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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tizblink: 8:32pm On Jun 19, 2015
Lilyomi:
"
Oh my God! I had the chance to save her." Mark said regretably. "But guess who asked me to leave her, Collins did."
His mind flashed back to the short encounter he had with Collins inside the ICU. He remembered the strange act of Collins where he threw a small sized book at the lady just before they fled the building.
"I'll be back in a jiffy." Mark said as he walked up to Collins.


Mark checked his wristwatch for the 100th time in the last
one minute as he tried to unplug the life support device
from the patients or unplug the device from its power
source. None of which seemed to be working as he wasn't
conversant with machines used in the medical field.
"Mark, you have twenty five seconds." A familiar voice
said.
"I need to save these two patients." Mark replied. This
time, he was covered in sweats. The thought of having
twenty five seonds left to save the lives of two sick
patients was disturbing. Also, saving the lives of the two
patients means saving his own life two. But in every
situation, there is a solution. Which is, he could ignore the
twenty five seconds and leave the two patients, meaning
the patients will die when the bomb detonates and he if
lucky would be saved, but if he spends a little above
twenty five seconds trying to exit the building, he is likely
to suffer the same fate.
"What about these?" Mark asked pointing to the two
lifeless patients.
"There is nothing you can do about them. Wheel them out,
they are going to die, cos the life saver would be
unplugged. So, you are not really saving their lives. We
have fifteen seconds left. We could be out if five seconds
if we took the fire escape."
"Fine, lets get out." Mark said leading the way out.
Collins took a last look at the patients, particularly, the
female one and threw a small book at her.


15secs to carry a lifeless body?

And to think that the bomb went off immediately they got outta the N.A.T.U complex

Ah! Mark has lied
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 8:32pm On Jun 19, 2015
LogoDWhiz:


Hmm! Okay!

Some people are of the opinion that Daniel should claim Chris.
My opinion on that is this:
Daniel doesn't have any moral right to try and claim chris now, considering what happened in the past.
But legally its possible. But the kid has the final say.
If he decided to stay with his mum, no problem.
He left both mum and child at a delicate time and now that he knows that he has no heir, he wants to claim the child that he abandoned.

Tina tried as a mum but its always good if he had told Chris about his dad when chris came of age and when he started asking questions.


As a family counselor in this situation, I'd advice a round table discussion between Daniel, Chris and Tina.
Daniel should give his excuse, in as much as Daniel has the right to claim Chris, Tina deserves the right of asking of explanation from Daniel for his disappearance.


God will bless yhu so much.. ya point is so matured..morally daniel no get any right to claime chris infact oga chop kiss
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 8:35pm On Jun 19, 2015
mark? or collins? wat is ya point sir??
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 8:37pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
bros y na.. every opinion count .just tell us wat u tink

Also, about the issue of Mark and his wife Kim.

I'm of the opinion that Kim shouldn't have come to Nigeria.

As a military or para-military officer, your family members can't be involved with your operations anyhow.
Its like a soldier posted to afghanistan and then his wife has trust issues the decides to visit her husband.
Will that make the soldier concentrate more on the job on ground?
What of if the soldier is in the war front, will he leave?
Also, considering the fact that Kim is a nagging wife, it will only complicate issues.

Also, I think Mark should more love to his wife.
But looking at things, I don't think that Mark really loved his wife. There is a difference between the relationship betwee friends and that of couples.

Kim should be patient, enduring and cool-headed or else she will lose Mark to Tina.
But I doubt if that will happen

#Peace
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tecno4life(m): 8:42pm On Jun 19, 2015
We gat a debate going on here, I think in my opinion Dan doesn't deserve getting Chris back but Chris deserves knowing the truth. Tina is doing the wrong thing and so is Dan. D9ty7 na u be baba.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 8:45pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
God will bless yhu so much.. ya point is so matured..morally daniel no get any right to claime chris infact oga chop kiss

Lol!
Thanks, and God bless you too.

Tnx. Equally reciprocated! cheesy grin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 8:55pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
#teamDanielmustdie.....@harjibolar shebi dey wer drunk wwn dey did it
dats nt our biznex as far as she open her legs 4 him and daniel as a sharp man plug sumtinx insyd nd u refuse 2 gv him his end product *dats impossible*
#Teamnothingmusthapen2daniel

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by lauda(f): 9:01pm On Jun 19, 2015
Everybody is just debating about Chris, Daniel and Tina,
I'm I the only one suspecting this Tony Guy? He looks like a very good instrument in the hands of Lovato to capture Mark.

Anyway, Dee you are the Boss, thanks for the update.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ojjp: 9:01pm On Jun 19, 2015
Sapphire06:
My own hubby personally wud never do that...

Ur own hubby personally? Is der a generally hubby?
Learn hw to 4giv all things.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 9:02pm On Jun 19, 2015
Onemansquad:

dats nt our biznex as far as she open her legs 4 him and daniel as a sharp man plug sumtinx insyd nd u refuse 2 gv him his end product *dats impossible*
#Teamnothingmusthapen2daniel
#teamdanielmustdie...
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tecno4life(m): 9:11pm On Jun 19, 2015
lauda:
Everybody is just debating about Chris, Daniel and Tina,
I'm I the only one suspecting this Tony Guy? He looks like a very good instrument in the hands of Lovato to capture Mark.

Anyway, Dee you are the Boss, thanks for the update.

U are right ooh , never thought of that by the way someone tell D9ty7 to come and update and also dee what's up with the book, what's in it, curiosity is killing me.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tizblink: 9:27pm On Jun 19, 2015
Enough said bout Daniel's right over Chris buh maybe I should just talk my own as iYam seeing it.

Sure a court case Daniel could likely win buh the guy has not tried a bit. Imagine after 13 years. Some cases have been longer than this anyway buh truth be told.
If only Adeola had children maybe he wouldn't be interested in Chris after all.

Tina tho'. Maybe she hasn't found the right time to tell him (talking outta experience). I just pray her right time is right anyway.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by omotalkie(f): 9:28pm On Jun 19, 2015
LogoDWhiz:


Kim should be patient, enduring and cool-headed or else she will lose Mark to Tina.
But I doubt if that will happen

#Peace
Its definitely gonna happun. Kim must loose tooTina. There's much chemical reaction going on btw Tina and Mark
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 9:41pm On Jun 19, 2015
omotalkie:
Its definitely gonna happun. Kim must loose tooTina. There's much chemical reaction going on btw Tina and Mark

Yeah. All factors are pointing to the fact that it will happen, but remember that this isn't a romantic story, and also looking at the kind of writer D9ty7 is.
Doubt if it will happen.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 9:46pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
is it by force for tina to show chris his low life father.... shebi he choosed moni over d boy..woh God help daniel if ah was tina...oga dee wwn will daniel die o cos me i am selling wrappers for his funeral
Kai! Wrappers? I want one for chichi n Jimmy
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 9:50pm On Jun 19, 2015
LogoDWhiz:


Hmm! Okay!

Some people are of the opinion that Daniel should claim Chris.
My opinion on that is this:
Daniel doesn't have any moral right to try and claim chris now, considering what happened in the past.
But legally its possible. But the kid has the final say.
If he decided to stay with his mum, no problem.
He left both mum and child at a delicate time and now that he knows that he has no heir, he wants to claim the child that he abandoned.

Tina tried as a mum but its always good if he had told Chris about his dad when chris came of age and when he started asking questions.


As a family counselor in this situation, I'd advice a round table discussion between Daniel, Chris and Tina.
Daniel should give his excuse, in as much as Daniel has the right to claim Chris, Tina deserves the right of asking of explanation from Daniel for his disappearance.


Best reply so far.

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 10:08pm On Jun 19, 2015
lauda:
Everybody is just debating about Chris, Daniel and Tina,
I'm I the only one suspecting this Tony Guy? He looks like a very good instrument in the hands of Lovato to capture Mark.

Anyway, Dee you are the Boss, thanks for the update.
I also said it. Who knws he cud b interested in killin Chris to silence Tina.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Psalmwise(m): 10:19pm On Jun 19, 2015
analyzers e dn do una see as una analysis long like update Mk oga cum update... harjibola ND logodwhiz oms tecno4life ,lilyomi ND co... e dn do una oo
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Psalmwise(m): 10:20pm On Jun 19, 2015
analyzers e dn do una see as una analysis long like update Mk oga cum update... harjibola ND logodwhiz oms tecno4life ,lilyomi ND co... e dn do una oo

a sentencES is emuf for d wise

bfor I spray dis place with my self produced toxic oxygen
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lbotusme: 10:37pm On Jun 19, 2015
Daniel should swerve into the red sea. What nonesense!!
He should stop forming ' caring' because if he had a child with Adeola he wouldn't have remembered chris. Typical African man that thinks because he is the biological father automatically makes him a ' father'.Selfish goat.. grin

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ElectGINeer(m): 10:39pm On Jun 19, 2015
Mr D9ty please come and see what you cause now.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Hennyhorlah(f): 10:43pm On Jun 19, 2015
lauda:
Everybody is just debating about Chris, Daniel and Tina,
I'm I the only one suspecting this Tony Guy? He looks like a very good instrument in the hands of Lovato to capture Mark.

Anyway, Dee you are the Boss, thanks for the update.
U aren't d only one dear,I'm equally suspecting him,he even has more details abt Mark-he knows his house nd even his wife.

He can easily be used to kidnap Kim

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lbotusme: 10:55pm On Jun 19, 2015
Tony is Lovato's boy.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 11:08pm On Jun 19, 2015
Lilyomi:
Kai! Wrappers? I want one for chichi n Jimmy
done! grin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by harjibolar10(m): 11:39pm On Jun 19, 2015
Shebarh:
#teamDanielmustdie..... @harjibolar shebi dey wer drunk wwn dey did it
Hunmmm, drunk kwa

You know, I may count that as a mistake, but in every mistake, there "must" be at least 5-10% element of intentional act there.

They were drunk, yes! Why didn't them both admit that, and tell Adeola what has transpired between them?

And by the way, if Chris should find out the truth from another source, and not from Tina, I will say, the "law of diminishing return" will accour, and affect the love, that Chris has for his mum


Dee, let's go there
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 11:58pm On Jun 19, 2015
Lilyomi:
Best reply so far.
cheesy Thanks
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by LogoDWhiz(m): 12:05am On Jun 20, 2015
Psalmwise:
analyzers e dn do una see as una analysis long like update Mk oga cum update...
harjibola ND logodwhiz oms tecno4life ,lilyomi ND co...
e dn do una oo


a sentencES is emuf for d wise


bfor I spray dis place with my self produced toxic oxygen

Lol!

Okay o
D beans master
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ritzeluv(f): 12:52am On Jun 20, 2015
Lbotusme:
Daniel should swerve into the red sea. What nonesense!!
He should stop forming ' caring' because if he had a child with Adeola he wouldn't have remembered chris. Typical African man that thinks because he is the biological father automatically makes him a ' father'.Selfish goat.. grin

Your head dey der. Did Daniel know what Tina went through to raise that kid? Make I no just swear for am.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by tecno4life(m): 9:51am On Jun 20, 2015
Psalmwise:
analyzers e dn do una see as una analysis long like update Mk oga cum update...
harjibola ND logodwhiz oms tecno4life ,lilyomi ND co...
e dn do una oo


a sentencES is emuf for d wise


bfor I spray dis place with my self produced toxic oxygen

lol if we no do am oga d9ty7 no go update nah
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 10:58am On Jun 20, 2015
Lilyomi:
No kisses in Ramadan. Again to anoda woman.
lol
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Skimpledawg(m): 12:27pm On Jun 20, 2015
Onemansquad:

*baba order for anytin frm skimpledawg i wil pay*

Dnt mind dem blaming daniel alone wen all of dem bleeped up infact tina is the one to b blamed here wtf undecided
So harjibolar10 is back..... Place ya order broda ranging from crocodile pepper soup, alomo n monkey tail, yellow porridge beans etc..


#teamDanielgogetChris.

Ce as Una opinions long pass update covering two pages!! Nawa ooo. Psalmwise, if anybody tok anytin in form of update, gv dt psn spoilt beans
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 1:25pm On Jun 20, 2015
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