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Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:47am On Sep 06, 2015

***Continued***

Omole wished her ears would just function well as she stared at her aunt. She didn't see the need to be special. Plans. Wishes. Desires. All wouldn't come true because she was special. She hated how special she had gone.

Her eyes were sick of crying as they watched whatever was happening. The strained tears on her cheek didn't betray her luck. She wasn't allowed in the meeting but she could see her aunt varicose veins pulsate and throb rapidly from the little apperture in the curtain. That only meant she was having a heated conversation. Her heat eyes weren't helping - they were blazing cubebs. Aunt Isoka had taken her on the trip twice in the past fortnight. She was feeling they had not enough interests in her. But they had to; they were her relatives afterall. Her aunt surely didn't deserve heated eyes after her troubles.

Omole knew she never belonged there.

Aunt Isoka got up grimly and hissed, her brown gown flowing wise with her like a stream. 'I am very disappointed in you, Elder,' she spat in Efik. 'I am not asking for anything from anyone. I only asked us to be ambitory towards her. Towards our sister's daughter. What do I get?' she spread her hands aside like pea butter on stove. She didn't want to say anymore or didn't see the need to. She stomped out and met her fraught niece blubbing. She couldn't hold the tears back either. She burst in tears and her heat eyes smothered. She hugged Omole and tried to console her. But both just were crying their hearts out. Love at it's peak.

They didn't realize the others were still there.

Three months in nine months wouldn't raise her stomach to heaven stairs. Some even used months exceeding. Omole would complete the class she was in first.

She was determined.

End Of Chapter 1

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Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:50am On Sep 06, 2015

Missmossy:
Still following, its an amazing piece,to be better you should watch your punctuation marks more closely.

Thanks, ma'am. I will do better.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:52am On Sep 06, 2015

danyel09:
walks into thread, OluwabuqqyYOLO God go bless you

A real reader, sir. You prayed for me. Thanks very much!

Kindly help invite others, I heard you romance landers are very good. I like them, really. You guys are encouraging always.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:53am On Sep 06, 2015

aao:
I'm in

You're welcome, sir. I'm glad.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:54am On Sep 06, 2015

prettydiva89:
sorry for not commenting.Not been around for sometime.
Am definitely following

I'm glad, ma'am. Enjoy.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:55am On Sep 06, 2015

DahtzFestjayz:
OluwabuqqyYOLO am not used to Literature section but you draw me in. I enjoyed the piece. Jahbless. Mimo

I'm very glad I drew you, sir. Thanks. But enjoyed? The story is still on. Please, stay.

God bless you.

Re: The Ash Rose by Nobody: 8:57am On Sep 06, 2015

OluwabuqqyYOLO:

A real reader, sir. You prayed for me. Thanks very much!

Kindly help invite others, I heard you romance landers are very good. I like them, really. You guys are encouraging always.

no problem, make I return from church, I wan go pray

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:57am On Sep 06, 2015

blackmarya:
uhmmmn uhmmmn i'm still following, its really a sad event for omole

It sure is, ma'am. God bless.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:58am On Sep 06, 2015

[quote author=Ayjos10 post=37688783][/quote]
You are welcome, sir. I'm glad.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:59am On Sep 06, 2015

harjibolar10:
You still hasn't changed?

It is well broz

What's this supposed to mean, sir! Your encouragement, or what?

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:00am On Sep 06, 2015

smokejuddy:

present

Welcome, sir. Enjoy.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:01am On Sep 06, 2015

TheMascot:
OK fine am here...jst lemme load for 300mb

Please do, sir. Stay with me.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:02am On Sep 06, 2015

TheMascot:
nigga.......... u fuckin good

Thank you, bro. Thumbs up.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:03am On Sep 06, 2015

Eniqurl:
Thanks fr d mention

Welcome, ma'am. Stay with me, I cadge.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:04am On Sep 06, 2015

bigfatthing:
OK we're here, fire on..............

Okay, sir. Welcome. Stay glued.

Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 9:14am On Sep 06, 2015

Now guys, it's the end of the first chapter. Benign air your views. Let's know what's up with the story.
What do you think about Omole?
What do you feel for her?
What would you advise her to do?
What would be your aim presently?
What do you think of Aunt Isoka?
Should Omole further her education?

Also what do you think the writer needs to put in place or work on?
Expecting your response, dear readers.

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Re: The Ash Rose by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 1:14pm On Sep 06, 2015

danyel09:
no problem, make I return from church, I wan go pray

Okay, sir.

Re: The Ash Rose by blackmarya(f): 8:00pm On Sep 06, 2015

i think the aunt should take omole to the doctor and find means of terminating it so far its still at the early stage, so the doc will knw better and even the paternity of d baby is nt knwn after that she can further her education

Re: The Ash Rose by Nobody: 11:00pm On Sep 06, 2015

Eniqurl, liljboy, imoy,beebeeooh, tunery004, hero18,lanceslot, nidavid, themascot make una show

Re: The Ash Rose by Eniqurl(f): 11:12pm On Sep 06, 2015

danyel09:
Eniqurl, liljboy, imoy,beebeeooh, tunery004, hero18,lanceslot, nidavid, themascot make una show

Present boss

Re: The Ash Rose by tunery004(m): 11:24pm On Sep 06, 2015

danyel09:
Eniqurl, liljboy, imoy,beebeeooh, tunery004, hero18,lanceslot, nidavid, themascot make una show

Am here tanx danyel09n btw longest tym

Re: The Ash Rose by Nobody: 11:44pm On Sep 06, 2015

tunery004:

Am here tanx danyel09n btw longest tym

abi oo my brother

Re: The Ash Rose by Lanceslot(m): 7:15am On Sep 07, 2015

danyel09:
Eniqurl, liljboy, imoy,beebeeooh, tunery004, hero18,lanceslot, nidavid, themascot make una show

Here, how come?

Re: The Ash Rose by Nobody: 10:06am On Sep 07, 2015

I can't predict the story.

Re: The Ash Rose by Imoy(m): 10:40am On Sep 07, 2015

danyel09:
Eniqurl, liljboy, imoy,beebeeooh, tunery004, hero18,lanceslot, nidavid, themascot make una show

Present Sire

Re: The Ash Rose by Nobody: 1:55pm On Sep 07, 2015

Lanceslot:
Here, how come?

ask ifa, better come read tori grin

Re: The Ash Rose by SexySapphire(f): 2:28pm On Sep 07, 2015

OluwabuqqyYOLO:
Tags:
Kingphilips, Emzypaz, Nancydearie, Sexysapphire,
Vibra and all.

Thanks for the mention. Will comment when I read and go through it.

Re: The Ash Rose by Lanceslot(m): 3:16pm On Sep 07, 2015

danyel09:
ask ifa, better come read tori

Do I know you?

Re: The Ash Rose by SexySapphire(f): 5:15pm On Sep 07, 2015

I really don't read stories like this but I'm kinda hooked to this. It's been a nice story so far and I'm glad you've followed some of the advices given to you by some literary gurus such as larrysun. Well done.

Re: The Ash Rose by niDavid(m): 8:54am On Sep 08, 2015

danyel09:
Eniqurl, liljboy, imoy,beebeeooh, tunery004, hero18,lanceslot, nidavid, themascot make una show

Here I'm i

Re: The Ash Rose by niDavid(m): 8:57am On Sep 08, 2015

danyel09:
Eniqurl, liljboy, imoy,beebeeooh, tunery004, hero18,lanceslot, nidavid, themascot make una show

I'm here o

Re: The Ash Rose by ChikaSunday(m): 9:06am On Sep 08, 2015

OluwabuqqyYOLO:
Copyright
©2015 by OluwabuqqyYOLO
oluwabuqqyyolo_yolo@outlook.com

No part of this story may be reproduced by any means without the prior permission by the author. Anyone who wishes to repost this story to any other online forum, Facebook group, blog or any other website should endeavour to acknowledge the author's identity and kindly notify the author by sending him a mail.

God bless you all.

A nice one

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