in the morning without even so much as a 'see ya later' . He walked right passed me and just took off." "Well, whatever his problem is, he had better get his head out of his ass before the game against the Whiskers this Friday." "No doubt." Richard agreed. I reached for my batman backpack and hugged it tightly against my chest. Even though I knew nothing was going to happen between Adams and me and even though I knew he was a dumbass, it was rather comforting knowing that he didn't do anything with Jessica and Tiffany. Who, I might add, are the most popular girls at my school. "Batman and Snoopy? What are you eight?" Kevin teased me while pointing toward my backpack and then at my sweater. "Hey dude, leave my sis alone." Richard butted in. "I was only teasing her." Kevin smirked. "Well don't." My brother's face was completely serious, in overprotective mode as we pulled up to the school and parked in our usual spot. "Sorry man." "Don't say sorry to me, say it to my little sis." Although my brother and I come from totally different worlds at school and hang with completely different crowds (and by that I mean he actually hung out with a crowd) Richard has always made it his job to watch over and protect me. That was probably one of the main reasons why all of the popular people paid no attention to me. I wasn't cool enough to hang out with them, though; they also couldn't tease or bully me because of my brother. So, instead, they choose to ignore me altogether. "Sorry, Richard's little sister." He said. I simply rolled my eyes and jumped out of the truck after him. "Whatever." I muttered rudely. ' Talk about the worst apology ever !' I thought to myself. I waved good-bye to my brother and then headed up toward the school. *★***★***★***★***★***★***★* **★* The bell rang, indicating it was now lunch time. I slowly began to pick up my books from my desk. I was eager to get out of history class because, honestly, history was by far the most boring class there was. But, what I hated more than History was lunch time. "Don't forget to read through pages twenty- five to thirty tonight. Also, I'd like everyone's papers on the Great Depression on my desk by tomorrow morning!" Mr. Colney called out to everyone as they scurried out of class. I lingered back, not in any hurry to get to the library. I was almost a hundred percent sure that everyone at Crowns High, except me, looked forward to lunch time. Lunch was the time of day I hated the most because I sat alone and read for the entire hour. Every day, lunch time reminded me of what a complete loner I was. I walked down the hallway and headed toward the library. I still had to take back the four books I had taken out for the weekend. I was about ten feet away from the library when a door suddenly opened up in my face. A hand reached out from the darkened room and grabbed onto my arm. I felt my body being pulled through the doorway against my will. I didn't have a chance to even think about what was happening and once the door shut everything went black. Someone had pulled me into what I figured was the janitor's closet. The lights were off and I couldn't manage to see who the perpetrator was. Fear was beginning to work its way through my body as my heart began to pound loudly inside my chest. "H-He-Hello...?" I stuttered, speaking into the blackness. "Shhhhh..." TO BE CONTINUED 4 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 9:42pm On Jun 02, 2015 |
I love this story! Pls don't stop, I love it! More ink to ur pen |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Opracus(f): 1:25pm On Jun 03, 2015 |
Nice one,abeg cum nd update |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 7:24pm On Jun 03, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 4 My heart rate began to accelerate faster with each silent second until suddenly, with a blinding feeling, a light flickered on. I looked around the room curious as to where I was. There was a bucket and mop in the corner, shelves full of cleaning supplies and a huge variety of different sized brooms. All these objects combined only proved my suspicions correct. I had, in fact, been pulled into the janitor's closet. ' Well, now that I've figured out the 'where,' it's time for the 'who' and the 'why?'' I thought to myself as I began to look around. I turned my attention to the shadowy form in the corner of the closet. I reached behind me picking up the first object my hands closed around just in case this mystery person's plans were unfriendly. The first thing my hands fell upon was a bottle of Windex which I decided to abandon because, honestly, what was I going to do with Windex, clean him to death? The next thing my fingers wrapped around was a duster in which I actually decided to keep because it had a good- sized wooden handle. l "Who are you?" I demanded trying to keep my voice even while attempting to sound intimidating, however, failing horribly. I watched as the shadowy figure started walking toward me. I tightened my grip on the duster,preparing to swing mightily, but then the light shined down on him, revealing who he was. I felt my hands open up as the duster fell to the ground; I stared at Adams in disbelief. I heard the duster hit the floor and yet it sounded miles away, far off in the distance. All my fear then disappeared and was replaced by a state of shock. I stood there unable to move, completely bewildered as to why he was here or, more importantly, why he had pulled me into the closet? "Look...Jane, I need to apologise." He spoke softly as he took another step toward me with his hand held out. The thought of him leaving me alone Saturday morning finally snapped me out of my startled daze. Not to mention the fact that he had never even attempted to call me all weekend and how he left me hanging with no explanation. I raised my right hand and slapped him as hard as I could across the face: One... Two... Three times in quick succession while tears of rage and humiliation blinded me. I watched in satisfaction as his eyes bulged out of their sockets before he used his left hand to rub the red welts on his cheek. "I guess I deserved that..." he replied. Using my left hand this time, I raised it and with every ounce of strength I could summon, I smacked him hard on the other cheek. I watched as his head turned to the side from the force of my slap. I know I may have gone to crazy-town , I mean it's not like we were dating or had any commitment towards each other, much less a relationship. Either way, any guy who is rude enough to take a girl's virginity and then skulk off into the night while she's sleeping, deserves what he gets, if not more. I looked up at him, both his cheeks had welts and the muscles in his jaw pulsated. It almost looked as if he had been stuck outside in the middle of hammatan for an entire day. "Why did you leave me like that?" I asked angrily, "How could you do that to me?!" My voice grew louder and angrier by the minute. He lowered his head in shame, staring at the ground before he began to speak; "I'm sorry Jane..." He began, "It's just, I've...Well, I've never slept with anyone before." "That is such a lie! You've slept with lots of girls!" I was so furious that he had the nerve to stand there and lie straight to my face. "No, Jane I haven't." He repeated, "Sure I've had sex with a few girls but I've never actually slept in a bed with them. When I woke up in the morning with my arms around you...I freaked, I got scared and ran away. I didn't know what else to do." "Oh yah? And you didn't even have the decency to call me?" "I figured you didn't want to talk to me," He finally lifted his head and looked into my eyes, "I couldn't get you out of my head all weekend...I just had to see you again." He reached up with his hand as he placed his fingers under my chin in an attempt to lift my head up. The second his fingers touched my skin, tingles shot through my body as my breathing began to quicken. I stared back hard, trying to read his eyes and see through his lies, yet all of his body language screamed sincerity and remorse. He took another step closer to me and I could feel his breath against my face. His hand left my chin as both of his arms wrapped around my waist. My stomach began to flip around as I felt my body heating up. I watched his face inch closer to mine until I felt his lips lightly brush against my own, tentatively, as if asking permission. It was as if some sex-crazed- nymphomaniac had then taken over my body. I wrapped my arms hastily around his neck and forced his body hard against mine as our kiss began to deepen. I felt his arms tighten around my waist until both our bodies were intertwined leaving no space in between. His hands began to roam up every inch of my body which left no place untouched. In that same moment I buried my fingers under his shirt and tugged on the back of his head. My body was vibrating in the satisfaction of his touch; never had I imagined something that could feel so indefinably pleasing. Finally, I pulled my arms back as I rested them on his chest and, with all my strength; I pushed him away forcefully, nearly causing him to tumble over. He caught his balance just in time to look up at me as I reached down to the bottom of my sweater and pulled it up over my head. His eyes narrowed before lightening up in excitement. He then pulled off his shirt and revealed his perfect rippling eight-pack. He quickly came back to me as he began ripping off my shirt and then my bra; leaving both of our torsos completely naked. He began to feel up my body again, only this time, with his lips. An unbearable sensation exploded through my body as my patience seemed to be holding on by barely a thread. I couldn't handle the pre-intimacy for even one more second as the ineffable memory of last time continued to flash across my mind. I was just in the process of unbuttoning his jeans when he froze. "What-are-you-" I tried to speak between gasps but his hand covered my mouth quickly forcing me into silence. That's when I heard the keys jingling on the other side of the door. I pushed Adams out of the way as I reached to the floor in attempt to grab my clothes. Adams did the same as we both continued banging into each other and the shelves; knocking over brooms and mops and spilling bottles of cleaning supplies. All in an attempt to quickly put our clothes back on. "Who's in there?!" I heard an old, scratchy voice yell through the door. The sound of a dead bolt clicking open reached my ears the same second I pulled my sweater on and fell to my bottom with a crash. The door swung open exposing Mr. Clinton the school janitor. He was tall and bony and probably in his sixties. He had a shag of white hair with a long matching beard and kind of resembled a really skinny Santa Claus. He looked at Adams who was standing by the shelves fully dressed with a little smirk on his face. Then, he turned his glance down to me (who was sitting in a pool of spilled cleaners, hair in a tangled mess on my head and my sweater inside out!). "Oh you kids!" Mr Clinton said, shooing us out of the closet. "You crazy kids, with all your hormones going nutty inside you. You're always running around finding little hiding spots to smooch together." His voice was scratchy as if he'd been smoking all his life. I got up off the floor, instantly realizing my butt was soaked from the cleaners that had been knocked over. We managed to walk out of the closet with some dignity, both of us holding in our laughter. "This is my closet, if you want to go...go...smooching each other, then go find some other place." He continued to talk, "Out, Out!" The second me and Adams were out of the closet we began to run down the deserted hallways. Everyone was either still in the cafeteria or outside basking in the sun. I could hear Mr. Clinton mumbling something about kids these days and sex before marriage. Once Adams and I were out of Mr. Clinton's sight leaned against the wall and began erupting in laughter. I slid down the locker behind me and fell to the floor as he did the same. "-did You-" Adams tried speaking between his laughter. "Did you s-see Mr. Clinton's fa-face!" My laughter rose higher as the image of Mr. Clinton's expression ran through my mind. He looked completely shocked and even a bit disgusted. "Yah-" I tried talking this time. I was laughing so hard that I had to put my hand on Adams' shoulder to try and keep myself balanced. "Look a-at my bu-butt!" I laughed, "I fe-fell in the pu-puddle!" Adams' laugh then roared louder, "and m-my swe-sweater is on inside ou-out!" "Ewww!" A girl's voice interrupted our laughter. I looked up and saw Tabitha glaring down at us with Tiffany on her left side and on her right was Jessica. The trio of Malibu Barbies stared at me in disgust. Their faces scrunched up, marring their features and their perfectly applied makeup. Tabitha continued speaking, "Adams, what are you doing?" Adams jumped up to his feet as his face flushed red. It was almost as if he was embarrassed to be seen with me. I felt my heart sink. "Nothing!" he said while not even glancing my way, "Wow, its class time already. I should probably go!" Without so much as a peek over at me, he ran down the hall and left me sitting there all by myself. The moment Adams had disappeared around a corner, Tabitha crouched down closer to me and began to speak again with so much venom in her voice; "Look girl, I don't care if you're Richard's little sister or not, Adams is mine so you'd better stay away from him!" "He's not yours!" Both Tiffany and Jessica said in unison. "Excuse me!" Tabitha said turning her attention to them, "Did you not see the way he completely ignored you two at the party? Give it up already!" With that, she tossed her mane in the air and began to walk down the hallway. Tiffany and Jessica stood there for a second, staring blankly at the wall, before turning around and running after her. That left me sitting on the floor soaking wet, feeling completely embarrassed and ashamed by my stupidity and, once again, alone. TO BE CONTINUED... 6 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 7:28pm On Jun 03, 2015 |
Thank you all for ur comments... Opracus, lovelygurl et al... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by zeisha(f): 8:00pm On Jun 03, 2015 |
Beautiful work Kelvin... More grease to your elbow.. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Calmdove(f): 8:04pm On Jun 03, 2015 |
Wow! Tnks 4 updating after a long time 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 8:35pm On Jun 03, 2015 |
I could only imagine d old man's face, lol! Don't give up Kelvin, d more u update d more readers nd coments u get |
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