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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by olawumi06(f): 7:27pm On Oct 18, 2015
class captain i beg i dey gbadun ur gist,end am o
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by lasunakin(m): 7:34pm On Oct 18, 2015
evegran:



Most Nairalanders (at least the smart ones) visit profiles after viewing certain comments to imagine what the author of such comments look like... visiting your profile after your post was a reflex action(hoping you even know what that means), however your post is absolute nonsense. Nonsense only persons with average iqs will enjoy or find entertaining. Honestly, I think you're delusional still.
Good luck finding reality!


PS: I'm actually slightly less disappointed you ve stated it's fictitious. Who says fiction entertains everybody? And the "sincerely you don't reply things like this" was a crappy line. I'm irritated you imagine you have "celeb" status in a nonexistent world. Enjoy!
Bad belle.. Gerrara hia

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:36pm On Oct 18, 2015
Episode 24

"".. Hi "
I rubbed my eyes very well..Maybe na d effect of Yesterday origin still day shark me for body ...I

" Ichinbong messaged me " Hi."Haha .i day dream ....I go inside, carry knife use am tear my body small .no be dream oo..

Abi na previous chat.wey just day deliver .. ..I saved her number with " ichinbong 40k bet "..it was clearly Her. What could be the reason for this sudden change in her attitude .Abi na another Person she wan message wey d thing go mistakenly enter my phone ??.

Make he no be like say i too rush answer the babe make she no con day feel like say i miss am.i intentionally delay like 30 mins before i reply. ..To form boss small . I just reply am back in form of a question "" Yes .

The message no quick deliver ?? 15 mins go.30 mins .1 hour pass.This girl must be mad.Abi na dat her 2nd friend carry her phone take day message me.!!.Which kind rubbish be this. ..Shey dis girl wan day taunt me ni ??

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by TOMTOM15(m): 7:37pm On Oct 18, 2015
evegran:


200 actually and I'm done replying mentions from this post. You guys are boring! *yawns*
Stop fooling your self with excess make up and much redish filter.. u no fine at all i swear #fact.. I don't even know does zombies that are liking that over edited pix.. mtcheew..

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:39pm On Oct 18, 2015
Episode 25

After like 1hr pass and some minutes, the message finally delivered and almost immediately it delivered. i saw my phone ring .It was inchinbong 40k bet calling..

Make he go be say na dat her friend or her younger sister dem.i go finish deir Life with abuse ,con cut am.Wu get tym for rubbish ??

Lo and behold ,it was Ichinbong. I instantly recognised her sweet ,baby like and soul soothing voice. It was like ecstasy.. A feeling i never felt before..

" Hello boo "

My mouth bin day shake...I no even sabi wetin i go take reply am..Any little mistake or Bleep up now,fit end chances pata pata.

" Hello"
" yes
" So u didn't want to answer me abi " she said jokingly
" No no..its not dat...
' Ok "
" yea "

An awful silence enveloped d atmosphere for like 3 seconds

"I just called to apologise to u..I know i did wrong by all those treatment i melted to you.. It was not like i hated u but i just dont know what came over me during that period."

.I was dumbfounded. was dis Inchinbong really speaking /? Abi she dialled wrong number ni ??

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by chidieze356(m): 7:44pm On Oct 18, 2015
ClassCaptain:
There something people ain't getting..Am not going to just come and put anything or rubbish just because I want to end d Story or conclude it so that some people can be satisfied and move on.

Please like I said earlier, I have 3 alternate endings to this story... Surely I know some people have no idea how tough it is to try manoeuvre the best story to choose..

please. if anyone is bored or sick of d story, pls U can kindly Stop and don't even come back to d thread but if you still want to follow, then a little patience is required for me to edit and try and see d best option possible..

That is the spirit!!!!

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:45pm On Oct 18, 2015
Episode 26

" Sincerely i just dont know what came over me.But my pastor called me and brought me to order and i realised my mistakes.

Pastor Pastor nke..

Your pastor ?? I asked very surprised

" yes ..pastor Seun.He called me and told me what i did was bad and adviced me to reach out to you. ..Will u be at home tomorrow ??

Did i just hear " Will u be around tomorrow " ??

" What " i asked as if i didn't hear what she said d First time.

" I said will u be around tomorrow. preferably around 6 30 pm .7pm time ??

Haa.6 30pm .7pm ...who born me make i turn down wetin i don day have sleepless nights for..This is all av been striving for. offered to me on a platter of Gold..

" Ok"
" aww ,thanks dear"" . Will u whatapp me tonight so we can talk more dear "

Na me ichinbong just day call dear dear so ?? Choi. My own don better"

" ok " i replied
" till then dear,once more am sorry "
" No problem.. and i ended the call.

Everything dat just happened was still like a Dream..What could be d reason for this sudden change in Ichinbong..Maybe she just sat down and thought of her mistakes.. or maybe one of her friends talked to her..

No ..not a Friend..She said her pastor spoke to her and asked her to forgive me..Haha..What is not D Same pastor that disgraced me out of his office ?? pastor seun ?? Could he possibly have called Ichinbong to apologize to me after giving me such a bad treatment. ?? me I no undestand oo .

Everything just seem to be falling into place without stress ..

.Little did i know that i was counting down to my doomsday... shebi ignorant me no sabi say The thing wey day back of six, pass seven .

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Dafkelvin222(m): 7:46pm On Oct 18, 2015
Hmm this film eh

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 7:51pm On Oct 18, 2015
ClassCaptain:
Episode shebi ignorant me no sabi say The thing wey day back of six, pass seven .
pls wat do u mean by this last word
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:56pm On Oct 18, 2015
Abigurl:
pls wat do u mean by this last word

na Yoruba proverb ,
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Ibrokane(m): 7:57pm On Oct 18, 2015
wooooooooooooo !!! woobiii siiii Mr OP if this is fiction,friction, fictitious, movie , film , drama anything wey dey call am..... na d first time wey i go dey comment for any Tory be dis..... kudos to u boss.





if u can't encourage u don't have to discourage Na them type no dey gree construct a sentence correctly....
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 8:02pm On Oct 18, 2015
Episode 27

I really could not understand what was really happening
All i sha knew was that Ichinbong was coming to visit me and my hopes of Tearing d babe and winning the 40k just gained weight.


By the time wey i reach school unfortunately i no see d babe contact.. My guys wey we gather bet don day use me day laugh,day crack jokes ...Kingsley sef dey tell me say how far with their money,sey i don ready am.

Hehe grin see Idiots..I just day look dem i just day smile..They no understand why i dey smile Choi..I just day pity their silly girlfriends wey day expect outing for saturday..Make this guys better day prepare for break up from their babes.

..Hehehe

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 8:06pm On Oct 18, 2015
Episode 28

Through out d class that day,i was just cracking jokes and i was so full of energy.. I heard people saying " wetin do this guy today".The energy was just in me. I bought things for people. i pay People's T fare, i was just feeling Fly. Super excited...That kind feeling wey merlin get wen he first kissed Freya , na hin i get dat day.

I bin feel say make i go thank pastor Seun for hin contribution to the matter but i just later free d idea.No be man power jare,na Lord prayer. Na God do am,no man deserves credit for this miracle.

I got home happy and vibrant..I chatted ichinbong up till midnight..The Bitch ass girl was actually cool and friendly.. Tho i make sure say i no talk anything wey near sex chat at all but dis girl actually got some naughty things up her sleeve.

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ncoolsome(m): 8:07pm On Oct 18, 2015
Abigurl:
pls wat do u mean by this last word


Place any number after six n both wld be more than 7..
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Chanchit: 8:15pm On Oct 18, 2015
ClassCaptain:


Oga Mi.Use Style Read this one small ..


www.nairaland.com/2638248/day-mtn-taught-me-lesson


Walahi! This classcaptain na real mad man eh, see as water dey komot my eye. I never knew you were the one that did that mtn stuff too, been looking for it, I wanted to send it to a friend.

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Speedy33(m): 8:17pm On Oct 18, 2015
gringringrin

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by timidapsin(m): 8:18pm On Oct 18, 2015
i still dey observe undecided

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 8:19pm On Oct 18, 2015
evegran:


200 actually and I'm done replying mentions from this post. You guys are boring! *yawns*

Please ask your breath to stop smelling. It's a stinking something . Thank you.

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by joshuamoses101(m): 8:39pm On Oct 18, 2015
Mr class captain me no dey like this kind parole....abeg come complete this story b4 i vex
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by erubamidele(m): 8:47pm On Oct 18, 2015
Guy U no well oo. U cme keep your broda for suspence. E b like season film
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by leederrty1997: 8:59pm On Oct 18, 2015
Classcaptain, I go vex o! Wey d rest nah? Pls oya update.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by aumoria(m): 9:03pm On Oct 18, 2015
ClassCaptain:


Good day ma.I am more than dissapointed that u can't comprehend that this story is not about the me.It is Fiction and is not about me in anyway.

and U called d shoes a second hand ?? yet nobody forced u to go to my profile nd check my picture out..Sincerely,I don't reply things like this but u need to work on yiurself and d way u speak ma.Thank you ma
I followed this far because I thought it is a real experience, not a fiction. The suspence will not be worth it any more.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by bammo: 9:05pm On Oct 18, 2015
Guy you dey try. You've got your mojo back
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by AdeniyiA(m): 9:10pm On Oct 18, 2015
ClassCaptain:
Episode 24

"".. Hi "
I rubbed my eyes very well..Maybe na d effect of Yesterday origin still day shark me for body ...I

" Ichinbong messaged me " Hi."Haha .i day dream ....I go inside, carry knife use am tear my body small .no be dream oo..

Abi na previous chat.wey just day deliver .. ..I saved her number with " ichinbong 40k bet "..it was clearly Her. What could be the reason for this sudden change in her attitude .Abi na another Person she wan message wey d thing go mistakenly enter my phone ??.

Make he no be like say i too rush answer the babe make she no con day feel like say i miss am.i intentionally delay like 30 mins before i reply. ..To form boss small . I just reply am back in form of a question "" Yes .

The message no quick deliver ?? 15 mins go.30 mins .1 hour pass.This girl must be mad.Abi na dat her 2nd friend carry her phone take day message me.!!.Which kind rubbish be this. ..Shey dis girl wan day taunt me ni ??

lol ...clown cheesy @ the bolded, picture of the knife and the skin or adonbiliv it cheesy

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by buzquet(m): 9:17pm On Oct 18, 2015
OP. If to say u dey nollywood, u for writer of year for 10 consecutive years



Or make u kuku go give kunle afolaya to produce am. The guy go give u beta money.


The suspense too much jare
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by buzquet(m): 9:17pm On Oct 18, 2015
OP. If to say u dey nollywood, u for win writer of year for 10 consecutive years



Or make u kuku go give kunle afolaya to produce am. The guy go give u beta money.


The suspense too much jare
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by AdeniyiA(m): 9:18pm On Oct 18, 2015
ncoolsome:


Place any number after six n both wld be more than 7..
6.1
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ZITRAN: 9:19pm On Oct 18, 2015
AdeniyiA:


lol ...clown cheesy @ the bolded, picture of the knife and the skin or adonbiliv it cheesy
u wan kill author
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Ay04z(m): 9:23pm On Oct 18, 2015
Oooooohh! class captain u re xtremely oustrageous..kinda love dis story o.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by toluleke(m): 9:33pm On Oct 18, 2015
evegran:



Most Nairalanders (at least the smart ones) visit profiles after viewing certain comments to imagine what the author of such comments look like... visiting your profile after your post was a reflex action(hoping you even know what that means), however your post is absolute nonsense. Nonsense only persons with average iqs will enjoy or find entertaining. Honestly, I think you're delusional still.
Good luck finding reality!


PS: I'm actually slightly less disappointed you ve stated it's fictitious. Who says fiction entertains everybody? And the "sincerely you don't reply things like this" was a crappy line. I'm irritated you imagine you have "celeb" status in a nonexistent world. Enjoy!
SHORONIYEN

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by lantessy(m): 9:36pm On Oct 18, 2015
ClassCaptain, the raconteur..
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Kennedyiheme: 9:38pm On Oct 18, 2015
evegran:



Most Nairalanders (at least the smart ones) visit profiles after viewing certain comments to imagine what the author of such comments look like... visiting your profile after your post was a reflex action(hoping you even know what that means), however your post is absolute nonsense. Nonsense only persons with average iqs will enjoy or find entertaining. Honestly, I think you're delusional still.
Good luck finding reality!


PS: I'm actually slightly less disappointed you ve stated it's fictitious. Who says fiction entertains everybody? And the "sincerely you don't reply things like this" was a crappy line. I'm irritated you imagine you have "celeb" status in a nonexistent world. Enjoy!
this girl what is your problem?

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