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Cuntribute by AmiableJay(m): 5:58am On Jul 15, 2015
One dusk, I strolled down the endless alleys
P'rchance to sooth this lust with a bite of cheese
The sky shimmered dimly with the Sun's last glow
Exhaust floated on high bringing in the long plough
When that dreaded deadlock hour takes its shift
As stallions of steel zoomed making their last drift
U-turn beckons as the busy lanes vies with my stroll
Inner voices chided my now reckless soul
Exhuming its fragile innocence-the heist of Eden
The flesh seeks most which opens Death's den
And its scythe strikes off from the cult of the living:
Copious liquor, cigar's fumes and all needless fussing.
~~~
When, then at the gates of hell I made my haul
The first host tempted best; and was worst of all
Danced a witless salsa like Jeptah's lone issue
Haughty she came with a new vanity to make tussle
Naughty and armed with little that whet lust
Dim wits, fallen tits but supple to conjure her deadly thrust
Was all she offered for me to cunTribute
To the city's whoring that conscience's voice mute
Which thirst razed with lust's embers the pale night
As Death deemed her tribute from who plow his site.

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Re: Cuntribute by timpaker(m): 7:04pm On Aug 11, 2015
Speechless! undecided

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Re: Cuntribute by Nobody: 1:09am On Aug 12, 2015
AmiableJay:
One dusk, I strolled down the endless alleys
P'rchance to sooth this lust with a bite of cheese
The sky shimmered dimly with the Sun's last glow
Exhaust floated on high bringing in the long plough
When that dreaded deadlock hour takes its shift
As stallions of steel zoomed making their last drift
U-turn beckons as the busy lanes vies with my stroll
Inner voices chided my now reckless soul
Exhuming its fragile innocence-the heist of Eden
The flesh seeks most which opens Death's den
And its scythe strikes off from the cult of the living:
Copious liquor, cigar's fumes and all needless fussing.
~~~
When, then at the gates of hell I made my haul
The first host tempted best; and was worst of all
Danced a witless salsa like Jeptah's lone issue
Haughty she came with a new vanity to make tussle
Naughty and armed with little that whet lust
Dim wits, fallen tits but supple to conjure her deadly thrust
Was all she offered for me to cunTribute
To the city's whoring that conscience's voice mute
Which thirst razed with lust's embers the pale night
As Death deemed her tribute from who plow his site.

I love your vocab! The way you write keeps the reader intrigued. Nice one.

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Re: Cuntribute by AmiableJay(m): 7:22am On Aug 12, 2015
Adanna28:


I love your vocab! The way you write keeps the reader intrigued. Nice one.
Wow, thanks for your 'intriguing' comment. #winks#

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Re: Cuntribute by AmiableJay(m): 7:25am On Aug 12, 2015
timpaker:
Speechless! undecided
Timpaker my boss! Say something sir!
Re: Cuntribute by Nobody: 7:49am On Aug 12, 2015
AmiableJay:

Wow, thanks for your 'intriguing' comment. #winks#

Hehe my pleasure dear wink
Re: Cuntribute by timpaker(m): 12:37pm On Aug 12, 2015
AmiableJay:

Timpaker my boss! Say something sir!

Your rhymes are finely put a I love the last 4 lines
Re: Cuntribute by AmiableJay(m): 6:28pm On Aug 12, 2015
timpaker:


Your rhymes are finely put a I love the last 4 lines
Hmmm, and what'll you say about the previous lines?
Re: Cuntribute by JanethEze(f): 11:02pm On Nov 21, 2015
This is beautiful
AmiableJay:

Wow, thanks for your 'intriguing' comment. #winks#
Re: Cuntribute by JanethEze(f): 11:03pm On Nov 21, 2015
U r talented
AmiableJay:
One dusk, I strolled down the endless alleys
P'rchance to sooth this lust with a bite of cheese
The sky shimmered dimly with the Sun's last glow
Exhaust floated on high bringing in the long plough
When that dreaded deadlock hour takes its shift
As stallions of steel zoomed making their last drift
U-turn beckons as the busy lanes vies with my stroll
Inner voices chided my now reckless soul
Exhuming its fragile innocence-the heist of Eden
The flesh seeks most which opens Death's den
And its scythe strikes off from the cult of the living:
Copious liquor, cigar's fumes and all needless fussing.
~~~
When, then at the gates of hell I made my haul
The first host tempted best; and was worst of all
Danced a witless salsa like Jeptah's lone issue
Haughty she came with a new vanity to make tussle
Naughty and armed with little that whet lust
Dim wits, fallen tits but supple to conjure her deadly thrust
Was all she offered for me to cunTribute
To the city's whoring that conscience's voice mute
Which thirst razed with lust's embers the pale night
As Death deemed her tribute from who plow his site.
Re: Cuntribute by AmiableJay(m): 11:16am On Nov 22, 2015
Thanks dearie! Happy Sunday to you.
JanethEze:
U r talented
Re: Cuntribute by JanethEze(f): 12:05pm On Nov 22, 2015
AmiableJay:
Thanks dearie! Happy Sunday to you.
i
Happy Sunday to you to. God bless grin

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