OBAINOJAZZ VS JIGSAWKILLAH


Voting Criteria :

Opener - 1 point

Rhymes - 2 points

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points

Punchlines - 3 points

Flow - 1 point

Wordplays - 2 points

Closer - 1 point

Rules

- 20 lines.

- Deadline is 4pm, Thursday 9 September 2015.

- Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets OR voters.

- Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that.

- Only vets and regular section posters are allowed to vote.

Goodluck!!!

Check Check Check

Check....jig when u ready...holla

Jigsawkillah....let's post before 3 biko....my subscription will expire 3:47 today....and you knw as mtn dey do na....u go subscribe na evening e go show

Make una rap na, na 2:30 already

Yo. . .


Obainojazz. . . I was warned not to joke with this brawl, you might take it from me
I say but he's wack as hell, they say the guy's playin' cunnin'
I say cool, so I checked your profile, you follow Business, you like makin' money
So I bring this offer you can't reject. . . the Nine or the Forty?

Check! My Arsenal got an AR, loaded Chamber, Layin' on the floor
They say this G, Rude, I don't knock, chopper sprayin' at your door
We give you a big Cap, I like Hat Tricks, my girl, blazin' off your ball
We bouta Pray on you, your mom and two siblings, we say Amen for the four
Y'all don't get that right?
Cech, A. Ramsey, Chamberlain, Giroud, Prey, Aimin' Forty Fours?

I take that back, I spray that mac, with a new intent
Your shît is mostly appealing to kids like a noodle scent
I wonder why your name comes up everytime I google wretch
and Jazz never smells nice like a voodoo stench

It's Jigs comin' with an Uzi and a millie for this punk
Booth emptied, his dead body gon' be fillin' up the trunk
The way I'd kill him, y'all would think I killed to save my bûtt
'Cause in church, in front of a Rev, the millie be spillin' up his gut!

Who is Jazz? A pûssy cat? A bushy fäg?
Claims to be a dude with cash but can't afford gucci swag?
Apart from your phone, your costliest asset is an inherited goofy hat
Jazz broke and ain't gettin' no shares like a rookie rap

Jigs is always with the fifth, all day, when he sleeps
In the Toilet, in the crib, in the hallways, in the streets
Run up in your home, reshape your door frame with the clips
Like in the Intelligence, I'd split your brain with the chips

Jigs runs the South and hold base in the West side, nigga
Known North, fo' sport, I let that Tek rise, nigga
I'll battle Jazz thrice, and get 3 Ws, on your chest, I'd write that on the left side, nigga
Then the Dot Coms, I ain't talkin' bout a Website, nigga

Y'all know I bring some of the best beats. . . Doctor Dre
Behind these bars, for life, you gon' get locked away
I'm like coffee in a fallin' mug, when I drop, I spray
Like a misplaced cigar butt, Jazz gon' get dropped by tre'/tray

Silent Rage gon' kill him when the nigga gathers noise
The gallows or the gallows, at least the nigga has a choice
You talk too much dumb shît, I'd have my nigga snatch your voice
And Jazz gettin' strapped around the neck, Isakaba boys





Jigs!

*Yo.....Its the knight cat......
.
.I ball big and I'll be bruising this mice bad/ he
shouldn't try fight back/
coz he'll get floored with a light jab/then I'mma unleash the beast in me......and begin to bite hard/
The chest beater ain't no ffucking vet....even bis
reckon jig's quite wack....
..........................................like ivanovic....at right back.

*In the flight for first place....you'bout to witness a
turbulent/
I'mma make you crash....and your torment gonn be
permanent/
You getting killed...no argument/ coz I've been
planning your death sentence..
....sent the bill to the devil's parliament/...and it was
cleared to take place
....................................in the kings tournament.

*I'm a mean musician...when I play, doom looms/
my favourite instrument are c4 and bazookas...coz
they really produce good tunes/
that sweeps crowd off the floor....than brooms do/
...Jig come hear a music I composed with my
c4last night.....in a full moonl/
it starts with.....All I wanna do is.....BOOM BOOM

Jazz a prodigy, tall and handsome, but inside me a monster lives/ my lines gat badder scheme/ never seen.
Every bout, I leave marks on my opponent, no matter what the ffucker brings/
My last battle against iceskidd....even became a murder scene/
Now jig gonn get the same treatment....till he knows how a hospital feel/??get it

The battle's done
*We know jig gonn(gun) talk....of how he pop slug/
and made four thugs gone...with one shot/.....
or he may lie of how aliens raped his ugly shot
mom....and she gave birth.......to a gifted young saw/
When the truth is, she was raped by a
squadron
/.......... Of one legged @bokis.......wearing condom.

...........One sperm escape....

JigsawKillah:
Yo. . .


Obainojazz. . . I was warned not to joke with this brawl, you might take it from me
I say but he's wack as hell, they say the guy's playin' cunnin'
I say cool, so I checked your profile, you follow Business, you like makin' money
So I bring this offer you can't reject. . . the Nine or the Forty?

Check! My Arsenal got an AR, loaded Chamber, Layin' on the floor
They say this G, Rude, I don't knock, chopper sprayin' at your door
We give you a big Cap, I like Hat Tricks, my girl, blazin' off your ball
We bouta Pray on you, your mom and two siblings, we say Amen for the four
Y'all don't get that right?
Cech, A. Ramsey, Chamberlain, Giroud, Prey, Aimin' Forty Fours?

I take that back, I spray that mac, with a new intent
Your shît is mostly appealing to kids like a noodle scent
I wonder why your name comes up everytime I google wretch
and Jazz never smells nice like a voodoo stench

It's Jigs comin' with an Uzi and a millie for this punk
Booth emptied, his dead body gon' be fillin' up the trunk
The way I'd kill him, y'all would think I killed to save my bûtt
'Cause in church, in front of a Rev, the millie be spillin' up his gut!

Who is Jazz? A pûssy cat? A bushy fäg?
Claims to be a dude with cash but can't afford gucci swag?
Apart from your phone, your costliest asset is an inherited goofy hat
Jazz broke and ain't gettin' no shares like a rookie rap

Jigs is always with the fifth, all day, when he sleeps
In the Toilet, in the crib, in the hallways, in the streets
Run up in your home, reshape your door frame with the clips
Like in the Intelligence, I'd split your brain with the chips

Jigs runs the South and hold base in the West side, nigga
Known North, fo' sport, I let that Tek rise, nigga
I'll battle Jazz thrice, and get 3 Ws, on your chest, I'd write that on the left side, nigga
Then the Dot Coms, I ain't talkin' bout a Website, nigga

Y'all know I bring some of the best beats. . . Doctor Dre
Behind these bars, for life, you gon' get locked away
I'm like coffee in a fallin' mug, when I drop, I spray
Like a misplaced cigar butt, Jazz gon' get dropped by tre'/tray

Silent Rage gon' kill him when the nigga gathers noise
The gallows or the gallows, at least the nigga has a choice
You talk too much dumb shît, I'd have my nigga snatch your voice
And Jazz gettin' strapped around the neck, Isakaba boys





Jigs!

I don't still get dis 20 lines thing...still have ideas...but I didn't script much...now I'm seeing dis

obainojazz:
I don't still get dis 20 lines thing...still have ideas...but I didn't script much...now I'm seeing dis

No qualms, you're good to go

Jazz

Thanks guys, open for votes :


Ibime, Cooger, Emaprince, Elymaxiimus, Giyazz, Airmark please vote on this.

I honestly thought Jazz would win this easily but he disappointed me.

Jazz been dropping some stingers recently while Jigs style isn't built for textcee battling. Those URL/KOTD styles don't sting often enough to be used in text format where you have to drop a punch every 2 lines.

Regardless, Jazz didn't bring what I expected.

MVGT: Jigs

Thanks Ibime, more votes please.

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Opener- Jig stretched and the beauty of the lines got lost with it, obaino has a decent line embedded
with personals which gave him little edge ova jig's

rhymes - obaino tried few multies but could nt match jig's. Jig got this, he took his time on this.

similes/metaphors: jigs got this

punchlines: obaino had the chance to nick this but could n't, instead of inflicting venom on jigs,
he preferred to brag in most of his bars. Be gruesome towards your opponent bro.
Your punches were not hitting much because they are most times about you and
also ''i will'' kind of punches.
Jigs was better, though he also was n't that brutal but more witty and edged it.
I have seen harder punches from him than this.

flow: obaino gat this.

wordplay --- chamberlain (chamber laying) did nt play and other overused puns,
jig gonn. not impressed by both. *Tie

closer - obaino- jig gonn does nt work for me, good idea in the closer though.

Nice one guys .

MVGT : Jigsawkillah

Thanks Airmark.

More votes please.

Obainojazz coulds owned this battle if he had worked on his rhymes and pinchlines.

But like expected. . . Jigs got this.

SMH

What's up with " gallows or the gallows" ...
That is, you want to feed us B-magic's "get your @ss whopped or get your @ss whopped" ?

Honestly, jig's KOTD/URL style is getting irritating, especially due to the fact that he's literally jacking some people's styles.

Obianojazz did almost nothing here. More like a freestyle verse. Not even good enough to get likes in FFR.

"Qiute wack like ivanovic at right back"..what was that about? This is like a punch in the air.

Anyways, big ups for showing up

MVGT- Jigsawkillah!

Sorry if I didn't write well.....my mom've have been at the hospital....so no time to fine tune it....will still have jig's head later sha....congrats bro

obainojazz:
Sorry if I didn't write well.....my mom've have been at the hospital....so no time to fine tune it....will still have jig's head later sha....congrats bro

sorry you found yourself in a charlie clips situation.

For real, I wish her a quick recovery!

Jazz was not in this bout at all. You seem rusty. You shoulda warmed up with some drops on ffr before entering this tourney.
I Appreciate ur effort though

Jigsaw; nice verse. That closer was funny. Plus one or two lines i could remember.

But ibime nd prince already said my mind. This style is very great for flexing(i enjoy the way you do it on ffr non-stop) but not that good for battles.
maybe you're not doing it well. Or we got bored due to the fact that we know the style was copied from URL and yet you've continued to use it. Cos i know the first time u used it( against me) it was nice. There's something missing - fix it.


Mvgt = jigsaw

Emaprince:
sorry you found yourself in a charlie clips situation.

For real, I wish her a quick recovery!

tanx boss...

Thanks alot guys, Closed : Jigsawkillah wins and proceeds to the next round.

obainojazz:
tanx boss...

Sorry bro . . .

obainojazz:
tanx boss...

I wish her well.

obainojazz:
Sorry if I didn't write well.....my mom've have been at the hospital....so no time to fine tune it....will still have jig's head later sha....congrats bro

wish her speedy recovery .

Tanx all