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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 10:39pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
D9ty7:lol yh.. u do update but uv stopped updating frequently like u normally do..OK now take today for example since morning no Update how do u want us to comment |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 10:41pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
Confess jooor. U miss me das y updates no dey come. Anyway I'm here. Oya serve me updates..... Onemansquad! Pepper soup pls. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 10:49pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
Lilyomi:ur husby should serve u pepper soup?? ![]() |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Psalmwise(m): 11:00pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
would anybody love too have one or two plates of beans? |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 11:19pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
Onemansquad:Anythn wrong? Psalmwise take ur beans |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Psalmwise(m): 11:21pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
Lilyomi:taste it nd u won't regret u did soo |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 6:10am On Jun 16, 2015 |
My mind tells me dat Tina nd Daniel will mary each other while clara will be sent 2 jail. As 4 Adeola 4sure Daniel will dump her. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 6:30am On Jun 16, 2015 |
ayox1:you must be from far away mars Oga? Anyways, welcome to the planet earth, sidon an watch how things is being done here.. .. I doubt your "mind" sha |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 8:41am On Jun 16, 2015 |
ayox1:ehn dump who ![]() if daniel dumps adeola he is in soup and jimmy too wil b in troble also *i tink tina wil marry collins* |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 9:39am On Jun 16, 2015 |
harjibolar10:anyway, let wait nd see. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 9:42am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Onemansquad:lol Collins of all pple. *Anywhere serve me a bottle of stout with pepper soup*. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by omotalkie(f): 9:50am On Jun 16, 2015 |
As for me, I think Tina will end up marrying Mark. U guys will see. ![]() ![]() |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by draypyper(m): 9:51am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Am finking Tina and Mark are gonna marry each other, since Kim is getting farther from her husband ![]() ![]() |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by handie(m): 10:08am On Jun 16, 2015 |
D9ty7:Dee, u right here. That's why even me gave up on d literature section and story writing. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Galaxdiva(f): 10:23am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Frm what am seeing,it seems clara is mark's sister.... Tina wil later marry mark and kim is likely to die.... If u dnt agree,den quote me.... |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Galaxdiva(f): 10:29am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Collins wil send assassins to kill mark so that he can hav tina,kim ended up dying in the process... Chris wil be d one to find out abt mayor and his scheming... Collins will be arrested... Daniel wil get margareth pregnant and lose his marriage wit adeola,chris wil end up hating him and he wil lose on both sides.... Jimmy? I dnt tink i hav an idea.... |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 10:58am On Jun 16, 2015 |
draypyper:help me tell them oo. I'm very sure dat Adoela will be dumped especially if Daniel find out about her secret. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 11:02am On Jun 16, 2015 |
ayox1:i dont even know why tina is playing hard to get *i pity her sha she dont know what she is doing, keeping the truth away from chris when he will definitely know whats up* its 2 bad she will not use her senses till daniel brainwash chris nd it wil b 2 late btw na stuff46 b barman*make e gv us 2 bottles abi |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 11:07am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Galaxdiva:i reason with you oo *clara must be mark's 6ta* u sabi predict o |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 11:44am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Galaxdiva:I love this... Clara and Mark. This is different from the Mark and Tina we've been seeing from Day 1. But hey! Stay glued to ya screen to know how it ends |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 11:49am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Am loving the discussion, argument and the comments. Keep them coming. Updates drops any moment frm 1:30pm. Shebarh: This is what has been missing since the start of the story. Everyone seemed to be thinking in the same direction(Mark and Tina being siblings) but now, Galaxdiva don drag Clara in... As a writer, I will want to work harder and take dem guys on an unexpected ride. If things continue like this, believe me, we could have 5-6 updates per day. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Slimzjoe(m): 11:50am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Finally I fit follow this story widawt Hitches!! Onemansquad ah dey see as u dey intimidate pple Oga Duru u knw send mua "The Thomas" woh |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pukka36(f): 11:51am On Jun 16, 2015 |
Hmmm |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 12:53pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
D9ty7:lol...just hope so... i tink i agree wit galaxdiva too..dey myt be siblings.. oga dee hope ya next update will be bout NATU.. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Kitme(f): 12:58pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
Margaret is Mark's sister. Daniel and Tina will get married, Adeola would be mad with fury, hence she decided to inflicit pains on them. Collins would give a helping hand by implicating Tina in the office. Kim would sorrowfully return to the states. Chris won't be comfortable with Daniel, he would have loved Mark to be the one. Justguessing o ![]() |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 1:01pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
as if I knw dat Clara na Mark sister. On d other hand, i don't blame Tina. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 1:04pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
Kitme:Lol, Margaret Mark's sister. of all pple is now dat slut. hmmmm it can't be. |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Kitme(f): 1:08pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
ayox1:Y'know, she didn't live with her mummy,hence, she might lacks the moral upbringing. And then, she is too carefree |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ogbeks(m): 1:09pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
second ayox1: |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by draypyper(m): 1:20pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
fink clara is mark's sister, their father's blood running in them, and since she got separated from her mum explains why she is a sl*t too, bur margaret being mark's sister is outta it, won't be surprised if Tony end up wiv Kim and the pregnancy is either terminated knowingly or unknowingly ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 1:40pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
BT I still don't understand dis Chichi girl. is she truly Daniel's sister? |
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 2:16pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
--continuation-- It is in human nature for proactiveness to set in in times of trouble. Frustration brings about proactiveness, and in the case of being consistently proactive with no result to show for it, frustration sets in. Suffice to say, frustration and proactiveness walk hand in hand. Mark in the last three minutes had entered every room inside the N.A.T.U building. Even though he claimed to be one of the few strong hearted men ever created by God, he had to put the strong heart behind him and face the task at hand. For the upteenth time he walked into the gas exchange room is similar to a ventilation system, the only difference being that, the gas exchange system powers the ventilation system through the use of petroleum gas. There were four giant tanks in the room where the gas was compressed and exchanged, until it is ready for release. The bomb was firmly locked unto the fourth tank and a number of anti-bomb squad depertment at the N.A.T.U who also renders the same service to the neighbouring SSS(state security service) who were just a few blocks away. "Any chances that we might stop the bomb from detonating before the time elapsed?" Mark asked the leader of the squad. "We can't stop the bomb." The squad number one man replied. "How do you mean? Mark asked. "Its simple." The anti-bomb squad leader replied. "The best thing for now is evacuation in full stead. Am sure evacuation processes began already." "Yeah! Ninety percent of the people here are out already, but those in the medical wing who need urgent medical assistance. Those on life support, we can't just evacuate them." Mark replied. "Take risks. Mark, life is a risk. Take them out first, if by the time you get the outside the bomb goes off. It is a credit to your name that no lives were lost. And you know what to do once they are outside, get medical help and transport them to nearby hospitals." "Good idea. How long do we have?" Mark asked. "Three minutes." "Okay. Am off." With this, Mark sped out of the gas exchange system, holding firmly to his left ear, the communication device. "Agent Mark. I need help in the medical wing." "Mark." A familiar voice called. "Hey! Angela." Mark replied. "What's going on? Why are you evacuating everybody?" "A bomb goes off in three minutes." Mark replied. "Oh my God!" Angela exclaimed fearfully. "What do we do now? Evacuate?" "You are right." Mark said running into the closest ward. "but..." "No buts Angela. I need extra hand. Get those on wheelchair out of here as soon as you can." Mark insturcted. "I'll wheel the sick beds out." "What about those on life support? Those in the Intensive care?" "Do as I say Angela. Where are the other doctors and nurses?" Mark asked loudly. "Here sir." The head of the N.A.T.U medic replied. "Lets get this done. Which way is the ICU?" He asked. "Go into the next room. The right door connects with the common room, the door on the left leads to the ICU. We have two patients there." Angela explained. "Good." Mark made to leave the ward with a determination that he was going to pull out the two patients in the Intensive care. ------------ Mark checked his wristwatch for the 100th time in the last one minute as he tried to unplug the life support device from the patients or unplug the device from its power source. None of which seemed to be working as he wasn't conversant with machines used in the medical field. "Mark, you have twenty five seconds." A familiar voice said. "I need to save these two patients." Mark replied. This time, he was covered in sweats. The thought of having twenty five seonds left to save the lives of two sick patients was disturbing. Also, saving the lives of the two patients means saving his own life two. But in every situation, there is a solution. Which is, he could ignore the twenty five seconds and leave the two patients, meaning the patients will die when the bomb detonates and he if lucky would be saved, but if he spends a little above twenty five seconds trying to exit the building, he is likely to suffer the same fate. "What about these?" Mark asked pointing to the two lifeless patients. "There is nothing you can do about them. Wheel them out, they are going to die, cos the life saver would be unplugged. So, you are not really saving their lives. We have fifteen seconds left. We could be out if five seconds if we took the fire escape." "Fine, lets get out." Mark said leading the way out. Collins took a last look at the patients, particularly, the female one and threw a small book at her. ------- "Here they are." Everyone started clapping, just when Tina drove in recklessly. "Mark! Where's Chris?" And immediately, the bomb went off. END OF CHAPTER 13 1 Like 1 Share |
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