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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by sirxbit(m): 9:47am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Ogwegwegwe 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by 9jaboi8701(m): 9:47am On Oct 20, 2015 |
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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:47am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 5 I watched as She fell to d Ground and d blood gushed all over her white bra....Her hairs flowing as her mouth gasped for breath while mrs akorowem watched on,unmoved. Her hand placed on her chest, blood gushing out as her eyes felt weary,she could see her life flashed through her.face . She turned her face to me,she was trying to mutter some words but blood was all that came out.. She kept opening her mouth..... trying to speak but it was too late. All she could do was mumbling . " What have you done "..i screamed Aloud .as i watch ichinbong struggle in deep pain in her last moments on earth.. If anybody told her she would die today,she would have probably laughed it off. " YOU MANIAC. !!!!!.. i screamed as i approached mummy akorowem .with my veins all stretched and an amazing super strength fueled by my inate anger I never felt before. . But Rather than back down, The sex hungry,psychopath,Mrs Akorowem Used d Knife and Made A Deep slash across my face..She was Definitely aiming for my neck but somehow i managed to evade her.. This woman was incredibly strong as i struggled to collect d Knife from her,blood dripping from the Torn flesh in my face....We struggled all around the room for like 2 minutes,. This woman was really determined to kill me that moment. 3 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 9:51am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Shoooooooooowo |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:58am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 6 At the end i was able to Get d Knife from her. She looked on in defeat.. I had the choice to simply let her go or just knock her out but no,i felt d Deep cut she made across my face..it was Deeper than i thought...i could feel d inner skin of my body.... I was actually going to knock her out when again she ran to attack me and collect d knife again.. " You bitch """" I am going to kill Youuuuuuu " "..And Gbam.. I plunged the knife into her Abdomen as her intestines spilled out of her body. she Held me as she fell to d ground and i kicked her bitchy hands away from me.... " i ....i ...lov..vve....she murmured as she went down. Blood Dripped from my Knife and also from my slashed face.. 2 dead bodies. One living person. The Music track, Double wahala" by OritseFemi blasted from the Stereo. TonyeBarcanista on his part,had rush to get d Stupid Vigilantes who allowed mrs akoworem in despite her coming after the curfew time, (probably after she bribed dem) .. He rushed out to get them when the Fight and shout between Ichinbong and Akorowem was Getting two much for him to bear.. ... 2 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 10:07am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 7 Tonye Barcanista,about Four vigilantes led by the chief vigilante,PassingShot came in right after i had just Remove d Life out of Mrs Akorowem.. " Oga ... ![]() " Ju obe owo sile..( Drop d Knife )... The chief vigilante,Passingshot shouted as he pointed his dane gun at me. Many thoughts crept through my mind at dat moment as I could not hold the tears in my eyes..Should i just end everything and take my own life ....Is this the end of everything ?? My life ?? My education ?? what will happen to my mother ?? What will.... " Mo ni ko gbe Obe owo sile ki to fi ibon fo ori ( i said ..drop the Knife now or i will shoot u ....) - PassingShot roared again.. " Haa oga..Drop it oo..pls " ...I dropped the knife in surrender .the cut on my face more painful than hell..i put my hands behind my back as the other two vigilantes.,Tomtom15 and nacosprof,came in and tied my hands with their locally made handcuff dat came with a Padlock and a Key.. " I did it in self Defence "...I said... as they led me out. . " Gbenu e soun ( shut up)..You murderer..You killed two people in self defence... I always knew that d way u were living your life.,Sleeping with black today,yellow tomorrow .you will one day get yourself in trouble. 4 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by MVLOX(m): 10:08am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Omo dis story was worth all the time......dis 1 make sense pass nollywood I swear 5 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by justpeehay(m): 10:08am On Oct 20, 2015 |
oh boy...u are simply finished ![]() 1 Like |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Temihatz(m): 10:09am On Oct 20, 2015 |
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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 10:10am On Oct 20, 2015 |
9jacrip coman learn from this story 1 Like |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by PassingShot(m): 10:11am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ClassCaptain:Na me be the chief vigilante bah? lol! Kontinu naa ![]() ![]() 2 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by stmayor(m): 10:11am On Oct 20, 2015 |
class captain for the first time am commenting why don't you post this stuff and stop finishing our data omg time no de o. Run this marra one and for all i de wait o 1 Like |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 10:11am On Oct 20, 2015 |
OHHHHHHHH Thank God sey na fiction oo Is not real ....is not real....he said is fiction....is not real... am telling myself. 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Dtwoabbey(m): 10:18am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Truely, classcaptain is a captain indeed. You worth an award in nigeria. You are a genius. A special genius indeed. 3 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Alihkizito(m): 10:19am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Choii... ![]() ![]() comic-tragic ficitioned story datz fun in reality 1 Like |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 10:19am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 8 And truely d Night Guard had warned me on several occasions when i came to d house late in the night with different girls , to desist and repent of my ways.. " You see i was once like u...Dat is what led me to my present state " ..I know what am saying wen i tell you to stop ".. You will regret it " - He would always say and narrate how he was every girls dream and all that. But i never took his words serious as i always thought it was the words of a Drunkard. " Listen to me " ....i tried to Give an explanation.. but d Next thing i got was a Slap on my fore head.. I think the slap was enchanted because i could not say, know or Comprehend anything till we got to d Police station that midnight as i kept doing and following as they commanded while Barcanista and d Other vigilante took care of d Bodies at home.. Meanwhile,all through out this period, My phone at home was on Audio record ... 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Dtwoabbey(m): 10:27am On Oct 20, 2015 |
You know one thing. This ur story go show face for film industries soon o. Watch out for film with likely titles, " ikoja-aaye, olokanjua, inchibong, aye oloju-komu kolo, abbl" 8 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Temihatz(m): 10:29am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Nice.... U r just too much @Classcaptain ![]() |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 10:32am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 9 I thought of escaping twice from detention,but it was of no use, with this scar on my face,i will surely be caught again.. .!! It was During d Court Session that i fully knew that Mrs Akorowem was the First daughter of Ichinbong Father but they were not related by mother.. .Mrs akorowem mother was d First wife and Inchingbong mother was d 2nd wife. .Ichingbong was d only daughter and child of her Mother just like i am the only child of my mother too. . Sometimes I put d blame on their mothers..All this poo was predestined ?? It could be as a result of their Two mothers rivalry and plan to use juju to kill each other's children that led to their own untimely death but The Devil just had to use me as the channel. Ichibong mother was admitted to a psychiatric home for treatment due to incoherent statement and behaviour and Her Father,who actually forsaked her and her mother when she was actually alive and never really cared for them,swore that i was going to Die by hanging and get justice as i deserved.. He was a Lawyer ( SAN) and surprisingly, very connected and powerful. 2 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by hahn(m): 10:35am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ClassCaptain: Wow! Guy, your head dey there! This is simply crazzzzyyy! For all those who thought this is another predictable story, you can now hide your head in shame. @ the last paragraph, I think you should have added that you decided to make a video of Ichibong so that you can have proof and that way, the video can save you. But it's all good, the story is still great! Add me in your story abeg, when you get locked up in the cell at the police station, I can be the presido and dash you slaps. Whayasay? ![]() 6 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by OYAY(m): 10:37am On Oct 20, 2015 |
My brother I have been a ghost reader since the beginning , you have really done well with this story you tagged fiction but can actually be a true life story;it really worth the suspense and huge following! In as much as it is funny it is a lesson to all out there that find solace in living a moral decrepit life. Thank you and more inspiration to your medulla oblongata. 7 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Laitesmart(m): 10:45am On Oct 20, 2015 |
I love this ending bro... U are tha bomb... O srnsd make |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Youngmon3Y(m): 10:46am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Oga Classprefect like ur writing skill God continue to strengthen u |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by gsparks01(m): 10:51am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Cool story !! ![]() |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by jamesbridget13(f): 10:54am On Oct 20, 2015 |
I dont think d story has ended. |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by buzquet(m): 10:55am On Oct 20, 2015 |
Dtwoabbey:right on point |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by buzquet(m): 10:59am On Oct 20, 2015 |
I can Bet with my kidney say this Tori no be nollywood bt Hollywood 1 Like |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 11:00am On Oct 20, 2015 |
BEGINNING OF THE END 10 My mother hustle helter skelter,left, right,center just to get some money and got me a Good lawyer, Barrister Andyblaze ( ESQ) as my counsel and the case kicked off officially. . ..Kudos to my Mother..May God bless her and every other mother out there like her. Despite warning me seriously that night, sending me open heavens every morning on whatsapp and counselling me. Struggling to get me the best no matter what even when she never got a single thing for her,even when she had to do dehumanizing things,even though it wasnt easy for her and she was constantly praying and warning me to keep off bad company but i didn't listen to her and discarded her " Old school advice " thus bringing shame and a disfigured face back to compensate her for all her efforts. . My mother still showed a great deal of support and care ,i never imagined i could get from her. ..She was like a Jesus beside me.. ..She was my strength.. infact she was a god to me. My love of God and admiration for her got deeper during this trying time. I could not but weep when i saw Mrs Akorowem three young kids,The Oldest was just 14....I felt immense guilt and pain anytime i heard news about those kids..How i wish i could reach out to them. and tell them that it wasn't my fault. i never planned to hurt their mother and That i am now a changed person.. I hope they dont know the circumstances behind their mother's death and if they know,i hope day forgive..Because it is now that she is gone, they will truely know her value. 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 11:02am On Oct 20, 2015 |
The Last three episodes. " DIARY OF Resolutions "" will drop now.. |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by datrailblazer(m): 11:05am On Oct 20, 2015 |
ClassCaptain:Correct guy ![]() ClassCaptain:Correct guy |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 11:20am On Oct 20, 2015 |
DIARY OF RESOLUTION TESTIMONIES TIME THE VIGILANTE ACCOUNT A lot of people were called as witnesses to come and shed more Light on d case and also testify against me by the Prosecuting counsel, Safarigirl. The night guard and Chief Vigilante,PassingShot Testified against me and swore that i killed d ladies as they met me with d knife and blood all over me when they came in.His two other vigilantes,Tomtom15 and nacosprof also affrirmed this. He further added that i was very much capable of such MURDER from his interaction and experience with me. THE PASTOR'S ANGLE Pastor Seun was called upon and also testified that truely ,he called ichinbong to apologize me..He said he asked her to do this as a Good Christian and move on with her Life but never adviced or told her to visit him in anyway or kickstart a sexual relationship with me. He also rounded things up also that i was Capable of killing ichinbong as i was an unbalanced,cold hearted and unrepentant sinner who deserves to ROt in hell without Salvation and that even God wont forgive me. He stated that day,how he was also about developing and building a godly relationship with Inchinbong before her untimely death . He wept out of d witness box that day. THE FRIENDS My guys wey we gather bet where surprised to see my fine boy face had been destroyed and surprisingly, all of them testified against me that i killed d girls..One even said i was a Cultist and told him secretly that i was going to kill two Ladies in order to renew my jazz and power.. ..God ..So these guys could actually be this bad. no true friends anymore...i wept as they made known their own account of the incident. 4 Likes |
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by phemie007(m): 11:23am On Oct 20, 2015 |
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