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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by slimmyjimmy(m): 6:10pm On Oct 20, 2015
GRACIAS ! grin
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Helkayklassic(m): 6:13pm On Oct 20, 2015
Nice one classcaptain, I don't want to be left out too, will like to feature in your next tori, i can act Ajigijaga part wella smiley

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by YINKS89(m): 6:13pm On Oct 20, 2015
Classcaptain u gats put yinks89 oooooo
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by OYAY(m): 6:17pm On Oct 20, 2015
Godwin3786:

and u re so much proud to be a ghost reader??ewu

And how is my being a ghost reader concerns you or were you the one that prompt me to comment? Or do you think it's everybody that must comment for the sake of commenting? Even if it is nonsense? You to be deep some other time before reacting to others opinion. Oniranu lasanlasan!
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 6:29pm On Oct 20, 2015
Final Episode in a bit ...
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ladosky22(m): 6:31pm On Oct 20, 2015
ClassCaptain:
Episode Finale and The Final Episode is Left ...


follow and pm me if u want your moniker to appear I'm d next Stories

" Lost in Lagos
" A day with an Upcoming artist "
" Why I no go do money ritual again"
" The Community Robbery
" Dating a Church girl"
" How 2go relationship led me to Psychiatric home 2"

bless.

Yes, C.C U hav my express permission 2use my moniker. More Power 2ur Elbows
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Shegman22(m): 6:40pm On Oct 20, 2015
Shegman222
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 6:57pm On Oct 20, 2015
EPISODE FINALE

I lost d 40k bet.i lost 250 thousand naira plus d Gifts ,clothes and shoes Found in mrs akorowem car which obviously she was bringing for me

I lost my fine boy face as even if it did heal up,d deep scar would still be visible, i lost four of my closest and most trusted friends,i lost my gateman,i lost my home ,i lost my education, my chances of ever getting pussy again ,marry or even give birth.

Greatest of all ,what even caused all dis trouble in d first place, I lost inchinbong's pussy ..i could care less about her death if i had bleeped her already before the Devil came.

I Laid in the accused box.All hope lost,weak from d beatings and extreme torture from d police officers while in detention,broken by the severe pain and bleeding in my asshole after several assaults in my short time in d prison by numerous Hot prison mates,shattered by d betrayal of friends and most trusted associates and haunted by the deeds of my turbulent past.

, I looked back to see the Face of my anxious and scared Beautiful Mother, as the Judge,gathered his papers to announce d Final judgement after enough time of investigation and argument..

" After the various arguments by the counsels and the evidence and witnesses brought to the notice of the court which all have been properly examined and checked to follow constitutional procedures in fairness,equity and good justice ,this is my judgment,










..






.It does not matter whether i go to prison..It does not matter when i am released to go free..Neither does it matter whether i am going to be killed..None of these will transform me.The real lessons God wanted me to learn i have learned..I have learnt not to trust.i have learned to desist from a wayward life and most inportantly,i have learnt that no matter what.God is in Control..

.I have leant my lessons and the purpose of what i went through as been served
..

I could only think of one thing as the Judge readied his paper and was about to pronounce my fate ..NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS",GOD IS IN CONTROL .




THE END.

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Julius2214(m): 6:59pm On Oct 20, 2015
ClassCaptain, please pm me. I have something for you. Don't miss this abeg!
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ladosky22(m): 7:02pm On Oct 20, 2015
Abigurl:
you're a badt guy

Abigurl don de jealous sha... Chaiii, because ClassCaptain Stylishly/Playfully ask Omawunmi 4 "Kpomo".
*smiles*
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 7:05pm On Oct 20, 2015
ClassCaptain:


EPISODE FINALE

I lost d 40k bet.i lost 250 thousand naira plus d Gifts ,clothes and shoes Found in mrs akorowem car which obviously she was bringing for me

I lost my fine boy face as even if it did heal up,d deep scar would still be visible, i lost four of my closest and most trusted friends,i lost my gateman,i lost my home ,i lost my education, my chances of ever getting pussy again ,marry or even give birth.

Greatest of all ,what even caused all dis trouble in d first place, I lost inchinbong's pussy ..i could care less about her death if i had bleeped her already before the Devil came.

I Laid in the accused box.All hope lost,weak from d beatings and extreme torture from d police officers while in detention,broken by the severe pain and bleeding in my asshole after several assaults in my short time in d prison by numerous Hot prison mates,shattered by d betrayal of friends and most trusted associates and haunted by the deeds of my turbulent past.

, I looked back to see the Face of my anxious and scared Beautiful Mother, as the Judge,gathered his papers to announce d Final judgement after enough time of investigation and argument..

" After the various arguments by the counsels and the evidence and witnesses brought to the notice of the court which all have been properly examined and checked to follow constitutional procedures in fairness,equity and good justice ,this is my judgment,










..






.It does not matter whether i go to prison..It does not matter when i am released to go free..Neither does it matter whether i am going to be killed..None of these will transform me.The real lessons God wanted me to learn i have learned..I have learnt not to trust.i have learned to desist from a wayward life and most inportantly,i have learnt that no matter what.God is in Control..

.I have leant my lessons and the purpose of what i went through as been served
..

I could only think of one thing as the Judge readied his paper and was about to pronounce my fate ..NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS",GOD IS IN CONTROL .




THE END.
Just perfect...nice one OP

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ladosky22(m): 7:06pm On Oct 20, 2015
Abigurl:
you're a badt guy

Abigurl don de jealous sha... Chaiii, because ClassCaptain Stylishly/Playfully ask Omawunmi 4 "Kpomo".
*smiles*
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by slimmyjimmy(m): 7:09pm On Oct 20, 2015
smiley smiley wink cool grin cry NICE PIECE
ClassCaptain:


EPISODE FINALE

I lost d 40k bet.i lost 250 thousand naira plus d Gifts ,clothes and shoes Found in mrs akorowem car which obviously she was bringing for me

I lost my fine boy face as even if it did heal up,d deep scar would still be visible, i lost four of my closest and most trusted friends,i lost my gateman,i lost my home ,i lost my education, my chances of ever getting pussy again ,marry or even give birth.

Greatest of all ,what even caused all dis trouble in d first place, I lost inchinbong's pussy ..i could care less about her death if i had bleeped her already before the Devil came.

I Laid in the accused box.All hope lost,weak from d beatings and extreme torture from d police officers while in detention,broken by the severe pain and bleeding in my asshole after several assaults in my short time in d prison by numerous Hot prison mates,shattered by d betrayal of friends and most trusted associates and haunted by the deeds of my turbulent past.

, I looked back to see the Face of my anxious and scared Beautiful Mother, as the Judge,gathered his papers to announce d Final judgement after enough time of investigation and argument..

" After the various arguments by the counsels and the evidence and witnesses brought to the notice of the court which all have been properly examined and checked to follow constitutional procedures in fairness,equity and good justice ,this is my judgment,










..






.It does not matter whether i go to prison..It does not matter when i am released to go free..Neither does it matter whether i am going to be killed..None of these will transform me.The real lessons God wanted me to learn i have learned..I have learnt not to trust.i have learned to desist from a wayward life and most inportantly,i have learnt that no matter what.God is in Control..

.I have leant my lessons and the purpose of what i went through as been served
..

I could only think of one thing as the Judge readied his paper and was about to pronounce my fate ..NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS",GOD IS IN CONTROL .




THE END.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by dahaz(m): 7:12pm On Oct 20, 2015
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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by dahaz(m): 7:12pm On Oct 20, 2015
Intresting story class captain.you are very talented.The introduction of evegran and her reflex action to the story was the bomb of the story.
I also love your conclusion.it gives the readers doubt and spevulation as to what was the verdict..i wil give you 9.5/10...looking forward to your nxt story.

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:15pm On Oct 20, 2015
dahaz:
Intresting story class captain.you are very talented.The introduction of evegran and her reflex action to the story was the bomb of the story.
I also love your conclusion.it gives the readers doubt and spevulation as to what was the verdict..i wil give you 9.5/10...looking forward to your nxt story.

I very much appreciate Sir.. Thank you..
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:19pm On Oct 20, 2015
Abigurl:
@Classcaptain you're so funny,, pls i will luv to meet u.. Where are u @?

YabaLeft

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by smileyz16(m): 7:20pm On Oct 20, 2015
add my moniker in ur nxt write up..i can act big men perfectly
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ojsquare: 7:21pm On Oct 20, 2015
Classcaptain please send me a pm. It's important and urgent. Nice story nice conclusion. You are talented and I love the way you are using your talent. Thumbs up bro
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:22pm On Oct 20, 2015
Ghost readers. Make una dey show face.. Na thor house I day now and we day discuss d type of Thunder way go strike una.. lol

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:23pm On Oct 20, 2015
ojsquare:
Classcaptain please send me a pm. It's important and urgent. Nice story nice conclusion. You are talented and I love the way you are using your talent. Thumbs up bro

Sent my OGA.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:24pm On Oct 20, 2015
smileyz16:
add my moniker in ur nxt write up..i can act big men perfectly

Lol..Na everybody wan good thing... Wait make I try use reflex action think am first
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 7:26pm On Oct 20, 2015
YINKS89:
Classcaptain u gats put yinks89 oooooo

I go put am but first..what is the website of NSCDC ?? if u get am..u go feature

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ahmedbrown: 7:32pm On Oct 20, 2015
ClassCaptain:

I go put am but first..what is the website of NSCDC ?? if u get am..u go feature

Let me ask my "Oga at the top"

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 7:36pm On Oct 20, 2015
Omo, as i see lightining i run comot before thunder go follow am.abeg no mention me for u next story cos i be beta ghost reader
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Julius2214(m): 7:40pm On Oct 20, 2015
Na your phone number I need. pm me now
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Alpharezz(m): 7:46pm On Oct 20, 2015
Masterpiece. Hmmmm finally i go sleep in the night.......atleast until the next one show. Thumbs up bro.... Feature me on the next one.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Julius2214(m): 7:50pm On Oct 20, 2015
Captain I can't send pm. Your email then.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by LEGITLAYO: 8:02pm On Oct 20, 2015
ClassCaptain:


I go put am but first..what is the website of NSCDC ?? if u get am..u go feature
www.nscdc.com
Hmm that's all. grin

I be ghost reader, your thunder Don chase me commot from hiding.
I wan feature for your next literary masterpiece.




Oya close your eyes
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ladosky22(m): 8:03pm On Oct 20, 2015
Exactly, can't find dat "PM" button/option. Donno Y though
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by HyDef(m): 8:06pm On Oct 20, 2015
That ending was very professional. Great job man. I can't believe I went through 26 pages of a thread here on Nairaland. This is the only time I've done it, and it was cuz of your story. Great work. Really great. Keep up the good work.


PS: Wouldn't mind a cameo in a future story... wink
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by speak2leo(m): 8:11pm On Oct 20, 2015
wow!! following this was worth it. classcaptain u too much!!!

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