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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pukka36(f): 2:27pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:

u mean daniel should swerve As in he should let go of his son undecided

#TeamDaniel we mst get chris back
Which kind yeye sonSon that has not eaten Ur 1# before


Daniel should be ashamed of Himself abeg!
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 2:44pm On Jun 19, 2015
Lilyomi:
Mark o Mark. Does he knw Tony . Daniel shd go humble wif Tina. Even money humbles him how much more a son das a priceless gift. He chose money over his kid! Y worry da mum now? Tony I hope u r a gud man. Am I da only one who thinks Collins needed da sister dead n Mark caught him?
why will Collins want his sister dead r u trying to say collins is part of lovato?? I biliv he is a good man but na love go make am bad
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 3:00pm On Jun 19, 2015
Pukka36:
Which kind yeye sonSon that has not eaten Ur 1# before


Daniel should be ashamed of Himself abeg!
dnt wory we wil settle dat *dia is owo
*tina should jst let him knw who his dad is nd evrytin wil b settled or we do it ourselves oo
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pukka36(f): 3:03pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:

dnt wory we wil settle dat *dia is owo
*tina should jst let him knw who his dad is nd evrytin wil b settled or we do it ourselves oo
We dnt want Ur owotongue


Tina has her's...She is independent
cheesy




We should dictate the pacegrin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tizblink: 3:04pm On Jun 19, 2015
Lilyomi:
Mark o Mark. Does he knw Tony . Daniel shd go humble wif Tina. Even money humbles him how much more a son das a priceless gift. He chose money over his kid! Y worry da mum now? Tony I hope u r a gud man. Am I da only one who thinks Collins needed da sister dead n Mark caught him?

Madam make your mind no diverge too much jare
C'mon twas like 25secs, she was still gonna die once the machine was put off.
Twas just the kinda death she died tho'
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 3:11pm On Jun 19, 2015
Pukka36:
We dnt want Ur owotongue


Tina has her's...She is independent
cheesy




We should dictate the pacegrin
ok na lets see
*daniel pls step on d gas nd gv her a hot chase jare*
2da na 2da tina must hear us out *chris mst knw d truth tongue
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 3:34pm On Jun 19, 2015
tizblink:


Madam make your mind no diverge too much jare
C'mon twas like 25secs, she was still gonna die once the machine was put off.
Twas just the kinda death she died tho'
"
Oh my God! I had the chance to save her." Mark said regretably. "But guess who asked me to leave her, Collins did."
His mind flashed back to the short encounter he had with Collins inside the ICU. He remembered the strange act of Collins where he threw a small sized book at the lady just before they fled the building.
"I'll be back in a jiffy." Mark said as he walked up to Collins.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ayox1(m): 4:04pm On Jun 19, 2015
Daniel is an idiot, assuming Adeola had given birth to 2 or 3 kids will he remember christina talk more of christopher...... As 4 u Adeola ur wicked plans will never succeed.......Christina be strong, don't allow dat dog(Daniel) 2 snatch chris 4rm u ooo.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 4:19pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:
ok na lets see *daniel pls step on d gas nd gv her a hot chase jare* 2da na 2da tina must hear us out *chris mst knw d truth tongue
#teamDaniel# Chris needs to knw d truth
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 4:21pm On Jun 19, 2015
D9ty7:
To those who have commented in the past hours/days/weeks/months I say a big thank you and a big shoutout to;

If ah no mention your name, abeg no vex o.
*kissessssssssssssssssss*
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 4:33pm On Jun 19, 2015
Lilyomi:
"
Oh my God! I had the chance to save her." Mark said regretably. "But guess who asked me to leave her, Collins did."
His mind flashed back to the short encounter he had with Collins inside the ICU. He remembered the strange act of Collins where he threw a small sized book at the lady just before they fled the building.
"I'll be back in a jiffy." Mark said as he walked up to Collins.


I agree with you, I think Collins wants his sister dead, because no matter how sick she is, he should have at least let Mark help her.


#TEAM SCENT
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 4:48pm On Jun 19, 2015
kwencypresh:
*kissessssssssssssssssss*
No kisses in Ramadan. Again to anoda woman.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 4:52pm On Jun 19, 2015
Lilyomi:
No kisses in Ramadan. Again to anoda woman.
huh?
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by adewealth027(f): 5:25pm On Jun 19, 2015
To those saying Danies must get Chris back...........hmmmmmm its like some people don't understand this..............lemme use myself as an example,I'm a product of a broken marriage....my dad has neva spent 1kobo on me nor my siblings.....all thanks to my momsy who catered for us.....along the line,I lost my mumsy,still my dad neva deemed it fit to take up his responsibility,how I scaled thru higher institution,he doesn't know.....now I'm thru with school and working....he's looking for us.....yes,I've forgiven him but the fatherly bond can neva be there.........I don't blame tina for all dis because even if chris finally finds out what his father did to his mum,he might hate him for life
If Daniel like make he carry Tina go world court because he wants to claim chris,he won't win d case lailai........especially if the judge is a woman

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 5:44pm On Jun 19, 2015
kwencypresh:
#teamDaniel# Chris needs to knw d truth
u dy my team abi u wan cum cos troble undecided
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 5:57pm On Jun 19, 2015
adewealth027:
To those saying Danies must get Chris back...........hmmmmmm its like some people don't understand this..............lemme use myself as an example,I'm a product of a broken marriage....my dad has neva spent 1kobo on me nor my siblings.....all thanks to my momsy who catered for us.....along the line,I lost my mumsy,still my dad neva deemed it fit to take up his responsibility,how I scaled thru higher institution,he doesn't know.....now I'm thru with school and working....he's looking for us.....yes,I've forgiven him but the fatherly bond can neva be there.........I don't blame tina for all dis because even if chris finally finds out what his father did to his mum,he might hate him for life
If Daniel like make he carry Tina go world court because he wants to claim chris,he won't win d case lailai........especially if the judge is a woman
oh u mean it?? *u rememba dis is africa ryt*
Ur father is still your father no mata what @least ur own is a bit ok cos dy are once married nd ur mum told u abt ur dad nd u knw him is dat nt?

*bt in dis case chris dnt knw his dad nd he wants to knw d truth but tina is still hiding it away frm him maka why
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pukka36(f): 6:22pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:

oh u mean it?? *u rememba dis is africa ryt*
Ur father is still your father no mata what @least ur own is a bit ok cos dy are once married nd ur mum told u abt ur dad nd u knw him is dat nt?

*bt in dis case chris dnt knw his dad nd he wants to knw d truth but tina is still hiding it away frm him maka why

Na wa to U sha...



Has Daniel ever lived up to His responsibilty as the father



T'is not as if He was unaware of the pregnancy.




Chris might choose to accept Daniel as His father but Daniel has FAILEDtongue
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 6:39pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:

oh u mean it?? *u rememba dis is africa ryt*
Ur father is still your father no mata what @least ur own is a bit ok cos dy are once married nd ur mum told u abt ur dad nd u knw him is dat nt?

*bt in dis case chris dnt knw his dad nd he wants to knw d truth but tina is still hiding it away frm him maka why

u dis oms put ya self in Tina's shoes.. if u wer d one will u just give chris like dat to daniel.. just like dat? bcus u r african?? Bleep d traditions of african wer dey der wen she suffered d humiliation and rejection now dat he desperately needs a child he na rembered tina and her son.. if ah was tina ah for don fly d boy abroad since
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 6:40pm On Jun 19, 2015
ojjp:

Wow! Sweet 4giveness. But u tried sha, atleast u didnt fight n it shows u r principled. But If he were ur hubby nko?
My own hubby personally wud never do that...
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 6:50pm On Jun 19, 2015
Pukka36:
Na wa to U sha...



Has Daniel ever lived up to His responsibilty as the father



T'is not as if He was unaware of the pregnancy.




Chris might choose to accept Daniel as His father but Daniel has FAILEDtongue
he wil only get angry for a while *i see a strong bond btw chris and daniel*
Tel tina should not be jealous o tongue
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 7:01pm On Jun 19, 2015
Different opinions!
Reserving mine!
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Kitme(f): 7:04pm On Jun 19, 2015
Getting more interesting, Nice work Dee.
Pour me more drink of 'this is how its done'.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 7:11pm On Jun 19, 2015
LogoDWhiz:
Different opinions!
Reserving mine!
bros y na.. every opinion count .just tell us wat u tink
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 7:15pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
u dis oms put ya self in Tina's shoes.. if u wer d one will u just give chris like dat to daniel.. just like dat? bcus u r african?? Bleep d traditions of african wer dey der wen she suffered d humiliation and rejection now dat he desperately needs a child he na rembered tina and her son.. if ah was tina ah for don fly d boy abroad since
bt 4 how long wil u continue to shield ur son away frm d dad ?? Ok apart frm dat, why is tina denying chris frm knowing whats up? (dats 2-0) What if he heard frm daniel?

So if its u, u wil take ma son abroad cos i bleeped up abi? Olohun maje u mst bring him bak
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 7:26pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:

bt 4 how long wil u continue to shield ur son away frm d dad ?? Ok apart frm dat, why is tina denying chris frm knowing whats up? (dats 2-0) What if he heard frm daniel?

So if its u, u wil take ma son abroad cos i bleeped up abi? Olohun maje u mst bring him bak
is it by force for tina to show chris his low life father.... shebi he choosed moni over d boy..woh God help daniel if ah was tina...oga dee wwn will daniel die o cos me i am selling wrappers for his funeral
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by omotalkie(f): 7:31pm On Jun 19, 2015
Wait ooh. wot is Daniel feeling lyk I believe dat even if Chris will get to know about Daniel, he will remain indifferent. And to think dat Chris will even accept to go live wit him, he's joking and standing on a long thing as well. Besides, Adeola has already potrayed a bad stepmum in his presence,so he wont even consider moving in with him. #DanielParkWellOoh#
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by handie(m): 7:40pm On Jun 19, 2015
In as far as I agree that Daniel has got a legal right to Chris, u've gotta ask that has he gotten a moral right? Answer is NO! Putting a girl in a family way and abandoning her when u know such a girl ain't got anyone to fall back on? To me, there ain't anyway such attitude can be justified. What if Tina had lost the pregnancy during her dark days? To even imagine Daniel suddenly remembers he got a child due to his wife's inability to give birth is appalling. Life is about choices, Daniel opted for wealth now he's got it. Enjoy ur wealth Danny boi. U can never eat ur cake and have it
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 7:45pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
is it by force for tina to show chris his low life father.... shebi he choosed moni over d boy..woh God help daniel if ah was tina...oga dee wwn will daniel die o cos me i am selling wrappers for his funeral
so let him nt huzzle cos tina is pregnant abi undecided
*if tina wont gv chris to daniel then let her tel him who is father is* she cnt kip d 2 its nt posible btw u want daniel 2 die undecided *if anytin hapens to him ehn dia wil b war on this thread oo


stuff46, skimpledawg make una show face
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 8:07pm On Jun 19, 2015
adewealth027:
To those saying Danies must get Chris back...........hmmmmmm its like some people don't understand this..............lemme use myself as an example,I'm a product of a broken marriage....my dad has neva spent 1kobo on me nor my siblings.....all thanks to my momsy who catered for us.....along the line,I lost my mumsy,still my dad neva deemed it fit to take up his responsibility,how I scaled thru higher institution,he doesn't know.....now I'm thru with school and working....he's looking for us.....yes,I've forgiven him but the fatherly bond can neva be there.........I don't blame tina for all dis because even if chris finally finds out what his father did to his mum,he might hate him for life
If Daniel like make he carry Tina go world court because he wants to claim chris,he won't win d case lailai........especially if the judge is a woman
It's kind of somehow, that on my return from ma self imposed "exile", I have to jamn this kind of "scintillating" situation, anyways it's still good thou

Back to business, you may be a product of that kind of a awkward situation, but belive me, yours is totally differ from Chris own. Come to think of it;

Do you even remember how the relationship between Daniel and Christina started?

Do you remember the relationship between Deola and Christina? who they are to eachother?

Do you even remember, what role Christina played in the relationship?

Tina is not too innocent here, as most people is portraying her to be.

Okay, yes! Daniel betrayed Tina for some selfish reason, by abandoning her and Chris in the first place, but Tina is not so sure, how Chris will react to the fact that, his mother slept with her friend's fiancee (not even boy friend).. . To the best of my knowledge, I think all of them are to be blame for how the cituation has turned out.

Irrespective of whatever Daniel has done, or he's doing to Tina, he still own that kid, today and forever, whether they go to court or not, and nothing, nothing I repeat, any goddam personnel will or can do to that.

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 8:19pm On Jun 19, 2015
harjibolar10:
It's kind of somehow, that on my return from ma self imposed "exile", I have to jamn this kind of "scintillating" situation, anyways it's still good thou

Back to business, you may be a product of that kind of a awkward situation, but belive me, yours is totally differ from Chris own. Come to think of it;

Do you even remember how the relationship between Daniel and Christina started?

Do you remember the relationship between Deola and Christina? who they are to eachother?

Do you even remember, what role Christina played in the relationship?

Tina is not too innocent here, as most people is portraying her to be.

Okay, yes! Daniel betrayed Tina for some selfish reason, by abandoning her and Chris in the first place, but Tina is not so sure, how Chris will react to the fact that, his mother slept with her friend's fiancee (not even boy friend).. . To the best of my knowledge, I think all of them are to be blame for how the cituation has turned out.

Irrespective of whatever Daniel has done, or he's doing to Tina, he still own that kid, today and forever, whether they go to court or not, and nothing, nothing I repeat, any goddam personnel will or can do to that.
*baba order for anytin frm skimpledawg i wil pay*

Dnt mind dem blaming daniel alone wen all of dem bleeped up infact tina is the one to b blamed here wtf undecided
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 8:19pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:

so let him nt huzzle cos tina is pregnant abi undecided
*if tina wont gv chris to daniel then let her tel him who is father is* she cnt kip d 2 its nt posible btw u want daniel 2 die undecided *if anytin hapens to him ehn dia wil b war on this thread oo


stuff46, skimpledawg make una show face
#teamDanielmustdie.....@harjibolar shebi dey wer drunk wwn dey did it
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 8:29pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
bros y na.. every opinion count .just tell us wat u tink

Hmm! Okay!

Some people are of the opinion that Daniel should claim Chris.
My opinion on that is this:
Daniel doesn't have any moral right to try and claim chris now, considering what happened in the past.
But legally its possible. But the kid has the final say.
If he decided to stay with his mum, no problem.
He left both mum and child at a delicate time and now that he knows that he has no heir, he wants to claim the child that he abandoned.

Tina tried as a mum but its always good if he had told Chris about his dad when chris came of age and when he started asking questions.


As a family counselor in this situation, I'd advice a round table discussion between Daniel, Chris and Tina.
Daniel should give his excuse, in as much as Daniel has the right to claim Chris, Tina deserves the right of asking of explanation from Daniel for his disappearance.

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