Roofing walls....Flying bullets knows no Moses
Couping wars...spoken words bad emotions closes
Heart donor to Hip-Hop before Rap wasn't foolish
My stories away the border like slave music
Verses under attack....prophetic bars offensive
I script with fact...Airmark been defensive
The solomons view pyramids before imputing rhymes
Mikus a Judas ...deleting royalties lines
Am trending as a Jewish ...your future st*pid
I created a custom ..you sleep on down cupid
Crucifix bars ...my soul healthcare newbies
Ely seduction sentence soured groupies
Battle divine or divide ...Ibime acting Nas
Answer why Ely bars turned virgin ...we ask
Maybe Coogar got script Google won't cyber
History crimes probed us to battle cypher
Here we are ...Ema protesting people ethics
Who flags a moon? you push buttons than ethnic
Rebuttals over vows...strength to illusions
Nature draw arrows...personals elevates revolution
Clue from my eyes...my words needs a passport
Mystery is coasting beyond our seaport
Spokes arose Rebel won't falsify identity crisis
Krone awesome with levels ...Rebel rising like ISIS
The stage getting nuclear... condolences pampered
Flattering making verdict unclear...punches compared
Am ditching out specific lessons not Warri's comedy
Memos of conscious prolific writer gracing remedy
Giyazz shadow viewing ..17 on life with poison pen
Your belief growing adult ..bow tie with men
Airmark thinks I toothpick interview Coogar
I teach people to raise voice ....MOD playin intruder

Morning frees. . . .


This dummy will die/ i'm coming with the nine/ to fùck up your clime/
call my head a bank, i've got money on my mind/
i've gone to places/ & balled with caucasians/ i dont roll with black men but i'm not a racist!/
no one is above mistake, i might have fùcked up, maybe/
...still kept it locked down like a store in a basement/
it's either you love or hating/ i dont give a fùck if you ignore or rate me/
i dont give a fùck what y'all homøs feel/ as long as i'm rolling wheels/ & 'getting green' like 'plants with chlorophyl'/
they say put your mouth where your money is/ but i put my 'dîck where my money is'/
nigga, i'm 'fûcking rich'!/
i'll drop a clone/ crush his bone/ when i touch the chrome/
give him a 'hard time' so he knows my 'wrist watch is stoned'/
the barrel gits popped/ your bítch anäl gits fùcked/
a Tv set is stucked in my head, that explains how i channel this thought/
i know y'all loving my damn shít/ but men sleep/ when this man spits/
i'm cruising on a 'boat' with my 'hommies' - i call that a 'friendship'/
i'm a 'white beast' who's known to scare/ the phony peer/
if a 'kid' stands up to me, i'll 'stomp on ice' like a 'polar bear'/
i'm a swift legend/ i split tendons/ in six seconds/
emcees call me a 'rhyming viper'. . . i 'spit venom'/
i've murked tough emcees/ in wars, honestly/
if '5naira' clutches his dîck while watching pörn - it's 'hard currency'/
my team bad, we rock the fifth/
sinizia, ksslib, 'obaino', will murk ya team then fùck ya chick.../
wait a minute! wtf?
i've got 'jazz working for me' & aint even a 'herbalist'!/


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danbrowndmf:
Fuges cover by Danbrown- Issues







Verse1







sometimes i think about giving up on music...
Next minutes i'm writting dope lines wanna get sick...
If rap don't pay bills.see am i gonna cope...
Whenever i see MI pulling that bently gives me some hope...
Don't ever blame me if i make songs for the club...
Cus when modo drop tape,instead of buying,see dy doub...
Parent supporting my carreer when is bringing nothing....
But soon like koker dem go want make i do something...
My girlfiend been telling me,IB soon u gonna blow...
But if longer than expected i know she's gonna go...
Recently a friend told me he wanna do G-plus...
See i felt bad but this how poverty kept ous...
How am i gonna make money when my songs aint danceable...
They say rap don't sell it brings nothing to the table...
Think about taking random shot to get quick fame...
Then i realize making money is the actuall aim...
Labels don't sign u if u can't put the crowd on there feet...
No wonder rappers turn singers jus to make ends meet...








Verse2

someone should pls rate me on a scale of 10 b4 i continue the verse2

This is good content... Which of the fugess cover are you making use of?

Darkrebel wtf have you been smoking? Chill a little.

Figure i should drop this, recorded with a phone. since every where dey hot like this.

http://www.datafilehost.com/d/8973baee

jreyez:
Darkrebel wtf have you been smoking? Chill a little.

Figure i should drop this, recorded with a phone. since every where dey hot like this.

http://www.datafilehost.com/d/8973baee

is this an off-the-top freestyle?
i just listened to it. I'm guessing it's a freestyle cos you were going off beat in some parts. it's d∅pe

why didn't you sign up for the audio tourney?

because known heads didn't sign up? ?

danbrowndmf:
Fuges cover by Danbrown- Issues







Verse1







sometimes i think about giving up on music...
Next minutes i'm writting dope lines wanna get sick...
If rap don't pay bills.see am i gonna cope...
Whenever i see MI pulling that bently gives me some hope...
Don't ever blame me if i make songs for the club...
Cus when modo drop tape,instead of buying,see dy doub...
Parent supporting my carreer when is bringing nothing....
But soon like koker dem go want make i do something...
My girlfiend been telling me,IB soon u gonna blow...
But if longer than expected i know she's gonna go...
Recently a friend told me he wanna do G-plus...
See i felt bad but this how poverty kept ous...
How am i gonna make money when my songs aint danceable...
They say rap don't sell it brings nothing to the table...
Think about taking random shot to get quick fame...
Then i realize making money is the actuall aim...
Labels don't sign u if u can't put the crowd on there feet...
No wonder rappers turn singers jus to make ends meet...








Verse2

someone should pls rate me on a scale of 10 b4 i continue the verse2

storyline is d∅pe, but like jigsaw said , you can make it better by improving on the rhymes.

do a double-rhyme scheme at least like BIG L does.

Bruce done turn white

Have you been recycling people's bars

darkenedrebel:



storyline is d∅pe, but like jigsaw said , you can make it better by improving on the rhymes.

do a double-rhyme scheme at least like BIG L does.

Thanks brov. kindly give an example of the double rhyme scheme

jreyez:

This is good content... Which of the fugess cover are you making use of?

Thanks bro. I'm using "ready or not"

darkenedrebel:



is this an off-the-top freestyle?
i just listened to it. I'm guessing it's a freestyle cos you were going off beat in some parts. it's d∅pe

why didn't you sign up for the audio tourney?

because known heads didn't sign up? ?

Yea, it's off the top,... About the audio tourney you know o no get time... I'm working on a tape.

danbrowndmf:
Thanks bro. I'm using "ready or not"

I can't wait to feed my ears.. That instrumental is legendary.

danbrowndmf:
Thanks brov. kindly give an example of the double rhyme scheme

instead of a single rhyme like "made, fade, grade"


why not double words like "Ingrate, big plate, relayed, debate" or triple rhyming like


dummy blow. . . Forty slow. . . Hunting show. . . Nuts below?


Or even quadruple rhymes like. . .


Bruce is a ho?. . . Fool with a phone?. . . Shooting his bone?. . .


Should I keep it going?

danbrowndmf:
Thanks brov. kindly give an example of the double rhyme scheme

I WHIP-LASH/ RIFF-RAFFS/& THESE FAGGS/That SPIT WACK/ Then BRING MAGS / MEAN MACS/ & GREEN GATS / To SWING FAST/ in ZIG-ZAG / My QUICK JAB/ makes the BRICKS CRACK/ I wear masks.... to STEAL CASH /Until i got a BIG STASH/ There's a chef on my spine..giving me FEED BACKS/ Gimme me a FREE PASS /Or I'm kicking your WIG BACK /With a GRIM SMACK/ While my knuckles are wrapped.. around this BIN BAG / My TEAM'S BRASH / & WE PACK /These STEAM RAPS/ To SKIN CATS / Pump em' with so many shells.... you'd think they EAT CRAB/




easy as whistling Dixie...
you just gotta practice daily

I'm a newbie, please dope heads tell what am lacking..


I bring the truth/ when i come with the bible and a glock/ to this crook/ and if he got the nine/ just know i shot him with three bullets ×3 times/......
i know some nigga will be like/ ‘‘forget him i didn't script my line''/ but come on hommie, you think i scripted mine?/ am a tool of death, they call me ‘‘nine''/..... I'm too tool ‘‘tall'' and if i ever get ‘‘shot''/ ‘‘you won't leave long’’ like an obituary picture/ you will be ‘‘gone so soon''........

Don't think i bit any line/ cause am a newborn, i gat NO TEETH/ i think it's time i bring to NL's NOTICE/ that to be like U3, blaqbones/ and Ibime is my MOTIVE/ even to go ‘‘beyond C''(coogar)/ so i can be flawless, am talking BEYONCE/........ I'm a savage soldier/ listen lemme tell you CIVIL DUDE/ am wicked and heartless, i was raised in an EVIL HOOD/ so nobody can stop me when am coming/ to kill, not EVEN YOU/ .......

I'm coming with a mighty sword/ i will slick your throat, yea that's my favourite word/...... you forming all eyes on you/ we all know nicki is a bïtch/ but i told Meek MILL, NO NEAR/ her..... you can't BEAT ME, am evil/ if you wanna battle me/ come with a life-line/ like who day play, who wants to be a MILLIONAIRE/....

And if anyone tries to stop my shine/ that person ‘‘won't prosper'' like a ‘‘weapon formed against me''....

snickz aka nine

danbrowndmf:
Thanks brov. kindly give an example of the double rhyme scheme

you want 4 syllabic rhymes?

Like: jigsawkillah - gives us filler - a prick for realer - big or bigger

5?
Current situation - foremen invasion - boring dictation - fùcking with asians - store in a basement - ball with caucasians - saw is impatient - fùck his relations

Check! Check! Check!





I bring something for all these kids, I'm Santa Clausin'
Be afraid, I'm Hawkin' Danger. . . David Barner frontin'
Gun addict, it don't take me nothin' to keep the Llama bustin'
DJ5naira askin' for Audios. . . But if he [i]talkin' CDs. . . [/i]He's Ghana Hawkin'
You talk like all your life, you've gathered somethin'
You're a poorer version of Ibime, unable to father nothin'
Somethin' Blunt gon' hit you when we in your room, gänja puffin'
My boys put you in a box along the busy roads like it's gala hawkin'




Haaaaa!!!
I'm comin'

jreyez:


I can't wait to feed my ears.. That instrumental is legendary.

lols.bros i know get good voice oh.i don't like my voice.when rapping... When i'm done i will drop the link for u.

007Bruce:

you want 4 syllabic rhymes?

Like: jigsawkillah - gives us filler - a prick for realer - big or bigger

5?
Current situation - foremen invasion - boring dictation - fùcking with asians - store in a basement - ball with caucasians - saw is impatient - fùck his relations

Thanks brov...appriciate

darkenedrebel:



I WHIP-LASH/ RIFF-RAFFS/& THESE FAGGS/That SPIT WACK/ Then BRING MAGS / MEAN MACS/ & GREEN GATS / To SWING FAST/ in ZIG-ZAG / My QUICK JAB/ makes the BRICKS CRACK/ I wear masks.... to STEAL CASH /Until i got a BIG STASH/ There's a chef on my spine..giving me FEED BACKS/ Gimme me a FREE PASS /Or I'm kicking your WIG BACK /With a GRIM SMACK/ While my knuckles are wrapped.. around this BIN BAG / My TEAM'S BRASH / & WE PACK /These STEAM RAPS/ To SKIN CATS / Pump em' with so many shells.... you'd think they EAT CRAB/




easy as whistling Dixie...
you just gotta practice daily

Nice one,thanks brov...

Jus like this...


Too much dancing/ the hipop world aint smilling...

Except kush dis niggas aint rapping/anymore dy jus poping...

JigsawKillah:



instead of a single rhyme like "made, fade, grade"


why not double words like "Ingrate, big plate, relayed, debate" or triple rhyming like


dummy blow. . . Forty slow. . . Hunting show. . . Nuts below?


Or even quadruple rhymes like. . .


Bruce is a ho?. . . Fool with a phone?. . . Shooting his bone?. . .


Should I keep it going?

Thanks brov

Cats fight, niggas die, am a sun nd u'z a flash light, niggas lie, river nile, dats where i was last nyt, huntin crocodile

Hard life dats d nippple and money z d breast/ my flowz is light dats electrical am talkin abt hertz/ all dz dope shitt on NL am still nt impressed/ niggas prolly b lyk hu d phurk is st3v3nr3x/

My shits Standin out dats me outstandin/ dumb wack niggas no wonder dey dnt understnd me/ if life z a rim at a 100 degree i still b slamming & dunking/ ugly mo'fckers ur flowz is ugly ducklin/

u niggas claim u ill bt ion nid no disease/ hiphop z cumin bck its me plantin d seeds/i jst read JIG'S verses den grabed a pen & a seat / all i here is noises u jst hard workin beez/

Every body claimin king i jst laufed on mount olimpus/ life z a bitchh i fck ha mouth, ass, pussssy nd skin pores/ will leave u alive u xo culd watch ur nxt of kin fall/ i make em sick wit fear dz red faces is d symptom/

I beat yo ass lyk u'z my chest am a gorilla/ or beta still lyk hw ICEKID beat dz niggas/ watch how my rhymes dominate like adolf hitler/ i walk witawt shoes xo u culd see 'the feat' nigga..!!/

abt to invade NL/ lyk d Vikings xo play dead/ on d report i am guilty is wat i stated/ on a fly shit 911 is wat am rated/ if u saw u my dick u prolly fainted/

..... i stop bloody flows like a pad/ am on sum ps3 shittt nd a green card/ i fire randomly on sum chief keef shit nd all dat/ take it personal nd i run u down lyk am burnin fat/
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I need a chair....i cant stand these niggas!!!!

st3v3nr3x did you throw jabs at me? or ibi spelling mistake?

darkenedrebel:



I WHIP-LASH/ RIFF-RAFFS/& THESE FAGGS/That SPIT WACK/ Then BRING MAGS / MEAN MACS/ & GREEN GATS / To SWING FAST/ in ZIG-ZAG / My QUICK JAB/ makes the BRICKS CRACK/ I wear masks.... to STEAL CASH /Until i got a BIG STASH/ There's a chef on my spine..giving me FEED BACKS/ Gimme me a FREE PASS /Or I'm kicking your WIG BACK /With a GRIM SMACK/ While my knuckles are wrapped.. around this BIN BAG / My TEAM'S BRASH / & WE PACK /These STEAM RAPS/ To SKIN CATS / Pump em' with so many shells.... you'd think they EAT CRAB/




easy as whistling Dixie...
you just gotta practice daily

wait?..Double Rhyme Scheme?.. Thats Confusing!..You Know Do Know What A Rhyme Scheme Is Shey ?

danbrowndmf:
Thanks brov

in Other Words..Long,longer Multis!..Its Had To Believe Person Like You Aint Perfect With Rhyming Yet ;P

007Bruce:

you want 4 syllabic rhymes?

Like: jigsawkillah - gives us filler - a prick for realer - big or bigger

5?
Current situation - foremen invasion - boring dictation - fùcking with asians - store in a basement - ball with caucasians - saw is impatient - fùck his relations

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah! Rappers ehn. . .

007Bruce:

you want 4 syllabic rhymes?

Like: jigsawkillah - gives us filler - a prick for realer - big or bigger

5?
Current situation - foremen invasion - boring dictation - fùcking with asians - store in a basement - ball with caucasians - saw is impatient - fùck his relations

how is 'a prick for realer' grammatically correct.

that's a forced rhyme.. & i see a lot of them in your lines.

danbrowndmf:
Thanks brov...appriciate

anyday

Tally ho!


My mind was in an astral plane when I wrote these bars/ bearing a deleterious card and a mind-blowing cause/
To bring an impetuous war like the Trojan Horse/ so I spit with no remorse as I flow this verse/
Rhymes more detrimental than a goon with a heavy-metal/
One sentence renders your mental a slave to the instrumental/
forged from the rhythm in these marvelous lines/
My name is G'iyasara and I'm a murderous type!/
I'm sicker than a prophet of God tryna get a lady Psychic laid/ getting you bïtches fücked for fun like a side chick's fate/
As you read this your brain explodes into a thousand pieces. . . and the knowledge released. . . travels through a seismic-wave!/
900,000 years before Christ's existence, I existed/
Was meant to be evicted by alien forces but I persisted/
And fought back gallantly and valorously with amours/ of metaphors I created when the world was without form!/
The bars I spat morphed into a sperm and formed the god, Uranus/
And I cursed the moon to wander at night for being a daily ignoramus!/
It's evident, my rhyme schemes are ethical and incredible/
Leave a biter needing medicals, my ink's a deadly chemical/
You worry about your biceps and feed your mentality with Telemundos/
While my mindset is wider than the space between Earth and Pluto/
Sharper than the lethal molars of a predator Aligator/
Gladiator, elimanator, imitator terminator/
I got a thinking catalyst engraved in my brain sector/ that's why I can write a thousand songs in 23 seconds/
Now you wonder why I'm yet to be signed to a label?/ they said my mind was not stable/
Cos I told them i practiced my eating manners on a periodic table!!/
In 046 we make Choruses from the site of a horror scene/
And if a demon possesses our kids, the devil asked for Apologies/
On a mic surface/ I spit easy but rhyme complex/
And the tune of my voice attracts and invites forces/ from asomatous worlds/
to come witness me spit these lethiferous puns/
It's a fact, i ain't tryna be humorous, punk!/
And be cautious, my lyricism is venomous and noxious/
I could kill y'all poachers by spitting in my sub-conscious/
I am the aftermath of a million collided energies/ hunted by a zillion supernatural martian enemies/
I eloped and found refuge on earth for centuries/ So i am not a human being, this being is just my undercover concealed identity!!!!

darkenedrebel:

how is 'a prick for realer' grammatically correct.
that's a forced rhyme.. & i see a lot of them in your lines.

are you a better rhymer?

007Bruce:


are you a better rhymer?

you do rhymes like dick for realer & you are asking if I'm a better rhymer ?

don't play yourself..

darkenedrebel:






you do rhymes like dick for realer & you are asking if I'm a better rhymer ?

don't play yourself..

are you challenging me to a (rhyme) battle? if you aren't. . . . fûck off!

007Bruce:
are you challenging me to a (rhyme) battle? if you aren't. . . . fûck off!

deadline is tomorrow by 8am
[rhyme battle]
10 quatrains...