missuniverse:
Thanks for the mention OluwabuqqyYOLO

A beginner on d writer's board of nairaland literature section but definitely not a novice

highly connotative
love ur diction
love ur plot

Kip em coming

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You're welcome, ma'am. I'm glad you are following.
Stay with me, please.

Faita, can you kindly grace the thread? Your presence helps, really. A noble critique, I suppose.

Hi, sir Fynestboi.
I implore you to please withdraw the ban the anti-spam bot placed me on in the education section. All I did was a link to my Facebook profile and I was banned. I beg of thee, sir. Look into this fast, please.

***Continued***

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Aunt Isoka drove out of the giant building as worst as she could. She wasn't stepping on the accelerator even when another car was behind her. Her face wasn't piercing, not even glaring. It was dark as sin. Blunt as people. Her hands reverberated round the steering wheel continuously as she drove.

'Honk! Honk!!' she jolted out of her sub-trance. Not all autoists ate the fatest proverbial bones. She wasn't on her lane anymore.

Her face was getting darker: as betrayal.

She navigated the lanes gingerly; stepping unnecessarily on the brakes too many a time. The car missed who used to drive it then. Even if the person was a male.

Birds chirruped over her cars as she stared for minutes at her bungalow. The bungalow that housed the person her heat eyes moistened to see. Her head bobbed on the wheel for minutes. She believed Omole deserved better.

People were blunt - not in taking decisions; with hearts. She would tell Omole what dog had no rope.
Omole deserved better. She was deserving a better person. Aunt Isoka wasn't ready to bear brunts for her. Bad news were not entertaining to her, much more Omole.

She alighted her car as she halted the tracks. Omole was getting over mammi's death. Aunt Isoka wasn't supposed to salt her acidic burns then. But cruel Aunt Isoka told Omole anyways, procrastination should't have helped.

Omole greeted her aunt, kneeling a bit. Wasn't she feeling abdominal aches already? She caught her aunt's sinful face and a sign breathed in her lungs.

Her aunt had gone to St Rebeccas Hospital in the morning, Doctor Buisi must have burnt her. She hoped the cicatrice she must have sustained weren't swords slashes.

Her aunt's hands were trying to convey something. The two hands went into curves and offered her nothingness in front on her stomach. Omole thought the belle before her was pregnant; that was good news. But Aunt Isoka's right hand pointed at her like mockery. And tears were spilling the floor.

That could have entailed just a thing to Omole. She was pregnant. A ghost rapist. Was that how much a pig he was!

She wouldn't believe though. Her hands rubbed her stomach uneasily. The memories came haunting like mewing cats in a tunnel. Her face went white as though children of God. Stinging tears rained down her eyes as torrents. Going with such rate, she could have turned blind, too.

The baby would have kicked but it just was a month old. Omole couldn't help but turn a dope. A family discussion needed to be held, Aunt Isoka reasoned. Even, she knew she still would be saddled with things. Not every family member needed a deaf dumb daughter to cater for.

***To Be Continued***

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Please, is any brethren or sisters still following the story?

I wish to know, please. It's been like hell. It's just like I've been typing for myself. Why post here when the situation isn't different from my blog's?

I don't get paid and I'm not asking for that. There are too many of us to ask for fees, but just a comment from you alone is enough.
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Still following, its an amazing piece,to be better you should watch your punctuation marks more closely.

I'm in

sorry for not commenting.Not been around for sometime. Am definitely following

OluwabuqqyYOLO am not used to Literature section but you draw me in. I enjoyed the piece. Jahbless. Mimo

uhmmmn uhmmmn i'm still following, its really a sad event for omole

Good evening, all. I can't figure out what but my browser isn't okay, certainly. On the second count now, my phone's auto switched itself off after typing probably more than 2000 characters. Even on my Facebook page, same issue. I can't say but give me till on the morrow, please.

Peace!

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OluwabuqqyYOLO:
Please, is any brethren or sisters still following the story?

I wish to know, please. It's been like hell. It's just like I've been typing for myself. Why post here when the situation isn't different from my blog's?

I don't get paid and I'm not asking for that. There are too many of us to ask for fees, but just a comment from you alone is enough.
Is anyone doing?

You still hasn't changed?


It is well broz

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An upcoming trying his hands at it. But as you read and ,probably, get a tad from it, will you, please, pray for me?

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1 - The Travails
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She radius-zapped the molten earth road. Her strides augmented down the way. She wasn't smiling - not even a half - or maybe she didn't see the need to.
The sun had grown into it's bean age, and had decidedly quit been white as though children of God. A filcher had seemed to descend putting most light in his mini backpack. The street was almost dry, but nature's cruel heart provided her some company. Ants grumbled still on some crumbs. And cats mewed around. Generators didn't inflict cicatrice on breath, yet.

The rusting bronze milk colored tray with Murtala Mohammed art on it slipped off her head, almost, as her toe grazed a stone. She struggled for equilibrium and attained it. The piece of art seemed to ogle at her as if to lay complaints as she thought a beam fell on Murtala's face. His moustache seemed richer , darker, too.
That possibly couldn't have happened. It wasn't white anymore then. It was dark. Almost pitch dark.
She, at times, used to give thoughts to Murtala's face - during her leisure time- which was quite okay. There must have been a thing concerning his face that fascinated her.
Now, that wasn't a normal thing. Fifteen years old lasses weren't obsessed with faces - hardened ones.

Her thread-bared Brown gown didn't seem the easiest object to make out, then. But he did anyways.

A firm hand gripped her right shoulder.
Such acts surely weren't cobberly, even gentlemanly.
She farted out the equilibrium she had so much strove to garner moments ago. Rough hands grabbed her. And carried her.
She felt she defied gravity as she laid aplomp-like in air. His arms hair poked her buttock.
He definitely was bestowed with Murtala's attributes.

She kicked. Nailed. And pulled. That didn't help.

He laid her down on the wooden board she had sometimes noticed in an Autos mechanic's stall.
Yehuwa! Who didn't acced to demolishing such stalls?
He tore her down. She opened her mouth.
She tried to make a scream but he saw no need to be jittery That could plot his fall. That should plot his fall.

Sounds failed her. None sensible pierced his ear buds. She didn't. Screams were germane in such times. She needed it. Maybe she was aching to misplace her hymen, already.
His throbbing manhood plunged in her heat. Blood squirted out her heat. He roughly handled her bossoms. She gasped. She lost it. Her virginity.
Not all girls loathed being raped, it turned out. She didn't scream sensibly after all. She could have hollaed a name. Screamed. Anything. But she didn't. She seemed to love it.

The rapist was done already and he left just the way he had come. A ghost rapist. Her gloating didn't help. She had to bear the brunt. Afterall, she didn't call for help.

As she walked home, someone signed at her. She didn't talk, still. Gesticulating helped, instead.
But she needed to talk. Pretense wouldn't have profited her. She saw his face after all.
Then, a man realized, she was dumb. Probably deaf, too.

Dumb. Deaf. Those were certain. She was special. Special bar she wasn't rare.

But what man would forcefully plunge her? Apparently, not all animals with a scrawny tail between their thighs were lackeys of having a cachet to protect.

And to dehydrate the fire further he hadn't torched off. She must have seen his face. Truly.

*****To Be Continued*****

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Thanks fr d mention

Eniqurl:
Thanks fr d mention

bae,ur dp Oya come to papa

Eniqurl:
Thanks fr d mention

babe... congrats ..you are my first official crush on nairaland...accept my hearty congratulations... once again...u are my crush

pbs4real:
bae,ur dp Oya come to papa

Bae

TheMascot:
babe... congrats ..you are my first official crush on nairaland...accept my hearty congratulations... once again...u are my crush

But crush doesn't last long

Eniqurl:
Bae

all dis yeye boiz won't let u rest.. tell them to free u for me oooh.. tell them u re my ORENTE

Eniqurl:
But crush doesn't last long

Tor...den let's do sometin about it...

TheMascot:
Tor...den let's do sometin about it...

Torh.. No problem

pbs4real:
all dis yeye boiz won't let u rest.. tell them to free u for me oooh.. tell them u re my ORENTE

Eniqurl:
Torh.. No problem

as in Ehn.. I have already pause my art beatz for u..u just have to prez like 1 or 2 buttonz and let me show you wat iz bigger than romeo and Juliet in diz 2015...

Eniqurl:

Eniqurl:
Torh.. No problem

hmm,bae check ur inbox

OK we're here, fire on..............