streetzdreamz:
am sorry for the outburst earlier,I know everybody judges,cuz its human nature to judge,but I put myself in peoples shoes,hence I don't judge!!put yourself in ops shoes bro,we all know how hard it is to survive in a Nigerian uni,without a constant source of income,most ladies wouldn't do half of what she did before going into prostitution, she didn't do that,she needed help from this guys fine,but she never gave em an idea that she needed a relationship with em,yes we all felt she was wrong for not dating Andy,I for one always castigated people who knows an individual loves em but can't love them back until I fell into the same scenario,this lady was heads over heels with me but I just couldn't feel a thing,she hung on for months,I tried to reciprocate but it just wouldn't work,so let's say have been benefitting from this lady,via meals and probly cash,at the end I won't feel bad about it,cuz right from the onset I made issues cleared that we can't be together,it was a choice for her to either stop and walk away or keep doing it and hoping,andy did the latter, plus who toasts a lady for two weeks anyways?the guy prolly went on for months,the blame is on him cuz he acted like a sissy,just forget chuks issue,he is a rapist and nothing more.

One Lov man

So is Op a liar,Golddigga, a thief n a deceiver mking both of them criminals.

If u wnt me to prove that she is all I mention, I cnt prove to you from the story.

I wnt you to also knw that ur condition does not justify ur sins.Op cnt go to heaven or hell n say she lie,steal n deceive cuz of condition n she will b allowed to enter heaven. You knw that right?

Op said she thought he would not stop, meaning that she enjoyed the hard pounding. Continue

wao first time commenting here and I must say the op is without doubt a very good writer but what am confused about is the story looked real from the start because I can relate it to what happened to me when I was a fresher, my parents weren't financially buoyant then and my dad Neva let's us beg for any reason so I couldn't ask for help but everything got better and I started living as am supposed to, back to the matter this story later transform to fiction because the suffering and smiling,humble,determined girl op was became a mindless runs girl,who was after material gains and refused to acknowledged how her deeds hurt others emotionally, financially, and she was raped but did nothing about it. what am wondering is how did she live with it and how was she able to tell us she was raped with the shame eating her up. and guys have feelings too you can't expose your body and want a guy to act mature, nature is a powerful force at least he has that decency to apologize some would do it without a care in the world so op is this fiction or real

marlockj:


One Lov man

So is Op a liar,Golddigga, a thief n a deceiver mking both of them criminals.

If u wnt me to prove that she is all I mention, I cnt prove to you from the story.

I wnt you to also knw that ur condition does not justify ur sins.Op cnt go to heaven or hell n say she lie,steal n deceive cuz of conditions n she will b allowed to enter heaven. You knw that right?

oddly,I don't think she is any of all you mentioned above,if you want me to prove it,from her story i sure can.

streetzdreamz:
oddly,I don't think she is any of all you mentioned above,if you want me to prove it,from her story i sure can.

Oya prove!!

Remember Op was never on menstruation!!

Remember all the lies she pushed on Andy, tricked to stay in his house n get food.

Op never return the remaining given to ha to buy food stuff. I was taught how to return balance to my parents, taking what is not given to you, no permission is stealing.

Op was after rich guys n never care abt does guys Dnt Dnt gv ha gift or food,what is this called.

There are so many of them.

palugy:
I FEEL SURI FOR U MY DEAR..
I TRIED RAPING A GIRL ONCE..BUT I CUDNT...MY CONSCIENCE NO FIT JUST ALLOW ME..SO ANY GUY DAT DOES DAT IS A BEAST....
LADIES BE MINDFUL OF D KIND OF GUYS U KIP..ESPECIALLI...IBO AND YORUBA GUYS....

you must be ABOKI

marlockj:



Oya prove!!

lmao,uhm!!! well from her story,the lies she told were harmless and a means to safe her head,from the smoking guys she met in the uncompleted building,saving her pride and dignity,by telling those who cared to know an entire opposite of her predicaments, I mean who wouldn't do that? tell the world you from a family who gives you 3k for a semester,no roof over your head,no clothes,shoes,no food??nah,ion think so!!gold diggers are ladies who date you solely for the money,and other benefits,all through she never professed love to anyone did she? the guys did all they did to buy her out and it didn't work,so how is she a gold digger?? plus she never stole anybody's belongings,I know you have a mindset about her already and nothing I say can change that,but to the best of ma knowledge, even with the odds the lady still maintained her morality,to a good percentage.

Cum op are u buhari's relative.. u too slow with dis interesting fiction

streetzdreamz:
lmao,uhm!!! well from her story,the lies she told were harmless and a means to safe her head,from the smoking guys she met in the uncompleted building,saving her pride and dignity,by telling those who cared to know an entire opposite of her predicaments, I mean who wouldn't do that? tell the world you from a family who gives you 3k for a semester,no roof over your head,no clothes,shoes,no food??nah,ion think so!!gold diggers are ladies who date you solely for the money,and other benefits,all through she never professed love to anyone did she? the guys did all they did to buy her out and it didn't work,so how is she a gold digger?? plus she never stole anybody's belongings,I know you have a mindset about her already and nothing I say can change that,but to the best of ma knowledge, even with the odds the lady still maintained her morality,to a good percentage.

Wrong gold digga is nt dating alone.I cn be a gold diga to a guy!!am only their cuz I benefit from him. It is nt strictly dating.you are 100% wrong.

As for lying, u hav admitted she did dat nt Jst to d uncompleted building guy,she did it to Rita,she did that to Andy (where she said is already pas 4pm n ha ATM card nt wit ha).as for lying Op is baaa ba for that.

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Finally he asked why I had ordered for eba instead of rice like he did and I told him I had rice as breakfast and wanted something different (another lie)

I will gv u mre points that she is all this.

The only difference btw u n me is that am only looking @ the truth,than looking @ pitying the Op.

I mst agree wit u that Op really suffered.

If a robber is caught,he will narrate Wat made him or ha to be a robber n kill ppl.the court Dnt look at that or judgement out of pity.the ball point is that you are a robber.

You are arguing and trying get my hrt tru pity. The point is did she do it or not.

There is no justification for rape. Rape is rape. It doesn't matter even if the op was naked in Chuks room non consensual sex is rape. Even a husband who forces himself on his wife is guilty of rape. Nigerians please take off your blindfolds and enter the 21st century.

marlockj:


Wrong gold digga is nt dating alone.I cn be a gold diga to a guy!!am only their cuz I benefit from him. It is nt strictly dating.you are 100% wrong.

As for lying, u hav admitted she did dat nt Jst to d uncompleted building guy,she did it to Rita,she did that to Andy (where she said is already pas 4pm n ha ATM card nt wit ha).as for lying Op is baaa ba for that.

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Finally he asked why I had ordered for eba instead of rice like he did and I told him I had rice as breakfast and wanted something different (another lie)

I will gv u mre points that she is all this.

The only difference btw u n me is that am only looking @ the truth,than looking @ pitying the Op.

I mst agree wit u that Op really suffered.

If a robber is caught,he will narrate Wat made him or ha to be a robber n kill ppl.the court Dnt look at that or judgement out of pity.the ball point is that you are a robber.

You are arguing and trying get my hrt tru pity. The point is did she do it or not.

nah,not through pity,its a must for our views to differ,even if all you said were true,I would still not castigate nor judge her,cuz all she did was harmless to the people around her,if the lies she told brought harm to the hearer,then I would rebuke that,but the fact is that she didn't hurt anyone with her lies or actions,and the relationship wasn't entirely parasitic, it was symbiotic cuz she helped too in her own ways,cooking and other chores,the only constraint was cuz her input wasn't what her host expected,rita ;half the rent,Andy;a relationship,two things she couldn't give,not cuz she has but withheld, but cuz she had none to offer, this argument will go on and on,but the bottom line is,she never wronged any of em.

The OP is letting us have the impression she is typing all these tales as they come. The time wasted before posting new stories should not be seen as time taken to type them. Hence in as much as its a good thing to post and let the readers make comment, I also would like her to make sure she is following the script and not elongate it just because people have taken interest in the story.

thatsincerechic:
I didnt want to reply comments but I was forced to reply this.
ANSWERS TO YOUR QUESTIONS
1. Look before you leap. You probably did not follow the story but here you are spewing thrash to show case your ignorance.
2. That shouldn't be the basis of the story, should it?
3. Visit my number 1 answer
4. Visit my number 1 answer again and this time don't ever misquote a person by trying to be analytical.

Sorry to say this, but your ignorance is overwhelming. Lemme ask you
Are there no people from other tribes in your state? And where have you ever seen the characters of a story (whether true or untrue) with their actual names? They are always pseudonyms young man pseudonyms!
I probably might be wasting my time by giving you this attention because you may never read this and instead jump to make another post in order to prove your insolence once more by trying to be a critic but this is not only for you but for many of YOU out there

Now run along child.... Mama is calling.

Lol! I refuse to trade words or throw jabs at you. Check what have written very well and you would see have never undermine your efforts. Also, i asked those questions to further satisfy the burning curiosity shared, like many readers here to unravel some grey areas in the write up.

Like many have said before me, no one is beyond questioning... It says more about the writer beyond the woven letters. But rather than address that, you carefully threw caution into the air to attarck the personality and became highly vilified.

And for your last phrase, "Run along child". Whatever that means! would have love to reply back in same manner, but once again, i would also maintain my decorum. It's the best thing to do in a faceless group like this, cos you don't even know me, neither do i. I Would only advice you to be privy of the way you address people, and like i said early, it's says alot about who you are beyond what ever you might have passed.

Enjoy your self!

marlockj:


Without ha consent I get Wat u mean.

But I put it to you,that if she goes to court with this she will lose blue black.

May I know 'the why' please?
However, that's probably in our damned Nigerian courts. Where on earth is hospitality a crime? It's even encouraged everywhere. Chuks simply took advantage of the op and you want to tell me that's no crime? Haba bros. It's first class rape, as far as there's no mutual consent.



















But some girls like it the 'by force way ' sha...lol

However, say no to molestation

Samirana360:

Did u also c ''mogbe''? Is dat igbo 2....say no 2 bigotry n tribalism

Hmmm, tribalism ko?
Because I said Jesu also applies to Igbo?
Stop bn allergic to information sir.


Come to think of it. I think our criticisms should be to enlighten and not to slight. How does ascribing this story to any locality help the op and the readers? Wise criticism broadens understanding and challenges expertise. Let's stop bn myopic and stereotyped....PEACE!!!

Chuks God purnish u oo, see as u suffer my Girl.....

thatsincerechic:
I didnt want to reply comments but I was forced to reply this.
ANSWERS TO YOUR QUESTIONS
1. Look before you leap. You probably did not follow the story but here you are spewing thrash to show case your ignorance.
2. That shouldn't be the basis of the story, should it?
3. Visit my number 1 answer
4. Visit my number 1 answer again and this time don't ever misquote a person by trying to be analytical.

Sorry to say this, but your ignorance is overwhelming. Lemme ask you
Are there no people from other tribes in your state? And where have you ever seen the characters of a story (whether true or untrue) with their actual names? They are always pseudonyms young man pseudonyms!
I probably might be wasting my time by giving you this attention because you may never read this and instead jump to make another post in order to prove your insolence once more by trying to be a critic but this is not only for you but for many of YOU out there

Now run along child.... Mama is calling.

you didn't want to reply yet you replied.what's is with you strong head. Do I have to abuse you before you reply me.you're replying others but ignoring me why na! I said you should give me TRACY ah ah!say something na I go quarell you oo.well, as for those comments,its something you could have easily waved aside cos you should have seen the level of understanding some peeps have got.for language sake what is JESU,what is MOBGE? Very simple. I can say chineke, bia o ukwia or Zomana, ubangiji,mu n go de. Etc even if you don't understand the language very well there are simple ones that can be easy comprehend.don't mind them it shows that they're not exposed at all.that's not an issue. It good u reply them sha to enlighten some people but continue your tori I'm you FAN I dey feel you but don't let us quarel o. TRACY pls

marlockj:


I get ur point

To me a thief cnt judge a thief, to me Op n chuks committed the same crime,hence no one is to be blame.

Like u said Op did all this to survive by lying n deceiving, chuks also did dat to get sexx, by tricking ha to it.

You mst agree wit me that Op was after help mre than ha safety, she has been visiting 2go guys n 2gos visiting ha.u also will agree with me that sooner or later she culd b beaten.
She took risk vry high risk,which later bckfired.

How do u visit a guy or let them visit you Jst cuz of 2go.all my happiness she live to tell than use for rituals.

We guys knw Hw guys behav, if I guy gv a girl 10naria he will xpect u as a girl to wrk for it if nt now later.though I knw sum guys will pretend here,Bt is the truth

Hmmmm, see person conception, ideology and reasoning. Just accept the obvious bro. Enlighten your ideology, it helps you grow,. PEACE!!!

nawooahh, abeg na,na beg i dey beg una make una allow the op to finish the tori, before una start to dey apportion blame,am referring to the do-gooders in this blog,too much of everything is bad. if you don't like the story you log out,if you think she's lying na your own cup of tea,if you think its fiction then stop reading it. pls stop discouraging others.

micronut:


Lol! I refuse to trade words or throw jabs at you. Check what have written very well and you would see have never undermine your efforts. Also, i asked those questions to further satisfy the burning curiosity shared, like many readers here to unravel some grey areas in the write up.

Like many have said before me, no one is beyond questioning... It says more about the writer beyond the woven letters. But rather than address that, you carefully threw caution into the air to attarck the personality and became highly vilified.

And for your last phrase, "Run along child". Whatever that means! would have love to reply back in same manner, but once again, i would also maintain my decorum. It's the best thing to do in a faceless group like this, cos you don't even know me, neither do i. I Would only advice you to be privy of the way you address people, and like i said early, it's says alot about who you are beyond what ever you might have passed.

Enjoy your self!

Don't mind the op she has a very bad temper. Despite what she has written on here abt her life shows that she hasn't learnt much from it. Now that she's a little bit better off is to be replying people with insult.

I bet she would be worse if she was ok at uni.

marlockj:




Yes she didn't put herself in that situation you are right.

I put it to you that she n the rapist both of them their hands are nt clean.

If u hv bin following, you will notice that Op hv bin lying, deceiving ppl to get Wat she wnt.

She run mst tym wen this ppl need in return.I put it to you that lif is gv n take.

Also I put it to you,that if Op goes to court this story n accuse chuks of rape she will lose.

Chuks never remove ops cloth,rather chuks take off his property from Op.

Chuks was in the right place his apartment .

If that was not enuf how do u justify that you remove ur cloths n sleep nake in another person apartment, cuz of heat.was he ur brother or relation.that is invitation to treat.

You do no put a cube if sugar on the flood n xpect ant to pass it by.

Or bones for dogs to greet the bones n pass.

Also you hv to knw dat Op was deir nt Jst to help chuks, Bt 100% her interest which bckfire. She was their to eat,shelter. Jst as she has been deceiving 2go boys.

Has it Eva occurred to you Wat she tell 2go boys to b cumin with gifts.

Op always reject ha action wen it bckfire or no gain.eg the 2go guy who came visiting ha,she had in mind to eat up the guy n get mre money.Bt it bckfires n she loses

She also wen to chuks to eat n shelter, this didn't Jst bckfire but burned ha n Kip a mark.

She went to Andy with the same aim n got away with it,now she will knw that Andy was good.

Your post epitomizes ignorance.

Little wonder though, you reside in a lawless society, Nigeria.

Guess you've not heared of wife rape.

Your arguements and "put to you" mr lawyer, are probably in conscious defence of your numerous rape acts.

Here in my neck of the woods, you'd be dressed up in a blue jumpsuit a long time ago.

Get this, even if a woman gives you a good head in your bedroom, if she says no, that means things are not consentual, and you went

ahead and took it, it is rape. period.

[quote author=ayokunle032 post=40462995][/quote] dude, stories are meant to be fiction or non fiction, get dat into ur skull, even if it not real, digest it, just for d fun, most of James hadley chase, john grisham, Sidney Sheldon. Novels, do u tink dy are always real. Pls grow up, I have read from page to ds present page n neva commented. Had to comment cos ur post infuriates me. Op, cld be anything, even a transgender, just read for the fun. I wonder how u pass exams.

micronut:


Lol! I refuse to trade words or throw jabs at you. Check what have written very well and you would see have never undermine your efforts. Also, i asked those questions to further satisfy the burning curiosity shared, like many readers here to unravel some grey areas in the write up.

Like many have said before me, no one is beyond questioning... It says more about the writer beyond the woven letters. But rather than address that, you carefully threw caution into the air to attarck the personality and became highly vilified.

And for your last phrase, "Run along child". Whatever that means! would have love to reply back in same manner, but once again, i would also maintain my decorum. It's the best thing to do in a faceless group like this, cos you don't even know me, neither do i. I Would only advice you to be privy of the way you address people, and like i said early, it's says alot about who you are beyond what ever you might have passed.

Enjoy your self!

It may have been a long time the rape stuff happened to the Op(if it did happen) but its only normal that she's still traumatised over the event,not to talk of the fact that she's now narrating it and of all people,you happen to be the scape goat she vent the anger out on.Scars hardly cover you know.
I know of some rape victims and Most of them don't forget that day.That day replaced a loving part in their heart and it turns stonecold.So I really will not be surprised if in reality,the Op was a 'bittchy,arrogant,insultive,disrespectful'(like Rita said,no offense) girl.She just dint let herself heal.

babseg:


Don't mind the op she has a very bad temper. Despite what she has written on here abt her life shows that she hasn't learnt much from it. Now that she's a little bit better off is to be replying people with insult.

I bet she would be worse if she was ok at uni.

Thanks bro.. I never envisaged the abrupt level of insult from someone that should understand people better. But, then it's all good! We keep learning everyday. That people criticise you shouldn't mean you call for their head and rub them off of the respect, it's simply called "Maturity". Once again, i appreciate you bro for seeing things in my little way too. God bless!

I don tire to dey read but continue

Mikkyboy008:

It may have been a long time the rape stuff happened to the Op(if it did happen) but its only normal that she's still traumatised over the event,not to talk of the fact that she's now narrating it and of all people,you happen to be the scape goat she vent the anger out on.Scars hardly cover you know.
I know of some rape victims and Most of them don't forget that day.That day replaced a loving part in their heart and it turns stonecold.So I really will not be surprised if in reality,the Op was a 'bittchy,arrogant,insultive,disrespectful'(like Rita said,no offense) girl.She just dint let herself heal.

Well, my angle is to ascertain the sudden neglect from home cos in the earlier part of the story, the mother still keep in touch but seems that fades away as time goes by. Hence, my reason for asking if the "poor woman" still strives to pay the tuition fee. Is that too much to ask??

Also, i also noticed Op is alone ranger, such is more of an "only child" not even a mention of a sister or brother... would it have hurt to clarify that too?

An the "Jesu" and "Igbo names"side, just want to know if all characters names are not real names, like she said, "a pseudonym". It seriously has nothing to do with Ethical misdemeanor or as a chauvinist. But she choose to say it in a very angry manner.

God bless bro. Lets Enjoy the story with patience, it's one of those things.

Talk is cheap. It is not easy to put pen to paper let alone come out with a story.A lot of readers are preempting what Op should write or her likely steps. This is the writer's story; it is imposible to write another man/woman's tale because no two situations are thesame. For op to put pen to paper and dish out an event in her life it must be an issue that one has something to be learnt from. If u have a better tale to tell,please establish your own thread.

Matured response. Op, u got micronut wrong, like he said, no one is beyond questioning, I realized u r kinda hot tempered, and a bit abusive @OP

micronut:


Lol! I refuse to trade words or throw jabs at you. Check what have written very well and you would see have never undermine your efforts. Also, i asked those questions to further satisfy the burning curiosity shared, like many readers here to unravel some grey areas in the write up.

Like many have said before me, no one is beyond questioning... It says more about the writer beyond the woven letters. But rather than address that, you carefully threw caution into the air to attarck the personality and became highly vilified.

And for your last phrase, "Run along child". Whatever that means! would have love to reply back in same manner, but once again, i would also maintain my decorum. It's the best thing to do in a faceless group like this, cos you don't even know me, neither do i. I Would only advice you to be privy of the way you address people, and like i said early, it's says alot about who you are beyond what ever you might have passed.

Enjoy your self!

micronut:


Lol! I refuse to trade words or throw jabs at you. Check what have written very well and you would see have never undermine your efforts. Also, i asked those questions to further satisfy the burning curiosity shared, like many readers here to unravel some grey areas in the write up.

Like many have said before me, no one is beyond questioning... It says more about the writer beyond the woven letters. But rather than address that, you carefully threw caution into the air to attarck the personality and became highly vilified.

And for your last phrase, "Run along child". Whatever that means! would have love to reply back in same manner, but once again, i would also maintain my decorum. It's the best thing to do in a faceless group like this, cos you don't even know me, neither do i. I Would only advice you to be privy of the way you address people, and like i said early, it's says alot about who you are beyond what ever you might have passed.

Enjoy your self!

I commend you for your calmness in replying her, I like it when you don't result to insulting her. Like I said earlier in my post this OP is mean, rude, selfish and lack respect for anybody. She needs to change her attitude if not she might end up blaming herself later in the future.

marlockj:



Oya prove!!

Remember Op was never on menstruation!!

Remember all the lies she pushed on Andy, tricked to stay in his house n get food.

Op never return the remaining given to ha to buy food stuff. I was taught how to return balance to my parents, taking what is not given to you, no permission is stealing.

Op was after rich guys n never care abt does guys Dnt Dnt gv ha gift or food,what is this called.

There are so many of them.

Does she have to spell it all out? Some people sha. I wonder

Damalex4luv:

I commend you for your calmness in replying her, I like it when you don't result to insulting her. Like I said earlier in my post this OP is mean, rude, selfish and lack respect for anybody. She needs to change her attitude if not she might end up blaming herself later in the future.

exactly...she deserved wateva happens to her cos of ha character

marlockj:


Haha na so my Bro.

You knw there is this thing in life,if someone is killed, mst ppl Dnt ask why he or she was killed.

Wat u will hear is thunder fire who did this,Chai this person is wicked ohh etc.

Do u ask to knw whether this dead person was a thief?,was the person killed cuz he wntd to kill another?was he or she a cultist etc.

When ppl wnt to judge chuks, the should also look @ ops records.

To me in the Bible a[b]rapist n a liar[/b]are the ,my reason all sin n hell.

No sin cn be quantified, all sins are equal since they are going to the same place hell

But which one is a crime? Telling lies or rape?
Don't try to act like you understand the circumstances leading to rape cos it's clearly too much for you to understand.