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PLAGUED BEAUTY by Nobody: 6:43am On Nov 02, 2015 |
*modified* Your voilce my enchanter Your silence, deafening Open your mouth and confess to me Please sing your usual Let me toss it around to create an echo So I can draw birds to you; to this room The way you look at me through the mirror The way you Raise your hair to a ponytail Keeps waking something after another I want you to go out more but your company is the best place to be No No No No Who have hurt you this time? I can't tell the difference between your singing and crying Not until your tears stream an awaken of frost Will you ever know you are creating something? Will you ever realise am hurting too as the birds? If I was huMaN If I were with a heART aNd could talk SomeHOW your being transforms me maYBE I do own a hearT ... to be this moved If I was flesh If I had a soul I could fill in your love puzzle With the secrets best noted I could move you My consciousness you gave birth to These yearnings you impregnate me with But afterall ... Nothing else beside a castle But if I could change But if I could demolish mySELF So from WALLS become dusT Be so, that I'm breathe upon To wake up a boy Handwritting of love Created Flesh for you To live one with you with no tears nor Pain to disgust All wishes aside... But my unbecoming love ... Am just a wall Only Eve was meant to wake a human |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by JigsawKillah(m): 7:52am On Nov 02, 2015 |
Why Can't I Understand this piece? Cc: llaykorn |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by Nobody: 8:23am On Nov 02, 2015 |
JigsawKillah:u know i shudnt be explainin my own piece...buh i think it is expressly obvious what d piece is about..anyway i ll av 2do beta..d piece was inspired by celine dion' if wall could talk'.. Thanks 4taking time. |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by JigsawKillah(m): 8:32am On Nov 02, 2015 |
written: it's actually cause I can't relate with love. Not everybody is a poet, sometimes you might need to explain to some. The message is quite simple too but i find it hard understanding some love concepts. |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by JigsawKillah(m): 8:33am On Nov 02, 2015 |
PS I'm not a fan of Celine Dion sef. . . Only pretend I understand her when I'm with the female folks lol |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by joseph1832(m): 8:49am On Nov 02, 2015 |
written:Actually you should, for the benefit of those who aren't poetic. |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by Nobody: 8:49am On Nov 02, 2015 |
JigsawKillah:atleast u agree them female folks are ones spinning d globe 4 us men--whether science findings like it or yes,doesn't mata..wrote d piece 7yrs ago..on the premises of"beauti4 but unlucky"...some 'angels' are just plague that way |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by Nobody: 8:52am On Nov 02, 2015 |
joseph1832:noted..thanks.. |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by emaculate99: 9:07am On Nov 02, 2015 |
Still wandering in the forest of ignorance about this poem |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by Nobody: 9:27am On Nov 02, 2015 |
emaculate99:must mean its insufficient...and not enough element to merge the subjects b4 ending it...just dont like lenthy piece..i ll try...the setting of dis piece...is a very lonely lady who had failed at love and now mostly in solitary,cornered in her 4walled room..here her wall takes to protesting, wishing..buh are wishes horses? I ll hav to create a conectn |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by JigsawKillah(m): 10:15am On Nov 02, 2015 |
Llaykorn I see you viewing Been a while |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by llaykorn: 10:37am On Nov 02, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: Bros, e no easy. How have you been? |
Re: PLAGUED BEAUTY by JigsawKillah(m): 11:10am On Nov 02, 2015 |
llaykorn: cool. . . Wetin dey sup? |
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