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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Captainswag225(m): 12:55pm On Aug 13, 2015 |
360prince:i think u should open another thread and make it part2, while u provide a link on the thread to the part 1, it will be forwarded again. Trust me. 2 Likes |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 1:16am On Sep 10, 2015 |
@360prince,i really love ur writeups,i am highly impressed,i have been following dis thread 4rm ur 1st post,is jst dat i am kinda silent reader,thumbs up bro,more grease 2 ur elbow. 1 Like |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by sheyflixy1(m): 7:43pm On Oct 05, 2015 |
Nawa oooo,is this how dis story will end? |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 2:52pm On Oct 07, 2015 |
'Shawer' couldn't stop laughing |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by MultipleA(m): 4:01pm On Jan 27, 2016 |
I beg when u go start d part two of dis story,na dis story make me register to Nairaland.I beg make it sharp I dey wait. interesting story anyway |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 5:30pm On Jan 31, 2016 |
Prince you are a very talented writter I love the story from page 1 to 80 though a lot of blunder were made but you tried, the story did'nt end well sha |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Donchinny55(m): 6:22pm On Apr 19, 2016 |
Waw.i learnt a great deal frm ur story.coz it shows me God works in way we cant c. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Ayomideen(m): 10:31pm On Jul 02, 2016 |
Nice story prince Buh to be sincere I don't like d ending at all 1 Like |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 6:44pm On Aug 14, 2016 |
Captainswag225:Thanks for your suggestions captain.. I'm gonna work on that.. Thanks for reading this Lil story.. Invite ur Friends to read it |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 7:47pm On Aug 14, 2016 |
tundexweb:don't be a silent reader bro.. Just wake and comment. I appreciate your encouragement |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 7:49pm On Aug 14, 2016 |
sheyflixy1:nop. Just sit, search and expect the unthinkable from me. Thanks |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 7:50pm On Aug 14, 2016 |
dondemex: |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 12:45pm On Aug 15, 2016 |
360prince:ok.u are welcome... |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by chiraqDemon(m): 11:36pm On Sep 18, 2016 |
Holanid:Man private skuls can b brutal Back then our seniors bin de chance our teachers die If teacher n our senior give different orders at same time we go rather obey d senior cos d teacher no go de dia when dem de brutalise us |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Kaodek(m): 8:20pm On Feb 19, 2017 |
For mind u don write story o , u still need to learn alot frm Rachealfst n co.... |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by gosaking(m): 10:05pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
This is very interesting and catchy story but pls always keep focus and don't write why tired because it leads to misspelling and wrong arrangement. For example , you left Mrs grace room and arrived home at 9:45pm why Uduak is already waiting for you, then u follow Uduak to see her uncle and arrived there 8:30 or 8pm at same day. That was wrong. Pls keep note |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by gosaking(m): 10:22pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
"She boarded a 'cap' to move 'us' around town". 2. We ate sallat. Pls keep note and improve. Good work am following. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by PRINXWHYTE(m): 4:45pm On Apr 16, 2017 |
360prince: 360prince: 360prince: |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by PRINXWHYTE(m): 5:00pm On Apr 16, 2017 |
HOW CAN SHE (ESCOURTED) YOU,IS SHE A MILITARY,(ACCOMPNIED) IS THE WORD YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO USE THERE. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by culet123(f): 6:52pm On Jul 19, 2017 |
*summit- submit *perhaps, you dare not disobey his command whenever he speaks - perhap means maybe which means ur sentence is wrong. *I had sweated profusely and so, I reluctantly advanced to a mango tree and stood under it shades-means u did nt want 2 get out of d sun, drop d word reluctantly. *I exhaled and located Miss Grace hostel block-u locate a place u are going 2 4 d first tym nd nt one u already know. *she beckoned me to enter-beckoned is 2 cal someone wit a hand sign, hw do u do dat 2 sum1 who is behind a door. *When i intruded into her room-intrude is entering without permission, she already permitted u nd also ur mum does nt intrude into d kitchen cos its hers; she's nt supossed 2 take permission frm u. *i saw her tying towel as she was about dashing into the bathroom to shower-dash means run, mind hw u use it. *I repeating same track when it stops playing-"i repeated the same track". *She was drained from her hair down to her feet-she just had a shower, she's supposed 2 b wet. *Sometime, she tempted me anytime she sees me around-"sometimes, she tempts me". *Grace later advanced towards- change "advanced towards" to "moved to" or "went to". *She came closer and threw her body on the bed spraying her legs apart-its spreading her legs, no need for the word "apart". *The selected track was still playing when we started argument-"we started arguing" or "we started an argument". Just write in plain english nd stop using big grammars, dats where ur problem is. U don't know how 2 use them properly 1 Like |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by YoungestD(m): 11:27pm On Jul 24, 2017 |
Prince Ma Real Gee! I Have Been Following Yaa Story Twas Wonderful Buhh Were Is D Part Or Season 2 |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by TAYO124: 11:00am On Jul 25, 2017 |
Mind the use of Tenses. Your command of English is very poor.The story was so drab |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 4:38pm On Jul 10, 2020 |
Coming back later |
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