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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by timidapsin(m): 1:02am On Oct 20, 2015 |
I still dey observe how he go end ![]() |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 1:09am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ghost mode deactivated ... Classcaptain, abeg come finish your tori before I send troops c0n wayleh you |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by 9jaboi8701(m): 1:11am On Oct 20, 2015 |
multikolour: Wetin concern u with viewers na. Abeg paddle ur canoe make I paddle my own. Bia, Nwoke abi na Op. if I hear say u skip d fvck part ![]() ![]() 2 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by martin92(m): 3:21am On Oct 20, 2015 |
this story is more of a fairy tale than a fiction or so i thought. ride on ![]() |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by MrD2: 3:27am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Classcaptain, u failed in ur promise of delivery of d final package yesterday. U gave many of us sleepless night. I forwent what I wud hav done here and kept refreshing....... My smartphone screen done even crack because I hold d phone 4 hand sleep off and no cum sabi when d phone drop 4 bed then my elbow cum press d screen crack am. All d same u too much. No mind evegran abo na wetin b her name sef. Anybody wey no like ur gist fit go take a dive for empty swimming pool |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by MrD2: 3:37am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ClassCaptain: Wherr is d chapter na. ......? |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by MrD2: 3:39am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Classcaptain! Classcaptain!! Classcaptain!!! How many times have I called u ![]() Hmmmmmmmmm........!!! |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Mopricelezz(f): 5:49am On Oct 20, 2015 |
He says he was banned from the literature section by the Anti-spam bot, that he can only continue today. He made this comment on a particular post and shared to his followers, that's how I got to know. Make una no vex. Apologies on his behalf. BTW Nice story classcaptain, keeping my fingers really crossed to see how this ends. |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ritababe(f): 5:57am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Wetin come happen na |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 6:01am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Mopricelezz: I tire for dem mods o.......wetin the guy do dem now...nl sef sha......ok...I comment my reserve 1 Like |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Mopricelezz(f): 6:03am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Temilayhor: No not the mods, its an anti-spam bot, has happened to me before also. |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Sirchucks(m): 6:04am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Classcaptian u b promise n fufil some n fail some. Anyway nah dis mornin i read page 15 to 21. Make sure say u finish am by d tym i come back. As 4 evergren abi na eversoap no comment 4 her yet... Na waw o Some pple no dey sleep oo needless to tell u say u b captain way sabi. |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 6:11am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Mopricelezz: Ehn ehn.....I never knew sha.....I even thought the bot is for *board of trustees*....... Thanks jare...... 2 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Juvicee(m): 6:52am On Oct 20, 2015 |
i had a sleepless night ysterday jst 2 see the concluding part, but sha u try...i stil tanda 4 here dey wait oo @classcaptain |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by YINKS89(m): 7:07am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Dats nigerians 4 u, promise neva kept |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by phemie007(m): 7:13am On Oct 20, 2015 |
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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ladosky22(m): 8:05am On Oct 20, 2015 |
WoW @ ClassCaptain: A Big Weldone 2u. Brilliant Creativity. Please Keep It Up ![]() |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Hezzymania(m): 8:15am On Oct 20, 2015 |
This is no different to watching the drama series, kudos brother |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 8:46am On Oct 20, 2015 |
I was banned by the antispam bot.That was what delayed me.am sorry !!! |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 8:49am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Like I said I have Two Endings to this. Story. The First ending contains less Erotic scenes While The 2nd alternate ending contains more and vivid erotic scenes.. I am going to post d First Ending to the story ..And see d Reactions.. I will post the 2nd ending with more Erotic Scenes and a Different ending entirely at Night. |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by surbrown(m): 9:01am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ClassCaptain: we hear you sha dahun |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:04am On Oct 20, 2015 |
THE BEGINNING OF THE END...( FIRST ENDING ) Gobbling. eating. licking and swallowing.. ... blood flowed all over my body down to my hard preek, as she ate my hotdog together with my balls ,licking and dreeping saliva on the little hairs left here and there on my manhood. Haa..This Girl was going to make my Cum and we never even start d main thing sef..i pulled out my heavy preek from her mouth and helped her up on her feet as i carressed her yansh ... .and i unzipped The skirt zip,and slowly moved down the skirt as Her hands were kept busy, handling and rubbing my " Gbola". She was just doing everything like a Pro.i could swear she would pass for a porn Star. The Skirt now day down. I was .left with her pants..White in colour... I guessed she knew and prepared her mind down for something today because all dis sparkling white bra and pants, Na so e dey neat reach on a normal day..Shior I Dipped my index finger into her wet pants and Voila..." The Pussy was tight as shit "..I rhythmically Put in my fingers,going deeper and manourevering for d Gpot at d same time ensuring that i followed slowly , d pace of the background music as She put her hands across my shoulders, giving her breasts a resting place on my chest .. " Hand me dat" ..i said breathing heavily.. She picked d Condom from the bed and gave it to me.... She then went back on the bed and laid down . Her Two legs up in d air ,showcasing her creamy Treasure island ready for immediate Penetration activity. I was just putting on the Condom when i heard heavy Shouts outside the Gate... ...Dat must be from the other compound... I balanced d condom on my preek...The Noise Increased.. 3 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:11am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 2 " Whats that " She asked as she got up from the bed.. " No oo " Dont mind ...Must be d other compound '..I said as i moved closer to her to penetrate. " No wait .....That noise is increasing oo " She said . "madam ,i said he is not at home" " Haa Barca,let me Check now!why are u Behaving like this .. " Madam ...I no fit lie u .. She dipped her hand into her bag and handed 2 thousand naira to him. " Madam...but " Just take..Take.. Shebi i will just check " But madam.. haa madam..he said as he collected the money....Madam be Careful oo..oh madam naa" ' Madam .be careful oo ..Madam... ehh .. ..yet he didnt stop her from moving forward as he pocketed d money in his pocket. ...That voice belongs to nobody else but Madam Akorowem?? Barcanista had betrayed my trust..Despite helping me with the Gen and fuel, He still betrayed me cos of 2 thoussnd.. i told him to specifically ensure no one comes in to see me. Barcanista was her boy,give him some money and he will start singing your name like a bird. What d Bleep is Mrs Akorowem doing at my place around 10 40pm in d night ..Is this Old Cargo dat Hot ?? what d Bleep ?? .. How d Bleep did she get pass d Vigilante at this time of d night.. ?? " What is happening " ichinbong jumped up scared,.. She rushed and picked up her pants and Skirt.. Wait naw """.. God which king thing be dis . Again.... 7 Likes 1 Share |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Sunexy(m): 9:13am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ClassCaptain:*finishes the 1st cup of Vaseline..takes the second cup 4 bizness*..class captain, ride on plsssss ![]() 1 Like |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 9:20am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Hmmmm nice1 |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:23am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 3 I had just innocently described my address for this bitch during one of our sex chats back then .Never knew she could still have that address or even go to d extent of tracing me home especially at dis time of d night..10 30 pm ?? I was confused and Scared at the same time...My preek witnessed an immediate economic depression as it shrunk back to its natural state. . As the Devil will have,my brain no even go near say make i lock door.. At least if she knock knock knock, by d time wey morning reach,she go leave or pata pata i go call some people on phone make dem con carry am comot. Not locking the Door was a Big mistake i made. She busted into the house and there i was Stark naked and beside me ,Ichinbong in her pant and bra.. The song ,danger by psquare was playing from d stereo in d Back ground.. " Ichinbong " ..She asked.. ,startled on sighting the strange lady in my room. " Aunty ... ...ichinbong replied.. haha. wetin day happen..I thought to myself ... " My God... mrs akorowem said as She dropped her bag...Ichinbong..was this what u were sent to do ... ... He he he...Aunty...So is this how u do your business whenever u come this syd. too. oh oh ?? no wonder u no day tell anybody wen u day town ?? .Is that wat u Tell Papa chimobi wen u.... So they are related. Abi wat is all this happening.. i stood there.. looking..!!! Baba God , what have i gotten myself into... 5 Likes 1 Share |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by summerflame(m): 9:31am On Oct 20, 2015 |
OMO SEE GOBE EHN!!!!!!!!! |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:33am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 4 Still very much stunned ,She questioned what Ichinbong was doing in my room and sharpaly,ichinbong sef replied her why she day ask DAT kind stupid question .. " No .. we are just having a photo shoot ..are u as blind as u are daft ?? " So boo...it is because of this thing.u left me ,all alone in my hotel room,?? what did u ever want that i didnt give u ..u ungrateful bastard "" ..Mrs akorowem complained bitterly, tears beaming up in her eyes " Eh eh ...wetin be all dis talk naa?? I no blame u..na everybody for house sabi say u be grade 1 ashaewo .. boo ...I trusted u ....i never wanted to give u a chance. i never knew you were dis evil...And the holy spirit warned me... . shut up ichinbong ,you harlot before i shut it up for u " Mrs Akorowem roared,her eyes were pure red. " Aunty community dog, u too shut up "..u too shut up " ..She replied.. " Me " " yes you. what will u do ?? In no time ,the two began to fight....I tried my possible best to try and Seperate the two but it all proved abortive. i was still trying to wear my Trousers and see if i could call for help outside when Angry mrs Akorowem ,...got her hand on the knife i left on d passage floor and plunged it suddenly ,right into Ichinbong's Heart. 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Babham(m): 9:37am On Oct 20, 2015 |
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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by gsparks01(m): 9:40am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Choi! Drama!! |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 9:41am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Madam if classcaptain refuse u am single & avaliable to do it perfectly |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by JOLSOFT(m): 9:46am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ClassCaptain:BABA do double combo now no dull ursef |
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